OS #2~ Sweet Surrender;) Pg 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks guys for all the love you have given me so far...😃
With the events of the past few days, the frustration seems to have built up in me and I would like
to fix it with this OS!! Promise...I won't write anymore!!😉
This is my Take!! Hope you like it...especially Karishma who has wanted me to write some
steamy stuff!! Sorry am bad at it!!😆

One...at Last!

Khanak lazily stretched and gradually felt the layers of blissful sleep peel away..

This had been the deepest, most restful sleep she had had in a long, long time. And

she felt different, she felt new...her body ached, she felt bruised as if she had

done a strenuous workout. Then reality struck home, and she blushed

deeply, smiling to herself, her eyelids fluttered down on her cheeks as she recalled

what had happened last night. She and Shantanu had finally had danced the

ultimate dance of love...they had become one at last. She remembered that she

had worn his black shirt, the one she had worn at the hotel, and Shaantanu had

completed what he had started there.. He had undressed her slowly, and

seduced her with his mesmerising eyes and smile, she had also responded, a

little hesitant in the beginning but then with a hunger and passion as love

consumed them in its flames.. She had never imagined it would feel the way it did and no

book could reveal all its secrets.
Khanak realised that she was wearing nothing under the blanket and hurriedly

grabbed at the shirt which lay on one side..when Shaan's hand grabbed it instead.

He had woken up before her as sunlight slowly crept into their room. He watched

her sleep, his head propped up in his hand... Her body seductively

outlined under the thin sheet. He felt at peace with himself finally, now that his

wife was his in the true sense. He thanked fate and God for bringing Khanak in his

life.Then he saw Khanak stir and grab at his shirt...which prompted him to want to

tease her again, so he reached across her and snatched it from her hand and he

flung it to the other side of the bed. He watched her amused as she clutched onto

the sheets trying deperately to cover herself, embarassment and frustration

clearly showing on her face as she tried not to meet his eyes. He sidled closer to

her and slowly walked his fingertips up her thigh, barely touching her skin. Khanak

shivered, a thousand impulses spreading through her body seeming to emanate

from the points where he touched her. As his fingers continued their upward

journey, she relaxed her grip on the sheets, closed her eyes, enjoying these new

sensations. He touched his wife's bare hip, her skin like silk. He spread his hand

on her flat belly,and pinched her supple skin, enjoying her reaction as he did so. His

hands explored her body, going into all the secret places freely and without

hesitation as she let him. Soft moans escaped her parted lips and her breathing

became fast and shallow as a sense of urgency gripped her. She let go of the

sheets and spread her hands on his torso, kissing and nibbling his firm skin. Shaan

pleasantly surprised and thrilled at his wife's new boldness, felt her heat spread

into him as she wrapped her legs tightly around his. He weaved his fingers through

her hair and pulled her head back, bringing his lips down on hers and he kissed her

with all the love and passion that he felt for her all this time, holding nothing back.

~~~~~~~~~
Thanks guys for tolerating my write ups, I realise that what I write is not up everybody's alley... Thanks much..Love U all!!!😃
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shanakyasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
baapre baap
simi awesome yaar i was like wen i heard the word thigh i was like simi toh sabke aage nikal gayi hai besharmi mein.........lol
it was just wow simi tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
i was blushing throughout the whole last part
gosh this was super hot


lovely n thnk u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much fr lstening n writing such an awesome os loved the titel



now i know v have one more gr8 os writer between us n that too a very very hot one😆




hatts off grl fr such a gr8 piece of romance👏❤️👍🏼

☺️☺️

😍😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ahhhh.....SImi...my sweetie....AGL

Babes, you too have fallen into my category....Loved it...steamy...hot....How the girl would blush remembering everything that happened after the special night....
Love,
Amrita



Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dear simi this was reall very romantic and intense too ..I loved it in full.
BTw what are u telling?
with so many wellwishers., fans and friends how can u think of retiring from writing nahi....
dear please conitinue with ur works every now and then..This is a humble request. this one is suuuuperb..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey ya n one more thing dare u say ur retiring from writing or anythig ill kill u badly fr sure

ur soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good n im yr fan n dont u dare say that k

ur gonna write frever so shutt up😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Karish.........LOveU
Ams waiting.........
Shriya...just feel a little down...I'll probably pm my stuff to ppl who really want to read it..like U!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

hey ya n one more thing dare u say ur retiring from writing or anythig ill kill u badly fr sure

ur soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good n im yr fan n dont u dare say that k

ur gonna write frever so shutt up😆

Cool down!! Karish!! Don't worry!! I'll pm my stuff to you!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u better do
i dont know ki tum creative logo ki kya problem hai😆
itna superb likhte ho phir bhi u aint satisfied
its like wow n u say feeling down
u should b called pagli now😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

u better do
i dont know ki tum creative logo ki kya problem hai😆
itna superb likhte ho phir bhi u aint satisfied
its like wow n u say feeling down
u should b called pagli now😆

Yes, am very much a Pagli!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part Simi... a beautiful romantic and perfectly written shanak scene...u already knw that i hav always loved ur writings so i obviously want u to continue..... 😛
and ya will be waiting for the poem...

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