Pyar ka ehsaas maan & geet season 2 thd 2 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey ..very cute..............I am waiting for the next part.Can you pls ad me to your PM list as well.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i loved it!!!!!!!!!
pls update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet - inse door nahi jati to aap ke pas kaise ati
tears rolls down maans eyes
geet teasingly - bahut senti ho aap

part - 152

geet kissed his tears tilting on tiptoe, their arms formed an embrace
to tressure that moment.
maan - sumo
geet - umm
maan - tumhe mera gift yaad hain na
geet predenting - kaun sa
maan - teehk hain he turns his face
geet ignores him & goes out giggling and bumps on brij
brij in stirn voice - oye dyan se chal, tu maa bane wali hain
geet looks down - ji, veer ji

geet goes to in the kitchen & hugs rano
thai ji - teehk se khana wana khati hain yah nai, kitni kamzor lag rahi hain
daadi - bikul nahi khati, pareshan kar rakha hain hum sab ko
NT - kabhi vegitable chod dena hain, to kabhi fruits
rano pats her cheeks - aise nahi karte beta, aab to tujhe aapna zayada khayal
rakhna chahiya
geet makes a baby face
rano - mainne tumhare liya bahut sare pickles banaya hain
maan beta ka phone aaya tha monday ko, he said ki u wanted them
geet - unhone khud phone kiya tha, she felt touched, kaise meri choti si choti baat
ka dyan rakte hain

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daarji - roti shoti khani hain ki nahi
rano - ji darji abhi lagathe hain
they have their lunch, maan seemed angry
geet tried talking him to but he refused to listen, he looked at some one or talked
to some one else.

maan went to the room, pulled the spread & slept
geet came in & kissed him while he was a sleep - kitna gussa karte ho
aap roote roote bahut pyare lagte ho, aapko manana mujhe aata hain

geet, rano, chinto took krish to show her fav spots in HP
she took him to the fields & their secret hide outs
then they went to the chat wala & had chat
NT & dev joined them their. they went to the near by mela
krish was excited to get on the rides, all of them sat on the rides
geet waited alone for them. some just snatched her chain making her lose
her balance & fall. maan held her from waist. she hugged him tight out of fear
maan shouted - why are you sitting here alone
she could not speak out of fear
he checked her neck, it had a slight bruce - is it paining
geet - aap yanha
maan left her and looked away - I came to see the land
geet smiled - deehk liya
maan - kya
geet - land
maan slipping his hand in the pocket - umm
he walks away she follows him
maan - tum kanha aarahi ho
geet - aapke saat
maan - koi zaroorat nahi hain
geet - phir mujhe kuch hogaya ..he closes her mouth bahut bolti ho tum, challo
maan sits in the jeep she tries to climb & finds it difficult
maan rolls his eyes, lifts her & makes her sit
geet - so sweet
maan gives a strin look
geet giggles inwardly


geet - yeh Ms.Raiska rathode wala project hain na
maan - umm
geet - kab taakk complete hoga
maan - 6 months more
geet - roko roko roko
maan stops at once - kya huwa
geet - mujhe garam garam jilebee khani hain
maan gets the jilebee & gives it to her & then they drive on
geet - roko roko roko
maan looks at her
geet - mujhe aam pana khana hain
he gives a stirn look & gets it for her & they move on near the fields
geet - roko roko roko
maan stops the car turns to look at her ...she covers his lips with hers
maan - yeh kya kar rahe ho, koi aaja...she again took his lips in
yanha koi nahi aata.. & continues kissing him. her lips pressed hard against his
tasting every flavor of his tongue. it felt exhilarating as she finally
parted catching for breath resting on his chest
maan smiled - agar mujhe mallom hota ki tum yanha aakar itni romantic
hojavoghi, to main pehli hi tumhe yanha le aata
she burried her head in feeling shy
he kissed her neck - tum aapna khayal nahi rakti ho
geet - uskeliya to aap ho na
maan - lekin she keeps her finger on his lips
aap mera liya wanha aaye the na, maan looked away
geet - sab janti hoon main banavti gussa aapka
maan - main sach main gussa hoon
geet smiled - aap mujhe se gussa ho hi nahi sakte pehle bhi nahi karpate the
aab to pakede bhi jate ho
maan turned & smiled - challen
geet mockingly - land deehkne ?
maan changed the gear & drove to the hawali
when they were getting off the car, brij just came out
brij in strin voice - shawl nahi le sakti thi,u will catch a cold
he puts his a shawl around her...& notices the bruce on her neck
shouts - how did this happen
maan goes to explain geet him holds back
geet - kuch nahi veerji chain keech gayee thi
he gives a stirn look & walks away
maan - yeh hamesha hi aise rehate hain yah
geet - veerji ka gussa to aapne deehka nahi hain
maan - tumne mujhe roka kyun
geet - khama khaan baat bad jaathi

latter in the evening every one was sitting & talking in the hall
brij barges in - GEET GEET
geet - ji veerji
brij - yeh chot kaise laghi tumhe
maan tries to explain
brij - aap to kuch na hi boleyia to aacha hain
maan gives a strin look to brij, then looks at geet
she was looking so scared..maan kept quite
brij - aapke samne geet ke gale se koi chain legaya aur aap chup chap deehkte rahen
geet - veerji aise nahi hain
maan leaves from there
brij takes his talwar & rushes out - I am not going to spare those guys

precap
maan, brij action!!!!

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update, want to read the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago
geet wow hp me ate hi itni romantic hogayi ho hahahhah😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
i read it before ur pm....😃......its a wonderful update di!!!! geet sach mein HP aake zyada romantic ho gyi hai!!!😆..... btw i didnt get it y maan n brij action is there???? brij ko to uss par gussa hai jisne chain khinchi???
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi

thanks for updating................. lovely as usual.⭐️............ but why this brij 😡is after their lifes.........
love it 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
i dont like this brij... he is insulting Maan yaar........😡
anyways... update ws awesome as usual!!
i loved it!!
pls update soon......
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
u rule our hearts for real muski jeep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
how awesome update i cant wait to read fight between Maan & brij pls cont soonnnnnnnnn

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