-truly magical- thread 2 - Page 13

truly u r an awesome writer i catch up with ur all ff from 4 days n completed reading all of them up to date...

I must say u got talent....

u can build beautiful stories with out making a single boring line

I loved all of ur FFs n all parts.. but commented here only

I will try comment in all other posts once I read new parts

Love ur FFs a LOT

Hi,

Mast Update!
Nice ring!
Loved the flirting session,
Loved Maaneet moments

Love
lakshmi

Great part!!!!!👏

-truly magical-
part 19

maan - come I will drop you home
geet - umm!!
geet was getting in maans car
prithvi - maam aap ki dosri car papa ne bejvayee hain
geet nodes

geet - thanxs bachan u just saved my day, actually u spoiled it
so u better make it
maan smiled
geet hugged him good bye
maan wispered in her ears... looking really nice in red
geet blushed sighed - u really don't give up & pulled away from the hug
she hops in her car & the driver drives her back

geet calls prem
prem - wow am I blessed
geet - PREM
prem - u missed college today...u know GEET HANDA missed college
I mean yaar mujhe to batathi kanha thi
geet - ghar main thi... mood nahi tha
prem - we could have gone out
geet - nahi I was really pissed
prem - I have never seen u getting upset about any thing like this
phone swticted off, no college...any thing serious
geet - not actually, aise hi I was in a faul mood over a fight
prem - are u sure?
geet - yah I am pritty sure...
prem - kal college
geet - umm!!!
prem - wake me up
geet - good night

she reaches home... papaji - what happened to your car
geet - break down hogayee thi
papaji - atleast call karna tha
geet - nahi papa friend milaya tha, he helped me
rano - did u have ur dinner
geet -ji mama
rano - chand deehkne ke baad hi vrat thoda na
geet - ji mama
rano - kaise chera utra gayee hain sleep well now
geet nodes her head & went to the room

next day 5.25am geet wakes up ...turning around restlessly...
aabhi bajega uska alarm & calls bachan
maan - how come so early?
geet yarning - i was waiting for ur watch to beep
maan smiled
geet - can u believe I am getting up so early uff without an alarm
maan smiled again
geet - gym main ho
maan - umm practicising his kicks & punches
geet yarning again - how can any one work out at this hour
the watch beeps...she swtiches it off
geet - I am going to sleep
maan - sweet dreams
geet dosses off

8.00am maan calls geet
geet - kya hain...snapps
maan moves the reciver away
maan - tum college ke liya late ho rahi ho in stirn tone
geet sleeping again - abhi to humare baat huwi thi
maan - that was 2 1/2hrs back
geet - abhi time kya horaha hain
maan - 8.00am
geet - kya karte ho pehle nahi utta sakte the, u know I get up at 7.30am
maan - u did'nt ask me to wake u up
geet - phir phone kyun kiya
maan - it was 8, usually u call at 7.30 so I was just wondering what happened
geet - could'nt you wonder this little earlier, agar main college ke liya late huwi na
deehkna, aacha rukoo let me call prem
she puts his call on hold & wakes prem up
maan goes to his break fast table
daadi - u gave her the ring
maan smiled
daadi - how sweet , to main Mr. Handa se baat challvon
maan - nahi daadi abhi nahi
daadi - now what are you waiting for
maan - daadi !!!
daadi - NO no ways...you just gave her the ring without proposing
geet resumed the call
geet - what proposing???
maan chocked nahi kuch nahi
geet - batavoona what proposing
maan - proposing nahi..proposal project
geet - mujhe to lagha I heard proposing
daadi giggles
maan clears his throat requesting daadi to be quite
geet - aap kuch chupa rahe ho, are u planning to propose some one
maan kisses daadi bye & sits in the car - kiya to hain tumko
geet - see you are changing the topic now
maan - I am not
geet - forget it you don't want to say to chodo
geet reaches the college & waits for prem
mukti comes & meet her
geet - hi mukti
mukti - hi geet, actually hum log women association ke taraf se morcha nikal rahe hain
would u like to join us
geet - what will I do
mukti - tum aavoo ghi to aur bhi students join karenghe
geet wispers to maan - javoon kya?
maan - javoo just be careful..sighing some papers & looking into blue prints
geet to mukti - classes??
mukti - mass bunking kar rahe hain
geet - what is this all about
mukti - actually a member of our association was molestated and the cops did'nt
handle her case judicially thats why we are going to take a rally
geet reluctantly joins them...prem also joins in the rally
geet - prem women rally
prem - line mar raha hoon.so many girls..u know sympathy types..they may feel kitna cute hain
geet rolls her eyes
rally continues & creates a huge traffic jam & an ambulance gets stuck in the mist
geet gets hyper & disperse the rally & making way for the ambulance
maan -geet kya kar rahe ho tum
geet - ek min
prithvi - maam its not safe here bhut traffic hain
geet shouts at the cops & tells them to clear the traffic
cop - u have created all this rally & traffic jam, now u r blaming us
geet snapps back & askes them to do their duty
media start covering & bad mouthing the rally & blaming them for the mess
geet messes up with the media & tells them to stop wasting time on pitty matters
maan - tum kar kya rahe ho, wanha itna shoor kyun hain
geet shouting on top of her voice to clear the way for ambulance..prithvi try to hold her back
she pulls out the gun from the cop & shoots in air every one moves back
maan stands up in his pushing his chair back- what is this gun shoot.

outside the police station media creating a big scene out of it
media questioning the women associations integrity & a press meet is arranged
to question the women association head Savitri devi!!
maan reached with his lawyer media wondering Maan Singh Khurana
was doing here..they pounced at him with questions...his body gaurds kept them
away... Maan walks in to see geet was standing in a corner crossing her hand &
looking down... geet hugs hims trembling in fear...her hands were cold & shaky
she was shocked with what she did ...lawyer finished the paper work easily...
Maan handed her a bottle of water & went inside to sign the papers.
as a guarantor. ..he turned to see Mr. Handa walking in with his lawyer

precap
😲😲😲oops!!!😲😲😲😲

for u
truly magical is

part 16

thinking phon pe itni lambi lambi baat. phon ki battrey down nahi hoti mujhe bhi aik esa cell dilwa do

maan gets wild and put her call on hold makes another call
maan - some guys are creating trouble
xyz - umm
maan - i will be there in few mins
xyz - umm yaar yeh kahen prithvi ko maan ne hi to nahi bheja

maan turns to geet holding her by arms...tum teehk ho na, geet
geet - bachan not bad yaar ... tere bhi biceps aachey hain

geet - body gaurds insaam nahi hote, unhe choot nahi lag sakti

i cannot just sit back & watch him bleed because of me soooooo sweet

kya huwa? maan - tum teehk ho na?
geet - umm.. aap yanha kaise
maan - sirf tumhi mujhe tond sakti hoo? main nahi
geet - mera liya yanha aayee the
maan -nahi mujhe prithvi ki chinta ho rahi thi
geet - gay types umm!!

tumhe thanxs kehni ki zaroort nahi... tumhe kuch ho jata to ...he stops
and looks away
geet - to??? peeping close to him..bolo to?
maan changes the gear & moves on - to meri biwi ko kaun manayega
geet - how mean

geet - pata hain ... aap ke biwi ko tution deneke baad hi maroo..
maan closes her mouth... aaj keh diya dobar aise mat kehna

prem - aab himaat hain to haat laga ke dikha..pushes geet infront of them
armaan - itni himaat inme kanha
they bash up the 8 of them & parcel them to sanjeevni along with the one
who was already getting treated for his broken wrist

geet - BTW I am not fasting for u
maan - fasting to kar rahi ho na
geet - woh to har saal karthi hoon
maan - is saal main tumhara BF main hoon
geet - to
maan - to mere liya huwa na
geet - don't confuse me
maan - aacha sunno
geet - umm
maan - red wali sari leena
geet - kyun
maan - mujhe pasand hain

itneeeeeeeeee lambe comments thek haan?

that was a good update, again.

Wow! Maan is so caring,n geet so daring love ths cute couple.

nice update..will the handa and Maan meet?? waiting to read the next.

wow! another twist.. keya muskan, itni achi karwa chut ki bad ye dena jorori thi kia.. ab keya hoga.. do con.

hey really am shocked yaar😲... with in one episode u gave us a shock treatment muskan.. Oh my god geet arrested????????? cant believe this ... maan bailed her out ,, wat gonna be next ???? definetely geet ll be upset for some time maan consolling her ... wat abt mr.Handa and savithri devi mam ??? i think u gonna bring some twists here ??😕