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DulceTentacion.

@DulceTentacion.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

NJ. I love the way you write! You seem to emphathise every single emotion through your writing. The way you described each characters thoughts and feelings was Amazing. Great job.

The vm was beautiful and the song choice was Brilliant as always :)

p.s. Hope you update AOL soon <3 :P

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Jen_IloveAR
i have no words............
how about amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing ;)

awsomee job :P

aww! thanks a bunch, I'm glad you like it that much!

Originally posted by: Cutiepie_KSG
ahh!! simply amazing..the four POV's wow
each one's thoughts u put was really beautiful
amazing piece of writing..
do cont and ha awesome vm too.. :D

H@rry

thanks for dropping by, and commenting! I wont continue with this, cause t wasn't really a story in my mind, just penning down the character thoughts (as in my opinion) from the story that was in the show... but I'm glad you enjoyed reading, and the watching the vm too!

Originally posted by: anitamalik
NJ, the way you wrote that from the perspectives of all the characters is really amazing! Your words and your talent at explaining something so beautifully never fail to amaze me! lol <3

The VM was beautiful as well...the song fits the situations you're trying to show in the VM about how Armaan RIddhima are both leading lifes that make them confused about them! Its really nicely made!

Anu!!! its always lovely to see you comment, and I miss you on my main fiction threads SO much *hint* 😆 glad you enjoyed reading this bit, it came in an impulse, but I reckon some impulsive pieces just work out better than those with multiple edits! and yayyy you like the vm too - despite its 2-3 major glitches, as i noticed after rendering, meh!

hugs for dropping by!

Originally posted by: vampiregal
i just love wut u wrote. Its an awesome piece! :)

thanks a bunch! 😳

Originally posted by: krazzy4armaan
i got no words....jst amazing
yhe VM waz beautiful too...the song realy fits da AR luv story

aww thank you so much! I'm glad you like the writing, and especially the vm which wasn't all that grand IMO, he he!

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sanju

@Sanju_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

this is brilliant..I always knew you are an awesome writer..I don't know why..may be through rachana's FF..lol..anyway I knew it and I wasn't wrong...this is just brilliant..and needless to say, the vm is amazing too👏

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

I always get nervous reading your writing... only because whenever i am done I ALWAYS want/need to read more!

thanks for the pm and the awesome few words!

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: * Unnati *
This is absolutely Brilliant ! Wow !! You've spectacular writing skills & what's all the more amazing, is your choice of words . They're apt & reader-friendly . I could nearly visualise AR in here , thinking it aloud to themselves , what they mean to each & when together !

Thank you Unnati! I'm glad you liked it as much - it was a pretty impulsive write, so I reckon the easy flow shows in that! No edits, no complexity!

Originally posted by: meow23
hey nj.. welcum bak 2 dmg forum
yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
bt contd dis ff na plzz
been changes read sumthng frm u......

Haha! yeh i realized after reading your comment that it was indeed ages since i posted something fictional (so to say) on this forum... ever since we were exiled.... =) oh well! glad you're back lakky *hugs* 😃

Originally posted by: ridhman_naila
its so so so awesome.hats off to u.

Thanks naila (?!) for dropping by with a comment!

Originally posted by: _minaz_
NJ. I love the way you write! You seem to emphathise every single emotion through your writing. The way you described each characters thoughts and feelings was Amazing. Great job.

The vm was beautiful and the song choice was Brilliant as always :)

p.s. Hope you update AOL soon <3 :P

Awww Minaz! You're one of the dear readers who's always around to encourage me! So part of the credit is always for readers like you! It keeps a writer going - glad you liked both the written piece, and the VM! =)

Originally posted by: Asra_KSG
Oye Hoye

😳😳😳

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: KaJenYaianSanju
this is brilliant..I always knew you are an awesome writer..I don't know why..may be through rachana's FF..lol..anyway I knew it and I wasn't wrong...this is just brilliant..and needless to say, the vm is amazing too👏

Aww, that was such a sweet thing to say! Its flattering to imagine I have an aura of a writer 😆 that entails me even in commenting 🤣

No seriously, that's awfully sweet of you!

Would love to see you around on other AR stuff I've written. if you'd like to!

Originally posted by: bushrayou
I always get nervous reading your writing... only because whenever i am done I ALWAYS want/need to read more!

thanks for the pm and the awesome few words!

Oh...geez!!! That's one of a kind comment I've gotten! Very flattered, and very humbled! =) And always so happy to have readers like you read my stuff! *hugs*

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Nikhita

@Nikhi.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

I read this piece, and then had to go back and watch the VM, and only then did it stand out to me that almost none of the clips has a smiling face. The VM and literary piece really did compliment each other, and went hand in hand perfectly.

And what never ceases to amaze me is that you're just so articulate with your command over the English language. Riddhima, Armaan, Sid and Shilpa all have a certain essence to their character, and I'm not sure how, but you managed to capture that essence beautifully!

A very well written piece that I really enjoyed reading, and as I've said before, an brilliant VM to go with it! 😊

Nikhi

Edited by Nikhi... - 14 years ago