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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
Congrates on Ur third thread loving Ur ff
Thanks for making our
Day interesting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

~madhoshi~
part 38

little offtrack...small tiny miny part from Gitz..aka ixray
on medical teams reaction on maaneet
in the nurses station / lounge/ locker room
rn arpita
rn juann
rn arpita - hey room 101, the pt's husband darling is here !!
rn juann - really ?? he showed up now ?? 2 be missing 4 2 days.......
he must have been on vac with a GF.
rn arpita - no!! no!!.........after what i witnessed i don't think so.
rn juann - huh??😲
rn arpita - on my last round i found the hottie sleeping in that single
bed with the wifey. u do not want to know where the arms and legs were.
her saari was on the floor and when i gave her the sponge bath she was
only wearing his shirt.
rn juann - ah ha !! got to check out this couple. i thut those things
only happen in the radiology dark rooms !! oh well he was away from her ,
making up for lost time ??!!??


maan walked into the room worried
uski sari pareshani to mano ko se gaye, geet ko yun chain se sota deehk
he tucked the spread around her and moved her curls, caressed her cheeks
could'nt take his eyes off her even for a minute
he sat on the stool next to her & rested his hand on the bed
geet held on to his hand as she turned facing him
doctor came for the morning round, he read the reports
doc - every thing seems fine, just continue the medication
she really needs to rest, otherwise the groW*H is normal
maan looked confused before he could ask further
brij - good morning doctor & smiled at maan
maan noded
brij - did she sleep last night
doc - i guess he did the magic
brij was little uncomfartable about the situation
he did'nt want the doc to reveal too much about geets pregnancy
he led the doc to his room & spoke about geets progress

brij came back & thanked maan
brij - I understand she is really kiddish, at times she can really go overboard
with her stubborness, but this was little too much. sorry for all the trouble
thanxs a lot for staying back & taking care of her. I really don't know
how am I going to repay all this
maan closes his eyes takes a long breath
maan - actually its all because of me
brij looked confused - ji
maan - I went over board getting angry on her and..
brij intreupted - aur usne dil pe le liya hoga humesha aise hi karti hain
maan - let me explain, uski koi galti nahi thi
brij - I understand its ok & gave a warm hug to maan patting his back
what matters is she is fine now

maan gets a call from sasha
sasha - MK when are u coming press will be hear at 12noon
maan - I will be there in an hour
sasha - how is geet?
maan - she is fine now
sasha smiled & said bye

after the call maan looks at brij
maan - I need to keep going
brij - ji
maan - woh geet..he rubbed his forehead..samjh nahi paya kya kahta
jaanta tha ki woh kitini bechain hojaayegi
brij - don't worry I will explain it to her
brij was getting little concerned about the intrest maan was showing
towards geet... he knew it really could'nt have a future
he was worried kanhi maan, geet ki bechakani harqatoon ko pyar na samjhle
lekin woh karta bhi kya..kise samjata... geet ko ke maan ko

daadi called & went to meet darji at pinky's place
daadi - namaste and hands over basket of fruits & sweets
darji - ji namaste leking yeh sab
daadi - ji mujhe aap se kuch zaroori baat karni thi
darji - ji
daadi - I wanted to ask geets hand for maan my elder grand son
darji was delighted at first & then was taken a back
daadi read the uncertainity in his eyes - hume geet bhut pasand hain
aur hume lagta hain woh humare Maan ke liye bilkul teehk hain
darji was dumb stuck did'nt know wat to say he gave a weak smile
daadi - there is no hurry, u could think over it & let us know
pinky's father arranged for some tea for daadi
daadi - abhi nahi, hum seedha mooh meeta karenghe khush khabri ke saat
and she leaves

darji calls brij and tells him about the whole proposal
brij rushes home
brij - aap ne kuch kaha to nahi
daarji - nahi , I just asked for some time to think
pinky's father - rishta to aacha hain
brij - aap log yeh sab kya bol rahe hoon, how can we even think of geets
wedding now!!! for gods sake she is pregnant
darji - lekin geet ka kya hoga?
brij - aap uski chinta mat kariya, she is my responsibilty
darji - yeh shaadi hojaye to
brij - DARJI!!! woh log bhut aache hain, hum unke saat koi dhooka nahi kar sakte
they continue to have a fired up arguement

insab se anjaan geet bechain hoke maan ko dunt thi
uski aankhe bechain hojathi jo ansu do chaar na aaye,
kya karthi woo, uske bin kahi qaraar na aaye.
uski laakh berukhi par bhi iske pagalpan pe koi farq na aaye,
ek jhalak dekhne phir se bechain ho jathi ....

she walked into the loby & notices the TV screen which flashed the news
of upcoming press meet at Khurana Construction
she got curious & looked at the news
news reader - next bigest news is the unsuccessful Dam project of Khurana Constructions
at HP...we have a live coverage of the press meet..over to the reporter from
the KC....the live reporter gives his intro & says...the press meet is about
to start in 30mins... Maan singh Khurana has just arrived
news reader - do u have any clue why Maan Singh Khurana has called this meet
live reporter - all we know he is giving his explaination on why this project failed
geet got worried & went into the room
babji yeh kitne pareshani main thi aur mujhe kaha bhi nahi
baby~aap ko kahte to hya hota...humm!!! turns his face😒
geet~baby mama k itna under estimate nahi karte..baby~ignores her
she saw the file which maan carried with him last night it read
HP dam project...she read through the while & saw the maps & copies
of the blue prints... babaji yeh aap kya karte hoo
she took the cab & rushed to KC

KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS
maan went up on the platform & started addressing the press
reporters started questioning him randomly
maan - ek min...let me give my explaination first & then you can ask your questions
maan plays the slide & explains ... the dam was planned to be constructed on this
place... & this will be the path of the canal connecting to the dam
pointing
at the slide...
stops & was shocked to see her
geet - suniya
maan - excuse me please!!!
maan closes the mic & comes close to her stepping down the platform
maan - tum yanha kya kar rahi ho...I was going to join u for lunch after this
press meet, kyun aise karti ho?
geet - woh mujhe kuch kahna tha
maan - I will talk to u after this ...
geet - lekin suniya to
maan - please geet the whole press is waiting, try to understand
maan goes back
geet calls sasha & shows her the map & explains her

maan continues
maan - as I was explaining this land on which canal needs to be build belongs to the
different farmers. they don't want to lose their land so
geet closes the mic maan looks at her controlling his temper
geet points at sasha
sasha continues - so Maan Singh Khurana has decided to divert this
part of the canal into his land
pointing at an alternate path
maan wispers to geet - woh bhi mera land nahi hain
geet wispers - mera toh hain
baby~impressed again by momy👏
maan dumb stuck looks at her wondering
sudh budh khoke uske baathe samjta...
kaise yeh pagli aapna sab kuch uspe luta thi
kaise karti, kyun karti maan samjh ke bhi na samjh pata
jitna use door jaata utna hi use pas pata
they go to the cabin after the basic question answere session.... sasha continues the meet
kuch deer yun he deehk ta
geet - aise kya deehk rahe ho
maan - kyun aise harkte karti ho? & hugs her passionately
kyun mujhe khud se door nahi jane dethi
geet - jab tak main idhar hoon aapko mera pas hi rahena hoga
maan - hum kya humesha pas nahi rah sakte?
geet - lekin main to sirf 2 months keliya hi idhar hoon
phir pata nahi aap se kab miloon ghi
maan - chup bikul chup .... khabardar jo phir se mujhe choodkar jaane ki
baat ki
closing her lips with his yarning, craving for her ..crying for being with her


uske hothone aaj kuch kehna chaha
rooh se rooh tak aah punchana chaha
jhuki hui palako ko jab woh samjhna chaha
thaam ke usko apni baahon mein bharna chaha
uski tez saanson ne na jaane kya kaha
Maan ki dhadkan ne uske dil mein dhadkan chaha
yeh kaisa jazbaa tha, yeh kaisa toofan tha
Maan ke rooh ne uske rooh mein utarna chaha!!!!
precap
Darji's reply to daadi's proposal!!!!..ok I want a poll....
wat do u guys suggest..what should darji say????
just type yes or no in the beginning of ur comments please....
LINK TO NEXT PART 39
thanxs a lot for such a warm welcome to thread #3 thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
res
*edit*
Poll: YES
Nice updatee!
Sadaf😃
Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Hey Di!!

He should say....NO
Though I badly want a YES but NO
Brij is correct,they're good people and shouldn't be cheated...Maan should find out about his baby first and then marry her.
Thanks for the lovely update!
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
congratualations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! continue ur writting
it's really very very nice
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

yes

but i wnt maan 2 knw his child
is growin in geets womb
i dont want any insult 2 come on geet name
and 2 keep their love pure and heart warmin
dont knw hw brij is goin 2 react when he
finds out abt maneet and their unborn child
grt update and once again congo for
ur new thread
Edited by dreaminvincible - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
lovely update di and the answer will be YES............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

let them agree 4 the proposal

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
res
read before the PM 😊
darji should say NO
really want them to say yes but maan should first come to hnow about geet's preg by geet ONLY and no one else
btw the update was superb and the nurses 😆
cont soon
love
Noor
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
owsme update plz darji should say yes to the proposal plz plz

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