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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan... that was great update.... i guess it was not enough for u that most of us were confused abt Maan's doing... u had to confuse us more with Geet's doing now....lol.....
in ur pm u said u dont get enough comments... everytime i come to read the updates... u always have pages of comments already posted... lol... u r doing a great job... do cont soon....
Edited by dhrashtee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

so geet is hell bent on revenge

but somehow my mind and heart refuses to believe tht geet can b all of a sudden turn cold and ruthless towards maan... ofcourse she has been deeply hurt by maan's words and actions.....but it is not in geet's nature to turn vengeful
i guess she is behavin g this way to cure maan and bring him back from this pitiable vegetable state i am sure u have something planned for us a shocker or a surprise in forthcoming updates....
hope it gets unravelled soon
anyways its quite difficult to predict wen it comes to ur ff......u always have something or the other that leaves us pleasantly baffled............
loved ur update
keep writing
love u and ur ff
plzz cont soon
sorry offlate i have not been commenting on ur updates......but i dont fail to press the LIKE button.....
the assignements are leaving me completely exhausted.....but i surely make time to read all the updates of all ur ffs...
plzz bear with me
well i kno its quite disheartening to see wen the writer doesnt get the response from the readers/fans...but its mainly because of study/work schedules.........
we con tinue to love ur ff as we use to be.........so plzz continue writing
hope u dont take offence or feel disheartened ......
will surely be commenting wenever i get time...............
thanxx
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome................... love u muskan.......... update soon
Love Krishi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh now I feel madhoshi is my most favourite FF among all of yours..
each n every act geet is being doing, its so cool,
however it seems cool but may be very hard for her,,,,,,,,,
Well, the good part is with her behaviour,
she is not only curing Maan but she is also taking revenge from him,
his helplessness will provoke him to come into life,
or say his will power will become strong.........
i also feel ke Geet had made her mind to cure him before her date........
I wonder what will be after the delivery and how she would handle,
i strongly hope that she will not forgive Maan and thorw divorce papers on his face and take custody of child or even give up it...........
oh i am so curious.
Love
lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 75

daadi - I am so happy, I am really glad she is taking care of you
dev - aap jaldi se theek ho jao bas
daadi - ab geet aa gayi hain toh, I am sure he will be
maan smiled weakly did'nt want to dissappoint them
they spent the whole evening talking to him & having coffee with them
maan wondered where geet was. she did'nt even once come to be part of all
their talks. they had their dinner, she did'nt even join them for dinner
later dev dropped him to the bedroom. the attended settled him on the bed.
she came in with a big book in her hand. he was happy to see her.
na jaane kya baat thi usme,
itna sitam dhaati thi phir bhi uspe isse pyaar hi aata
he just found her cuter & more adorable.
uski naraazgi bhi usse sahi lagti
jitna use dekhta utna hi use aur chahne lagta
she climbed on the bed & inched to him.
she began to undress, maan rolled his eyes
maan - bas karo geet
she shot a glare at him & then smiled wickedly - aap chup chup jada aache lagte ho
maan - kyun aise kar rahe ho turning away to not to see her bare
geet - kaise...& began to undress him
maan closed his eyes & took a deep breath hating the feeling she sets in him
she lifted him & made him sit resting on the bed rest.
maan - why are u stressing your self.
geet - why are you pretending to care about me
maan shouted - I always cared about u
geet - chilla ke mera mood mat karab karo...it is supposed to be romantic
she sat next to him & pulled the spread on them.
she got the book
maan - yeh kya hain'
she showed the book & smiled naughtily
maan looked away hating her ideas
geet - I have no idea, so I just thought we could read it together &
try out something intresting. maine suna hain KS is the best book for all this ideas
maan - tum kahan se yeh sab bakwas sunti rehti ho
she closes the book - do u have a better idea
he looks away
geet opens the book again - how about this one & start reading the description loud
maan - stop it geet
she continues reading it sincerly. she pokes the finger he felt a faint touch
in his arms & looked at her - mujhe yeh wala part samajh nahi aaya
he could not resist her innocence. he looked into the page. it really looked sensuous
geet - lets try this
maan - it will hurt you
geet - how does matter to you
maan - geet you are pregnant, due in 3weeks, apna nahi toh baby ka khayal karo
she did'nt bother to listen to him & moved on with the act
how much he resisted but she really knew to play arround him & get him into
her. took him in completly & her lips closing his not letting him to resist
or speak up. she was so passionate & wild he could resist falling in for her moves & rise into a different world finally she laid tired on him after they reach their climax with her hair
covering their face like a curtian forming a private envolope. he urged to move
those curls & comfort her.
maan - you know, you are raping me
geet laughed loud - yah I know, but you left me with no option
maan - why don't you just move on...kyun mere peache apna time waste kar rahi ho
you are just hurting yourself
geet - how do u expect to move on with this big stomach...but I will after setting
our scores, BTW I am not hurting myself, I definitly enjoying every bit of it
maan - u cannot be so mean
geet - yah I know..I cannot be so mean...I am meaner...winks at him
she slept on him the whole night... he began to feel her weight on few parts
of his body not wholy but at certain parts.

woh kare gussa, phir bhi yeh pyaar lutana chaahe
woh chaahe na chaahe yeh toh uski ko chaahe

usse hi hain isski zindagi ki khushi har ek
yeh to usse se apna pagal dil lageyenge

chodke jaana chaahe to chale jaye woh bhi
par jaanta hain uske dil mein wohi samaya hain shayad

the routine was set...she woke him with a nice session of making love & then
dressed him up for the gym...then she would push him into the bath tub &
dozes off for an hour or so. later in the day she dressed him up formally
maan - yeh kya kar rahe ho
geet - kitna sawal karte ho
maan - GEET
geet just cleared her ears & ignored him
she fed him the break fast & took him to the office
she took him into his cabin & sat next to him
he just looked at her did she really want to hurt him or wanted him
to get back in his lifestyle.
geet - aise kuch nahi hain, I just want you to see how bad condition is
your company.
she switched on the computer & showed him
KC shares is all time low...I could'nt be happier
maan stiffened his muslces & grind his teeth.
geet - I just wanted to rub it in. I want every to one see you in this condition & pity you the way every one does looking at my pregnancy & then the thought of being dumped by husband.
maan closed his eyes in pain, he never expected keeping her away would mean all this.
geet - ab you are here why don't you do little bit of work
she called adi & sasha
geet - why don't you give him the updates
adi - lekin iss haalat main..he mumered
geet - he is handicapped not brain dead
maan was not liking her taunting him time & again on his incapablitlies
adi showed him the reports & left them alone
she sat next to him & turned the pages
he could stop falling all over again for her sweet revenge, which actually
getting back every thing in his life. he was in his house, gyming, back to
office. able actually work...he just kept admiring her
geet - you are giving me ideas
maan narrowed his eyebrows
she locked the door & closed the blinds
maan - yeh office hain
geet - umm & kissed him all over passionately & he closed his lips tight
but she went on moving her hands around him & he gave in & actually kissing back
umm..i am loving it...she was getting flagrant and daring.
This was no big deal. they had done it countless times before. Still he felt like
the first time with her every time wondered how she did this.It wasn't the need
making him strong, it was her. she had this magical effect on him.
precap
check up
NEXTPART 76
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god!!! geet is something....
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME loving the way Geet is making Maan normal again
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Posted: 14 years ago
di im loving it... so Geet is continuing her sweet revenge on Maan ... so next is chk up...she is defo getting on his nerves so tat he wud be able to move...love Geet ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
muskan i liked the update bt there i hv sumthng which i felt OTT. Geet is 8 months pregnant nd usually this time doctors suggest for sexual abstinence..it can cause serious damage to baby..so r u sure dat she really doesnt care for the baby???
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Posted: 14 years ago
Im confused... ki main kya likhu... Sorry I know u expect nice & huge comments after writing this... But like I told u b4.... my quota of emotions 4 d day got over after reading tm... but after reading madhoshi.... pata nahi....
shayad main bhul gayi main kaha hu????
Di super job... Amazing writer u r... Main kitni bhi taraf karu woh kam hai... Im telling u again.... u shld really consider writing as ur profeession... Aap sab ki bolti baad kar deti ho... I mean u leave every1 speechless....
Hats off to u Muskan di...
Please update soon... itna wait karwana accha nahi hota...

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