~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
geet starting college
convo. is intersting three of them
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ur ff is really nice
liked it a lot
loved the way maan supported geet through the hard times n finally both get united in a true sense.................
geet's college should give a new dimension to her personality n a new level to her strength
keep writing
n plzz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. interesting story. plz add me to ur pm list
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Ye.. that's not fair, somebody called me kanjoose.😡.also few mantioned the last update was too short.😲.. so this is a punishment for you guys by taking the challenge.... and now I want to hear from you that how many lines you skipped... it is 12.30 Am here. ..
Part-15

Geet got ready in her white suit. Maan was trying to tighten his black and white stripe tie around his neck nicely and looking at the mirror , standing just behind Geet. But he paused as he saw Geet taking the Sindoor bottle in her hand.. he held her shoulder and said "Geet, you don't need to , you are going to college".

Geet smiled , looking into his eyes she said ..."this sindoor is the reason for my existence, my life is colorful because of this color on my forehead, if I am breathing today then it is because you applied this on my forehead, and this is my only identity.. I am Geet because of Maan, rest everything in this world is nothing in front of a pinch of red powder in this bottle'"

Maan just tightened his grip on her shoulder and then pulled her more closer' he realized how much she loves him.. he didn't had any words to tell her, except he took the sindoor bottle from her hand and took a pinch of it and with a the happiest smile ever and the loveliest eyes possible he applied that over her forehead. He looked into her eyes and then slowly placed his smily lips over her forehead.. she hugged back with a smile'..

"ye, don't you think we may get late.." Maan asked softly..

"babaji, all because of you..".. Geet in a tension tone..

"what I did do wrong now?".. Maan questioned..

"I should have just applied that easily and then you came to stop me.., see now, this is my first day and I am getting late.." .. Geet was saying it very speedily as she was grabbing things in her hand'

Maan tried to control his smile as he saw her hurries' ...geet saw that...'"now why are you trying for that smirk?"

Maan: actually it was me who told you that you may get late, and now you are blaming me.. not fair Geet?'

Geet: really.. then come ...' I don't want to be late..

She grabbed his arm and started walking out..

"Daadima, will see you in the evening , Ok..'.. Maan just smiled at Daadima as Geet was saying that in her frustration.. Daadi looked at her with a smile too'... But then suddenly Geet stopped.. she looked at Maan's face, he looked at her in question.. she gave her college stuff in Maan's hand and then went near Daadi.. and then bend down to touch her feet.."Daadima, I need your blessings.. I am starting a new day.. do pray for me.."

Daadi hugged her tight and said " my blessings are always with you dear.."..

Geet walked near Mann.. " let's go" and she tried to take her stuff back from him..

Maan didn't move..

Geet tightening her forehead : now what?"

Maan in normal tone : Who am I?

Geet: what?

Maan: touch my feet too, and take my blessings.. after all you are going to learn business and standing in front of a business man'...

Geet: Ok baba, if you wish that.. suddenly bend down and touched his feet.. and folded her hands in front of him..

Maan kept the stuffs on the floor and said : Ye Geet, I was just joking.. and you took it seriously.. he felt bad..

Geet: no, seriously I need it, you don't know how fast my heart is beating now.. I hope everything will go fine....'

He hugged her loosely too.. "geet , you don't have to.. after all you managed well in KC, then what's this.. but for that why did you touch my feet, your place is in my heart, not under my feet.."

Geet in her innocent tone " pathi tho parameswar hotha heina.." then looking at daadima.. "Heina daadima..".. Daadi just nodded her head in agreement.. "and today is a big day for me'' .... Geet picking up her college stuff from the floor..

Daadi: maan just take her beta, otherwise it may get late..

Maan: ok Daadi..

Daadi watched as they both left the Mansion..

Inside the car'

Maan: you took the phone , right?

Geet: hum'...

Maan holding onto her hand: call me at any time, ok..

Geet: hum.. don't scare me now.. can I ask you something?

Maan: what?

Geet: Is there will be ragging?

Maan: ragging?.. no way' ...

Geet: that's good..

But then she felt his hands tightening over hers'

Geet: so Ragging is there?

Maan: "no'... it won't.. it can't be.. ' but Geet, if anybody disturb you at college, just let me know right away.. Ok.. I will take care of it.". looking at her in concern..

Geet: Don't worry, I will be fine..

The car stopped near the gate.

Geet: I will go from here..

Maan: No.. Let me take you inside..

Geet: I will be fine. I have all the information and I can find the classroom too..

Maan: ' ok then.. but keep the cell on, and turn it off only when I say '... otherwise give it to me..'.. she looked at him, but then he snatched her bag and took the phone out and dialed his number and gave to her with a warning "if you turn this off before telling me, I will be right there in front of you within minutes, so

..'

Geet: Do you know who I am. I am Mrs. MSK. Don't try to under estimate me. Ok. I will call you once I reach my classroom..ok.

Maan: Ok then, I will leave only after receiving your message. take care Geet..

Geet turned with a smile: you too.. and walked away..

Suddenly Maan dialed a number.. The man wearing a security guard uniform answered it..

Maan: did you see Geet..

Guard: yes sir..

Maan: ok make sure, she go safely to the class room and also I don't want any studentss to approach her till she reach her classroom. Did you get that..

Guard: got it sir.

Maan looked at the surroundings.. He saw students coming in bikes, and scooters.. few by car. He saw their chatting as they were walking in, in their own world. Few students were looking at his car in wonderment. He had the side glasses raised. Few even tried to touch and feel it and he also noticed their eyebrows arching looking at it. He was looking at his cell impatiently. He dialed the guards number again..

Guard very softly: sir, madam is fine.. she was standing at the entrance with doubts, so I am guiding her to the class.

Maan: does she know who you are?

Guard: I introduced myself as college security sir.

Maan: good.

Guard: she is entering her class room sir.. so..

Maan: ok then.. just be near the class room till teacher comes.. ok..

Guard: ok sir..

Geet to the guard: Thank you

Guard: You welcome. Feel free to approach with anything..

Geet: thanks..

She entered inside. Few students were sitting and chitchatting.. Geet was feeling little awkward.. she looked around and then went and sat on the 2nd row. Students were coming in and out..

Geet was trying to call Maan on her cell..

'are you new?'.. a girls voice took Geet's attention.

Geet jerked and nodded her head in agreement..

"Hi I am Piya.'.. the girl extended her arm..

'I am Geet" she said with a smile.. "Piya, One second, let me make a call..'

Piya nodded her head.. heard Geet speaking softly..

"Hi , I am here.. and got a new friend too'. Ok'... yes, I will let you know.. I am fine.. yes...' ok ..ok'... I am turning it off now.. and I will call you in break time..Ok"..

Geet kept the phone in her hand and looked at Piya.. she saw standing with her wild eyes..

Geet: what happened?

Piya: are you married.?

Geet: yes I am..

Piya: so sweet.. and did you talk to your husband right now..

Geet: yes..

Piya: so sweet'.... did he send you to continue your studies..

Geet: yes..

Piya: so sweet..

Geet: why it is so sweet..

Piya: I don't know, I think it is so sweet..

Geet with a smile.. "yes it is so sweet of him and his family..

Piya: that is what I said, so sweet..

But then they saw everybody getting inside in a hurry..

Piya: can I sit near you..

Geet : yes sure. Come on.. she moved..

Piya to one running kid: ye, what happened?

The other student: Princi coming..

Students all sat on their place. Principal came in accompanied by another teacher.. he looked at everyone's face..

'hello students.. hope everybody is enjoying your first days of college.. I came personally to meet you all to let you know that you can come to me at anytime with any concern.." he looked at everyone's face seriously and then looked at geet's face with a try to smile.. "I hope all are doing good., will see you all around like this'.. saying that he again tried to smile at Geet..

Principal to the lecturer: you may take over sir. As you know There is a new student joining us today and then he called out " Geet'.. she stood from the seat.. Princi looking at the lecturer: "there she is, and now we are close for any new admissions.' So you can start up..

Lecturer: thank you sir.. and they watched as the Principal leaving the class room..

Piya: first time I am seeing our principal. He addressed all of us on the first day of campus. He knows your name. wow! Special ..

Geet: I am new today, may be because of that..

Piya: ha..

But then the teacher's voice grabbed their attention.. Time just passed by quickly.. geet got friendly with few other students. They all were nice to her and was curious to know about her husband.. soon it was time for lunch break.

Geet took her phone out and dialed Maan's number..

"you cannot use cell phone n campus, don't you know that'..

Geet looked at the voice and found a handsome boy standing in front of her. She tried to ignore but then he came on her way. Piya tried to pull on her hand..

Geet: I need to make an urgent call, if I don't then it will be a problem..

Mr. Handsome: ooh ya.. what is that emergency,.. is that your boy friend who is missing you so badly..

Geet: yes, and If I don't call, he will turn this college upside down..

Mr. handsome: Really.. so what is your husband? Is he the Prime Minister of India..

Geet felt the sarcasom in his tone:..

Geet: who are you to ask me that?

Mr. Handsome: Oh ya, you don't know me.. here all the girls die to be with me.. and you are asking me who am I? Boys, tell her who am I?

Geet looked around and found the gang..

Piya: sorry sir..

Mr. Handsome: I am not talking to you.. Ye,.. tell her whom I am..

One boy: he is Raj.. the heartthrob of this college

Geet looked at him head to foot: heartthrob.. in a teasing tone

Raj: why? Don't you think so..

Geet with a smirk smile on her lips: ha sir, you look very handsome.. can I make a call now..

Raj: give that cell to me.. he tried to snatch it from her.. but then the guard came in..

Guard: what is going on here. .. geet realized him from the morning..

Raj; who are you?

Guard: I am the new security guard of this college..

Raj with a sarcastic smile: when did that happen?

Suddenly they heard principal's voice: from today onwards.. why anybody has any problem.

Raj tried to look like an obedient student: no sir, we were not knowing..

Principal: for that you need to listen to the announcements too. I did announced that today..

Raj; sorry sir, didn't hear it..

Princi: ok , what is going on here?

Raj: the new student was using her cell phone , so we were telling her about the campus rules..

Princi; thanks Mr. raj.. and then looked at geet seriously.. 'oh, you came in today, right?"

Geet: yes sir..

Princi: ok, today you are excused, but tomorrow onwards make sure , either don't bring it, or don't use it while you are inside campus.

Geet: ok sir..

Princi: but you can use it just once for now.. Ok..

geet: yes sir.. thank you sir

Principal looked around: Ok, now any other problem. And guys watch out.. the new guards will be around..

The gang just dispersed looking at Principal.. and Geet watched him as he walked away.. the guard came near.." madam you can make the call, Principal gave you permission, but tomorrow onwards if you need anything let us know, we can help you.."

Geet just smiled and said thanks.. she moved to a corner and dialed maan's number..

He was ready to pick up the cell at anytime'... Maan was in a final discussion on the London project, and sasha was suggesting on few corrections.. Maan's eyes were on the cell phone, finally he saw the lights..

"Finally" maan's voice stopped Sasha from talking, she looked at him in concern. Maan took the phone in hand said " adi you listen and update me later, I need to attend this call" saying that he left the room..and went to his cabin.. Sasha stood there looking at Adi's face and with her dropped jaw.. thinking 'what happened to Maan sir today, he was holding onto that phone all this time and just now peeked in and now he left with another call asking Adi to listen to me.."

Maan" so tell me how is your day so far.'

Geet started telling everything from the beginning meeting with Piya.. and the final warning from the Prinicpal.. Maan smiled as he listened to Raj's story because he heard his voice through Guard's cell, he asked the guard not to interfere to see how extend Geet will handle it.. but then when we heard about the gang around, he didn't want that to happen and asked him to interfere..

Geet: so no more calls from me, ok.. I am fine..

Maan: Ok Geet, I will come to pick you up..

Geet: no..

Maan: just today, tomorrow onwards you can go and come by your new car. Daadima just called its ready..

Geet: ok..then..

She placed her phone back and looked at Piya.." let's go..

Piya nodded her head and walked with her..

The afternoon went nicely too.. But then as she walking down towards the gate along with Piya, the gang was waiting for her.. she didn't notice it.. Raj was about to step in but then he saw the guards at a distance.. so he moved back.. aying will catch her outside campus... they watched her silently..

But as Geet reach near the gate, one car stopped right in front of her and the door opened in front of her. Piya stood there in confusion.

Geet: I need to go, my husband is here. I will see you tomorrow. Piya smiled and watched as Geet entered into her car. As she sat down the car just flew away from there. The gang who followed just stood there with dropping jaws..

Raj: who the hell is she?

The gang; no clue..

But then they saw Piya walking and Raj ran towards her and blocked her way..

Raj: you know me right? So tell me, whom she just went with..? is that her boy friend..?

Piya with a shivering voice: that is not her boyfriend, that's her husband.

Raj: husband? Is she married?

Piya: so you didn't notice the sindoor on her forehead..

Raj; oh ya.. that is sindoor ..ok.. but then who is her husband?

Piya: I don't know..

Raj: you are her friend.. right?

Piya: I met her today only..

Raj: ok then find out and let me know.. get that.. he asked in a warning voice..

Piya; yes..

Raj: mmmmm.. and then waved his hands to his friends and the bikes came in front of him and they drove away.. The guards were listening to everything'...

At mansion>.....

Geet was kept on blabbing about her whole day.. Daadi was laughing her heart out. Maan was enjoying her expressions and was seeing a new Geet.. may be a school kid in her..

Daadi: what was his name? Raj, right? Do you want me to handle him..?

Geet: no Daadi, I will try myself. He don't know who I am.. don't worry, otherwise I have a new friend..

Daadi: who? Piya?

Geet: nope.. our college security guard. He only helped me today to find my class room, and also came on time when Raj and gang circled us..

Maan was listening silently..

Daadi: are you sure, he can handle ..

Geet: yes daadi, .. she staretd acting out...'you should see his mustache.. it covers his half face, and his size.. this big'.. she extended her arms out to the side.. ' I will do one thing, I will buy a rakhee tomorrow itself and make him my rakhee brother.. how is my idea' she kept her hand under her chin and was thinking about it seriously..'

Maan: geet , do what ever you want.. have fun and be serious with your studies.. that's all.

Geet: I am serious .. right daadi..

Daadi: yes you are..

Geet: oh daadi, I forgot, that Principal is a cheater..

Maan in concern: what happened?

Geet: he told you that nobody taught anything , right?

Maan: ha..

Geet: see, you need to check this.. she went and took few books out.. these all Piya's and she gave me today and I told her I will copy and return it tomorrow itself..

So no more talk, I am into my study business..and I have few things to cover for tomorrows class.. It is not easy daadima..

Daadi: ok Geet, go ahead and study, will call you when it is time for dinner..

Geet: that I know Daadi.. where is Nakul?

Daadi: why?

Geet: I need him too..

Maan: need him too for what?

Geet; will tell you and called out for Nakul, he came in..

Geet: come nakul, sit here..

Nakul looked around in confusion..

Geet took one book out..: Nakul, this is only 20 pages, start copying this into this ok..

Nakul: but, geet madam..

Geet: no But vut and all.. start.. ok

Daadi and Maan looked at nakul helplessly..

Geet went and took two more..:Daadi this one you will do for me, and then went to maan, and this one aap.

Maan: so what are you going to do?

Geet: let me check on tomorrow's stuff..

Daadi: geet, beta, I said that all as a joke yesterday..

Geet: no problem daadi,, so everyone get into work, I need to return it tomorrow.. so .. she was climbing the steps but then paused.. "write it nicely ok, I need to read it.." and then was talkig something self while climbing stairs..

Daadi looked at Maan helplessly,and nakul with same expression. Maan smiled and came and took the book from nakul and daadi..

Nakul: but Geet madam..

Maan: don't worry nakul, there is copy machine in my office room, I will take care of it.. you don't worry.. saying that he went to his office room with the books..

It was dinner time.. nakul went and called Geet..

Geet: nakul, you were cooking dinner.. what happened to my notes..

Nakul was about to chuckle on his words..

Maan came; nakul , I am feeling really hungry.. is everything ready..

Geet: but..

Maan: come Geet, let's have dinner.. she followed him.. but while climbing down he asked about her preparation for next day and she said she almost finished..

They had dinner,and Geet didn't get any chance to ask about her notes, as Maan was changing subjects each time..

Geet came to room with an anxious face. She collected the books from his hand saying " I am sorry, I know I suppose to do this, and shouldn't have asked anyone else' I will do it.." she went near to her table.. suddenly Maan held her wrist.. Geet looked at him and met his loving eyes..

Maan brought his other arm to the front with few files and showed that to Geet. She took it from him and found all the notes filed nicely... she kept it on the table and looked at him and then just embraced him and rested her head on his chest..

Maan with a smile wrapped his arms around her and asked "you need help with anything else"

Geet: hum..

Maan: Geet, that's not fair..

Geet: um, I am feeling sleepy.. I need you next to me..

Maan smiled and just lifted her in his arms and laid her on bed' the lightes turned off but one could easily hear the whispering of two love birds' still talking about the day and the brighter tomorrow..

******************************************** So friends, I did my part, now waiting to hear from you... so how is my punishment???.. hope this will take you thru the weekend.. thanks Devika
Edited by avi4rubi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was awesome...thanks for the double treat..loved it..i don't have a gud feeling abt this Raj dude but he doesn't know who he is messing with..and copying notes part was damn funny..nakul cracked me up the most. i was laughing so hard..thanks again for ur update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oiyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee thanks for the double treat....😃

Waooooooooooo that was sooooooooooooooooo cute... But i really don want anyone else to know bout geet's real identity... Keep it under wraps as of now, i mean let them not know that she is Mrs MSK... U can have a dhamakedaar entry of MSK into the coll latter..

Raj defo has no idea whom he is messing with...

Edited by swatichowdhury - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
you make me laugh about when she gave the book to dadima and nakul there expiration is unbelievable thanks for making this ff i love it so much i cant each update i wait the other one to be posted thanks please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wov, loved the part how geet gave books to maan, nakul and dadi
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW,WOW n WOW.....................

Fantastic update......I just love Maan in this ff......he took such care to organize everything for Geet so that she don't have any problem in college......haayeeeeee.............Geet got a new friend and that Raj he's so funny......trying to act smart in front of girls......when he comes to know who is Geet's husband then his face will be worth watching 😆.........and Geet seriously handed over her work to Daadima n Nakul 😆....bechaare......Thanks to Maan,they were saved.but he is the most loving n caring husband😳.....He did helped her with her work.....and then with her sleep 😉😳😆..................Thanks Devi for this update.....love u n ur ff 😛....n so decided to call u Devi from today 😃.....hope u don't mind.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome..love it..
geet is so fuuny..
cant wait for the nxt update..
plzz....continue soon.
thx

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