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Posted: 14 years ago
I've been silent reader....... I m following dis ff since it started....... Nd 4r d first time i intrested in somebody else...... I really want to know abt suriya nd sam..... Wat went wrong b/w dem...... I m waitting paitently since 36 part but know i give up..... Nd decided to comment.......
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Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

I've been silent reader....... I m following dis ff since it started....... Nd 4r d first time i intrested in somebody else...... I really want to know abt suriya nd sam..... Wat went wrong b/w dem...... I m waitting paitently since 36 part but know i give up..... Nd decided to comment.......

i will write it down but its really long....
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Disclaimer: I am not creator of the characters but everything pertaining the work is mine and mine alone.

Part 44


Geet came home very tired, after dinner, she quickly bade bye to everyone and came to her portion with Maan. He followed her into room. When geet came out after changing clothes, he was lying on bed. Geet laid down on his other side and closed her eyes to sleep.


Maan,''you said we will talk about your office problem.''


geet, ''can we talk later, I am really not in the mood.''


Maan,''this is later geet.'' he leaned over her,and turned her face toward him.'' what's wrong.''


Geet,''i told you, I don't want to talk, why don't you ever listen to me? I am tired and I want to sleep.''


she put her arm over her eyes. Maan grabbed her arm and pushed it away from her eyes and said,''stop your tantrum and tell me about the project.''


geet opened her eyes and said,''how do you know about the project.''


maan moved away and sat up on bed,''when you don't tell me anything,i have to find through others.''


geet outraged got up as well, her head was aching badly, ''you have set spies on me?''


Maan,''no just informant, but now the cat is out of the bag, you will need my help in this project, I am clearing up by schedule, by the end of week, I will be able to guide you completely.''


Geet,''i can do this project on my own, I don't need your help.''


Maan,''dont be absurd, you cant handle this project all by yourself.''


Geet,''i am an adult Maan, stop treating me like a kid. I have organized charity projects, I am not clueless. I can do this.''


Maan,''why are you fighting?''


Geet was about to say something but his phone rang, maan grabbed it from the side table to switch it off, but geet grabbed it from his hand and saw the caller id and threw it across the room, maan was shocked for a second.


Geet,''tell your buddies that don't call you late at night.''


maan grabbed geet by shoulders and shaked her hard,'' have you gone mad? What was that for? My friends don't call at night unless it is urgent or important.''


geet,''really!! and what is so urgent?''


maan,''how would I know, you threw the cell away.''


geet,''i am sure you can guess what is so urgent and who need your help at 11 in the night.''


maan let go of her. He got off the bed and started pacing.


Maan finally stopped and asked,''are you on drugs? Because nothing else is making sense.''


Geet,''and since when you started making sense out of my words, for you everything I do has some mean motive like trying to say sorry is controlling,standing up for my family mean not loving you or giving other prefence over you, it could n't be as simple as that when I try to encite my husband to bed, it means that I dont want to continue the silent battle or that after marrying a guy doesnt mean that I have stopped caring for my family.''


Maan couldn't say anything.


Geet,''i can't understand you maan, I am too ignorant, too inexperienced about a relationship between 2 lovers. Everything is complicated and you never give me any space. I feel like every time

I know you, you do something totally unexpected. Our thinking never match.'' she broke down and started crying.


Maan strided quickly to her and hugged her, she continued,'' you never believe me, you never thought I could do this project on my own, you assumed I will fail, if it had been sameera you wouldnt have thought so.''


Maan gave her tissue paper,''this project is very difficult geet, thats why I volunteered for help and I dont trust shuriya. Beside, there is no comparsion between you and sam.''


Geet said brokenly,''is that true maan? You like strong independent women and respect them, you have always admired roshini mama for it but when it c0mes to me, you always think that I will fail.''


Maan,''i am sorry, just stop crying, I ..i its different with you geet, since you were a child you wanted to stay home like simran mom, you never showed any wish to be independent and I cant imagine it now when it is happening. I thought I will always have to look after you and now, all this.'' he hugged her more closer.'' dont shut me out geet, I know we have problems but its because of our age dufference and my own relationship history, if I made you feel that than I am sorry, just be open with me. now tell me what is bugging you''


Geet,''i want to know more about you and sam, I want to know what went wrong with sam and shuriya.''


Maan,''you know everything between me and sam and why do you need to know about them?''


geet,''he said something and I believe that he is not lying but if what he said is truth than either you or sam is lying.''


Maan,''what did he say?''


Geet,''he said that sam told him that you and sam were together when he was dating her.''


Maan,''that is utter crap, he is making it up.''


Geet,''and where is the proof that sam isn't.''


Maan,''no I know her, she is my best friend.''


Geet,''than go and ask her, ask her what really happened because if you really are his best friend she will tell you.''

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was such an amazing reaction from Geet! lovedd it!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
interesting.. please continue... wonder where this is leading too
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great parts loved each and single parts
Maan and geet have a long way to go vefore understanding each other
Maan is way too stuborn and geet needs to open up more
They both hqve weaknesses tht nEeds to be changed into each others strengths
Hate da villian (sorry forgot da name lol) i only pay attention to maan and geet moments lol
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is getting super interesting now
maan n geet's confrontation was awesome......very nicely written
loved it
plzz update the next part soon
I m being greedy now but can't help it😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar .. awsome update .... i guess some one from shuriyas side played some game ...
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This story is getting more and more interesting with every update...I thought Geet believed in Maan after the previous update...but looks like she is having 2nd thoughts...I hope Maan supports her and together they can beat that evil Kashab...

Update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Disclaimer: I am not creator of the characters but everything pertaining the work is mine and mine alone.

Part 45 a


Maan went to sam, not because he thought she was wrong but because geet had asked him. He really was self-centered he never tried ti think anything from her point of view, never thought about her, never thought that she never been in relationship before him.But after being exposed to women like anushka and jenny, this had become a part of his life and after watching sam suffering, he had somehow started shying away from love and revealing himself too much.


Maan reached at sam's flat and knocked, he was allowed inside the building as his name was on guest list and he knew lift codes. Sam opened door after 5 minutes really surprised to see him here at this time. ''Maan is everything ok?''


Maan nodded , took pff his shoes and went to the sitting room and laid down on the couch. He had been here so many times that it was like a second home.


Sam sat down on the carpet beside him and held his hand,'' did you fight with geet again? You should stop this maan, she is already in so much tension due to her work, you should help her.''


Maan said nothing. Sam looked into his eyes, they were sad. She got really worried.''i know you dont talk about your realtionship but may be I can help if you tell me the problem.''


Maan,''remember in london I asked you what happened and you said that it was too private that it hurt even to think about him, I promised myself that I will never ask you again that but today '.I am asking you what happened,... I know I am asking you to tell me which you never said, but he is creating trouble between me and geet. He is filling her head with false allegation against which I have no proof, tell me everything so I can tell truth to geet... She is my reason for living now, I can't live without her and he is targeting her, he knows that she is my weakness.'' his eyes were troubled.


Sam remembered shuriya's words that he will take the reason of living away from the man who separated them. Yes, she thought he will do it.


Sam let go of his hand and wrapped her arms around herself,''what did he say?''


Maan.''he said that you told him you were cheating on him with me.''


a tear fell down her eye but she quickly whisked it away before Maan could see it.''so many things I told him, so much...and he rembered just that, but it shows, it shows.''


maan,''what?''


Sam,''that I loved him more.'' she got up and went to the picture hanging on wall, it was abstract art, everyone saw something they thought was there.'' I cant tell you maan, Its too difficult but I wrote it all downonce when a pshchiatrist suggested it, I will give you those diaries, take them home and read with geet.'' she went inside and came back with a small bag, they are all in here. She gave the bag to him. Maan silently took the bag and then asked,''are you sure.'' sam nodded,''yes, you shouldnt be paying for something you never did. Take it with you.''


'...Home...

A/n i will write after making breakfast "edited"" will make breakfast later😆😆
Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago

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