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Posted: 14 years ago
Madhoshi ke baad Pyaar ka ehsaas bhi you're ending?😲😭😭
Ab kal yeh na bolna ki you're ending truly magical too!!!
Hope you're not running away from IF😭
I am scared😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
y r u ending thisssss u even ended ,madhosi recently plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dnt end truly magical bt if ur ending this want more updatessss of truly magical will miss reading pyaar ka ehsaas😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
Soo beautiful Pyar ka ehsaas😍, i just loved it dear Geet manaofying Maan in her own way was soo cute & sweet😳 waiting for Khushi arrival❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭hey muskaan u are ending this too...
not far.. we want more updates of truly magical now!!! and
a anew fanfic please..................
ur writings are worth reading and time!!!😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat u r ending this ???why yaar?????? 😭...k then u need to give us more updates of truely magical .... also consider the idea of starting a new FF pls...
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey !!!!!!!!!!!!!! ur ending pyaar ka ehsaas so..........................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz more of truly migca...............................i really love ur all the FF they were to good cant even express ..........................................thanks for sweet journey of PKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeee ..............😭..thank u
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan - kisi ne kuch kaha
she sniffed her nose ..he wipped her tears & kissed her - sorry, agle bar se 8pm aavonga
geet immediately - nahi 7pm hi aana, mujhe aacha lagta hain

part - 157

geet was really excited dancing running around greeting friends & family
pooja & smriti also seemed equally excited. it was kavya's wedding
all of them went into bride's room & gave a big bug to her. she
was the last one in the group to be married. definitly was a big day
for all of them. they walked out helping her with the heavy lengha &
her dupatta. kavya was really nervous & concious as she sat next to ajay on the
the mattap. geet stood behind her, she could see the nervousness vanishing
as ajay slipped his fingers around her under her duppatta. she smiled
maan softly slipped his around her waist she rested her head on his arms
maan felt contended to see her so happy. ajay & kavya rised for the pheras.
sfter the whole cermony they took the blessings. geet felt the contraction
& held maan's hand really tight. he lifted at once & took her to the car.
dev drew the car, geet laid on maans lap, daadi sat in the front seat.
daadi - jab itna stress kar rahi thi shaadi main tabhi mujhe laga tha
maan caressing her hair backward, she cried & creamed in pain


The waiting space at the hospital outside the labor room was painted a cheerful shade. chairs
lined the area. A TV blared from one corner. On a table sat a collection of parenting magazines.
NT & daadi smiled as they watched dev and maan pace the floor. Maan was as unreadable as ever, although they could feel the tension in the set of his shoulders and the line of his mouth.
dev didn't bother to hide his feelings. Dev looked pale as if it was he who was going to deliver.
daadi mocked - bhabhi ke liya itna pareshan ho raha hain, NT ke delivery main to yah paka faint hojayaga
dev felt embarressed so was NT.

maan came to daadi hearing geets scream - sab teehk ho ga na daadi
daadi patted his arms - don't worry sab teehk hoga
He gave her an absent smile, then continued his path across the room and back
Nt - veer ji coffee
maan nodded for a NO still pacing
NT brought coffee for dev & daadi
smriti, ranbhir, pooja & arjun walked from the glass double door which parted the hallway
pooja - any news
maan shook his head still pacing with a strin look
maan went to daadi again - do really think she is ok, I mean itna deer thodi lagta hain
usse kuch howa to nahi..he couls'nt even say those words he just mumered
daadi rolled her eyes & smiled at her grandson finally showing emotions
daadi - tum overreact mat karo, sab teehk hojayaga
dev looked really nervous, NT sat next to him & encircled her hand around him
he hugged her back - sab teehk ho jayaga na, I am really worried, bhaabhi ko kuch ho
gaya to bro won't be able to take it he wispered
NT - kuch nahi hoga geet ko
maan was almost at the verge of lossing it when they hear the baby cry
maan hugged daadi & tears rolled down his eyes.
pooja & smriti had a glow in their face it was very different.
nurse came & called for the father..
maan rushed towards her
nurse - its a baby ..before she could finish
maan - how is geet & baby
nurse smiled at him - both are fine
maan sighed a relief - can see them
nurse nodded - let me see if the baby is cleaned up
maan was happy & could not stop smiling.
nurse - don't you want to know if it is a boy or a girl
maan - I know she is my khushi
nurse - yes indeed she is papa ki khushi
nurse diappeared into a back room. Seconds later she called maan in,
maan walked in excitment & longing to see geet not sure how much he was happy to see her
sitting on the bed with a tiny child nestled in her arms. she the pink blanket away
from the baby's face. maans eyes was glued onto her the little girl, so small and red-faced,
opened her big eyes and blinked fuzzily. Her mouth was the shape of a tiny rosebud.
Even with her blotchy skin and wisps of light black hair, she was beautiful.
geet - kitni pyari hain na
maan was quite, he coulnot answere. she glanced at him.
he was staring at khushi like it was his life she holding in her arms.
she moved her arms to hand the baby to him, he very softly sat next to her, not sure whether
to accept the offer, he was so scared & so desparte to hold her. geet extended her
one hand & pulled it closer to khushi, that was the first ehsaas of their love, he smiled
with mosit eyes, instead of taking the baby in his arms he took geet in his arms
maan - I love u, I love u a lot for giving me all the happiness all my ehsaas back in my life

~epilogue~
Dev restlessly pacing outside the hosiptals labor room
geet & daadi smiling at him
the glass door opens & maan walks in with 3 yr baby khushi sipping her juice & spilling it more on him, krish keeps passing the wipes to maan.
maan - any news
dev nodded for a no nervously - bro sab teehk hoga na?
maan very confidently - don't very every thing will be fine
daadi wispered to geet - khushi ki time pe maan ka halat dehkne layak tha
geet - sachi
daadi - iska halat to dev se bhi karab tha, every 10mins he would come & ask me
geet teehk hogi na
geet smiled & looked at maan patting khushi on his shoulder who all most dossed off
and krish resting his back on maan & playing on his vedio game
maan lifted his eye brows geet nodded for a No
both of them wondered what they had done to deserve such happiness
geet mumered I can never stop falling in love with you. maan smiled like he heard what she said

NT delivered a baby girl.
smriti was also expecting soon
pooja did get pregnant & had twins & struggling with them
kavya was settled in US still not sure about a baby yet...Meera married Vicky😳

I was planning for few more parts here but then thought instead will go for a new ff.

BTW truly magical has just started..it is no where near ending😉
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally a baby for maaneet
aww she is adorable :)
Edited by kellz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG mushki........love u love u love u........u starting new FF........m very excited for that.pls start soon will be looking forward 😊😊😊🥳🥳😊😊😊
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