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Soni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#901

wow so lovely update dear😍, i just loved it😳 Maaneet are our Jaan❤️

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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#902

That was cute. Lolz. Do continue soon.

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hasiii

@hasiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#903

Muskan the magic you created got me really badly.

Please update soon. I am not able to do my work 😳

Waiting for next update

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#904

hey m ushki r u going to update????

m still awake so js checking out...

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shazeena

@angelic shaz

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#905

omgg wowwww dat was awesumm

loved ittt

geet chnaging into maan clothes and looking at him she cant help uff i think if any1 was in her place they cudnt hehhe

awww i loved itt

cnt wait 4 more continue soon

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hasiii

@hasiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: muskanp
UPDATING IN 30MINS

waiting 😃

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#907

My Dil Goes MMMM.....whenever I see the word "UPDATING" on your stories❤️

I've lost it I know....finals week ka stress hai na hota hai

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Muskan

@muskanp

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#908

-truly magical-
part 54

she felt odd the way he left. she burried her head in the sleeping bag & cursed herself
unhe kitna bura laga hoga. she was really not able to face him now & kept sulking
maan shouted GEET GEET
she came out feeling odd
maan - I thought we could have a moonlight dinner
geet blushed. he offered her black tea & bread. she took it & had it silently.
geet - i am sorry
maan - kis ke liya
she started to weep he came forward & took her in his arms. shhh...its ok...
geet - its not ok, u might be expecting.. but mujhe yeh sab samjh nahi aata
maan lifting her chin softly - I only have one expectation
she looked at him curiously with moist eyes

maan - I want to see u smiling always, nothing else matters
she was lost in his words..with a slight smile forming in that innocent face
she kept looking at him & fluttering her eye lashes
maan - tum mujhe aise dehkogi to tumhe hi mushkil hogi
she snaps back & looks away
he lies down resting his head on her lap. she moved her hand backward nervously
breathing harder. mumering babaji yeh kya kar rahen hain, main kuch kahoongi to unhe
bura lagega. lekin aise kaise.(maam forgetting she always lies on her frds lap & vise versa
but here she is feeling it differently..ha ha muskan laughing at my jhali geet)
maan - ek baat kahoon
geet - umm
maan - aab tu main tumhara BF hoon
she shied
maan - so u can think about me how ever u want, its ok
geet without thinking blabbers - no its not OK..aapko pata nahi mujhe kaise kaise
kayal aarahe the..& closes her face with her hand closing her eyes tight behind that
maan crosses his hand on his chest & turns on her lap facing away from her
smiling at her. she slowly opened one eye parted her finger & watched him, he was not
seeing her, she was relieved. she felt comfartable & removed her hands slowly
from her face. he smiled inwardly
maan - GF
geet conciously - umm
maan - agar hum humaesha ke liya phas gaya to
geet - thats just not possible bro & raj puri army lekar aajayenge
prem aur armaan to khud hi doond lenge mujhe
maan mumered yeh kabhi romantic bhi hot hain uff - just think we are stuck here for ever what will u do
geet she looks around - mujhe problem nahi hain, aap hi meri baat sun sun ke bore hojavoge
maan holds her hand & cuddles up - I can never get bored listening to you
actually I can never have enough of it
she starts laughing loud - sab ladhke pehle aise bolte hain...then they say u talk too much
maan turns to face her wrapping his hand around her waist - main sab ladkonke bare main nahi
janta, but I live to hear your voice.
she feels tickled with his hand slipping around her waist, she blushed & smiled feels his warmth
geet stroking his hair softly - bahut baten banane lagen ho
maan - sab tumhare wajahse
she entangles her fingers in his hair in a grip & pulling him away to look at him
mere wajahse kyun
maan - pata nahi tumhare samne mujhe kya hojata hain, na chate huwa bhi
she intreupts - OH to na chate huwa sab karte ho
maan - puri baat to suno
geet - mujhe jo suna tha main ne sun liya..pushes him away from her lap
he pulls her closer from her waist. she roughly gets up hitting his head on the rock
he screems..aaahhh in pain..she immediately holds & caress his head
zor se lag gayee ?
maan makes a baby face
she holds her ears
he turns looking sad..she lifts & rests his head on her lap, he moves away
geet - sorry kaha ne maine
maan - mujhe kitne zorse lagi
geet - kidar
he points at back of his head - idhar
she leans down & kisses him softly
immidiately - idhar bhi pointing near his ears
she innocently kisses him again
maan naughtly points at his cheeks, she bend down inches away he could feel her breath
fanning his cheek he shrugged, aap chance mar rahe ho & goes inside the tent
geet mumering bahut zarory tha na kiss karna. woh hi kanhi kanhi point kar rahe the main
to sirf janha chot lagi wanha ... he comes in & hugs her from behind
geet - aap chodo mujhe, aap bahut bure ho
maan - aab jo bhi hoon tumhara hoon
geet - mujhe yah sab nahi pasand
maan resting his chin on her shoulder softly tickling her - kya sab
geet moving her shoulder in a rotation backward - aap baaton mat uljavoo mujhe
maan holds her tighter - main to kuch nahi karta tumhi ulaj jati ho
she protests & rests her cheek on his which slightly rubs as she moves
she could feel it all over her, his chest completly covering her back
his strong arms tight around her slim slender waist, caressing the skin which
was burning her sensation she couldnot take it any more & turns to hug him
breathing hard resting her palm on his chest
geet - why are u making me feel like this
he smiles - this what u always do to me
she feels so shy that he feels like this beacuse of her. the thought makes her
feel the girlie self. he kisses her forehead & tucks her in the sleeping bag.
he slips next to her facing his back..she wraps her hand around him from back
very conciously. he closed his eyes & dossed off.

HANDA HAWALI
rano reads the note & calls armaan
rano - armaan, geet bina kuch bole college kisi camp main gayee hain
papaji ko pata challen to to bahut problem ho jayeeghi uska phone bhi nahi lag raha
armaan - aap phikar mat kariya aunty I will find out

armaan calls prem
armman - prem yaar college main kuch camp hain kya?
prem - kya bol raha hain?
armaan - Geet kanha hain?
prem - bachan se poch aaj kal uske saat hi rahti hain
armaan - nahi yaar they fought
prem - kya?
armaan - raj told her not to talk to him & she was confused & they had some missunderstanding
prem - lekin raj ne aise kyun bola?
armaan - pata nahi I could'nt speak to him after that
prem - raj ki baat to waise bhi use bahut effect kardeti hain
armaan - humari to friend, raj ki to woh pet hain
they both laughed
armaan - yaar lekin where did she go?
prem - kanhi sulk kar rahi hogi
armaan - there is something wrong, uska phone bhi nahi lag raha hain
prem - kya bol raha hain
armaan - aunty ka phone aaya tha, she has left a note saying she is gone for some
college camp
prem - ek min...prem to mukti - college main koi camp hain kya
mukti nodes for a No
prem gets up putting his shirt on - I will pick u from sanjeevni in 15mins
armaan - umm

TENT 10PM
geet kept looking at maan from behind
babaji ..I am with a total hunk who ownes a private jet, bilkul koi dreamy ho jaise
& seems so genuinely good guy, we are alone in this beautiful
jungle far away from every one, which means no one to disturb us
yeh sab kitna ajeeb hain..uff this geet still needed a neon arrow muskan wondered
yah sach hain yah sapna? kya aise ho sakta hain
maan - itna mat sochu facing his back
geet closed her eyes immediaty..yeh to meri dil baat bhi sunleten hain
geet - mainne hunk nahi socha tha & bit her lips..unhone suna nahi hoga tho bhi tone bol diya very good...
maan smiled & closed his eyes
maan got up early & kept looking at her, it was really cold outside, dec & up hills
offcourse it was... probably in negative
she cuddled up into him inside the bag.
her face looked so innocent with the sunrays falling slightly at that time..
it was 5.30am & she turned...wrapping her arms closer to him...
he smiled how much her life revolved around him. she slowly opened her
eyes to meet his gaze which could actually see through her.. their hearts pounded.
urges were urging. what could be more natural than a kiss ...but this was geet
he had been in trouble since those pleeding innocent face first stood in front of him
he bent little closer gauging her..she looked at him still lost in those deep dark eyes
maan came still closer..she burried her head in his chest - mujhe sharm atti hain
maan mumered yah right...& lied resting on his back
she comes close to him & rests her head on his arms..her hand envoloping him
maan mumers ek to mera itna pass aayeeghi phir mujhse expect bhi kareghi ki main kuch
na karon, kya karoon main iss ladhki ka