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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update!!!
Totally loved it!!!!
And glad that the baby is fine!!!
Can't wait for the next part!!!
Pls cont.soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome will geet marry him
Thanks continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgg wowwwwwww muskaan amazing the whole hospital was realli gdd n urses questioning and how maan enters and then he tells the doctor no to adoption and geet and maan moment wowwwww incredible
awww i cnt wait for wat geet says
continue soonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is really awesome......i love it...finally the secret comes out...to be together...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved d updates....
they r suuuuuupeb....
finally,Maam knows d truth n he proposes 2 her....
gr88888888....
happy 2 see tat baby is fine...
well done...
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!!!


maan finally asked her.....geet say YES plzZZ!!!!


update ASAP!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW muskan u're an AMAZING writer n all your fan-fics r simply AWESOME!!
I look forward 2 reading all 3 fan-fics each day n your updates never disappoint they only get better each time!!!
And the last 3 parts of this fan-fic was so so so good especially the way the truth came out n the way Maan reacted
Cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 49

kabhi aisa bhi hota hay zaban kuch keh nahi pati
magar sari haqeeqat in aankhon se ayaan hoti hay
isi liye shayed uss ne jab sawal kiya
ke mujhse shaadhi karoghi?
to na chahtey hue bhi, kuch na kehtay hue bhi
aankhon se behtay do aksoon ne
unhe door kahin baha kar le gaye
maan jaantha tha ki woh khabhi bhi is shaadi ki liya nahi manti
he knew she would refuse, after all that what he has done to her
last thing she would want is spend rest of her life with him
but probably she may think otherwise for the baby...baby!!!
maan still could'nt believe it. they were going to have a baby togather
Whether she wanted to or not, they were going to get married.
he was pritty sure about that.he did'nt want his baby to be born without his name.
he looked at her still flat stomach. Maan moved closer & caressed her stomach feeling it
baby~papa
geet~natak mandali
geet - aap mujhese baby ke liya shaadi karna chate hain
maan looked down & kept quite
geet - aap ko aise kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi hain
maan - zaroorat hain geet
geet - log kya kahen ge
maan - I don't care about any one. yeh humare beech ki baat hain
I want us to get married. main aapne bechay ko aapna naam dena chata hoon.
kuch kha gaya..jo shayad woh samaj gayee..lekin maan nahi pati
He watched as understanding dawned in her eyes.
main humare bachay ke liya kuch bhi kar sakta hoon
geet shied and said - mujhe laga ke aap naraz ho jayengey..aap yeh sab
itna cooly kaise le rahen hain
he kept quite
geet - aap itne shaant kaise hain... did you guess that I am ..
maan - nahi but i am not suprised. I know it is my responsibilty. I should have been
more careful with you. mujhe tumhare saat .
.he was definitly guilty
geet made a face & looked away
maan lifted her chin - I am really sorry. main jaantha hoon you always
wanted every thing differently & dreamy. I won't be able to propose you
with flowers & ring all I can say is this proposal is genuine.
geet - mujhe aap ki koi baat samjh nahi aati, pehle to aap yeh nahi mante ki main
pregnant hoon, phir aap yanha aakar yeh sab kehte hain
maan - kya bol rahi ho tum
geet - us din aapne abortion wali report ko to jhukala diya tha
maan takes a long breath - maine yah kaha tha ki woh tumhare report nahi ho sakti
geet - dehka... phir wohi baat
maan - I did'nt say you cannot be pregnant
geet - kya matlab... phir woh mera report kyun nahi ho sakta
maan - the report said it was 4th month pregnancy & u cannot be in 4th month already
its been only 2 months since we...
he looks away
geet looked down knoting her duppatta feeling odd - but still
maan - lekin kya
geet - lekin, aap to mujhe se nafrat karte hain, phir yeh kaisi shaadi hui
pyar ke bina shaadi bhi koi shaadi hui
maan - tum jo mana hain maanlo, main is halat main tumhe akela nahi chod sakta
geet - nahi I am fine mera pariwar hain mera saat, veerji ne kabhi koi kami nahi rakhi
maan - I just want u to be with me, I want to make sure our baby is fine & is with me
geet - aacha hain..phir aap baby ko aapne pas raklena
geet~baby tum papa ke saat rahega na
baby~papa-mama dono ke saat🤗
geet~waise to papa papa karta rahta hain
baby~umm!!
maan closes the distance between them - aur tumhe
geet - main aap ko joote rishte main bandna nahi chahti
maan - jaantha hoon tum mujhe dhust dhanav samjh thi ho, lekin itna bhi dhust nahi
ki aapne responsiblity se bagoon
geet - main to aapki pasand nahi phir aap yeh sab kyun kar rahe hain, I am not
even blaming u for all this, aap baby ko bhi aapne pass rakhlena phir is jooti
shaadi ki kya zaroorat hain
maan was not liking her argument pulls her closer, caressing her cheeks & moving her hair behind - kyun tumhe aapne raj ka intzaar hain


geet trembles in his embrace losing it his touch which just burns her with in
wanting more - nahi in a low voice her hands slipped in embracing him
her touch burned his back. He could feel the heat circling through him.
He could show her passion in a hot minute, but he suspected that was not all she was
talking about. It was not about their madhoshi. It was that something more.
kuch kuch samjhe ne lagha tha woh kya chati hain
uski narzoon ko jis ehsaas ki talash thi ..
kaise kah detha use ki woh use pyar karta..woh to uski ibaadat karne laga tha
maan - main tumhe pehle bhi kah chuka hoon main pyar ko nahi manta
geet hugged him tighter & closer. maan knew she was not the one who runs away
or breaks down with his harsh words...Do you believe in anything at all ?
Do you at least like me?
maan - yes I like you
she lifted her head to meet his eyes without breaking out of the hug
geet innocently asked kyun?
maan kuch deer yunhi dehkta...kya javab deta...
uski har baat jo use bhati thi
uska yek masoon chehra...
uski ankee, uski baatein...uski kaun si baat thi jo use na bhati thi..
yeh ladki jo chup si rehti thi, dard aur gam woh sehti thi
kisi se kuchh na kehti thi, usne man mein kya hai chhupaya
chahti hai kya kisi ko na bataya, woh tanha si rehti thi aur khud se kehti thi
yon hi ankhei kyon nam ho jaati,
muskurate muskurate khud jane kahan kho jaati
udaas chehro par muskurahat laya karti thi ..
uski har ek muskurahat pe to yeh marta tha
uski ada ki hai kya baat, hazaro mein bhi lagti hai woh sab mein khaas
baaton mein us ke aisa jaadu, jo mile usse to ho jaaye bekaboo
is mein nahi uski koyi bhi khata, kaise de sakta tha woh koi bhi misaal

on a lighter side..what maan thinks ....jaane kyun dil janta hain tu hain to I will be alright
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dxUpFvCQJ8k[/YOUTUBE]

precap
maans reply

VMS CREDIT paramjit1250
LINK TO NEXT PART 50
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di

wonderful update
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loved it soooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved Maaneet convo❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
loved each n every lines of update❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
w8ng for Maan's reply😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
beautiful VM😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssssssssssssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
let see how Geet & Maan going to tell family about marriage..

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