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Posted: 14 years ago

hey update is awsome excellent👏⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
precap looks interesting 😃😃😃
waiting for mre😉
do continue soon😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update
realli loved it
aww i cnt wait i hope geet amkes the right move and decision
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's good they are getting married but maan never express his feelings toward her...though she feels but he should have tell her his love to her............anyways it was really nice update....wonderful
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 51

she was scared & suprised & shocked. They walked quitely to the car.
maan droped her at pinky's place. and said will pick u up tomorrow.
geet noded her head & walked in
maan went behind her & held her shoulders softly - tum teehk ho na?
geet - ji with a weak smile but did'nt lift her head to meet his eyes

maan - u need any thing call me
geet just shook her head & turned to leave
Sabse se chupa ke dard jab woh, muskura di uski hasi ne to aaj Maan ko mano rula diya, lehje se uth raha tha har dard ka dhuan, chera bata raha tha ke khuch gawa diya, awaaj mai tehraon tha aankhon mai nammi si thi,
aur mano keh rahi thi ki maine sab khuch teehk kar diya
jane kya usko thi logo se shikaytein,
tanhaiyoun ke desh mai khud ko basa liya
Khud bhi mano woh Maan se bichar ke adhori si ho gayi
Maan ko bhi itne logo mai begana bana diya.
he waited for her to go in.
maan reached the mansion & walked in violently to the gym
he punched the mirrors & kept punching them
this VM MINUS DEV PART😉
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i0j7VgU8aek&p=59CF4398A282EF5A&playnext=1&index=15[/YOUTUBE]
daadi rushed to see him
daadi - maan kya baat hain
maan continued to hurt him self
daadi came between the mirror & him. He almost punched her &
stopped his bleeding knuckles inches away from her face
maan rested his head on daadi's shoulder & cried. daadi was shocked
seeing his plight. she could not bare see him like this. she patted his back
daadi - kya baat hain beta
maan - we are getting married tomorrow
daadi - yun achanak
maan - she is pregnant
daadi - uske ghar walon ko pata hain
maan - they knew she was pregnant, but she did'nt tell them about me
mujhe bhi kabhi nahi bataaya
daadi - tabhi woh log shaadi ke liya mana kar rahen the
maan burried his head further in to her
daadi - pregnancy main usne vrat rakha aur 3 din kuch nahi khaya
issliya uske darji aur veerji itne pareshan ho rahe the
maan punched the wall again still resting his head on her...
maan - kyun daadi why did I have to ruin her life like this
daadi - aab tumhe uska life banavoghe
maan - kaise daadi? how will I ever be able to give the happiness she deserves
uski sari kwab mere wajah se toot gaye, uski sari khushiyan meri wajah se loot gayeee
woh to baby ko adoption ke liya dena ja rahi thi
daadi sat down tensed - nadan hain. she does'nt realize what is she saying
maan - main kaise use sambaloonga daadi, woh toh waqt pe khana bhi nahi khati
daadi smiles little bit - don't worry every thing will be fine
aap ne itne jaldi kyun shaadi raka, arrangements ke liya kuch time to chahiya na
maan - nahi daadi, she is already 2 months pregnant & I don't want to delay our wedding
it may lead to complications latter on
daadi - at least 3 days, I want to invite so many people
maan - nahi keep it simple, wedding cermony kal subha hogi only family members will attend
that & reception ke liya some close relatives & friends
daadi - lekin beta
maan - please daadi in stirn voice
daadi - jaise aap teehk samjhe
daadi cleans his wound ties a bandage - kal shaadi hain aur yeh kya hal bana raka hain
he snaps his hand leaves
maan calls the event organiser to leaves instruction about the whole event
daadi meets up with meera & dev explains them the whole thing
dev - tabhi unhe humare ghar ki izaad ka itna kayal tha
meera - daadi yeh to aachi baat hain na..
daadi - pata nahi, maan bhut gussa main hain
dev - don't worry daadi, abhi to bhabhi sambalege
meera - waise bhi maan ki bhabhi ke samne nahi chalti
dev - daadi abhi to aap pur daadi ho
daadi smiled - bus sab teehk ho jayee

geet went to her room & lie down on the bed cuddled up & confused
geet~baby yeh sab kya hogaya
baby~papa mama ki shaadi👏
geet~lekin papa to mujhe pyar nahi karte
baby~mujhe se to karte hain
geet~yeh sab teri wajah se huwa hain, jab main tujhe bula rahi thi tune
respond kyun nahi kiya ?
baby~main darr gaya tha😕
geet~main sab janti hoon , to hamesha aise karta hain
babaji aab kya hoga, aise koi achanak shaadi karta hain kya?
kal shaadi !!! jaise shaadi nahi guda gudiyan ka koi khel ho
babaji woh serious the kya?
kya kal sach main shaadi hogi humari?
lekin yeh sab kaise hoga, log kya kahenge...
she pulls the spread & sleeps still unsure of the next days wedding!!!

latter in the evening geet comes down for dinner
she wondered whether to tell pinky & uncle ji about it
she herself was not sure, what will she tell them
pinky - kya baat hain
geet - kuch nahi
pinky - aacha dinner karle
geet - bhook nahi hain
baby~mujhe to hain
geet~ignores him
pinky - geet please baby ke liya ka le
and forces her to eat little bit, she halfheartedly finishes her dinner
and gets back to the room
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I76Q3-mU7PM[/YOUTUBE]
ye dil me kyon ek kahlipahi se chaye thi
koi bhi chiz na use lubhati thi
dil me kaise ek uljan se chayi thi
har pal use intazar satati thi
khabhi use bolna chaha lekin bhol na paye
abhi yeh kaise uljan ayi hain, woh kaise aapne aap se use door kar rahe the
use itna chahati hain phir bhi uska dil itna majboor hogaya hain
jitna bhi door bhagna chahe dono..pur ek dosare ke dil main to wohi dhadkte hain, kis ko kahe geet aapne sare batein, uska dil to humseha Maan ko hi dhundata hain

precap
the wedding day!!!

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice one 👏....waiting eagerly for the wedding day....hope everything goes fine...FINGERS CROSSED....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Update...Hope Maaneet Wedding Happens..Finger Crossed ..Thanks..loved the Geet Baby convo..lol😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope everthing goes well great update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan's lines of his feelings aww
so sweet for a second there i thought there was a
hot steamy romantic scene lolz u got me
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg, u know that, that the kuch kuch hota hai sad version is my favrite. i loved the VM.

Gr8888888888 update yaar,

bole to mind blowing! superb! fantastic!

waiting 4 wedding.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the PM..

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