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Posted: 14 years ago
hey just noticed both truly magical and madhoshi crossed 106 pages..😆
waiting to know wht hapn next....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 38 : Geet dznt even knw who is msk still hates him😆😆 maan shud now really tell her his name😆😆


geet checking on maans collar - ,
she pulled his cheeks - isi smile ke chakar main pasi hoon

dnt knw wen will geet realize this is nt jst frndship . wat did she thnk maan cant dance well he is msk mr perfect😳 😳😳

navel baal is really so romantic evrythng abt the naval sounded so romantic😳😳 nd perfect nd beautiful👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

loved the way maan strtd dancign with geet ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

nd geet is so lost him i'm just loving how is she falling for him ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️


this was great update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 loved it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 39

OMG !!!!!!!! 😲geet is so damn possessive she slapped the gal 😲 loved it how maan stopped her hand ........😳😳😳😳😳

Wat....... geet says he is nt of her type .......oh !!!!!! liar😲😲😲😲 she herself was tllng he is repeating the line of his drema boy nd maan is havng all characterstics of his dream boy .....juthi geet ..😆😆

maan - now u don't have an option, ur stuck with me
geet smiled - untill u find urs
maan - I have mine in my arms wow so lovely lines jst too beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

this maan is too romantic nd cute i cant stop thnkng ab thim he is just perfect 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


she pushes him away & he pulls her back - itna asni se tumhe aapne se dor nahi hone doongha
geet - u r no way close to him................... liar😆 😆😆

oh i'm happy she considers raaz as a frnd only that means no problems frm raaj's side in future😊 hope geet did hear him syng his name he tried hard nd nvr lied he always told her he is only msk so hope geet wont be angry on him we she will get to knw his name

agn loved geet hugging maan❤️❤️❤️❤️i jst love it how much she trust him now ..................this update was........ wow !!!!!!! too nice and awesum👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏just superb 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

PMS KIT.... oops i'm little afraid😕

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Posted: 14 years ago
Bajiii sorry for not being able to comment, been busy with eid and college!!
Anwayz back to ur updates, they have been awsome and rocking as always!!
Geet naming the dog Maan 😆 was soo funny bt feel sorry for him do!! Loved the whole dance it was romantic and passionate, it was really sweet that Geet didn't like seeing Maan dance with another girl, it showed Maan that she does love him as well, but it will take her some time to realise!!
I really enjoyed the whole "proposal" scene 😆 he was just trying to tell her that his name was Maan but she still doesnt believe him, wonder what will happen when she finds out!?!?
Aww Maanw asked about her dream guy she named qualities from all her friends but not her "bf"!! Love her overprotectiveness about him!!
Geet fought with that guy yaaay she did the right thing feel sorry for her though bcuz she is upset, but Maan will cheer her up!!
Can't wait to read on, thanks for the pm..xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 40

prem calls geet she cuts the call & steps out of the car wipping her tears
prem calls again, maan sees prems name & answeres the call
prem - geet yaar to phone kyun cut kar rahi hain
maan - prem actually main
prem - oh hi ..geet kanha hain, maha upset hain kya
maan - yah, I have never seen her so emotional before, gussa main dehka hain
emotional nahi
prem - emotional, ro rahi hain kya
maan - umm
prem - abhi bi
maan - umm
prem - ek min, prem to armaan - geet is crying yaar
armaan - rona to nahi chahiya itni si baat ke liya, date kya hain aaj
prem - 18th hain
armaan - no wonder...uska PMS kit kanha hain
prem - tumhare car main
armaan - uski car main bhi hain shayad, seat ke neechi
maan - what are u guys talking
prem - driver seat ke neechi check karo ek pink packet hoga
maan extends his hand & pulls the pink packet out
maan - what is this
prem - PMS(premenstrual syndrome) kit hain, don't let her see it in ur hand she will kill you
maan dropped it at once
just then geet - kya kar rahe ho
maan cleared his throat - kuch nahi
prem quickly wispered - usme se use pink hot chocalte bar dedena,
armaan - dono
prem - dono chocolate dede do & cuts the call
maan mumers chocolate hain thats cool...& tries to lift the pack when geet
steps in & maan notices the item that spills out of the pink packet carefree pack
pink hot chocolate bars, cramp pills, teddy, he was embarrassed & realized

why prem said geet should not see the pack in his hand.
geet - kuch gir gaya kya
he gets up nervously & gives the phone to geet - nahi tumhara phone
trying to hide the things with his legs
geet - what is it there bending down to check
maan closes his eyes - kuch nahi
she gets the choclate in her hand. - oh!! wow this is perfect
she opens & eats the chocolate - thanxs, it would have fallen from my purse
maan gives a weak smile & looks away feeling concious
geet finishes the chocalte maan picks the other bar..yeh bhi hain
geet - so sweet & offeres him a bite
maan notices the sudden change & smile in her face. he wondered how
her friends cared and exactly knew what to do when to do, he remebered what
she said about her dream guy...he understood better now. it was deeper than just
romance, deewangi, nazakat or charm. it was their love & care which always
enbraced her all the time. it will be difficult for any one to make a mark
in her heart. he felt so proud he could. he smiled proudly that he could
that also with no Maan Singh Khurana tag. she accepting that OOPS.. but he knew they were meant to be togather & he may never let her away from him, he felt blessed to have her so close.
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tQEIwUB8VeY&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]
geet finished the second bar licking her lips - aap kya kah rahe the maan ke bare main
maan - phir kabhi, abhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain dinner ke liya challen
geet - umm
maan give his hanky to her & points at her lips
she turns the rare view mirror & wipes her lips, maan rolls his eyes
& then latter sets the mirror back

at the naval ball mukti was getting wild at prem
mukti - I don't believe it, u actually keep track of her PMS
prem rolls his eyes & ignores it
mukti - I always thought u were just friends
prem - what do u mean just friends. she is my dearest friend. I can't think
of my life without three of them

next day when geet reached college every one gave her sidy looks
geet wispered to maan - sab log mujhe ajeeb ajeeb tarah se dehk rahn hain
maan looking into his files in the office - tumhe aise lag raha hoga
geet - nahi especially girls
maan smiled - they might be feeling jealous of u
geet - lekin kyun
maan - tum itni pyari jo lag rahi ho
geet - aap to mujhe chada rahe ho
maan - I am serious
prem & armaan comes from front
geet - armaan what are u doing here aaj sanjeevani band hain kya
prem - ghar chal
geet - aaj important class hain
armaan - nahi woh sab baad main
maan could sense tension in their voice - geet do as they say
geet - lekin
prem drags her out & they drive to armaans house
geet - kya chal raha hain, koi batayega
armaan - kuch nahi we just wanted to spend some time with you
prem - jab se tujhe bachan mila hain u don't have time for us
maan smiled, geet made a baby face - aise nahi hain
they spend the day watching movie & ordered pizza partying & playing games
latter in the day maan called prem & checked if every thing was fine
prem - nahi meri aur mukti ki misunderstanding hogaye hain & every one is
blamming geet for that
maan - geet ko pata hain
prem - nahi, she may not be able to bare it
maan - umm

a week passed with this hide & seek game. geet was unware of the situation
between mukti & prem & what was the talk around the college
untill today when geet walked into the class & she had to face the brunt of it
she was busy on chatting with maan & noticed mukti & prem arguing
mukti - do u even care about me or the baby
prem - aise nahi hain
geet wispers kuch gadbad hain will call u latter & cuts the call
maan - lekin meri baa
he gets restless
friend of mukti - u don't have time for her
prem - u stay out of this
mukti - how can ur friend interfear & not mine
prem - keep geet out of all this
friend - its all beacuse of her now that ur breaking ur engagement
geet was shocked (mera wajah se babaji) - mukti kya huwa
prem tells geet to leave at once
friend - wow finally she is hear
mukti was in tears, geet could not bear to see her like that, she holds
prems collar - mukti ro kyun rahi hain
friend - don't pretend as if u don't know
geet - shut the F... up & pulls mukti aside
ok I don't know what is happening...if I am the problem, tell me, U & me can sort it out
friend - u are the problem
geet - can u just get lost
mukti - dare u speak to my friend like that
geet was taken a back
prem - mukti mind ur words with geet
geet - nahi its ok....she wants to say some thing
mukti - ur are the problem
geets eyes was filled up
mukti - tum hoti ho to ise kuch aur nahi sojtha, prem tries to hold mukti back
friend - tumhare zindagi main to koi nahi hain, ho bhi kaise sakta hain
u have so many of them, hoga to bhi prem aur tere bare main pata challen ga to
tuje chod dega
maan in attitude glancing at every one - thats enough about my GF. geet looks at him
with tears in her eyes shocked. kisne kaha ki iski zindagi main koi nahi hain he slips his hands
around geet, main hoon, looks at mukti mujhe koi problem nahi hain prem aur geet ke
dosti se, infact I feel proud that even after they have each other she is mine. tum yah main
inki dosti ki gharahi nahi samjh sakte. kar sakte hain to bus just accept them the way
they are
geet hugs him & hiding her tears.
maan walks her out holding her close infront of every one
friend - yeh Maan Singh Khurana hain na, yeh iska saat kya kar raha hain
mukti wiping her tears - they are always togather
friend - are u kidding me, THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA
other girls start wispering & chit chatting - Geet Handa ka BF MAAN SINGH KHURANA
is jhali ke saat woh kya kar raha hain & he does'nt have problem with
her friendship with other guys, so lucky yaar
prem comes running behind her.
geet - nahi prem don't do that, she really needs you now. I will be fine.
prem - thanxs bachan
maan nodes

precap
geet - kuch to howa hain, kuch ho gaya hain

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Edited:

Yaaaaay me first to comment 😃 !!
🤗Bajiii!!
Loved the update!!
The PMS part was really funny 😆, but i really love Geet, Armaan's and Prem's friendship it is sooo sweet that they told Maan what to do 😳, he is soooo caring and romantic as well!!
Am really upset with Mukti, and how she spoke to Geet hater her friend the most though 😡, but soon everything shall get sorted!!
Maan was there for Geet at the right time yaaaay 😉😳, really enjoyed that part how he stood up for her, and with authority of her bf as well 😳!
All the girls will not say a word to her now as she is "THE MSK's" gf, but wonder what she will say when she finds out 😆!!
He sooooo has all the qualities of Geet's dream guy!!
Can just imagine Geet hugging Maan like in your ff 😍!!
Can't wait for the next update Geet ko kuch to hua hain 😉😛!!
Update soon.....xx
Edited by humz_786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is hilarious...PMS....mujhe bhi yehi problem sata rahi hai...and I was just about to go grab a huge dairy milk jo kaiiiii dino sew aise hi padi hai...lolz....
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh awsome update yaar..... maan was there for geet at the righnt moment...hope in the next episode they spend some time together... like maan consolliing geet.........do update the next part soon,,,,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what a wonderful update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOO muskanp!
baby kya charged up update thi
maan determination is out of the world
OMG and all prem scenes were fabulous
excellent chooice of song!
great update....

waiting for next update !

Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago

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