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Sammy

@-ArohaAngel-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

haha....i like writing....but typing just gets to me...especially when i have to type five pages in one go...but dont worry i have a feeling u will like this update....it's sorta emotional

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Sammy

@-ArohaAngel-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Hi Sammy How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so funny game Nikki is too clever both r falling for eachother plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

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Hi Sammy 😃

Just read the introduction and part one, got a basic picture of where your fiction is going. Oh your first fic? I know how it feels like when it's your first, but dont worry, your doing swell . You'll just get better with time, looks like I'm going to love your FF, well that's what I feel, keep going, PM me further, I'll keep dropping in comments when I read each part 😃

Thanks for the PM.

- Steffz -

Edited by -Steffz- - 14 years ago

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roshni mittal

@-wild-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

wow amazing dear....love to read ARsh moment

thanx

for the pm

love u

salina

Edited by salinashah - 14 years ago

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Lovely part Sammy :)

Yeh jo end mein likha hai..isse bada font nai mila :O :P

I loved the kind of emotional bonding..not exactly emotional but yet understanding moments b/w ArSh <3

Lovely moments, i dont know how to describe it, but it was really 'in Ease" moments, like the working together ones, then shilpa massaging his head :)...

And In the truth n dare table too, the way they both understood each other.

On the whole, i love the essence of this FF, Smoooth, Lovely ..leaves a feeling of Silk softness ...a melodious and soothing song...which i totally love, its a pleasure reading this one :)

I dont have much to say, like previous comments ..thaks for taking time and replying :)..hope dint bother you much.

Lovely Part, continue soon.

I know today am more composed self lol..will be back to my true self soon 🤣 its ur FFz impact :P

PS - do think of my request in my previous comments, ie to make this a Happy Happy FF :)

Lovee,

Vaishuu

Thaks for Updating soon and the PM <3

Edit - I loveeeeddd the Romeo Juliet thing 🤣 it was crazy ..actually after reading it full, tehh wholesome emotion was ...diverted to ArSh thing..so forgot to add this lol...Cant wait to see their reaction in the morning, hopefully.. something gud :P

Edited by vaish04 - 14 years ago

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tulsi agarwal

@spicyheart

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

beautiful part

i m soo loving it

continue soon

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dazzling_armaan

@dazzling_armaan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The Part was Great I loved it this way more 😃

AR were soooooooooooooooooo cute & understanding & i loveeeeeeeeeed it 😃

& the way Niki made fun of Abhi was just Greatttttttt....

Oh BOY that Game & the Dares were just Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab specially ingthe one given to R & M😳 it wass soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo FUNNY imagining it 😆😛😉

All in all I loved the part 😃Next time Update sooner than this one .

Loads of love

Urs Sis

Edited by dazzling_armaan - 14 years ago