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Posted: 14 years ago
When r u updating yaar?! Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

wen is the next update yaar.......pls make it soon....


Originally posted by: Maansmishti

When r u updating yaar?! Plz continue soon!



I will do it in 1 or 2 days

Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Guys sorry for posting this part late.

Guys I just tried this - i took Gal mittha mittha bol song from Aisha and tried to describe that song in that situation like who is doing what, that is happening like it is shown in our serials. guys plz do comment on it if u like I will repeat it.

-Thank u.

Guys for those who have not heard the song.Youtube video of the original song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2-lmHLtL3k


Part 8

The next morning Maan gets down the stairs in his bungalow. He was wearing sharavani black in color and was looking dazzlingly hot that the entire girls groups their couldn't stop themselves from watching him.

He comes down and meets dadima, bends, touches hers feet and that's blessing.

Geet then entire the house. She was dressed in red and looked so beautiful.She looked like some pari who just come on earth.

Like "Asaman say koye pari nichai jamin par a gaye."

Maan who was talking to dadima just turned towards her and then was about to turn towards dadi but with a shock turned back towards her and said "woooooooow" unknowingly and was just staring at her.

She too walked towards dadima and took her blessing by bowing her head. Dadima blesses her.then dadi said "maan" and Maan came back to this world and controlled himself.

Then they walk towards the mandir in the house to take god's blessings.

Dadima then asks "Maan ,Geet, u both do today's arati and pray god for ur happy and peaceful life"says while looking at Maan " And take god's blessing before they start their new life." Maan and Geet then looked at Dadima with a cute smile on their faces and move forward, after moving forward for few steps their smile vanished and they both looked at each other with a expressionless faces, both where speechless and wonder how to react. And moved forward together but very slowly, so slowly as if they were counting the no:of steps were there from that place to devima the vigarha. They finally reached, Maan caught the tali with his right hand and geet caught Maan's wrist, they both looked at maan's waist and they slowly raised their eyes and looked at each other for few seconds again Geet had expressionless face wondering what to do and say, And Maan with little bit of anger.Geet then slowly saw down and with little embarrassment and little irritation and then looked at the other side (but the face faced the vigarha.)And then Maan looked down with little anger and irritation n they both did arati unwillingly.

After arati Geet put her hands on tali to take the tali but by mistake her thumb touched Maan's hand,Maan looked at her but this time Geet did not and then Maan slowly moved Back.


Geet then with arati tali first went to dadi , dadi with a smile on her face took arati and blessed her, then to Maan , Geet looked at him and this time Maan with a serious look.

He quietly took arati and was about to leave that dadi "Maan, wait." Looking at Geet she says "Geet … put tika on Maan's forehead." Maan and Geet then looked at dadi with shock and dadi say "yes, tika geet it is ur right."and smiles.

Maan and geet looked down and was quite as they did not know that to say and how to react. Geet then closed her eyes and with a smile on her face looked up and took some kumkum on her middle finger, Maan too lifted his head, watched with a serious look.

then Geet put a tika. Then claimly moved away.

Then Dadima "Geet let us go"

Dadi and Geet quietly left.

Geet was sitting in the hall and around her few girls. Maihandi rasam was going on.

Someone "with a beautiful Maidanhi."

Other "Beautiful girl's beautifull maihandi."

Laughed and geet too enjoying the rasam. She was laughing and with full energy and joy.

She was even going pink. The entire hall was for of joy and enjoyment. Dadima also looked very happy.Maan then out and say dadi who looked happy and Maan automatically gets a cute smile on his face.and then he sees Geet who too was enjoying and smiling, seeing her maan smile got replaced with a shock.

Then a group of people came into the hall with playing musical instruments. And some dancing.

The entire hall was full with hangama many girls started to dance and then the trop started to sing and dance.

The music was playing

The troop and some girls were dancing to their wish..

Gal mithi mithi bol,
Ras kaano main tu ghol,
Bajne de taashe dhol,
Masti main tu bhi dol,
Mann ke naina tu khol,
Chahat ke moti roll,

While this time---2 girls stood opposite to each other with their backs facing each other and were dancing –clap and putting their hands toward left with left hand in front and then right behind and then again clapped now put their hands towards right and with right hand in front and left behind. While doing this they were shaking their shoulders they did for 6 times.


Dil hota hai anmol,
Ye daulat se na tol,

Those 2 girls the changed their step to –while moving their shoulders front and back they put their right hand on their heart and were removing and putting the hand again and repeated it

While the music was playing they went to Geet .


Aa soni teinnu chend ki main chudi pehnawa,

They pulled Geet on to the dance floor.


Mennu karde ishara to main doli le aawa,

All the girls surrounded geet and they lifted their hands and were shaking their shoulder and hands.

Gal mithi mithi bol,
Ras kaano main tu ghol,
Bajne de taashe dhol,
Masti main tu bhi dol,


they changed the step – they put their hands down and with fingers closed except forefinger left hand was a little forward and right was behind they moved the hand front and back 2 time down and then lifted their hand up and repeated the same .Geet had a great smile on her face and she was also tapping her legs and moving her shoulder front and back slowly.

Then Music- All they people who were playing the instruments were playing it in full josh.


Jaan leva teri adaa,
Kaise na koi ho fida,
Tere ang sharara jaise mare lashkara soniye,
Dekhun to dil dhadake,
Tan maine agan bhadke,
Surat aisi mohini hai,
Laga jaise sohni hai soniye,

They 7 guys playing the instruments moved in round and surrounded Geet and were sing and Geet was had a huge smile on her face .Each one came near Geet and sang a line. Geet with a smile was tapping her legs and shaking her shoulder slowly. She was looking at the person who was singing the song then.

Gal mithi mithi bol,
Ras kaano main tu ghol,
Bajne de taashe dhol,
Masti main tu bhi dol

Chahat ki moti roll.

Dil hota hai anmol,
Ye daulat se na tol,

Aa soni teinnu chend ki main chudi pehnawa

Mennu karde ishara to main doli le aawa,

All were dancing in there own style

One puts his both hands up and was doing balay balay.

One put his left hand up and was rotating wrist his and jumping

Some girls put their right hand on head and other hand waist and shaking their waists.

Geet was also dancing she put her in L shape toward left and was shaking her shoulders slowly and then turned her wrist and put her hands to right and was repeating the same .

Music plays –dadima was busy in receiving all the guests.

Chahre waala hu tera,
Dekh to le idhar zara,

Maan was looking at Geet , Geet as dancing by putting her hands in L shape towards left and moving her shoulders front and back, lifting her right leg up and putting it down. Her hair was fling due to air and she looked very beautiful.

Tu jo dekhe ik nazar,
Karu lakh shukar hiriye,

Maan just staring at Geet and Geet was dancing dancing. Maan got a small and cute smile on his face.

Dekh to kehke tu mujhe,
Jaan bhi dedunga tuhe,
Tere aise hoon deewaana,
Tune abtak ye na jaana hiriye.

All in the hall were dancing in their own style. Even stopped dancing and stood there in between everyone claily with a smile on her face and tears rolling out of her eyes –a very rare combination.Dadima was seeing geet with a smile on her face.And even Maan.

Gal mithi mithi bol,
Ras kaano main tu ghol,
Bajne de taashe dhol,
Masti main tu bhi dol

Chahat ki moti roll.

Dil hota hai anmol,
Ye daulat se na tol,

Aa soni teinnu chend ki main chudi pehnawa

Mennu karde ishara to main doli le aawa,

Everyone were dancing and Geet slowly started to move. She was slowly and carefully trying to move from for that crowd stopping whenever someone came in her way. She finally came out and started to move out of the house. Everyone were busy in dancing that no one got to know that our sweet little Geet lift the place.

Gal mithi mithi bol,

Music

Gal mithi mithi bol,

Music

Geet moves out of the hall with tears in her eyes and after coming out she runs towards outhouse but suddenly in the way someone pulls her aside.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay!!!🥳
First one to comment😳

Loved the update😊
Liked the way you used the pics. Amazing!!!👏
Why did Geet cry all of a sudden while dancing?😲
Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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OMGGGGGGGG its simply AWESOME DEAR!😳 wow the part was just FANTABULOUS!!
plzzz sweety cont sooon i just sooo cant wait😳

Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome update, dear ! 🤗 Amazing part ! 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Yay!!!🥳
First one to comment😳

Loved the update😊
Liked the way you used the pics. Amazing!!!👏
Why did Geet cry all of a sudden while dancing?😲



thank u 😊guys
but plz do comment on the song .
nice, good ,ok, bad, etc so that i can plan whether to add songs in the parts or not.

Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: hina-sheikh

Awsome update, dear ! 🤗 Amazing part ! 😍


thank u dear.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome too good! I'm happy atleast Maan is noticing her now ;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved this part
Y is maan angry??????????????????????
He very well knows that geet cant deney dadi maa s request
I really feel sorry for geet,
Continue soon.......................................................

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