~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 27

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey !!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon ..................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz sweety
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hey wonderful update
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tere intezaar mein Friday chali gayi....Saturday jaa raho hai thodi der mein aur Sunday aa rahi hai....par lagtha hai tu nahi aane waali hai Devi.....I hope ur assignment has gone well....because my mood is becoming worse.....Where r u...?Do u also has the habit of not coming on IF on weekends like me?If yes,then I'm sparing you...if not then I don't know.....😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you for like buttons and valuable comments....😛..

@esha: thank you so much. I am so glad to hear that you liked that small filling part. Hope you will like upcoming part too. I work on weekends. So I do come as my time permits.. so many things going around..

@madhavipatil: thank you.. neaw update coming soon..

@sakadafi:thank you..

@wajiha-1:thank you, I am glad to hear that you liked it. Next part coming soon..

@maneetigeet4ever:thank you.. I am glad to bring that smile on your face..

@nilu70:thaaaaaaaaaank youuuuuuuuuuu dear'

@ambbiha:thank you'.trip to paris is a future plan, let see whether that will happen or not?

@Nan-10:thank you..

@shah10: thank you..

@vrsharma:thank you. Thank you..

@my maan_geet:thank you, let me know if you don't get my Pm..

@Swetha10:thank you dear..

@mrk-1:thank you.. its like any masters degree in abroad yaar. They need to basically apply the project work in actual working place.., doesn't need to practically do it, but it is cross section of that', right.. I think.. also there is a person in charge to take care of IP, here Geet is trying to find out the loopholes and clearing it out..

@kellz:thank you dear.. ending ' ok, will think about it.. but need to cover one big issue , so once I clear that sure I will, you may need to wait for that.., thanks..

@krati-5:thank you

@shivangi; thank you,.. thanks for letting me know what you relay liked and giving the connection that I wanted to share. So I am glad that it reached to you. Paris trip, after completing her studies.. so may take some time.. before that a twist coming, mostly in part19 update.. so let see how that wil come out..

@cutecancy;thank you.. glad to hear you liked it'

@hinalshah: yes dear.. geet is different, she was already in business, and now learning the basics, so for her it is more like a practical learning experience.. so let see how she will come out..

@mchopra: yes.. studies and Maan' that will be mostly on part 19' I am giving a small update this time.. actually it was so long and I had it ready, but somehow, I was not liking it.. something was going crazy with that update.. so finaly I was able to fix it, and deleted ' but going to post the post one I am ok with and will come up with the rest of it in a go after three weeks.. taking a break, going out of station.. so it will be difficult to update..

@aashluvmaan; thanks dear, i really hope you will like next part too.. your comments are valuable..
@afsha;so u like Nakul, get ready for another part of nakul geet scene.. coming up soon

@shining-moon:thank you dear..

@nihatri: coming up soon.

@sweginju:thank ou

Yes, next update coming soon. As I said earlier, I had a long update, but not satisfied, but now I got it straightened and deleted the last part. Posting the next update soon. May be a small one for you.. I need to bring a twist with part19, otherwise story is getting monotonous , I belive.. so there will be more to write after that.. but I am going out of station for next three weeks. so I will come back with the twist, and I hope you all will like it at that time. Thank you so much for your valuable time yaar.. and truly it is your comments letting me go with more.. so only I needed that twist.. till then I hope you will like the next part.. I will try to stop by, but otherwise'catch you all in three weeks..

Typing quickly, as I need to go now.. so excuse the mistakes..

thanks

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Part-18

K C office was on fire. Mostly everyone was digging their head in papers and designs. Sasha was walking faster on her high heels. She still doesn't like the idea of keeping the log of files on that rack. But one relief is that now whenever MK ask for something , it is right there, or knows who has it. Who ever gave this idea, did a great job.. suddenly she slipped over the water on the floor and fell on her butt.. "uyi…. Maa…..'..

"sorry sorry.. Sasha.. I was getting the tissue to wipe it away.." Tasha's voice brought more angriness on Sasha's face.. she looked at her with firing eyes..

"now , will you help me to get up or not..".. Sasha asked in an angry irritated voice.

"Yes mom".. tasha replied..

Adi, 'sasha, Maan sir is asking for this file.. please get it quick.. he is already boiling there" saying that we are slow..

Sasha looked at him blindly and then started walking with a waddling gait. 'what is this? Why can't this client finalize it when they come back from Australia.. why everything needs to be done today itself.. it is already 7 PM and the meeting is at 8 PM. And now few of us have to stay back too.. she kept her one hand on her back to support while walking straight… cursing everyone around..

time passed by..

Maan was sorting out the deal papers inside the car itself. Today it went so late because the clients requested to finalize it today itself as they are flying back to Australia the next day. But the deal was a very good one, that he doesn't want to lose..

It was dark inside the Mansion. He walked into his room. Light still on, He found the bed empty.. he scanned around. And found Geet sleeping , sitting on the chair, resting her head on open flap of the books.. he smiled… the pen is still open and he smiled as he saw the last scribbles on the paper…

He got fresh and came near Geet, who was sleeping sound..

"geet..".. he called softly.. then with a light touch he called her again..

"geeeettt… "… she shook her head little and went more in a comfortable position..

Maan lifted her up in his arm… and started walking and then placed her on the bed,.. " you should have done this earlier , right? Why to call me up.?" Mann looked at the sleeping face of Geet surprisingly..

Maan: so you are awake, then why you didn't respond…

He looked at her again for an answer.. instead found her sleeping sound..

Maan: thum bhi na..

He turned the lights off and joined her in bed.. Geet moved near to him.. and wrapped her arms around him..

Maan: I know you are awake…

Geet: shhhhh..

Maan didn't say anything further… just strolled his hand over her hair… he knows, she is trying hard on everything.. she is applying her studies in actual business, so there is no chance for any bluffing there.. she knows what went wrong and what should be done.. she has her group to support with suggestions and plans.. slowly slowly his eyes also closed..

They all were sitting around the college canteen table. Abhay is the campus chair this year.. so they were discussing on this year's college tour..

Piya: actually I don't want to go anywhere else. I wish if the teacher's could arrange a KC tour , that should be really worth and meet Mr. MSK in person..

Sunder: very good idea.. but that is not going to happen. Reason 1. Even though it is related to our studies, it is for fun too.. we are in Delhi, so what is the fun in that, we should go out, see other places.. so I suggest Bangalore.. and 2.

Piya as she was biting onto the sandwich piece: enough.. no need to tell anything more.. I prefer Delhi only..

Kanika overheard their talk: Piya, don't worry dear, once I get my dreamboy in my hand, I will arrange a personal tour for you.. also I will give an opportunity for you to meet my Maan..

Geet was not paying any attention to any of these talk…

Sunder: Geet what you think? Geet…

Piya: Geeeeetttt

Geet: what?

Abhay: we were talking about our tour this year..

Geet: oh really.. I am not coming..

Sunder: why? Its all for fun yaar.. also what are you doing at this time, inside the canteen..when we all are chitchatting..

Taniya: "what else, she may be digging her head in Colors projects.. what is this yaar.. you are so into this, now a days I feel like actually there is company named COLORs is existing.. even though I am in a different group, you are going crazy with this.. these all imaginary Ok… understand that.". then looking at Kanika.. " come on Kanika, we have our group meeting today.."

Kanika: ok guys, will see you in class.. and she left..

Ashna: this Kanika is so mad n dreaming about Mr. Maan only all the time..

Geet: really.. you think so..

Lally: aur nahi tho kya.. didn't you hear what she just said..

Geet: what?

Piya: stop that talk now.. but anyway I wish I get a chance to see KC one day.. and the business tycoon..

Abhay: why , is Kanika's dream ghost entered into you too..

Piya; no this is not dream ghost.. I simply admire him.. he sounds like a great personality.. we all are learning business and I just want to see such a great personality in front of my eyes .. that's all..

Geet smiled and said: I think it will be possible for you..

Piya: ha , I am sure, it will be possible..

Geet: what?

Piya: I am planning to apply at KC as a management trainee.. if I get that . it will be awesome..

Sunder: me too yaar.. abhay and Me already applied.. you know, if we apply early, may be we will get some opportunity.. who knows..

Lally: Geet what you are going to do? May be we can apply together..

Geet: what? Where?

Lally: KC, where else..

Geet: no , I am not coming there..

Piya: she will find colors and join there only… and they all laughed..

Abhay: but Geet your hubby is a business man and it will be easy for you..

Geet: I don't know, I need to check with him..

Piya: soo sweet..

Geet: you still saying the same thing..

Piya: what.. it is so sweet na..

Geet: ok, it is so sweet, I agree..

Sunder in a soft voice: ye, geet, what is this yaar.. you made him your bhayya, and after that where ever we go he will be there within our visibility… I was noticing it for quiet long time..

Geet turned and smiled at the guard..

Geet: poor him.. he helped me a lot..

Piya; I know.. whenever she wants to make a call to her husband, she runs to him only..

Lally: But Geet, this is not at all fair, we all know you this long and still we didn't get an opportunity to meet your hubby..

Geet: he is really busy.. that is why..

Abhay; that's ok.. but in case if KC is not accepting our application, then you need to ask your hubby to accommodate all of us, ok…

Geet smiled: I am sure, you will get the opportunity..

Sunder: pakka…?

Geet: I don't know, I just thought… and I am sure you will get it..

They smiled and went on with their chat..

…*……….................*...............................*...

'NAKUUUUULLLLLLLLLLLLL'… voice of Geet shook the mansion.. Daadi came in running to the main hall..

Daadi: what happened dear?

Geet: see Daadi, I need to practice on this presentation and I couldn't find Nakul anywhere..

Daadi's smile disappeared from her face.. she thought to herself.. ' nakul not seen means, next turn is mine'… a shiver passed through her with that thought.. she moved her throat..

Daadi:" Geet beta, I need to meet my friend Sushma at the shop… so I am leaving Ok.. I may come very late, so don't wait for me.. ok beta.. bye"… sadi everything so quick in one breath… she didn't give any chance for Geet to think twice.. she shook her head immediately agreeing with Daadi's request.. Daadi sighed as she walked away from Geet…. But then an arm came across her way and Daadi stopped with a jerk." What?

Geet: daadi, I need to practice on my presentation, and I am not finding Nakul, you know what, why don't you sit in front of me..

Daadi rolled her eyes: no beta, Sushma already waiting for me..

Geet: just call and tell your friend that you cannot come..

Daadi: but, she is already there..

Geet: please daadi.. I need to practice this..

Daadi touched her head ' I know you do well Geet, after all you did presentations in front of Maan.. so what is new here..

Geet: Daadi, that is different and this is different.. there I did to save the reputation of him.. and it was very informal.. but here, my teachers are grading me, and the other groups ask me questions.. and I need to be thorough with everything…

Daadi: so you need somebody to listen to you.. that's all, right?

Geet; ha, come on ..

Daadi: you need Nakul, right?

Geet: but I can't find him anywhere..

Daadi: if I help you to find him , then..

Geet: its ok daadi.. you will be fine.

Daadi: no beta, sushma waiting for me.. so… I will help you to find Nakul..

Daadi called out for Nakul.. but no response..

Nakul was listening to all these conversations hiding under the table.. but daadi's voice warned him, he knows that daadi knows about his secret.. she only showed him that space to hide at the first time and it worked all these time, and now Daadi , herself is going against me.. so what will happen now..

He saw Daadi's face coming down to look under the table, and it signaled him to come out..

As there is no other possible way, Nakul came out from under the table..

Geet: you were sitting there!!!!!!…

Nakul: sorry Geet madam… I didn't hear you..

Daadi: geet, leave him, poor Nakul, he might have cleaning under there, I only told him to do it as I saw few spider web there..

Geet seriously : spider web, under the table..!!

Daadi: ha.. and then looking at Nakul.. "is that work is over"

Nakul just nodded his head helplessly…

Daadi: so now your problem is over na, can I go..

Geet with a smile: ha Daadi..

Daadi looked at Nakul with a sorry face and left..

Geet: did you really clean the web

Nakul: ha, Geet madam..

Geet: ok then, come with me.. you know what, I need to present this topic tomorrow and we get points .. it is for the group project, so we fight each other… so you need to listen to me carefully and ask me all those questions that they may come up with…..

Nakul with a crying face: me.. ask you questions..

Geet: ha nakul..

Nakul: ok madam..

Time passed by.. geet was seriously presenting her topic.. Nakul sitiing W*H his eyes open.. looking at the ticking needles on the clock…

Geet: ok nakul, now ask me questions?

Nakul: I was planning to make paneer tikka and chole for dinner, don't know whether I will get enough time.. what is the other option..

Geet: what?

Nakul: Maan sir may be coming soon and I didn't cook anything yet.. so what do you think..

Geet: so all this time you were thinking that… I was talking about big business and you were thinking about chole and paneer.. she sat with a weightless body… but then comprehending herself back into reality..

Geet: Nakul, you helped me to present this and tolerated my speech without saying anything back.. so I think it is payback time…..

Then with a smile.. "come , let us cook together, tell me what to do. And we will make it on time..'

Nakul stood with parted lips: no madam, I will do it.. why you have to worry.. you have so much to study na..

Geet: it is Ok , come Nakul.. let's cook dinner together..

Nakul walked to the kitchen and Geet followed.. time passed by..

"WOW! What is happening here?.. Maan's surprise voice caught their attention..

Geet turning back to see face him with a happy smile: you here already.. go get fresh up and come, dinner is ready..

Maan: but why? You don't have anything to study..

Geet: I did, and Nakul helped me to finish my work and I am helping him to finish his work..

Maan: nice… ok then , I will be down soon … saying that he went upstairs..

It was night time.. maan and Geet were standing at the balcony… she was talking about her friends applications..

Geet: what you think..?

Maan: let see, for that they need to complete their final exam and then pass out too..

Geet: ha, that I know.. but I am just saying early, because when you see it don't tell me I didn't talk about it with you.. Is this only our batch ..ya..

Maan with a smile: you don't know Geet, how much request we are getting.. remember Raj, his application also came.. actually I don't look into all these, how much we can accomodate..
Geet went near him and leaned over to his body:now a days we are talking about business only, right?
Maan with a smile: That is because you are learning about it, now..
Geet: Really, then tell me, if not how would have been..
Maan; then geet will be running around with Ips' papers and looking at Daadima's face for a solution..
Geet smiled wide and said: yes, you are right.. this was my dream.. to study... and my dream is coming true because of you.. now we have few more months of college, then it is study break for exam..
Maan: geet, it almost seven more months... then only the study break..
Geet: ha.
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Maan: you sounded as if it is just one more month left..
Geet circling her arms around him: i wish..
Maan: me too..
The night was calm.. cool breeze was circling them.. they stood in each others embrace looking at the darkness....listening to each others heartbeat..
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thank you for likes and valuable comments.. wil beback in three weeks, will try to peek in, but don't know whether that will be possible, ut till then... bye and take care
Shadow of Geet... hui sabke pyari...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you note .. on pg 43.. thanks...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭waited for atleast one like..😃but will come back.. I know this was boring one.. but i will move on with next part... i need to catch up... but I am getting there... thanks... bye for now..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update....luv Nakul & Dadi teaming up with and against each other...toooo cute 😆😆😆😆😆

Have a great break!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update..... I've been when her came to know dat she is mrs. Maan singh khurana hw'll dey react.

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