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Posted: 14 years ago
I have been a silent reader....sorry for not commenting
B4...I love ur writing..superb..pls pm me:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
No update yet...😭😭😭😭 Please update soon di...😒😒😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

Loved the update!
propose in unusual way,,,,,
Maan is so different and difficult,
i wish all the best to Geet,

Love
lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
The moment is close...I'm so excited to read...Di!!!!!!
You there yet?
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I want to cry already!!!!!!
No update??????????
Kya di...aap hamri feelings ko cheat karrahi hain?
😭
Relax..just joking..take ur time di!!😉
Just length ko bhi aur lamba karna okay?😃
Thank you and m still waiting...and main itni bhi patient nahi!!!😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan moved closer & caressed her stomach feeling it
baby~papa
geet~natak mandali 😆 😆 😆

I am really sorry. main jaantha hoon you always
wanted every thing differently & dreamy. I won't be able to propose you
with flowers & ring all I can say is this proposal is genuine. uff 😍😍😍😍😍😍no flowers no rign but still this si the best proposal

geet - lekin, aap to mujhe se nafrat karte hain, phir yeh kaisi shaadi hui
pyar ke bina shaadi bhi koi shaadi hui i liked how geet cares abt him nd dnt want to ruin his life or him to get married to her jst bcuz of der child i liked how se asked why is he marrying her

why is maan in two states ???? wen he knws he loves her then wats his prob to confess i just so worried is he hang so dark past ?

chalo atleast he said her he likes her ...................this was so so beautifull 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏updates just too lovely ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 50


kehdetha ki woh use umeed dethi us saat ka jo saat ek kawab sa lagta
Jan kar bhi woh Maan ko jan na payi,
aaj tak woh use pehchan na payi,
khud hi ki hai bewafai us ne,
taki uspe koi ilzaam na aay!!!
he could say how truly madly he wanted her but that could not and that was so hurting. He wanted to say something which was truth but safe truth..since she deserved nothing but te truth
maan - I like you because you think of me first
humesha meri khushi ki bare main soch thi ho
she fluttered her eyes & looked confused
maan eyes became furious ...seeing her not convinced
maan - kya chati ho tum
she kept quite
maan - main janta hoon main tumhara raj nahi
but I am sure you will not regret it
burying his face in her sweet-smelling hair.
I will do my best to be a decent papa and husband.
geet was suprised to hear that from him..
kah to diya tha maan ne ...kya nibha pata
it all sounded to so unlike him..she pushed him back to meet his eyes
mujhe abhi kisi raj ka intzaar nahi...bus main yeh chati hoon ki aap ko
to aapki pasand mile
..mano uski baat main chupa dard Maan ke dil ko chani kargaya maan held her by her arms - meri pasand jaana chati ho tum...
geet feared he may say some thing she may not be able to hear
she trembled & tears rolled down in anticiptation of his words
maan lossened his grip & moved back... mere dil main sirf
na jane kyun maan apne dil ki baat na kah paya
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shayad uski yeh khas-m-khas ko woh samjh gayee
she lifted her head closer to his, she felt strange she had spent the past several days
remembering all the time they had kissed. It was definitely something she always wanted
to do again and again. As always the first brush of his lips made her realize how warm
he was within. She raised her hands to his face, holding him close to her.
He melted into her gently, moving softly against her mouth, but she would not let him.
She raised herself on tiptoe, and angled her head. Then her tongue pushed past his,
invading his mouth, sending fire racing in all directions.
She sucked on his lower lip and murmured maan. that was the first time she ever said that
it sounded so havenly. Her hands slipped from his face to his
shoulders, then down his back. her fingers reached for, then gripped, his rear.
Involuntarily he tilted his pelvis forward, pressing his manhood against her belly.
A minute ago, he hadn't thought of making love with her. Now his body was hard and ready.
he hated the way she made him feel so helpless & lost with her touch
he stared at her, how she never pushed him into any thing yet tied him down
maan - hum kal shaadi kar rahen hain
geet - lekin
maan - hum kal shaadi kar rahen hain bus.
kya kah pati uski har baat main use sirf aur sirf uska pyar dihkta
palken jhokayen, sharmathi aur sahem se jaati uski aagosh main
maan picks the phone & goes to make calls for the arrangement
geet - nahi
maan lookes at her wondering what was it bothering her now
geet - ji woh

maan cupped face & lifted to meet her gaze. she looked so beautiful
with the sunlight falling across her face from the french window
he was reminded of the very first morning they were togather, how she looked
trying to wake him up after their first night togather
he hair teasingly spread across her face reminding of their passion
her glowing skin..flushed with his kisses her eyes dark with desire yet promsing
mano khuda ka koi karishma he snapped out of his thoughts
maan - tumhe jise bhi bolna hain boldo
geet turned her head for a no & stepped away from him - mujhe kisi ko nahi bolna
lets keep it small & simple
maan jaanta tha ki..she always wanted an elobrate engagement & wedding
guilt ate into him..for distroying all her happiness & desires
na jaane aur kya kya uski sapne the jo is kadar toot gaye
maan teehk hain - kal mandir main shaadi aur shaam ko reception
geet noded her head looking down still not able to accept the truth
he was not really worried about the wedding. use to geet ki khushiyaon ki chinta thi
woh kud se wada karta har pal, har ghadi.. usse khus rak paya..uski muskurahat hamesha yun hi khilthi rahain... kabhi nahi chaha ki woh isse pyar kare nahi..khuda na kare....agar geet ko usse pyar....
that is the last think he wanted. he wanted her to be happy because they are going to be togather. Because she was having his child. And because she was the only happiness in his otherwise empty life.

precap
geet confused!!!
VM CREDIT TheSanjana88

PART 51
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww that was sweet :D
xx
but i think geet should refuge':D' let him realise his love otherwise its not fair on geet...
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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EDITED:😆😆


lovely update muskan.............
to tell u the truth yaar i wanted maan to confess that he loved her...
bt khair... i trust u..😃
hayyee... muskan.. i m waiting 4 a surprise frm u.. 😉😛

vaise i m eagerly waiting 4 the marriage... hope it happens..😆
pls update soon...........
can't wait 4 the nxt update....
yaar.. subah se bass ek update not fair... pls try to update once more... i'll love it!!!!!


Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
sooo awsome plz do cont soon
Noor

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