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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
hey ur story is nice......

they way ur telling past n present is also cute....

beautiful update

thanx so much....btw u have been added to the pm list!

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: vaniabi
hey great update dear..........i loved maaneet scene's in past n present saragam n maan's convo too............but in present where is geet???????????????????? i want her in the present also................don't say she was dead yaar...............

haha thanx..umm no geet is not dead..she is just away loll..if i made her dead then am sure u guys wouldve killed me lol.hahha

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ramahesh

i am also perfer MUSKAN

add me pm list.....

Veryyyyy nice update.

Waiting for geet's return.

Continue soonnnn.

thanx so much..as for geet's return..she will return but not tht soon! lol.hahaha

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: tinatartari
wow!!nice update bt i wanna know more abt geet than sargam.name z fine as sargam wid me.i want u 2 take up geeet s track more

thanx so much! yea in flashback u guys will see more maan and geet's scenes lol.hahah

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Hi...new reader here...Liked your story...and also loved the name Sargam...wonder why you want to change it...lot of ffs have the name Muskan...add me to the pm list and update soon...!!!!

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Dhara_s
Hi...new reader here...Liked your story...and also loved the name Sargam...wonder why you want to change it...lot of ffs have the name Muskan...add me to the pm list and update soon...!!!!

thanx so much...you have been added to the pm list lol...and i hope u cntineue to enjoy da ff lol

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

NOTE: Hey guys so I am going to keep Sargam..as many people like that name so far lol...thanx for all your support and I hope I did justice in this chapter and still entertained you guys!😃...many of you guys have been asking where is geet...that wil be answered in next chapter..and don't worry she is not dead or they are seperated...else u guys wouldve been hitting me with shoes lol..hahaha

Chapter 4:

Maan couldn't sleep all night...he was eagarly waiting for the next day to start so that he could see Geet...something about her attracted him...he couldn't place a finger on it...he was staring at his hand that he shook with Geet still feeling her touch...wht is wrong with him?

The mintue the sun came up...Maan woke up did his workout and headed down to the dining table...he ate so fast even his Dadima was shocked..before she could ask anything he left for office smiling knowing that she woiuld be there...

MK: Sasha did my secretary came in yet?

Sasha: Yes MK she did

MK: hmmm good send her to my cabin

Sasha: alrite MK I will

MK sat in his office waiting for Geet...

Geet: May I come in Sir

Maan looking at his file pretending to be busy

MK: hmm yes

Geet: Good morning sir..you called me?

MK: hmm morning..(stilll looking at the file in front of him)

Geet:(mmm i was rite..he is sadu...gabar kahi ka) Do you need anything sir

MK: hmm ohh yea..I need to you to make copies of these...and look at this files and make sure that they are in order...

Geet: All rite Sir...i will do that...anything else sir?

MK(why did I ask her to make copies? when I dont need the copies..wht is going on?)...hmm umm ohh and I need my coffee

Geet: umm ok sir..(Gabar singh)

Geet came back with coffee and copies of hte files and places them in front of maan as he was busy...when she was bout to leave...

Maan: Miss. Geet..I didn't give you permission to leave yet

Geet (shocked) jee sir..I thought since you are busy I will come back later...

Maan: Take a seat and until I say you can go then you can go...(pretending to look at the file)

Geet: murming...sadu kahi ka...

Maan: you said soemthing?

Geet: wht..umm.no...sir..why u heard something?

Maan looked at Geet with (fake) anger...he loved her presence and just wanted her to be near him...after all because of her he couldnt go to sleep last nite...even though she was unware of this..

Geet sat down and was waiting for maan to say something...but instead he was just siting there still looking at the file...and loosing her patience...while maan was stealing glances at her every now and then..and unable to cocentrate at the file he was lookign at it...jsut to pretend tht he is busy..he kept of turning pages every now and then..

Geet: Sir if you don't have any work for me to do then may I please leave

Maan: Miss Geet I hired you as my secretary and I don't think I need to remind you of your responsibilites

Geet: I did my responsibilities...and since does part of a job require for a secretary to sit in fornt of your boss for hours and staring at him waiting for him to give some work?

Maan: In this job it does...(tottaly loving her anger and attitude)

Geet: Well if that is hte case then why don't you hire some other secretary that would love to sit here all day and do nothing but stare at the boss...

Geet started going toward the door..when Maan grabed her hand and pulled her closer...

Maan: why would I hire soemone else when I have you to stare at me?

Geet completly shocked at his statement and blushed at the same time...

Maan noticed the blush and loved every single part of it...

Geet: umm please sir leave my hand...

Maan left her hand but backed up a little seeing her unconfortable...and walked to his desk...

Maan: Geet why don't u look over this file and see if there are any mistakes...

Geet: Ji sir...and was again bout to leave

Maan: Miss geet, I told you before that unless I tell you to leave then you can leave otherwise stay here

Geet: Ji Sir...(lookign down on the floor and quietly walked up to Maan's desk and started looking at the file..)

While Geet was busy looking at the file..Maan couldn't remove his gaze...he loved her attitude, anger, innocence, and especally when she blushed...hmmm he knw she is the one.. but how to pursue her and how to make her fall in love with him like he did at first sight...tht is the question...he would have to be very cautious...he smiled listenign to his own thoughts...suddenly there was knock at his cabin...

Sasha: May I come in Sir...

(Maan was totally mad as he didn't want anyone to disturb him)..Yes Sasha..(in full anger)

Geet was about to tell Maan that she didn't understand one of the statement in the file..but hearing him speak in anger..decided to change her mind...and pretended to be busy 😆 and thinking when will lunch come....

Sasha: umm Sir your client is here and is wating in the conference room for you

Maan: hmm I will be there in five minutes...(great not wanting to leave Geet..but had no choice)..Geet I will be in the meeting for about an hour..if any call comes take my messages...ohh and your cabin will be next door...it is being set up..once it's set up you may go there...

Geet: Yes sir...(yes finally I can leave from this gabar singh's adda 😆)

Maan left for his conference and so did Geet...

While being in the meeting..Maan mind was totally on Geet...and wished that day would never be over so tha he could have her infront of him every day

Precap: Where is Geet..

I hope you guys liked it lol...

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Awesome upate
loved it
can't believe maan just wanting her tonsit by him all day
so cute and romantic
where is geet
can't wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm