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Posted: 14 years ago
😊 lovely update..muskan
plz cont soon😉
Edited by shimontini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

Loved the update!
lagta hai Kavrachot ka chand, aapki har FF ko roshan kar raha hai.........
Well i really loved Geet's anger.............

Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 43


geet cuddled up in the spread & kept looking at the door
that maan just closed behind... mano uska rashta dehk rahi thi
use door rahna to aab namumkin sa ho chala tha...
lekin naraz thi..aab bhi shayad..ajab si narazghi thi
narazghi main bhi to inke itna pyar tha ki kya kahen

maan continued to work from home
geet got ready & came down to leave to office
daadi called geet
daadi - beta aaj office jaane ki zaroort nahi tum tired hojavoo ghi...
baby~so sweet😳

geet - lekin
daadi - maan se hum baat karlenghe
geet - ji
daadi - come home by 3.00pm khata rakhwai hain
geet - ji

maan called office & realized she was not their...
uski bechani to mano had se guzar gaye, itni khafa kaise hogayee use ...
is kadar root kar beti hain ki manana bhi nahi aata
uski in bechain aankhon ko ab usky siva koi nahin bhata
woh utri iss kadar dil mein ki koi tuja na ab iss mein samata

geet reached khurana mansion at 2.30pm
daadi - yeh ka beta saree nahi pehna
geet bend her head down & wondered wat to say
daadi - jaldi se saree pehn kar aavoo
she took the saree & went to maans study ...
yun uska naraz hona, naraz hokar bhi ussi ke pas aana...
uff uski yek massomiyat pe to maan jaan jitakta tha
dari hui, kuch sharmayi, aur shayad bhut khafa bhi thi
did'nt say any thing stood their cluctching the saree in her hand
looking down...maan walked passed her & locked the door
turned his back until she changed into her skirt & blouse
khamoshi main bhi bhut kuch kah jate unki dil ki dhadkane
he turned to take the saree from her, she turned around
took the saree from her hand, she stood looking down facing her back to him
maan made her wear the saree... she quitely walked out
kaise samjhte the ek dosre ko bina kuch kahe bina kuch sune
aab to unke khamoshiyan bhi bolne lagi thi..samjhe ne lagi thi

geet went down & joined the other ladies for the khata
one of the lady narrated the khata & then they passed the pooja thali around
maan watched geet she still looked disturbed
he was not able to see her so annoyed & angry with him
maan changed & came down for the function
daadi had arranged for dance & some music
MUSKAN REQUESTS READ ON FURTHER WITH THIS SONG PLAYING IN BACKGROUND!!!
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TFjG6oiwH6Q[/YOUTUBE]
dev & meera really looked happy togather....
maan eyes were looking at geet in the mist of the gathering
Kehne ko Jashn-e-bahara hai
Ishq yeh dekhke hairaan hai
Phool se khusboo khafa khafa hai gulshan mein
Chupa hai koi ranj fiza ki chilman mein
maan went & stood close to geet. she was cold & not responding
maan - geet mujhe tumhe kuch batna hain
geet was quite
Sare sehmein nazare hain
Soye soye vaqt ke dhare hain
Aur dil mein koi khoye si baatein hain
maan - geet tum meri puri baat ek bar sunto loo please
slips his long fingers into hers & pulls her closer, geet gave a weak smile
Kaise kahen kya hai sitam
Sochte hai ab yeh hum
Koi kaise kahen woh hai ya nahi humare
daadi - chand nikalne main abhi todi hi deer hain..lets go to the terrace
geet tries to lift the thal, maan helps her without letting go off her hand they walk up the steps
Karte to hai saath safar
Faasle hain phir bhi magar
Jaise milte nahi kisi dariya ke do kinare
they reach the terrace & pinky rushes to geet,
maan folds the hand behind..without letting her hand
pinky wispers - tune fasting to nahi ki
geet looked down
pinky wispers - is halat main fasting, veerji naraz ho jayenge
maan - kis halat ki baat kar rahi ho
pinky gets scared
geet fumbles - ji woh main hospital main thi na..uski baat kar rahi hain
maan lifts her chin...tum sach kah rahi ho na?
geet - ji and moves away & stands next to a curtain parting them
Pass hain phir bhi paas nahi
Humko yeh gum raas nahi
Seeshe ki ek diware hai jaise darmiya
maan comes around the curtain & holds her from the waist
pulls her closer..yeh aap kya kar rahe hain, koi deehk lega
maan - deehkne do
geet - aap...lost looking into his eyes


Hum ne jo tha nagma suna
Dil ne tha usko chuna
Yeh dastaan humein vaqt ne kaise sunai
geet snaps out with other ladies giggling around & breaks free
maan still holds back her shoulder & pulls her closer..she fights weakly

Hum jo agar hai gumgee
Woh bhi udhar khush to nahi
Mulakato mein hai jaise ghul si gai tanhai
maan pulls her in a jerk into his embrace
geet - aap bhool rahe hain jooti mangni hain humari
tears rolls down as she rests her head on his chest

Milke bhi hum milte nahi
Khilke bhi gul khilte nahi
Aankhon mein hai baharein dil mein khiza
maan - lekin humara saat to sacha hain na
geet she keeps quite
maan - humara karwa chaut to sacha hain na
tumhara mera yun kuch na kah ke bhi sab kuch kehna to sach hain na
kyun rooti ho mujhese...
she turns her to leave... deehko chand bhi nikal aaya... humare is rishte ki
ghawahi dene...
daadi - challo beta fast break kar lo
maan leaves her hand , she looks at the moon through the mesh & then sees
him, she shied... then offered water & lamp to the moon
maan made her drink the water & sweet & she bend to take his blessings he held her &
hugged her and kissed her forehead
baby~finally something!!!challo challo khana khate hain
geet looked into his eyes & cried... made him have water & sweets
aap ne kyun vrath rakha
maan - beacuse I hate u
geet hugs him - i can't stay without u
maan - phir itna kyun naraz hoti ho
daadi - challo baate baad main kuch khaa lo
baby~meri per daadi is the best...muah
geet faints while going down... maan takes her to the room
maan calls the doctor
pinky - nahi sir she is fine, dehydrated hogayee hogi
I will get some thing for her to eat
maan gets restless & sits close to her holding her hand
geet - main teehk hoon
baby~main teehk nahi hoon, mujhe bhook lagi hain
geet~2 min wait nahi kar sakta
baby~i am faninting!! fainting!!!aahhh....
geet~phir woh sab kaun kahayega jo pinky masi larahi hain
baby~main main starts jumping

they feed each other & lost in each other
geet - mujhe dar lagta hain...in uljate halat se and hugs him

precap
maan angry !!!!😡😡😡

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

baby~main teehk nahi hoon, mujhe bhook lagi hain
geet~2 min wait nahi kar sakta
baby~i am faninting!! fainting!!!aahhh....
geet~phir woh sab kaun kahayega jo pinky masi larahi hain
baby~main main starts jumping

they feed each other & lost in each other


oh ho Geet is learning to control the men in her life !!!

baby ko maska and Maan ko ignorance and daat !!!


absolutely wonderful episode, it was worth the wait. its 13.45 am wednesday morning, here

...........now Maan really really needs to know about the baby.

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for part 42

wonderful..............loved that Geet got mad at Maan ........and poor Maan just could not talk fast enough for Geet .

when Maan takes Geet back to the outhouse in the firemans hold.........i wish u had added lil ones opinion on being crushed and carried around like that. that baby would never let Geet forget about it. imagine baby wants something all he has to do is play on Geets guilty conscience.



Edited by ixray - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.
by the way maan is angry and whom and why?
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Posted: 14 years ago
uff bechare baby ka bhi vret ker va diya😆. chalo geet aur maan ke pyaar ki bhi umar baad gayi.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
first muskan , congraluate to have lovely husband and showed you chand in computer. science ka zamana ahai (jokes apart). hope you enjoyed your karvachauth and got really nice gift apart from your lovely hubby. lovely update. i think twist in story is near. waiting for your update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow karwachut ka barish..good one keep writing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow really loved it
cant wait plz update the next pasrt soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update!!!


y is maan angrY!!!!

update sooN!!!

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