Naku and Dutta HALLOWEEN Spoof

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Posted: 14 years ago
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In a bid to add a little humor, I thought I'd send you a TeleBirdie story.

This time, it is not an interview, but an imagined Halloween story with our dear couple front and center...Indian TWILIGHT style!

Dutta: The brooding Edward-like character...mature...resplendent...in his own world...with powers, but with gussa....

Naku: Confused Bella-like, except with soot on her face...full of angst...sweet...a bit immature...hard life...doesn't feel she belongs

IMAGINE TELEBIRDIE sitting before little children telling this scary tale of serial angst this Halloween. šŸ˜†


Story:

Listen my kiddies, one and all, to this (cheesy) story I have to tell.
If you don't listen well, you may very well go to hell. (JUST KIDDING!šŸ˜† It rhymed! and I never said I was a poet!)

Once there was this man-boy, mysterious, and handsome, brooding, and strong
Those eyes, that look, that kurta walk
All of which was longed.

He llved in his dark life of no color...no hope or joy
Till the day when across his path came a girl
Who would change her color, was it true or a ploy?

Her name was Nakusha
Short and sweet
Her heart was pure
But full of angst was she.

For on her face, there was soot
That covered her her skin and soul
Made her scary, and fearful...
Of men one and all....

The two met...there was a psychic pull
They knew each other
It seemed
But there's was a fate that was first to be cruel

Dutta was ostracized and feared,
A dark, angry man was he.
Nakusha understood him,
But how could this be?

She did not care what he was
She was willing to live in his world
But she was hiding a secret
That she was an apsara girl! (YIKES!)

Dutta opened up to Nakusha
Yearned for that breath of fresh air
Wanted to calm his heart, be different
With this girl who was not so fair

He finally brought her into his world
And heart
But that day came
That would give him a start.

For from the dark,
Walked out an apsarašŸ˜†
Someone he did not know
But it was Nakusha

She said "BOO!"
Dutta was scared
He did not think his Nakusha
Would play such a game!

So he walked away
Back into his world...dark and still
But could not keep his heart
From beating and yearning for her still

Hence he decided
To leave the fear, the darkness behind
Left the Dark Side
Into the light.

Now, my kiddies, how scary is that! Told you...these serials are SCARY!

Little Kid: What kind of story is that??? That was boring!

Other Kids: Yeah! Booo! That wasn't scary!

TeleBirdie: Chup! Go turn on COLORS and tell me it's not SCARY then!

(Just kidding everyone. I love kids...and they seem to like me a lot too! Go figure!)












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-Carrie- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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So Beautiful,Parul. Don't know sweetie.You said it was comic but I feel like crying.Very well writtenšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘ Loved the way you described the man I love most in this world. Edward-like, dark & brooding😳😳😳😳 I'm telling ya.There's your calling.Being Birdie.You should seriously consider it,dear.
Amazing gifted people this forum has.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG. This is beautiful! A spoof! Are you serious?

I'm a fan. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb gp!šŸ‘šŸ‘
loved it to the bits.. i agree with zubby forum has got such talented people.. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 14 years ago
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GP.................Apsara girl....................... ......................You are still stuck there............... ...............................
I just loved this line................She said "BOO"........................ ...............................
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AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.......GP...............Just loved it to the core...................
Love you for this..................


TIA.Tia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Parul are you sure kids will like you after all the scaring you did to them..Haan??? Nxt time pls be gentle to them and stop scaring them with such confusing stories just tell them cindrella type stories.. Will you dearie.??!!!...LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please do not throw chappals at me or laugh at me!

I swear, I intended this thing to be facetious. But having read your comments, I went back and re-read it, and YOU ARE RIGHT. Arre! It's sweet. OMG!!! 😲 GP and a sweet post....I'm impressed with myself.🤣 I did not think it totally possible. Could I be...aarggghhh...sweet on the inside and I am now showing my true roop? My God, I'm revealing myself. First me, now Naku.


I'm really glad you liked it...because I suck at making things rhyme or sound cohesive....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tina-Saigal2002

Parul are you sure kids will like you after all the scaring you did to them..Haan??? Nxt time pls be gentle to them and stop scaring them with such confusing stories just tell them cindrella type stories.. Will you dearie.??!!!...LOL


I tell you Tina, you would not believe it. For some reason, kids flock to me. Actually, truth be told...I adore them to pieces. So much innocence, honesty, and potential in each one of them...and I like to tease them. They're God's little creations.

I've tutored children on and off since I was a teenager, with reading, summer programs, homework, teaching a class on what I do, etc. They are one of my soft spots---hate to see any one of them not have a fair chance in life. Like most other people, I do what I can.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Parul... beautifully written.... it did bring tears to me..
As for kids.. ya .. they are angels as what we were once upon a time I can say... short of words on your sweet poem.
God bless you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Parul sweety I know you are a sweet person and you definitely very good with Kids.. Well I was just pulling your legs.. BTW big fan of your Tele Birdies reporting and all the Spoofs you write... Just that I don't get any words to appreciate your work.. Pls don't take me otherwise.. I think we are cool.. Love you sweetu

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