Adhori Batey , farewell...DP ji !

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey my friends first a hug to everyone!🤗

Sorry guys im not that good with either poetry or translating from urdu to English,…hope u guys can forgive me.😳 But I couldn't stop my self for writing some sentences which just came to my mind after watching the epi ….it is something I think DP uncle ji would have said maybe to his dear son and bahu Dutta and Nakku.😳 The first verse is from Mirza ghalib….

"Yeh na thi humari qismat key wisaley yaar hota,

(it was not in my fate to meet my lover)
Agar aur jite rehtey , yehi intezaar hota …."
(had I lived longer, this would still be my only desire)

Poet : Asadullah Khan Ghalib .

And here is some of my thoughts ! …😉

Youn ankho mein humney apney nor-e-nazar ko pala,❤️

Younhi dil key tokrey ko ankho mein basaya,❤️

Yeh humari bebasi yah qismat ki kamzori hogi key paas akar bhi humsey door raha humara laqtey-jigar.😭

Haaye.. ho unn par jo humari bebasi par hastey they,😡(kala) jo jitey ji humein aag mein dhakel diye,😭

Par hain humko bhi uss par bharosa (nakku)😳, jo hogi saaee ki tarha , humarey dili aarzoo key paas.😍

Jo degi har khushi mere chaudwi key chand ko ab,😳 jo dega ab mujhey ek roshnieye ummid ke bas,….😃

Younhi khushi sey hum khair ki neend sojaeynge, aur phir eek bar chiragh-e-subh ho ko payengey apni umr ki roshan bahar ..!😃😳

some word from urdu to english😃

Nor-e-nazar: apple of my eye (ankho ki roshni)

Bebasi: it was my woe , my bad luck

Qismat; faith

Laqtey-jigar: My sweetheart, my own blood

Dhakel: pushed

Bharosa: faith/trust

Dili arzoo: My deepest wish (meaning his son(Dutta)…the closest to my heart

Saya(saee): shadow

Chaudwi ka chand: Fullmoon (meaning his son (Dutta)

Roshniye ummid: the light of new hope/faith

Khair: without fear

Chiragh-e-subh: morning light /sunshine

Umr: age/life

Roshan Bahar: new start/ light of happiness/bloom/blossom

Forgive me if I got u more emotional 2day,🤗…but just wanted to dedicate my thoughts to Damodar Patil Ji….after everything evil that Kala ..did…😡

Tace care guys , love u all !❤️🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh thanks for sharing such beautiful poetry.......very well written n i m a ghalib fan..so loved it!


it just summed up pretty much everything abt todays epi

RIP...Damodar Patil! 😔😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Vah, vah! Kya poetry hai! So sad for DP and Dutta...adhuri batey--absolutely!

Thanks for the translations.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyoe

oh thanks for sharing such beautiful poetry.......very well written n i m a ghalib fan..so loved it!


it just summed up pretty much everything abt todays epi

RIP...Damodar Patil! 😔😭


no need to thanks just wrote whatever came to my mind dear😳yeah im a fan of ghalib aswell love his poetry😳
thanks for liking it ...and dont cry at least he got to meet his son😊
tace care🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rose_Petal

Vah, vah! Kya poetry hai! So sad for DP and Dutta...adhuri batey--absolutely!

Thanks for the translations.


thanks its not that good but just a few lines which may clear out some stuff DP might wanted to say or had in mind ...i thought😳
thanks huni🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!
*sniff sniff*
Waah!! Kya likha hai yaar....your poem made me dread DP's death more than Jagtap, though it has been the other way round till now...why did u write a tribute for Jagtaap too?? bolo bolo???
Madzy......*sniff*
come here and hug DD......
boo-hoo...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!

*sniff sniff*
Waah!! Kya likha hai yaar....your poem made me dread DP's death more than Jagtap, though it has been the other way round till now...why did u write a tribute for Jagtaap too?? bolo bolo???
Madzy......*sniff*
come here and hug DD......
boo-hoo...


awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww DD mat roo na 😭😭 aja galey lag jaa meri dost 🤗🤗plz dont cry yaar *sniff* ....
by that time i was even more sad and couldnt think of anything DD maybe thats why i didnt write anything *sniff*....awwwww DD jaan dont cry *wipes DDs tears*.....
sab kuch theek hojaeyga ......and im soo gonna kill Kala😡😡

tace care hun🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RIP DP... i cnt believe he is dead...why always kill of the good ppl... 1st jagtap n nw DP..m feeling so bad for DP... dutta stil hasnt 4given him yet....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

RIP DP... i cnt believe he is dead...why always kill of the good ppl... 1st jagtap n nw DP..m feeling so bad for DP... dutta stil hasnt 4given him yet....


yeah i think that was unneccessarily why did they bring his dad up in the show if they wanted to kill him like that first jagtap and now his dad ...i mean there are no good character involved in duttas life who can support not just him but also nakku. Now dutta is in a dilemma again and i feel again Nakku will suffer for that after the FR....i really didnt like the idea of DP getting killed
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wonderful and a fab poetry here - so very apt for the situation.
RIP Mr. Senior Patil.
But yes he was so ambiguous. For once even if I place myself in Kala's shoes, she should not have killed him. Agreed she lost her father beacuse of him, her mother favoured Dutta mre. But what was Dutta's fault? He himself was a child then. Irrespective of how great your tragedy was - DP was a drunk man addicted to gambling whe he accidentally pushed his bro.
But Kala injected poison to a man lying on his death bed waiting for his son to hasten his death. Kala has proved she is worse than DP.

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