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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update😉 ................... love ur writing muskan.......... update soon ................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update! Lol :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sooooo sorry for the late comment baji "holds ears", i have been sooo busy with coursework that i have not been able to comment, but i still read your updates 😳!!
Hmmmm... me happy that Maan finally realising how much damage he has done to Geet !! But feel sorry for him as well!!
Awww poor Geet she is very hurt, and i think her three steps of revenge are actually three steps of recovery 😉!!
Geet is giving Maan exactly the relationship he said they have, and is now suffering the consequences of saying that to her!!
He is slowly slowly recovering, and can;t wait to see what the doctor's reoprts say. hope it shows he has recovered!!
Hope that after he recovers, he will tell Geet his true feelings for her and give her all the love that she deseves!!
Geet is due very soon, i am sure the baby will settle the differences between them..!!
Can't wait to read on baji, plzzzz update soon, thanks for all the pmz!!
xxxx 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY muskan !🤗
its boring :(
hahahha😆
are u kidding me
its awesome👍🏼
i love it
i am really looking 4ward next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muski yet no update ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for the update, Muskan.
Kahan ho?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi princess where's the update for today? :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 76

they went on & on kissing each other driving passionately.
wanting more & more. he wanted to touch her feel her all over again
he wanted his hands to be on her, around her the urge was so intense
but he could barely move them. she looked into his eyes & tears rolled
down her eyes. it was first time she had tears in her eyes since she
had met him after his accident.
maan - kya hua geet
she just left from there without saying anything. she went to the wash
room washed her face & looked at herself in the mirror. she checked her
lipstick & kajal
she came back, pari was about the to enter his cabin.
geet - abhi nahi just give us few mins, I will call u
maan saw her stopping pari at the door & smiled...kitna bhi gussa
dikha de, lekin pari ko mere saamne nahi dekh sakti
geet - don't have hopes, maine usse andar nahi aane diya beacuse u have
my lipstick all over u, she starts wiping his face with her duppatta
waise bhi meri koi izzat nahi karta, ab yeh bhi meri besharmi ki
list mein add ho jaata
maan turns his face in anger - maan kyun nahi leti tum pari se jalti ho
geet smiles wickedly picks the phone & calls pari to come to his cabin
pari comes in reluctantly
geet - u can brief him the updates & take the dictation
she bends down & wispers in his ears have fun if u can!!
she just leaves them alone in the cabin & leaves, she looked happy & least bothered
pari explains him the new projects & maan initially was taken aback
with her reaction & then got busy with his work.
then suddenly noticed evey one rushing to geets cabin.
maan looked through the blinds & wondered what happened. he told pari
to find out. pari nodded & went to her cabin. maan was alone in his room,
every min, every sec that passed by killed him to know what happened,
he wanted to be there with her something just told him she was not fine.
woh har ek lamha bechaini ka maano mar mar ke jiya ho jaise.
it was more than an hour since he was waiting but no one came to his
cabin or tell him any thing. he found himself so helpless
sasha was rushing in & out of geets cabin & then pinky rushing in with water
maan restlessness increased & he tried moving he could not
he wanted to atleast hit the calling bell he could not
he hated himself, his plight & he pushed himself hard to touch the bell
he fell on the bell making it ring continously
pari came rushing & lifted him, maan yelled - kya hua geet ko
pari - she fainted in her cabin & hurt her head
maan furious & mad - what the hell is happening, did u call the doctor
pari - she said it is not required
he was getting mad & hyper - no she not ok, call the dr now
geet walks in & tells pari to leave
maan hated to see a bruce on her forehead, he became wild & wanted to hold
her now & he just managed to rise on to his feet & fell she caught him from falling.
he almost hugged her with all his wieght falling on her. his heart beat
was thudding so high, she could feel it all over her. he had tears in his
eyes & he looked hyper. main theek hoon.. she wispered holding him & making
him sit on the couch. she rested his hand on her stomach & cuddled up
next to him. don't get so hyper, not good for my plans
he was feeling much comfortable & calmer
maan - tum apne ghar chali jao geet, wohi tumhare liya theek hoga
geet snaps out of the hug - I am not a small kid...then smiled wickedly
u know that by now...actually thinking about it I am big enough to bare a kid
then laughed so don't tell me what to do & what not to do her tone changed
tang aa gayi hoon main sab ki baat sunte sunte, pehle veerji kehte hain
he will set every thing right, will give away the child for adoption & will
get me married to my dream guy....then u come from no where & drive me
into ur life. I told u to stay away from me, but u kept on coming closer &
closer. she held his collar maine kaha tha mujhe yeh job do?, maine kaha tha mujhse shaadi karo? then you just force me to marry u, things looked so good & promising
then u decide to stay away from me, then mama says try to understand him
he is a nice guy, I try tried to do that too...lekin woh bhi aap ke liye
kaafi nahi tha..u decided to give me divorce now veerji says to forget every thing
& u say to move on....aap logon ne mujhe samjh kya rakha hain
nahi suni aapki koi baat, main wohi karongi jo mera mann karega
maan sat helplessly feeling miserable to drive her so close to him

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVPbBNSpvVg[/YOUTUBE]
uski har ek baat main uske dil ka haal tha, woh har unkahi dard
jo unchahe woh use de gaya tha, nafrat se honi lagi thi usse khudse
she looked weak & pale. her eyes looked drowsy
maan - GEET GEET tum theek ho
she just lied down on his lap feeling tired mumering I hate u
baby~1,2,3,..nahi bola
maan closed his eyes hearing those words from her mouth which just poked
like thousand needles.
Suraag dhoondhta hoon main,
Teri palkon ke chilman mein
Ki yun jhalkenge ashq ban-ke
Izhaare ishq karke!!!
Suraag dhoondhta hoon main,
Teri har bezaar taqreer main,
Ki yun labz biyya hon-ge,
Eshare ishq karke!!!!!!!"
(thanxs to shreyabhra)

it was more than 2 weeks in this routine of her being wild & daring
with him all the time when they were alone & then his gym session, their
water tub moments & now also his office she left me alone with pari the whole
day..she had instructed her not to leave him alone even for min.
maan was able to feel things better around his body, but still didnot have the
hold over them to move is body parts to the fullest. dr had reported maan was recovering very fast and things look quite promising.

after their passionate climax geet cuddled up next to him
it was way past mid night. geet got up crying in pain. maan panicked
she held her stomach & kept crying.
maan - geet relax it might be the baby
geet got up & walked around
maan - why don't u call the ambulance, call daadi
she just walked around & drank some water ignoring him
maan - GEET tum itna lightly kyun le rahi ho?
she took long breaths & comes back to the bed after an hour of pain & stress
maan - GEET WHY ARE U DOING THIS TO URSELF
just pulls his hand & rests on it & puts her leg around him
maan shouts - what is with this setting scores ..what do u want to do
what do you want from me, just take what ever u want & go away
don't put urself & baby into so much of danger. tumhe jo chahiye lelo
geet - aap meri hi cheez mujhe de rahe ho
maan felt those words were more than it seemed. he did'nt know
woh kya mehsoos kare khush ho yah duhki ho.
geet - waise bhi aapko kyun laga ki main aap se kuch lene aayi hoon
phir galat baat ki aapne
maan - why are u ignoring ur health
geet - this was just a false alarm, she opens his book & shows him
maan reads it curiously
geet - so u just brought this book to show off, kabhi padha nahi na
maan ignored her taunt. he was relived but still worried she needed more attention than him
and she did'nt seem to take care of herself at all.

in the morning maan did'nt have his breakfast, geet tried feeding him
he refused to open his mouth
geet - yeh kya naya naatak hain
maan - we are going to the doctor now for ur check up
geet - main theek hoon
maan - NOW
geet rolled her eyes

precap
doctors concern

NEXT PART 77
VM CREDIT lvzlyf12 . Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well. Please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it ... awsime update yaar.... now i am damn sure that geet is doing this only for maans betterment..
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved the way geet is ordering maan and even i got worried when she was acting of getting pain
really loved the update
plzzzzzzzzzzz update next part soon

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