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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello friends,

Wonderful episode. In fact I am always entertained by GHSP. Even the lousy episodes make me laugh my head out. So I'm amused 24/6 by Geet Hui Sabse Parayee.

Well, the initial thoughts of both maan and geet, one waiting to be taken home and the other hoping geet to understand him was a brilliant idea by the team. Yes geet was hurt and so was maan. It happens when life doesn't urn out the way we want. They'll get over it. In fact I am quite happy that they got some time now before marriage and since geet is now in the outhouse which is not very far from where maan resides, we can hopeto witness some quality moments between maan-geet now. BTW, G-team, sometimes in life incidents happens and disturbs our happiness. Sometimes its destiny and at times its people trying to hurt us but good people hardly suffer for that. Honest souls somehow get benefitted even through the bad incidents. So if possible convey this message to the audience and show us how this marriage getting postponed turned out to be really good for maneet. That would give good meaning to the show and teach the audience to be patient and positive in life.

Now, Dadi's speech followed by the logic was ummm, I mean she said that she has no problem with maan's decision but his decision making time was wrong. Ok, first of all when maan took the decision, NT was well as so dadi's over expressive face saying "waqt galad hai" was itself unnecessary. She could have simply said that due to the unexpected incident that involves the family we should wait. Trying to prove maan wrong with his timing was in fact illogical. She is worried about NT even after knowing what she did only because she is the daughter in law of the khurana family. But what about after the engagement fiasco when geet returned to the house to explain and dadi decided to throw her out of the house? She was almost a part of the family then. She didn't even consider for once that geet could have been in trouble. Dadi is being the typical elders of a family who can be easily manipulated. Well she can be what she wants to be and we don't always have to like or agree with her.

NT, my oh my, how do I describe her? Without any help, any friend and with a bag full of crime she is beating around the bush and hitting right every time. I don't understand why meera got all teary about the acquisition? I just dislike such personality who gives a bad name to niceness. For people like them we consider nice people as dumb. Actually meera is dumb and she doesn't have the capability to be evil even when needed and so it appears as if she is nice. Anyways, she should speak up next time without tears.

Eagerly waiting for today to see the new night guard of the khurana mansion. He looks quite handsome and seem to be capable of handling trouble quite well. Lets see how the princess gets friendly with the night guard and take a ride on the imaginary magic carpet with her friend! Ok I'm still talking about maan and geet. See you all.

Loves and prayers………….

Edited by taqdir - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Few pointers...
Today's Episode was incomplete and its only a build up of the future track😊...so no verdict from my side for today's episode😃
MSK listened to Dadi's words but from inside he is confused and thats what we saw when MSK was doing his wood-chi😳
MSK can do court marriage...but will Geet b satisfied with just court marriage ??🤔..Geet wants MSK's acceptence legally in front of whole world with proper rituals ..lets not forget where she is coming from😊...even if they do court marriage,will Dadi accept Geet inside the house ?..So Geet herself might not opt for court marriage but rather go for traditional marriage with Dadi's blessings and acceptance😊...
Coming to Dadi..her reasons were valid today...She doesn't want another fiasco in the media...she doesn't want her family to become a laughing stock again with people talking about how one brother's wife is in hospital and another brother is getting married..also Dadi today told MSK that she doesn't want Geet's reputation at stake as well and if the marriage happens now ,her reputation too might come under scanner...only after all this MSK agreed to Dadi's words making sure Geet doesn't end up becoming a piece of news in the media again😊
But MSK is still in dilemma and is cursing himself for not fulfilling his promise that he made to Geet..knowing MSK he can very well take a U-turn tomorrow ,...the reason why I said today's episode is incomplete😃
Dev-NT-Meera is another parallel track which has potential😊
Will wait for tomorrow's episode to see MSK's ultimate decision..I still feel he might not wait for long and will succumb to his love for Geet😳
Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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UnReSS!!

hmmm todays episode makes me quite happy about failing to edit my previous takes especiaally t ones for t past 2 episodes... where in i wanted to say a lot of good things... which ofcourse got second preference to rewatching!😆

but thn today i donot feel lik rewatching... n tat gives me t tim to edit my take... so well i guess u know its butchering tim!!

well for me to begin with...

In som places for t past 2 episodes... how much ever i lovd t execution.. i was failing miserably in connecting t dots u had lined up. And i am I still unable to draw tat line between
Khoon bhari maang (which happened)... a Complete marriage ceremony (which Maan wants n t society orders) .... n T Griha Pravesh (which seems to b Geets need!).. n here ofcourse i assume tat Daadi only wants Khandaans Pride.... which was clearly displayed today... toh i doubt her character substance... coz her pleee for Maans happiness seemed to dilute into thin air whn it cam to Khaandaani Izzath!!🥱

Now after watching todays episode i doubt if u urself knew where u were trying to draw tat line...

For me.. i guess in a conventional way.. KBM aka Khoon bhari Maang has more of symbolic values.. n values related to fate n destiny... if i am not wrong... n as in, in t real world were i live.. i havnt seen a marriage happening with tat..!! So i agree its not a marriage! toh it can b considered a partial one.. but here i guess it was intended to b Maans reaasurance to himself and Geet of togetherness. n lik he said he indeed wants her to b his wife! Now his words which name her as his wife to b..so how com Griha-Pravesh is planned b4 proper completion of t marriage ceremony?? Both Maan n geet somwhere in course of t unexpectedly eventful night n t unfolding drama of t day... lost there path as to wht tey wanted.. And yesterday whn Geet was chirping Maan told me he il take me hom.. i was wondering
do i hav partial hearing loss?? or are these two talking thru t eyes things tat are beyond our interpretation?? or did u just edit tat line out?? coz i certainly didnt hear tat coming from Maan... And today i understd tat i was indeed being wronged by tis telepathic couple coz suddenly Maan seems to b talking about it too... And here i was thinking Geet was bothered by t fake marriage she had already gone thru n now wants a real one... n MAan understds tat... but alas she wants to b accepted only by family not society... n he too seems to b wrking towards tat goal.. n suddenly Daadi is t only person who is talking Marriage.. hmmm... i am confused!

Today...my heart fel out whn u showed Geet daydreaming about Maan taking her home n thn smiling on her impatience... only for tat thought to b later tarnished by Maans wrds which made it clear tat all dreams are to wait.. was it so necessary to show her heart being torn out lik tat again?? n tat too by Maan for nothing of his doing when he himself wants otherwise?? was it really necessary for her to not understd tat NT toh her culprit is a part of t family.. is she still in shock to think logic ??

n Maan leaving her off lik tat for Wood chi... u know wht whn i saw him going off lik tat.. t first thing tat cam to my mind was Why?? n t second thing was its for chiii... n u proved my intuition right... and i had to watch in dismay.. how Maan despite wanting to giv her happiness failed to do take her hand coz he tot he had failed his promise n it drew him to pacify himself by som wood talk leaving t other in pain!! really... is tat all...?? does being t cause of pain to ur lovd one make u run away from standing by her?? is tat wht lov n promise of togetherness is all about??i know he ill return to her side tomrw... but not doing tat today was again a failure...
Breaking one promise is never t end... but runingaway to make mor can b..!!

stil i am left pondering on many mor unanswered questions and i remember wht Jyo said.. tat tis epi is a prelude to wht is to com in t future track...
so really u think using t 20 mins run tim of t no. one show on t channel as a promo... can do anygood??

il com bk to mor editing whn i feel less confused about ur promotinal epi!

Track - no idea where it is headed to... but i am hopful... coz i really i hav no choice .. do i??

Editing - better

Execution - hmmm... no commments til i know wht is happening

Dialogues - well wrds were good... but did it convey wht it shud hav?? well if it was a promo thn i think it did!! otherwise.. NO!!

Medical issues - .. whn in tis era of finger tip knowledge... dramas stil portray it as som unaccessible entity... n lack of homwrk in t field b4 a track involving it... leaves
T doctor in me in dismay!

Maan and Geet - som explanations can help us and U..

Acting - GC DD alwys does their best

Karishma - makes everyone hate NT but wht was she gin to wear... maternity gown??

DEvD is a COWARD!! 🥱

Daadi is Selfish... tat being her only characteristic i hav managed to understd

Meera - she didnt deserve tat... but she didnt hav to ask Dev to go bk with her either... esp whn His wife was stil under Critical Care n whn u cud hav left for ur own good without him!?? but i donno wht bills did Dev wanted to settle.. i tot he said somthing lik tat??

oh well.. lastly Mahiiiii is bttr toned down... it is ok on TV... but with headphones watcing onlin... its a pain to ur ears!!







Edited by mi7chimes - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I don't know how I feel about the episode yet...But I have hope 😆

Edited by MarshP - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A show is called sucessfull only that time when audience relate to the show properly. Yesterday & today I m sure many pppl's heat & eyes cried with the poor girl's disappointment. She is not shocked or not been cheated. She is only disappointed & she too knows the reason & circumstances but what to do with the HERAT? it cries when hopes & & dreams shatters even for temporily😭
thts the excellence of GHSP team always. in HP she use to be physicaly abused we cried with her, In Delhi office she use to be humiliated we cried with her, during her dillema either to accept her love for Maan or to stay away we cried for her. and today when she is in level most comfort with the assurance of her love we again cried for her as for some time her hope & dream is not fullfilling.
I wanna thank the team👏 good job. have some more points to tell, lets see if I can make it or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
"Love is a promise delivered already broken."

"Losers make promises they often break. Winners make commitments they always keep."

So Ishq has turned MSK into a LOSER...get out this teenage lover boy act and be yr self dude ...only will then Geet be in yr life forever as yr wife...and I do believe he will be the winner who makes a commitment of a lifetime..So here is the message for him



Ring the bells that still can ring
Forget your perfect offering.
There is a crack in everything,
That's how the light gets in.


"It's the night that makes the dawning.
It's the depths that make the heights.
It's the roots that make the branches.
It's the darkness that gives birth to Light."

Edited by rdfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Jyo, in your analysis, all you are talking about is MaanEet marriage, which makes sense. But cvs today showed only about Geet moving in to KM. Had they shown MSK telling Geet about marriage getting postponed and Geet saying that she understands, plus she would never want to marry in private without dadi's acceptance, the story would make total sense to me. But with dadi, MSk talks about marriage, with Geet he talks about her moving in to KM. And then he private he repents about not keeping up with his promise, which is to marry Geet soon. Oh god, me is totally confused. 😆 So far, the story was only about MaanEet marriage, with MSK promising it will happen soon, but due to NT, it getting postponed. I fail to understand where Geet moving in to KM today itself, before marriage, come into picture. 😕

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My analysis for today, posted in EE thread too:

Cvs, before I start my analysis for today's episode, I would like to write down some pointers for the new team, which they may print in bold letters and stick on their office wall so that they never forget. LOL. I am sure Nissar and group might have told them everything about the serial so far, but its no harm in reminding them, right? ;-)
New team, following are some pointers which can help you in never messing up with this serial:
1) Never mess with MSK's character (study his character, live his character...messing with his character is sure recipe for disaster of this serial)
2) Never mess with Geet's character
3) Never mess with MaaNeet relationship (oh god, dont even dare to walk on this path.....remember: the base of their relationship is blind trust and truth)
4) Story is important, no illogical tracks please

Now, next pointers are about Geet audience ka mindset (I speak on behalf of majority...mostly IF and FB members):
1) we Geet audience are not Ekta mayi audience for most part. We look for logic and flow in the story. Character consistency is a must. We live MSK and Geet's character day in and out. Heck, we even dream about them. We think about them 24/7 (yes we are self-confessed addicts) If at any point an episode does not make sense or MSK-Geet are shown out of character, we make sure you receive virtual belans from us. We are very sensitive about this serial and MaanEet.
2) We never forget what has been shown so far (test us if you dont believe me). For example, Cvs might forget that MaaNeet went to Manali, not Shimla, but we never forgot that. Our memory might suck in academics, but when it comes to Geet serial, MaanEet scenes, we have A+++++ memory. LOL.
3) We have hawk's eyes. Smallest of bloopers are caught by us. So new editing team, be careful. Waise bhi, the old editing team was never in our good books, so you guys have to be extra careful.
4) We are not professionals regarding serial making, but we criticize and praise about all the departments of this serial. For us, Geet serial is not only about MaanEet, GC, or DD. We also closely watch the lightening, camera, dialogues, execution, story, editing departments. I know, we are over-involved in this serial. LOL.
5) we Geet audience like drama, but in limit. If the lead heroine is happy for an episode and cries for 10 episodes, we tend to get bored.
6) We are fun-loving people. Yes we criticize and bash Geet team when needed, but we also love you'll. And along with you guys, we want Geet to remain a master-piece and an unique serial till it last. We will do all it takes to keep you guys on track. You'll have all the freedom to take the story the way you'll want, bas, it has to make sense to us, flow has to be there, logic has to be there, and MaanEet character should not be tampered with. Natural gradual groW*H of their characters is perfect, but not overnight changes. We should and must be able to relate to MaanEet in each and every scene.
7) We do not tend to forget the side characters. So dont take Dadi, NT, Adi, Pinky, Sasha, etc lightly. Yes we are crazy about MaanEet, but for us, Geet is about all its characters, and not only the leads. Just to inform you'll, we sometimes even talk about Nakool and Mali. And if that is not enough, we even talk about characters that are not introduced yet on screen, eg. vicky and sam. And to add further, we even talk about characters that are long forgotten, BRIJ, Handa family. Lastly, for us, even cameos are important, even if they are shown only for an episode. (PLEASE BRING YASH BACK FOR MEERA)
8) We sometimes (actually most of the times...lol) tend to over-analyze, but please dont mind it. Take all our feedbacks positively. Remember one thing, our intentions are not evil. We may sound rude, but thats just because we cannot see Geet serial going downhill. We are usually pre-emptive and warn before-hand. We believe in, "better be safe than sorry." ;-)
9) Lastly, we do understand the situation you guys work in to deliver daily episodes to us.....time pressure, channel pressure, boss pressure, etc.

So with these pointers, i would like to welcome all the newbies in geet team. So far we have enjoyed watching this serial, hopefully you guys will keep our interest intact in the future.

Now coming to the episode, ofcourse, I shall start with the editing team (I just love them, dont I ;-)). I see the editing team has changed, THANK GOD. Hopefully, this editing team will be a bunch of professionals and will not sleep through during their job hours. Editing team, I did find 1 blunder today. The first frame of today's episode showed night time, but the rest of the episode showed day time. Please take care of this next time.

CVS, kya hua aaj, logic went out of the window huh. When did MSK promise Geet that he would take her to Khurana Mansion (KM). As far as I remember, you'll showed MSK proposing Geet for marriage, convincing her that dadi will agree, and promising her to always keep her happy. In all this, when did he mention KM. Did I miss something?Today, during MSK-dadi conversation, all they talked about is marriage postponement. There was no mention about Geet moving in to KM. Then with Geet, instead of telling her what exactly he spoke with dadi (marriage postponement), he tells her that she cant move in to KM at present, they will have to wait. And then during his wood-chi session, he again remembers his promise regarding marriage. Why were you guys jumping from marriage topic to KM moving in topic. If there is a link between both these topics, then why was this link not shown to us. I AM SO CONFUSED AND I DONT LIKE THIS FEELING OF CONFUSION.

I dont care if you'll dont show how Geet got her clothes from Meera's house or how Meera came to know that MSK bharofied Geet's maang. I know you'll have only 20 mins each day and we have to assume that all this happened but it is not important for us to see in those precious 20mins. This is totally fine. But cvs, it is extremely important for us to see the thinking process behind the characters' actions. If Geet was packing her bag excitedly to go to KM, then it was important for us to see MSK promising Geet that he will take her to KM today. We should not be made to assume anything in this case. What would have made perfect sense is if MSK before leaving for hospital had told Geet that to go pack her bags and as soon as he comes back, he will make her a permanent resident of KM (this idea is given by An of Devil's Den in IF). Then Geet packing her bags would make sense to me. Otherwise, I dont know when MSK promised Geet to take her to KM today itself. He just promised her happiness and proposed marriage to her.

Another thing is, before leaving for hospital, the last scene between MaaNeet was that they were waiting for Dadi's approval for their relationship. They did not get her answer as the phone rang. So when Dadi told MSK outside the hospital that she has no problems with MaanEet marriage, its just that they will have to wait for sometime, till NT is fine, why did MSK not repeat the same thing to Geet. Why did he not make it clear to Geet that Dadi has agreed for marriage but just wants them to wait till NT is fine. This way, Geet would have felt better that they have dadi's blessings. I felt, all she was worried about (till Tuesday's episode) is whether Dadi will approve or not, and not about when she can move in to KM. MSk told Geet that they will have to wait a bit more before moving into KM, when in reality, he should have told her that Dadi has approved for marriage, bas they have to wait for some time to get officially married. The talks between them till Tuesday's episode had always been about marriage, never about moving in KM, so why was marriage topic ignored between MaanEet today and all concentration was given to KM topic. I DO NOT UNDERSTAND THIS.

Another problem I have been having is with the way you guys are showing MSK's character recently. REMEMBER 1 THING, MSK IS NOT A LOOSER, HE NEVER WAS AND HE NEVER WILL BE. New cvs, it is important for you guys to know that an intelligent and smart MSK is a turn on for all the girls out here (few of my favorite MSK scenes are the ones with NT). Never show him helpless and dumb. Let me explain what I mean out here.
1) When Dadi said that marriage cannot happen right now, why did MSK not mention to dadi that he understands they cannot have an elaborate marriage ceremony due to her concerns for NT. He does not care for NT but he cares for dadi and Geet. So he should have told dadi that though he cannot marry Geet in front of all right now, he would still like to legalize his marriage with Geet so that he can be with her 24/7 for her safety sake and for their happiness sake. I know this is not what MaanEet had planned, but hello, something is better than nothing. They could have had an elaborate marriage later on, after sending NT/Dev to jail. But at least for now, knowing Geet's past, knowing NT's wicked mind, and knowing how much MaaNEet love each other, I am surprised MSK did not offer to legalize his marriage ASAP.
2) Why has MSK not thought about NT after Nov 19 episode. Its been 1.5 weeks since then. The last interaction or thought he had about NT was when he gave her a dhamakedar dhamki in the office. Since then, he has had no thoughts about her. THIS IS SO UNLIKE MSK. As far as I know, MSK believes in the following: "Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer." Why is he not working on or thinking about ways to send NT/Dev to jail and how they came out of jail in the first place. I am not saying that he should act on NT right away or send her to jail right away. I am not talking about actions here, I am talking about his thinking. And I am not talking only regarding today's episode, I am talking about 1.5 weeks. Since 1.5 weeks we have not even seen 1 scene where he is thinking about NT, and that is disturbing. Before NT attacked Geet, you'll should have shown MSK working on finding out facts as to how NT/Dev got out of jail. And After NT attacked Geet, you'll should have shown him thinking on how to keep NT away from Geet and the danger she posses to Geet's life. I know he told NT that his name is now attached to Geet's name, but he also knows that NT never gives up. In reel life, a whole night has passed and it was late morning before MSK came to know that NT drank poison. Knowing MSK, as soon as he put Geet to sleep in Monday's episode, his thoughts should have straight away drifted to NT, his anger on NT and him making calls to find out where NT is. And if at night he was too tired, then I was expecting him to do that first thing in the morning. NOTE out here, I am not saying he should take strong actions already. No, take your time, dont rush with this track. All I am saying is that he should be thinking in this direction. His thinking should be shown to us. After what NT did to Geet last week, how can he take this so lightly. He got news about NT drinking poison after almost 12 hours (reel life) after NT attacked Geet. So in 12 hours, he did not think even once about NT.....so not like him. I know action from him will come once NT moves in to KM along with Dev. But I was at least expecting MSK to think on NT/Dev issue (before Geet was attacked) and NT issue (after Geet was attacked). MSK is great in multi-tasking, he is a shrewd businessman. He is damn intelligent. So to show MSK not thinking about his enemy for 1.5 weeks is disturbing to me, and so unlike him. When his relationship with Geet was not going well, he still was on top of things when it came to NT. Now that Geet is with him, there should be no reason why he is not shown thinking about her.

Today, I loved Geet's character. She was dreaming about MSK, how sweet. Her trust and faith in MSK is unshakable now. I love this. Now even if God tells her anything against MSK, she will never believe Him. This is what we wanted to see in Geet, trust MSK's intentions blindly. She has already started to behave like MSK's wife, which was clearly seen from the way she reacted to bad news. She is a woman deeply in love, and so she trying to keep herself strong for her man's sake was perfectly potrayed today. She sensing his presence, hugging him.......lovely. I am loving the natural comfort level and groW*H in their relationship.

I even loved the way MSK could not forgive himself for keeping up with his promise. As much as I complained about MSK's characer earlier, I loved the way you'll potrayed MaanEet relationship today. They both were thinking from other person's POV. Geet put herself in MSK's shoes and MSK put himself in her shoes. This is a positive and strong sign of an extremely healthy relationship. Cvs, please never mess with MaanEet's divine and pure relationship by ever separating them or showing misunderstandings. Let them face all problems TOGETHER. They are each other's strength and they only have each other to call their own. Let it always be, MaaNeet vs rest of the world.

Precap looks promising. Hopefully we will see MSK bringing a smile on Geet's face tomorrow and both of them sharing a blissful, happy moment together. These 2 have suffered enough, now for heaven sake, show us few episodes where MaanEet are smiling and are happy just with the fact that they are finally together. Let them share some nice, light moments together. Let them forget the outside world for sometime and get lost in their own sweet little blissful world. I hope to see this tomorrow. Both of them spending the night together, tension free, with atmosphere filled with happiness, peace, and of course MaanEet love. :-)
Edited by Anvi2009 - 14 years ago
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@ all : moi gng back to find solAce in bookd.. my true LOve...

ve given my pathetic update on the first page.. actually dunno y i reserved.... i reallyy did not feel like writing after today's ep!!

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For Anshu and Anvi: Here is my explanation (talking from story telling point though not sure how correct I am) 😊

KBM was done more to shut-up the crowd than done with the intention of getting married at that moment. It was spur of the moment reaction and not actually a decision. Plus, filling up the maang is not marriage and in some parts of India sindoor does not play any role. It's the fire, mantras and the pheras that stamp a relationship. So Mann and Geet are not married according to traditional norms. In their minds they are, but still not a couple accepted by Dadi Ma and the society.

Now coming to the move to Khurana madhouse from outhouse: According to me, at times as the story moves forward, a line may go missing but it comes-up later through other means. A character brings-up a line said by another character in the past to the fore in the present. Though a flashback would have made a difference to the scene and would have also completed yesterday's abrupt scene where Mann leaves with Dadi Ma to check on NT.

Me hope me made sense. And I have not seen the episode today so no clue what happened.
Edited by an12345678 - 14 years ago
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I'm missing the good old domineering Maan, not liking this helpless Maan very much Loved his Wood-Chi though 😍😆 And i honestly thought we would get to see Dadi smacking NT to unconciousness, but instead she tells Maan to wait till NT gets better before he weds Geet 🤔 oh Dadi how you disappoint me and Maan come on this helplessness is ruining your reputation as a Sher 😕 pull your socks up dude 😆
Edited by Lip-a-Licious - 14 years ago

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