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Posted: 14 years ago

HaPpY b'DaY dEaR KSHU


It must have been a rainy day
when you were born,
but it wasn't really rain ,
the sky was crying
because it lost its
most beautiful angel.
HAPPY BDAY ANGEL

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A baby has a special way of adding joy in every single day.
It's so good to know someone special, who shares,our secrets, our laughter, our dreams and our care, someone through good times and bad, when there's tears,it's good to know you through the years. Side by side, or miles apart, a friend like you, is always close to the heart. You have always been there for us whenever we needed. Though we act weird on some occasions, you always talk well to us the next moment as if the moment never happened. You put up with our weirdness. You have been a true friend, a good sister, a nice mentor too... (a good daughter, a good lover, a gud grandchild too😉😃)



love you so much kshu. just a small wish for you that all your wishes come true and you always held a smile that comes to your face straightly from the bottom of your heart, love you


happy birthday once again baby

N.A.R😃

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Happy B'day Kshu, may god bless you my angel, love you shooo much.. muaahhhh


Part-195

armaan paid no heed towards his pleeds as his ears were busy in listening silent tears and silent calling of his name from riddhima on karwachauth, ankit's every plead was acting like a lil piece of ice that armaan wanted to place on riddhima's wounds… he kept on looking at ankit..

siddharth looked winningly at armaan and saud "ab to aap maante hai ki mai daring hun???"

A: (coming out from thoughts and looking at siddharth) haan yaar tune to meri bolti hi band kar di, aaj ke baad mai kabhi tujhe under-estimate nahi karunga, hats off to you bhai… (siddharth with proud took his seat back and armaan looked at ankit who's still sitting looking at his hand, tried to control his smile ) ab aapke liye kya band baaje mangwane padenge kya, apne haath baad mai dekh lena yaha par aakar baithiye….

Ankit kept on looking his hand and thought to throw stone on armaan's mouth, then thought to cut his tongue into pieces.. then he glared at armaan angrily and on the verge of saying something but his cell started ringing, he got up and moved away a bit, vibha called him to tell him that she's coming on holi as they're having some ceremony in Mumbai, ankit's in thoughts when he placed his cell down…

Then looked his bleeding hand and then at armaan he mumbled "I can't quit this game, not now atleast, only two people are left, armaan again called him saying "tere liye hum saari raat nahi baithe rahenge, nahi khelna to bata de", ankit looked him in anger, armaan mumbled " oops mai to darr gaya, ab yun aankhein phad kar dekhna band kar aur jaldi aakar baith"

Ankit thought " ek baar bas mere uppar point aa jaye, phir tu nahi bachega armaan, teri cheekhein na nikalwa di, tujhse apni jindagi ke liye bheek na mangwa di to mera naam badal diyo", he purposely settled in front of armaan wishing next time bottle stop on armaan,

Armaan smiled inwardly thinking "isse kehte hai aa bail mujhe maar, iss ankit ne to mera kaam asaan kar diya, bechara ye sochkar baitha hoga ki mujhe punishment dega, par usse ye nahi pata ki ab uske saja lene ke din shuru ho chukke hai, baitha reh apni sapno ki duniya mai, ab sapno hi duniya mai hi khush hua kar aur hum hakikat ki duniya mai..

Again bottle's rolled, sonal's out and only rishab's left, ankit wished that before rishab only for once but bottle should point at armaaan, his wish did come true but in other manner, means bottle pointed armaan but as a person who will either give challengeor ask a question to ankit, means again ankit is pointed out for next punishment..

Ankit's shocked and looked at sky for once complaining for such a bad luck, armaan looked winningly at him and asked him whether he wants truth or dare, ankit thought a bit and said "truth" this time he didn't wanna take risk, armaan shaked his head and smiled..

A: rishab jara lie dectector machine to laana pshycatrist warsd se…

Ak: lie detector machine??? Kyu???

A: are aapne truth choose kiya hai, to aap sach bol rahe hai ya nahi ye to lie dector hi bata sakta hai na, ab hume kaise pata challega kit u sach bol raha hai ya jhutt, tere andar to hai nahi na hum..

Ak: last moment par aakar rules nahi badal sakte, abhi tak to machine ki jarurat nahi padi to ab meri turn mai hi kyu??

A: abhi tak kissi ne truth choose bhi toi nahi kiya, kiya hota to uske liye machine jarur aati….

Ak: ye ek game hai, isse itna seriously nahi liya jaa sakta…. (in slight anger)

A: ye baat tumhe game ke khatam hhone tak hi kyu yaad aayi, starting mai to tumhe kuch yaad nahi tha aur rishab tu abhi tak baitha kyu hai, jaa machine lkar aa.. (rishab got up and ankit's scared a bit thinking if armaan asked question related to ridhima then his truth'll be out and his hard work of one year will be wasted, its better to suffer a bit rather than to waste his hard work)

Ak: I choose dare… (armaan smirked again)

A: but you can't change your choice now..

Ak: par aisa koi rule nahi banaya tha humne starting mai, plus mai kaayar nahi hun jo truth choose karunga, mard hun mard, sab kuch face karke jeetna acha lagta hai, it's just a slip of tongue that I selected truth..

Ri: to ab mai machine laun ya nahi???

A: ab jab ankit itna keh hi raha hai to maan lete hai, to mr. ankit aapki punishment ye hai ki aap dance karienge ground ke bilkul center mai, aur agar aap song ke beech mai ek pal ke liye bhi ruke to aap haar jayenge, and song will be "dola re dola" with proper prostitute attire, proper expressions..(ankit's again shocked) kya hua tu to mard hai, har challenge ko face karna aata hai na tujhe to ab itna shocked kyu lag raha hai,

maine abhi tak tujhe jitna jaana hai, mujhe pata laga ki tujhe prostitutes mai bahut interest rehta hai, bahut maja aata hai tujhe unke saath, tabhi tere muh par normal names ko chodkar hamesha "wh**es/prostitutes" hi rehta hai, to maine socha kitu ye punishment sunkar to phullo ni samayega, par tere to chehre ka rang hi udd gaya hai, anyways ab bata challenge accept karega ya quit karega???(everyone kept on giggling, ankit got up from his seat) rishab, vivek jao ankit ko unki dress de do.... (they handled him one packet, armaan smirked again, ankit thought " kuch ni hota, aaj tera din hai, has le jitna has sakta hai apahij, abhi tu mujhe jaanta hi kaha hai, jo insaan tujhe apahij bana sakta hai wo kya kya kar sakta hai ye tu soch bhi nahi sakta, just wait and watch…")

A: wait and watch baad mai kar lena ankit, abhi filhaal tu jaa aur kapde badal kar aa…

ankit's surprised but left from there, armaan looked at riddhima who's still trying to digest the events going in front of her, when riddhima looked him back, he turned his gaze and started giving hi-fives to everyone and then indicated something to rishab with eyes, he nodded and left, after few minutes riddhima's pager started ringing and asked her to come in cabin urgently,

riddhima reminded about aarish, she quickly got up and rushed towards hospital, rishab came and settled next to armaan, after few min ankit's back, all laughed and hooted seeing him in that attire, ankit paid no attention and goes in center of ground, music player's set, anjali mumbled "armaan ko ankit ko aur bhi jayda buri punishment deni chahiye thi, isme jayda maja nahi aayega..

At: laalach buri baat hai anjali…

An: I know, par kya karein dil hai ki manta nahi… (she giggled and so as atul….)

A: so all set… (he looked around) challo ab sab piche challe jao, yaha se atleast half Km dur specially jinhe darr lagta hai..

Ri: ye to bas inn chuhiyo ko hi darr lagta hai, hum to aapki tarah brave hai sir…. (all girls made lil faces)

A: acha ab ladna baad mai, vivek jao aur atulk auro se bhi kaho ki wo bhi dur jaayein… (vivek nodded) aur mai ankit ko jara final touch dekar aata hun… (he moved to ankit and asked him to stand straight and he took a round around him, stopped at his back for a minute) ye piche se tumhara lehnga kaisa ajeeb sa ho raha hai, and he corrected his lehnga and finally moved lil far from ankit reminding him that he has to dance in continuation.. and finally shouted "musicccc"..

On other side, riddhima when goes in cabin found aarish still sleeping peacefully, she's confused but took aarish in her arms who in sleep engulfed himself more close to his mumma, riddhima kissed him, still in her mind all the events of game's playing, she with confusion moved out, when she saw dr. keerti, she's lil sad as well as scared too, she quietly moved back, on the verge of going in accelerator when..

Ke: dr. riddhima.. (riddhima's surprised, firstly coz dr. keerti called her and secondly she addressed her as doctor, she turned) game over ho gayi???

R: ummm nahi dr….. dr. keerti..

Ke: to phir aap yaha kya kar rahi hai???

R: wo mujhe page aaya tha, mujhe laga aarish uth gaya hoga, that's why…

Ke: okk… (she's about to turn when)

R: dr. keerti.. (she looked at riddhima) wo congratulations… (she gave her a surprised look as if asking why) wo aap bahut jaldi head ban ne waali hai na sanjeevani ki… that's why..

Ke: ye kiss ne kaha aapse??? Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..

R: wo armaan.. (she stopped) I'm sorry, mujhse shayad koi galti ho gayi hogi…

Ke: its ok.. ( she smiled a bit and finally left, riddhima's confused thinking "armaan ne aisa kyu kaha phir???" soon she came out from thoughts when slight voices of crackers touched her ears, she's surprised thinking "patake kaun challa raha hai???", she moved in room that's given for aarish and from window peeped out and was surprised when saw crackers're burning in ground only where they're playing truth and dare a while ago, as that place's very far, about 1-2 kms away, she's hardly able to hear anything but she's able to see fire in continuation that means crackers're burning in continuation without any gap… she thought about armaan and quickly moved towards ground..

On other side, as soon as ankit started dancing on dola re dola, he's shocked when heard crackers burning around him, he's on the verge of stopping but armaan's condition came in his mind, he looked at armaan who's smirking at him and was sure that armaan's behind crackers thing, he started getting scare as crackers voice keep on raising,

while dancing he took a round and was again shocked when found a big layer of crackers attached on his back and that layer is burning in continuation, he feared badly, for a second his tap on ground started slowing down but armaan showed him file, so he again started dancing,

very near to him a circle's made of loud crackers which started bursting making him scared much more, one pataka infact lil burned his hand but armaan remained unaffected as he's feeling riddhima's condition on diwali

and thought "ek ek dard ka hissab dega ankit tu abhi, abhi to bas shuruwat hai, bahut shownk hai na tujhe aag se khelne ka par bhul gaya jayda aag se khelega to jal kar rakh ho jayega, kuch ni bachega,khel chukka tu 3-3 jindagiyo se ek saath ab unn jindagiyo ka teri jindagi ke saath khelni ki baari hai..

Ankit started loosing his senses as he's feeling breatheless due to smoke of crackers and moreover continous noise of high range crackers was making him crazy, he's doubting that he'll become deaf in a moment or two, he's not able to think anymore, when 1 minute left he started swaying badly and finally fell on ground, armaan's smirking and turned when heard riddhima's voice,

R: armaan… (armaan looked her from top to bottom as she's bathing in sweat, her heart beat's upsides down, her dupatta too's going somewhere else as if she'd run very fast, she came close to him and while caressing his cheeks) tum theek to ho na???

A: (neglecting her question and with lil worrieness) tum yaha kya kar rahi ho??? Tumhe uppar bheja tha na aarish ke paas to tum..

R: (cutting him) bheja tha matlab??? (she looked him suspiciously and then looked at rishab who's talking with armaan through eyes then she reminded that as soon as rishab got up and moved a bit her pager started ringing)matlab tumne page kiya tha wo???

Ri: konsa page, kaisa page???(tried to look innocent)

R: jayda bano mat… (rishab looked down) par tumne mujhe page kyu kiya..

Vi: taaki aap challe jao aur hum patake ache se jala sake, maine to armaan bhai ko kaha tha ki apko bhi enjoy karne de, par phir bhi unhone aapko bhej diya….(he looked at armaan who's ready to eat him raw) ab maine kya kiya??

A: tu to bahut hoshiyar hai, kabhi kuch karta hi nahi hai, tabhi kehte hai ki kabhi over eating nahi karni chahiye, thodi baton ko pachane ki bhi jagah rakhni chahiye… (he slapped tightly on his butts)

R: koi mujhe batayega ki yaha kya ho raha hai???

A: kuch nahi, belated diwali mana rahe the, uss din patakhe jalana bhul gaye the to aaj celebrate kar liya…

R: belated diwali.. diwali se 3 mahino baad??? Tumhe mai paagal najar aati hun????

A: (mumbled to himself) paagal najar aane ki baat hi kaha hai, paagal ho to pagal hi lagogi…

R: armaan…. (but then turned when heard vedic's giggle) tum yaha kab aaye?? Tum to aaj subah se the hi nahi??? To yaha kaise??? (vedic looked at armaan and armaan's kind off puzzled when everyone heard aarish's cry, riddhima rushed to him all took a breathe of relief…)

Ve: thank god, agar bhabhi ko pata chal jaataki aaj ka ek ek event planned tha to wo pata nahi kya karti hamare saath..

Vi: jayda kuch nahi tera bharta banati aur mera aata banakar usme mix kar deti..

A: iss paetu ko khaane ke alava kuch nahi sujhta…

So: armaan bhaiya ab ankit ka kya karna hai??

A: kya karna hai kya, hospital mai call karo..

Sw: bhaiya I think hume unhe le jaana chahiye, bahut buri haalat mai hai wo, kaafi torture saha hai aaj unhone.. (all looked at her, vedic's on the verge of saying something when armaan shaked his head)

A: swati hospital call karo aur tum sab jaakar inn mahashaye ji ke ilaaj ki taiyari karo… (all left accept vedic,rishab,vivek and siddhant)

Ve: aapne kyu roka hume, swati ko pata hona chahiye ki ankit ne koi torture nahi saha..

A: cool down vedic, sabki apni mentality hoti hai, apni soch, hum kissi ki soch ko galat nahi keh sakte, unke according wo right aur hamare according hum right, tum logo ne aaj mera itna saath diya uske liye thanks..

Si: kaisi baatein kar rahein hai sir aap, hum khud chahte hai ki ankit ko uske kiye ki saja mile..(armaan nodded) waise aaj kitna maja aaya na, sab kuch plan ke according hua, jaisa jaisa apane socha tha waisa waisa hua sab, acha hua dr. keerti hamara saath dene ke liye maan gayi thi, warna problem ho jaati… (armaan nodded and then looking at vedic who's playing with magnet) ab iss magnet ko gaer de, agar kissi ko shak hua na kitu table ke niche baithkar bottle control kar raha tha iss magnet se to sach mai kaam se gaya tu..

Ve: ab kya ho sakta hai, hume jo chahte the wo to already ho chukka hai, thank god rishab ne waqt rehte baat sambhal li warna iss paetu ne to saara bhanda phod diya tha.. (looking at vivek) acha inn baato ko chodo, sir ab aapka next plan kya hai??

A: just wait and watch… (he smiled a bit, after few minutes everyone left and armaan looked at ankit who's lying on ground like a dead life and thought " abhi tak tune sirf armaan ka pyar dekha tha, ab tu ek deewane ka vehshipan, paagalpan dekhega, tu bhi jungli hai, aur mai bhi, par farak ye hai ki tu nafrat ke liye junglipan failata hai aur mera junglipana mere pyar meri riddhima ke liye, uski self-respect ke liye hoga…")

Ankit's admitted in hospital, all at first kind of laughed at him when saw him in that attire, while treating Some of the interns were feeling that its very wrong and inhuman behavior..

Sw: I think aaj bahut jayda ho gaya, armaan bhaiya ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..

So: ankit nebhi to galtiyan ki hai na..

Sw: par iska matlab ye to nahi ki same galtiyan bhaiya bhi kare, aaj ka unka behavior exceptionally inhuman tha, first punishment's ok, wo chalti hai par uske baad sab punishments bahut buri thi, aj bhaiya heartless ki tarah act kar rahe the, bahut insensitive, itna rude koi nahi hota, galti ki saja galti karke nahi, maaf karke di jaati hai par bhaiya ne ankit se bhi jayda bura behave kiya, theek nahi kiya na unhone… (sonal kept mum)

On other side armaan who's in thoughts heard "dada dada", he turned and found aarish calling him with his arms opened wide, armaan smiled with dimples and moved his wheel chairto him and took him in his arms and kisses him..

A: uth gaye aap apni nidra se…(aarish took a wide yawn, armaan giggled and hugged him, aarish to fixes his face in the nape of neck and while patting patting his head kept on singing his lullaby "dada lub o….. dada lub o…. aaaaaaaa aaaaa aaaaa aaaaaa aaaa aaaaa dada lub o (luv you)" armaan kisses him on head) daeda too loves his ardhaan a lot… (aarish again patted his head) par baby abhi daeda ko nahi sona hai… (aarish looked him and again shyly placed his head on his shoulder) acha dhaanu daeda ko song to suna do wo waala… kaise the daeda bhool gaye, cry cry…

Aarish looked him and then mumbled "ty ty (cry) ina ty tate(karte) haen tyto(kaiko)", arman laughed and so as riddhima, aarish blushed a bit, armaan asked him "phir se gaana, daeda ko ab bhi nahi aaya", aarish again sang that song and when armaan asked him again he shouted the lyrics in anger making his parents laugh more, he kept on tapping hard on his father head..

A: mere Indian idol, iss desh ki nayi aawaj ko gussa aa gaya… (aarish didn't reacted as if saying "aapki itni pyari harkatein hai daeda gussa nahi to kya pyar aayega…" hee heee, armaan hugged his son lil more tightly, he kept on wondering how come his son's growing so fast, one way he's happy other way he's not liking it also,

he wanted him to grow but as if time started flying in his son's case, he wanted him to grow slowly slowly but he's growing at a much faster speed, whenever he listens this song from his mouth in broken language he thinks

"abhi to isne dada bolna shuru kiya tha, aur itni jaldi song bhi seekh gaya, thode dino baad school bhi jaane lagega, itna chotta sa aur burden itna saara, thoda dheere dheere bada nahi ho sakta, sab kuch itna jaldi hona jaruri hai kya???" and after sometime he laughs on his own thinking "how kiddish I'm .." he came out from thoughts..

R: armaan I think ab hume ghar chalna chahiye.. (armaan didn't look her, he kept on playing with aarish)armaan mai kuch keh rahi hun…armaan… (armaan looked her but with slight anger) ohh le ye kya hua, abhi to tumhara acha mood tha ye sudden change kyu???

A: riddhima don't try to act over smart in front of me..

R: kyu, ab maine kya kiya???

A: kuch nahi mera dimag kharaab hai bas.. (he said this with slight anger)

R: tumhe nahi lagta ki aajkal tumhari naak par 24 ghante gussa baitha rehta hai, pehle to tum aise nahi the..

A: pehle tum bhi aisi nahi thi riddhima… pehle tum bhi kuch aur thi… (riddhima became serious on his comment and realized he's angry in real)

R: hua kya hai armaan??

A: kuch nahi riddhima, mujhe seriously koi problem nahi hoti jab jab tum apni self-respect itni buri tarah MURDER karti ho, mujhe koi farak nahi padta aaj tum hospital ke saamne naachi ho, kal puri duniya ke saamne nacho ek w………. shitttt… (he makes a face and turned it to other side with slight moist eyes) mujhe kissi cheez se koi farak nahi padta jaise ab tumhe mere mana ya haan karne se farak nahi padta…

R: armaan tum khud batao tum meri jagah hote to kya karte??? Armaan tum kyu nahi samajhte ki meri jindagi bas tumhare liye hi hai, kyu nahi samajhte ki meri saasein sirf tumhare liye hai, mujhe nahi farak padta ab iss duniya se, ye aaj hamare saath hai to kal alag ho jaayegi, nahi farak padta inke kuch bhi bolne se, kyunki aaj ye agar acha bolti hai to kal ko palatne mai ek pal bhi nahi lagayegi, mujhe bas tumse farak padta hai…

A: mujhse farak padta hai.. (he laughed fakely) agar mujhse farak padta hota riddhima to tumhe meri soch aur meri haan ya na se bhi farak padta, tumhe meri chahat se farak padta..

R: armaan mai nahi chahti thi ki tumhe meri wajah se hospital chodna pade

A: kyu tumhe doubt tha mujhpar?? (riddhima looked him slightly astonished) logo ne tum par kitna jayda control kar liya hai na riddhima kitum ab apne husband ki icha ka bhi maan nahi rakh paati, ki jiss ladki ke saamne ek galat word bolne se pehle mujh jaisa ladka 100 baar sochta tha, ab koi bhi aakar tumse sare aam private moment ya pros…….. ki tarah dance karne ko keh jaata hai aur tum itni unaffected rehti ho,

kissi ko palatkar jawaab tak nahi deti, kabse tumne apne saath itna compromise karna seekha??? Kyu itna compromise karna seekha, least wish hogi mujhe tumhe iss haalat mai dekhne ki, mujhse pyar karna kitna bura raha na tumhare liye, kitna jayda….(riddhima placed her hand on his lips, tried to control her tears in eyes)

R: aisa mat kehna armaan, please aisa bolne se pehle mujhe maar daalna, par aisa mat kehna, compromise kabhi kabhi haalat karna sikha dete hai armaan, armaan mere liye bhi aaj naachna asaan nahi tha par at the end ye bhi to sach hai na ki wo ek bahut chotti si cheez thi tumhare aage…

A: atleast you should have trusted me…

R: I trust you armaan, I trust you from the deep of my heart par waqt par nahi bharosa, aajkal bahut jaldi jaldi palti khaane laga hai na, issliye trust karna chod diya…

armaan turned his face, he's in a dilemma, he knew that riddhima's right and he's surely done the same thing if he's at her place but he's still finding difficult to digest it, he doesn't want to see his life suffering even for a second, he just wanna happiness for her at every cost and that's why he's angry,

though he's angry on himself as he couldn't do anything when his riddhima's self respect was again butchered in front of his eyes and he didn't did anything to save her but all his anger was shown to riddhima, he came in present when felt riddhima's hand on his hand, he looked at her who's looking him with love, armaan in dilemma state jerked her hand though his heart's telling him to hug her tightly…

R: armaan ab bas bhi karo, galtiyan hui hai mujhse par ab to maaf kar do mujhe, kyu itna dur kar rahe ho mujhe khud se, 4 mahine kaafi hai, 2 mahine maine khud ki galti se ghum kiye aur 2 mahine tumne saja de di, ab to apne paas aane do, taras rahi hun tumhare paas aane ke liye, tumhari baaho mai samane ke liye, tumhare muh se pyar ki baatein sun ne ke liye, tumhe nahi lagta bahut ho gayi punishment mere liye, mai to tumse 1 din bhi dur nahi reh paati thi abto 4 mahine ho gaye, pleaseee ab to mujhse dur mat jao…

Riddhima holds his hand as he tried to cross her and made him stop, armaan looked at her and she first looked at ground and mumbled..

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tu hatha wich hath fadeya, ve adeya chaddi na.

(then looked at him and shaked her head saying "don't leave her")

mai wich chenaab de sohni ve ghadeya chaddi na

(she pulled him towards herselffrom his arm and placed her head on his shoulder while shaking her head)

tere hath wich jedi lakeer vey aj to meri ho gayi

(then looked his both hands and pointed on the lines on his palms and placed his palms on her chest and locked it with her hands while looking in his eyes)

shalla tu vi ho ja mera mai tan teri ho gayi

rabba haye rabba…. Rabba hayee rabba

(then placed her palm on his cheeks and while saying it with eyes that she's entirely his, placed her head in his lap, armaan tried to move his wheel chair while shaking his head as if trying to stop herself as if he doubted that he won't be able to control himself today )

Tere kadma wich sir mera, mai sajde kardi han

(riddhima placed her head on his feat and with moist eyes kisses on his feet, armaan moved back but this time with guilt…)

hune jo ho jaaye so ho jaaye, mai na dardi han

mere andar di kamjori ve aj dileri ho gayi..

(she pointed to the world with hands and then shaked her head saying with eyes that now she doesn't scare with this world anymore, she holds his hand again and kisses it and then places it on his chest with her hand tightly clutching his hand indicating that with him she's become so daring leaving all her weakness far behind..)

shala tu vi ho ja mera mai taan teri ho gayi

rabba haye rabba.. rabba haye rabba…

(she collided her head with his, then placed her head in his lap and again looked at him, armaan looked other ways, riddhima's lil hurted and got up, armaan turned his chair and moved away)

mai kinni khush kismat han mera dil jaane

ve tere dil wich ki hai tera rabb jaane

(armaan stopped and looked at her, riddhima with innocent eyes placed her hand on her forehead indicating her luck, then pointed him with hands, then god saying that only god knows what's stored in his heart)

meri baaki bachi akheer vi hun tan teri ho gayi

shalla tu vi ho jaye mera mai tan teri ho gayi

rabba haye rabba.. rabba haye rabba…

(armaan started movingand so as riddhima while saying words and pleading eyes asking him to become hers once again as she's entirely his, asking him to forgive her for once, pleading him that she's tired of being away from him,she wanted to remain close to him, when armaan didn't look her, riddhima settled on ground while looking towards sky and mumbling "rabba haye rabba…………" trying hard to fight back with her tears)

On other side, armaan stopped, his all rudeness, his all anger everything melted as if these things never touched him, though he's guilty a moment before for making her suffer like this but he overcame with his guilty thinking that he won't make her suffer more…

riddhima unknowingly looked up and was surprised to see his opened arms, riddhima got up in a slight daze unable to believe and then quickly rushed to him with tears touching her eyes line and hides herself in him, armaan kisses on his forehead..

A: I love you riddhima…. (she broke her resolution as her eyes started showering, she's longing to hear these words, how could she control herself when after ages she heard these words)

R: (in shivering voice) phir se kaho…

A: I love you riddhima, I love you soo much, I love you pata nahi kitna, bas I love you, jitna tum tarsi ho ye words sun ne ke liye utna hi mai tarsa hun inhe bolne ke liye, tumhe batane ke liye ki mai tumhare bina kuch bhi nahi hun, kuch nahi hai meri jindagi, pal pal meri baahein tarsi hai tumhe apne andar samane ke liye, pal pal tarsa hun riddhima tumhare liye…

R: (with innocent face like on 7th jan 2008) to itne dino tak khud se dur kyu rakha mujhe???

A: koshish kar raha tha khud ka gussa tumpar nikalne ki, koshish kar raha tha khud ko saja dene ki, mere hote hue tumhe itna kuch sehna pada uske liye… (riddhima hugged him more tightly)

R: armaan bhul jao unn baato ko, aaj mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai aur naahi karna chahti hun, mujhe bas apne paas rehne do, ek pal ke liye bhi alag mat karna… armaan kissed her on his head again, riddhima moved more close to him saying I love you armaan, I love you jaan and closed her eyes..

A: I love you too jaana..

Riddhima felt as if someone has given amrit to her, now she cant die, she felt as if her life's back, she kisses armaan's face several times and then mumbled in his ears "armaan kiss me, kiss me like you never did", armaan smiled a bit and thought to say "yaha hospital ki premises mai" but seeing her closed eyes, he realized how much she's lost,

he brought his face near hers and first looked her thoroughly, his heart started racing now and so as riddhima's, armaan's feeling as if he's going to kiss her for the first time, he slightly bites her upper lip first making her gasp and then rolled his tongue lightly on her lips and finally without any teasing he kissed her as he too was longing for her touch,

a lone tear escaped from riddhima's eyes, she moved her hand in his hair as well as around his neck and participated equally in kiss, and after a minute or 2 they're parted as they're in hospital premises though all alone, riddhima kept herself in his hug only and again mumbled "I love you armaan, aur koi bhi saja dena, par kabhi khud se dur mat karna mujhe, kabhi bhi nahi……"

to be continued..

precap:

Dr. keerti: sorry dr. ankit ab aap kabhi father nahi ban sakte… (ankit's shocked, armaan and riddhima's too shocked too, but..)

A: apne hi paapo ki saja bhugat raha hai, ye saja bhagwan ne uske liye rakhi hai..

R: armaan aaj pata nahi kyu tumse darr lag raha hai…. (armaan looked her)

Next update: Sunday/Monday..

Pms will be send only to those who's commenting/ pressing like tab and is in my buddy list, commenting's not a compulsion but atleast u can press like tab na, wo to itna mushkil nahi haina, just ek click karna hai, it hardly takes a second or 2, mere liye bhi to jaan na jaruri hai na ki kon read kar raha hai, kiss ne kab skip kiya, agar aapne story read karna chod diya hai to bejhijhak mujhse kahiye ki ab aapko pms nahi chahiye…

Stay tunned..

Lods of luv

Ankita..

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya Pyaar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai

Wah Wah Wah....taazaaaaaaaaaa ho le/.....waise hum to ho gaye update padhke....Haila Dola re dola to ultimate tha.....munnabhai ka scene yaad aa gya,.....aur crackers k beech kaise ucchal rha hoga wo... uyi maa....uyi mummy.....chhod de re zaalim.... 😆😆

Armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan ka dimaag kitna chlata hai...bottle magnet se ghumwai usne..... 😆 Masttttt.....

Ty ty ita...ty...taete ho taaye to..... 😃😃😃😃😆😆😳😳😳⭐️

mere pe hi gya hai....Mujhe bhi bohot pasand tha ye......... aaaaaah.... daeda.....a.aaaaaaah......tlitiiiiiiiii ☺️...... acha lagega na? 😆

Ridhima-Armaan ka re union tha aaj to......... last mein ridhima didi kisses pe kisses barsa ri thi
☺️ Bohot acha laga...khhaas kar last wali kiss ☺️

Locha tu v hoja mera, main ta teri ho gayi 😭
☺️

Mast the AR........ precap bhi interesting hai....maaro ek aur update jor she...... 😳

Edited by kshanikaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
MOHABBAT HAI KYA CHEEZ HUMKO BATAO
YEH KISNE SHURU KI HUMEIN BHI SUNAO☺️


jisne bhi shuru kari thi..KYA cheez hai pata toh ab chala hai with KP....😍
as usual neeche se comment kar ri hun... what a confession...WONDERFUL...👏

"armaan kiss me, kiss me like you never did" 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 craziness, purity with inner and outer true emotions...

ty ty ina ty tate haen tyto"😛😍 mera nanna munna john ibrahim😆

ankit's dola re dola dance was🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 ku*** ki maut marega beep beep beep🤣🤣🤣🤣 (nehu in Jab we Met mode🤣) Armaan did a commendable job by choosing such punishments for ankit... nd You also...by writing such brilliantly....You took this in the complete opposite direction then everyone expected...


1 side was completely mess before nd opposide side was cruel... things have changed.... time has changed.. now messy side is calm nd opposite is HELL... "God is noticing our deeds each nd every moment.. Beware of him.. pal pal ka hisaab diye bina maut bhi nahin aati" people should learn frm this update😊

Thanks maa🤗

Love you!!!
Edited by Neha.K. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

ankita lovely update yaar...😉

its jst FANTASTIC in every way...😊 from ankit punishment to AR confession... its gr8 yaar..

punishment which ankit got it should b worse den that but as atul says laalach buri baat hai. 😆...bt he should b punished worse den dat😡.loved da way armaan handles da situation ven people hve different opinions about ankit punishment....

coming t AR confession....its soooooooo cute n sweet😳.loved da song its perfectly fits in da situation😉.....ridz n armaan emotions are beautifully potryed.speacially hw both of dem craved fr each other...

but da bestest part is armaan n aarish part....its shoooooo sweeeetttt father son convo....n song which aarish sang "ty ty (cry) ina ty tate(karte) haen tyto(kaiko)",reminds me of my nephew (miss him alot actually al aarish activities r similar t him).....loved da way armaan thinking fr his son's groW*H truly father's emotion😊

gr8 update yaar...hope t get more cute n sweet moments of Mallik family...hearty👏 n🤗 fr u...

waiting fr next update😍

love

sania

Edited by saniashzadi_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx 4 the update
excellent 👏awesome 👏fabulous 👏fantastic part 👏loved it alottttttttttttttttttttttttt
eagerly w8ing for sunday mondey love itttttttttttttttt
do continue sooooooooon
Edited by Dmg1huge1fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
did i ever tell u tht u r awesome??? 😕
if i didnt then i m gonna tell u knw tht u r just awesome 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️
i love the update
especially the AR moment
i really really love it ❤️❤️
last but not the least
thanks for the PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey bhagwaan dil ko thandak par gayi aaj ka upd par ke...................thnx fr d pm n cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome..................beautiful...............too gud.....


will always love u for this FF...........


riddhima ki tarah hum bhi kita taras rahe the AMMY ke pass jane ko....heheheheheh/.......



muhhhhhhhhhhhahzz.....


next update jaldi karo.....kal kar sakti ho plz..........phr muje ek hafte ke liye bahar jana hai........main padhne me late ho jaungi......


pleeeeeeeeeeeeej.................pleeeeeeeeeeej
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ishu best lines from this part is:---->
armaan looked at ankit who's lying on ground like a dead life and thought " abhi tak tune sirf armaan ka pyar dekha tha, ab tu ek deewane ka vehshipan, paagalpan dekhega, tu bhi jungli hai, aur mai bhi, par farak ye hai ki tu nafrat ke liye junglipan failata hai aur mera junglipana mere pyar meri riddhima ke liye, uski self-respect ke liye hoga'"



Thats why he is Armaan⭐️ 👏.The intensity he hold for their love is ,what made him exception from others.
DHOL wala dance 😆.......
that too with crackers.....I think usually children tie that roll of crackers into the tail of stray dogs😆 ....But Ankit 😉
Armaan is a gr8 planner.😃
love every bit of your update....
Still he remember... Ridhima is so soft at heart nd send her to take care of Aarish ...how neatly he had made his every move....
Ankit this is doze of your medicine.....watch baby !!!!!!u r gonna pay for this...👏
Ankit ki to watt lag gayi.
song bahut melodious hai...
nd that 'i love u' thand pe gayyi kalege ch.😉 sacchi-mucchi...😃
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thanks for pm.
love
ritu


Edited by janu1610 - 14 years ago

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