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[Next Day] Decided to name jr-- Arnav


Ragini got busy with the morning chores and jr was busy playing in his playpen in the living room.


The kids were running around with their dolls and the whole day seemed full of life.


Anmol still asleep "papa utteyena na, ha partner " and Tammy Khushi come and wake up a nice and cozy Anmol.


"Tammy Khushi tum donno itney jaldi utt gaye ?" "Papa subha kay 9 bhajey hai aap itneer deer tak "


"Tammy Khushi Chalo breakfast kar loo" came a call from outside


"Arrey 9 baj gaye pata nahi chala "Anmol starts stretching himself as Khushi goes out and Tammy tells him "papa aaj meray party kay liye aap dress choose karna ",


"Alright my princess jaoo nahi tho mama gussa " and she kisses him and leaves.


Anmol gets out and goes to the washroom and walks back to the bed to wear his shoe.


[Mobile rings-Dr. Gupta calling]


"Hello ragini ji ," "Nahi mai Anmol baat kar raha hoon Dr. Gupta ",


"O great Mr. Rajvansh ragini nay mujhey yeah number diya tha , tho ap kaisay mehsoos kar rahey hai ?" inquired Dr. Gupta


"Doctor mai teek hoon aab pahir pay kafi relaxation, aur ragini mera pura dhyaan rak rahi hai ,"


He looks at her as she walks in. He puts in speaker mode. "Doctor Goodmorning ""Hello Ragini ji suna aap Mr. Rajvansh ka pura dhyaan rek rahi hia , great , baas thoda unhey grass pay walking karwa deejiye aur kal ek baar clinic leayee ye taki final check ho jayee.."


"ji ji doctor thanks " and they hang up.


"So badi tareef ho rahi hi meri ,"smiled Ragini as she started to set the bed right,"Areey meri biwi tareef kay kabil hai siliye" he pulled her towards him and held her waist .


"Chaliye breakfast kar lijiye aur phir bachon ko birthday party pay bhejkay apko grass pay walk karwana hai !!"


"Ragini subah subah itney fresh ho ki breakfast ki zaroorat nahi hai "


"Anmol apkona maar padegi saachi " as they walked out she started to scold him.


They walked out and Anmol went up to the dinning area, Ragini served him french toast with omelet and she also sat and ate with him.


Jr started to cry as Anmol and ragini are busy at the dinning table, ragini gets up and goes and bring him to the dinning area and hold him as she eats, "Guddi kaha hai usay dedo aur tm araam say khaa loo"

"Guddi" he calls out Guddi comes and hold jr while they eat.


Once done Anmol goes and sits in the living room , and requests Gunni who is passing by to get his laptop.


Working on some documents and busy with his work Anmol is interrupted by Tammy with two of her dresses. "papa in donnomai say mai kausa phenoo Birthday party kay liye ?"


"Hmm let me see my princess looks great in any dress meray khyalsay yeah wali achhi hai",


He picks the blue with white polka dots. "Ok papa mai jaldi say tiyaar hokar athi hoon" and she runs up


All dressed both Tammy and Khushi come and start chatting with Anmol who finishes his work and keenly listens to what they got for their friend.


Ragini all dressed up to drop of Tammy and khushi gives jr to Anmol "Aap issay sambhaliye, mai bachon ko party pay chod kay atti hoon ,"


She also gives him the bottle of milk for jr incase he feels hungry ."uska daiper change kar diya hai he should be fine for a while "Ragini don't worry mai sambha loonga , " he assures


" Have fun girls " bye papa !! bye partner " as they waved to walk out.


"Yaar jr apki mama jo hai na unhey pata nahi ki hum bachon ko kitni achhi tarah sambhalthey hai !!" he started conversing with jr and kept tickling him to make him laugh


[A while later]


Ragini walks in to see jr sleeping on Anmol and both father son looked so sweet together, leaving a smile on her face. She walks closer to them and picks up jr and places him in crib and starts th e baby monitor.

Anmol wakes up and realizes that jr is not there, and Ragini comes out of the room, "Arrey Ragini jr so gaya tha ,"


"Aur aap bhi ", "Mainey ussay crib pay sula diya ",


Chaliye apka dava ka waqt ho gaye" she gives him his medicine and he asks her to sit beside him

"Ragini tho hum kal mall chaliengay duphir ko aur tumharey liye ek gown kareedangay"

"Lekin Anmol muhey comfortable nahi lageyga "


"Ragini lets try na I mean har cheez ko ek baar zaroor try karna chahiye aur phir dress tumpey kitna achha lagtha hai zara mai bhi tho dekhoon "


"Anmol apbhi na bahut ziddi hoo " and she places her head against his shoulder.


"So tho mai hoon!"


"Chaliye jr soo raha hai hum garden mai walk karthey hai " and the doctor had asked him to walk barefoot, so he removed his boot and Ragini picks the baby monitor and they walk out towards the garden.


"Bina shoe kay comfortable hai kya?"


"Haa Ragini aab dard tho bilkul nahi hai aur pair pay pressure bhi teek hai , I think I'll be walking smoothly pretty soon. "


"kaash apney yeah competition nahi kiya hota, Tho essa nahi hota ",


"Nahi Ragini yeah tho hota rehtha hai aur Tammy ki happiness mai tho mai bahut khush hota hoon, U know na"


"I think tomorrow after the doctors appointment I should be doing fine again."


"Kal ek aur din phir I will be back to my routine, Tumhey bhi bahut tang kiya iskey badley hai kuch special karoonga " he turned around to meet Ragini's eyes.


[Later that day ]


The kids were back from the party and they showed Anmol their goody bag .

They were very exhausted and wanted to go to bed early as school followed the next day.


As the next crept in everyone took it easily and went early to bed.


[Following Day]


Tammy Khushi went to school wishing Anmol bye as he wasn't allowed to drive till the doctor had certified his was completely cured. Alekh dropped the kids off and went to work dropping Gunni at college.


They had taken an appointment for 10 am so Chandu came in and brought the car near the entrance and Anmol was able to step in easily " Saab aap kaisah hai ? "


"Mai ab teek hoon Chandu feeling much better aur aaj appointment kay baad I am sure I will be 100% fine" he smiled.


Ragini joined him with Arnav and asked Chandu to put the stroller in the back.


They drove to the hospital and Arnav was enjoying the ride. He looked really cute wearing a cute cowboy T shirt and tiny shorts which Anmol had picked from one of the stores in the mall.


[At the hospital]


"Dr. Gupta apka wait kar rahey hai ", confirmed the receptionist


"Please come in Mr. Rajvansh , Looks like you seem to be 90% recovered ,"


"Jee nahi doctor I feel 100% recovered with a wife like Ragini apko pata hai who mera itna khayal rakthi hai and kya bolon aur apka instruction tho sarakho pay !! " All had a laugh.


"Sure I know ragini ji would defiantly get you 100% alright , let me just have a look "


He examined Anmol's foot and saw the flexibility and measured the angular inclination of the foot and did the same with the left foot which was completely normal to get the accuracy.


"Well it seem to be perfect to me" assured Dr. Gupta " Congratulations Ragini aab Mr. Rajvansh completely normal dikh rahey hai aur aab inhey boots ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai ,Aap normal shoes pehen sakthey hai "


Anmol and ragini look at each other and Anmol holds her hand thanking her as Arnav watches these adults talk which is very much greek and latin to him.


"Doctor Inkey shoes yaha hai kya inhey pehenkay yeah toda chalkey apko dehaye"


"Ragini iski kya zaroorat thi mai car mai pehen saktha hoon I will be fine "


"ha ha zaroor please Mr. rajvansh make sure you are completely comfortable before you start your daily routine"


Anmol wears his shoes and walks around a couple of times and assures Dr. Gupta that he is completely fine.


"Thanks doctor!! " "Its my pleasure Mr. Rajvansh , U take care" They shake hands and they leave.


"Aab Chandan Mall le chalo aur kal say mai khud drive karoonga thumhey 2 din chutti " Anmol was too excited that he felt that he got back to his routine.


"Anmol Mall aab ?? "


"Jee Ragini yaad hai apko mainay kaha tha ki kuch kareedna hai isliye hum mall jaa rahey hai "


"baa bbaaa" ,Arnav was busy talking to himself and enjoying the ride sitting on his baby car seat.


[At the mall]


"Good afternoon sir/madam" ,


"Excuse me I need your help, Meri wife kay liye kuch acchey evening Gowns dekhahiye "


"Anmol apko nahi lagtha ki mai yeah saab nahi kar paoongi "


"Ragini try karney mai kya hai, I told you na you should try different styles, "


"Madam here are a few evening gowns, Apko low neck chahiye ya boat neck style with crinkled sideline ya off shoulder with long slit"


"Na baba na Anmol yeah saab mai nahi phenay wali ",


"Ragini achha mai choose kartha hoon "


"Please yeah copper wala dekhayeye with the boat neck and crinkled sideline." The lady removed the similar one put for the mannequin and gave it to Anmol



"Madam this will defiantly suit you, Chaliye aap baby ko dekar isay try kijiye" and the associate takes Ragini to the changing room.


Anmol keeps playing with Arnav as he refused to sit in the stroller.


After a while he was quite tired and fell asleep. Anmol thought he need to sleep peacefully and put him in the stroller and covered him with his soft blanket.


As an elegant lady walks out of the dressing room a stunned Anmol keeps looking at her his eyes tracing from bottom to top.


"my my Ragini you look stunning " he thought to himself as he went close to her and made her turn around to look at the mirror. And placing his chin on her shoulder he softly whispered in her ears


" Ragini yeah gown jasiay tumharey liye hai bana hai , us mannequin say zyaada sunder dikh rahi hoo"


"Nahi Anmol muhey bahut Sharam aa rahini hai" and she covers her face


Removing her hand "Ragini sach mai tum khud dek lo yeah dress tumpay itna elegant aur beautiful dekh raha hai its tailor made for you believe me."


"Madam Bahut sunder hai " came the sales associate ,to which Anmol stepped back.


"Please issay pack kar dijiye " Anmol confirmed and she takes Ragini back to the changing room.


After paying Anmol and Ragini with Arnav walk out of the store and Anmol excuses himself for a minute and asks Ragini to wait near the food court.


[Mobile calling 'Nari niketan] "Ji kahiye " Ragini turns to answer the call

"Muhey kuch sunaiye nahi dee raha hai actually mai bahar hoon kya aap kay baad phone karengay" "Ok Thanks " she hangs up to hear Arnav crying loudly


"Arrey achanack issay kay ho gaya , araam say so raha tha aur itni zoor say roo raha hai "


She picks him and is shocked


"yeah yeah mera bachha nahi hai !!" "Anmol Anmol " "Help !!"


Anmol who came out of a store quite happy and walks towards the food court to see a mob of crowd gathered and someone screaming " yeah mera bachha nahi hai please help Anmol Anmol !!"



Trying to pass through Anmol reached to Ragini " Kya hoaa Ragini ?? " he panicked "Anmol yeah humara bachha nahi hai !! Yeah Arnav nahi hai showing the infant to him"


"Kaha hai Arnav ragini " he grabbed her shoulders "Anmol pata nahi mai yahi pay tha yeah Arnav nahi hai "

A shocked Anmol stands infront of Ragini who is hysterical wondering where Arnav is and who is this infant.

Preview : Pacing up and down the mall corridor, clutching his fist on the wall "Daaam!!" Anmol kept running his hand through his hair in worry !! Where is Arnav???

To be continued!!!



Edited by shanti05 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Welcome Back Shanti dii aap to vaccation ke baad ek taaza hawa jaise angini story be leke aaye. Hailaaaaaa kya maast likka hai. Wow Ragini in the gown and anmol drooling Aww arnav missing😭😭, plz contine jaldi.

Fantasticccccccc, excellent and mindblowinggg👏
Edited by SukuluvsParul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@shanti..welcome back.😊
hope you had a great time for your holidays.
as for FF awesome as usual..👍🏼
love the scene of the trio esp tammy care for her papa and the cake cutting in the room..a big surprise for anmol..
with ragini's care anmol getting better and the christmas party invitation...so well written scenes..
btw love the name arnav for jr...he is a such a cute baby..always get good sleep after playing with his papa..😊
can visuallise anmol so lost looking at ragini so gorgeous in her evening gown which he chose and praising her ..cute moment and ragini so shy...
oh no who has taken arnav? ...the suspense is killing and anmol/ragini so anxious for their son disappearence..thats so sad...
please do continue soon..
very very well penned down and do keep it up..👍🏼👏👏..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
welcome back, hope you had a nice time. really nice part,liked jr.'s name you are leaving us in suspense, so please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Such a nice scene with Tammy making cake for Anmol.👏

You have captured the scene nicely something like what the kids had planned for Ragini a fruit cake, but this one seems complete with Anmol getting to eat the cake also.

The way you describe the dialogues I can visualize it . Ragini makes sure Anmol is fine and did'nt allow him to go against the doctors advise😆

The next scenes where she wears the gown and he looks how beautiful she is in it made me smile . Anmol always wants his wife to be comfortable and he choose a dress which she will be happy in. She was shy but he made her feel nice

Now you gave a shock about their baby missing . This will keep us wanting for more.

Arnav is a nice name and I liked it. I hope he is safe as Anmol and Ragini are so worried.

Please continue soon cannot wait !!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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shnati it was very very sweet yaar......
aww cake cutting and anmol.......is so sweet
and arnav is nice name..and wow gown is cool...ragini wil llook so lovely in it
and OMG junior hope he is well
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much for your feedback !🤗
It gives me inspiration to think more 😍



I hope Armav is safe !!🤔

Ragini is a little shy which is quite obvious with the style of her dressing. But there is always a first try for anything and one must be able to blend themselves with different styles so lets see what she decides coz Anmol has bought the gown and he doesn't believe in return policy and the adamant he is he knows how to win is lady loves heart !!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Shanti:

Thank You so much for those Amazing updates Hun!!👏👏👏👏 I simply Loved reading them😳...you're an Awesome writer n i'm truly Loving the way this story's coming out🤗...Anmol loves his Ragini so much, even after so many years of wedlock😍😳...Awww...that's so Cute😉...the way they still gaze into ech other's eyes, the way Anmol likes being close to Ragini, n that L'il gown scene at the mall was so sweet!😳😉 Hope Arnav is safe though & Angini manage to find him quickly😕...eager to know about their party as well😳...do update soon dear!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Ragini pass aoo, Aur paas" , Anmol kya kar rehey ho "
☺️👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛👍🏼 😛
guddi ko bhi tabhi ana tha
ragini in that grown ...anmol will ..'ahem ahem'

tell me one thing u r in vacation right .then when u thought about all this?????
its fantastic ....please jaldi write the next part..cant wait to know who taken arnav?????hope he is fine

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poonam and Chandrika thanks a lot !!

i am trying to blend many things and make it more imaginable ..
I hope am coming to the readers expectation. Criticizm always welcomed and room for improvement !! So thanks for all your inputs !!😊

Poonam vacation tho chal raha tha lekin samuder kay kinarey thinking abt Anmol and ragini and what their life wud have been after 13th November have me some creativity 😉

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