Rishtay FF on sajan

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Now a days there is no romantic seen on sajan in mjht so I think that I write a FF on sajan away from current tract. This is story after the leap of four years.

CHARACTERS:

1: Gunjan Bhushan.

2: Samrat Shergill

3: Mayank Sharma

4: Nupur Bhushan Sharma

Side Characters:

1: Diya Bhushan

2: Uday Bhushan

Part1:

A very pretty girl wearing a red coloured saree. Her half hair is tied while the rest of hair is open. Her eyes look very attractive. She holds the hand of a 3 years of child. They both are in the shopping mall.

Child: Choti maa mujhay buhat saray toys chaheay.

Gunjan: o.k Beta tumhain jo pasand hai lay lo.

Child: Choti maa mujhay aeroplane chaheay woh wala.

Gunjan: Beta woh aeroplane buhat bara hai aur tum abhi buhat chotay ho , I promise You mei tumhari next birthday par tumhain yeh plane zaroor dilwaun ge.

Child: o.k Choti maa.

Gunjan : Ice- Cream Khao gay.

Child: Nodded his head.

Gunjan : Chalo .

In the Ice cream shop.

Waiter: Mam order please

Gunjan: Two cups ice cream one strawberry flavour and another mango flavour .

Waiter: O.k mam.

They both eating Ice cream. Suddenly the child cried

Child: Choti Maa Papa.

Gunjan: Kahan.

Child: Pointed a man he faced on another side.

Gunjan: Woh papa nahi hai. Chalo apni ice cream kahatam karo.

Child: mujhay papa k pass jana hai

Gunjan: Thek hai humShopping k bad papa k pass chalen gay o.k

Again the child shout papa papa and run after him. Gunjan also walked after him. He caught that man when he turned He was mayank Sharma.

Gunjan: Mayank tum yahan.

Mayank: Yes kuch zaroori chezein layni the. Wahi laynay aaya hun.

Gunjan: Di kahan hai.

Mayank: Don't worry Gunjan woh apni friends k sath bahir gai hai.

Gunjan: o.k mei toh dar gai the k kahin di tumharay sath na ho. Agar di yahan hoti toh mujhay dekh k definitely hangama shru kar dayti.

Mayank: Nupur yahan who toh apni doston k sath party mei gai the toh yahan kiya kar rhe hai.

Gunjan:( Pov) Oh God di yahan kaisay , agar di nay mujhay Mayank k sath dekh liya toh na janay kiya hoga.

Mayank: Gunjan is say pehlay nupur humain phir say ek sath dekhay tum veer ko lay k yahan say jao.

Gunjan: Ha mujhay di k aanay say pehlay jana hoga. Chalo veer.

Child: Nahi Choti maa mujhay papa ka pass rehna hai.

Gunjan: nahi beta tum sham ko papa say mila layna jab papa ghar aaen gay toh.

Gunjan to Mayank: Tum sham ko ghar aa rhay ho na.

Mayank: Ha aaun ga veer ko jo lay k jana hai.

Gunjan: Di say kiya kaho gay.

Mayank : Kuch bhi kah dunga.

Gunjan: O.k Bye Sham ko miltay hai.

Gunjan was left but she strikes with nupur.

Nupur: Gunjan toh yahan .

Gunjan: (Hide the child behind the table) Di kuch nahi apnay liay kuch kapray laynay aai the. Di tum yahan kaisay……………..

Nupur: Friends k sath aai hun

Gunjan: O.k Di I think I leave.

Nupur: o.k Bye Gunjan.

Gunjan: Bye di.

When nupur left, she hold the hand of veer and come home.

Nupur: Mayank tum bhi yahan, ohhhhhhhhh ab mei samjhi k Gunjan yahan kiya kar rhe the tum yahan Gunjan say milnay aaey thay na agar milna hi that oh kah diya hota yun chup chup k milnay ki kiya zarorat hai.

Mayank: Tum kiya kah rhe ho mujhay kuch samjh mei nahi aa rha hai.

Nupur: Magar mujhay sab samjh mei aa rha hai k tum veer aur gunjan meray peth pechay miltay ho.

Mayank: Nupur tum ghalat samjh rhe ho. Gunjan kahan say aa gai bech mei , mei kyun milun ga us say woh bhi tab jab tum nay mujhay aur veer ko us say milnay say mana kiya hai.

Nupur: Tums ach kah rhay ho.

Mayank: By God Nupur mei sach kah rha hun mei toh yahan tumharay liay gift laynay aaya tha.

Nupur: Sorry Mayank mei bhi na bina sochay samjhay kuch bhi bool dayti hun.

Mayank: pata nahi tumhari ye insecurity kab khatam hoge. Wo tumhari behan hai koi dushman nahi hai

Nupur: But I feel jealous from her. K kahin wo khushyan jo mujhay Gunjan say milen hai kahin wo usay mujh say wapis na cheen lay.

Mayank: Apni behan par itna bhi bharosa nahi raha

Nupur: Hai magar kiya karun har pal ek dar sa laga rehta hai.

Mayank: Apni behan par trust karo us behan par jis nay apni khushyun say pehlay tumhari khushyan chahen wo kaisy cheen lay ge

tum say tumhara sab kuch.

Nupur: I think soo.

IN EVENING:

VEER: choti maa papa kab aaen gay.

Gunjan: Bete tumhatray papa bhi pata nahi kahan rah gay kaha tha k sham ko jaldi aaen gay, kabhi nahi sudhray ga.

Gunjan: Mayank bhi abhi tak nahi aaya kaha tha k sham ko aaey ga.

A bell rang.

Gunjan: Mayank aaya hoga.

She open the door.

Gunjan: Tum aa gay

Mayank: Ha

Gunjan : andar nahi aao gay

Mayank: Nahi nupur say kah k aaya hun k zarori kam say bahir jar ha hun adhay ghantay mei aa jaun ga. Veer kahan hai jaldi usay jaldi bulao mujhay dyr ho rhe hai

Gunjan: Di nay veer k baray mei kuch nahi pocha k veer kahan hai.

Mayank : Nahi pochay gi toh tab jab wo ghar jaey ge mei usay diya k pass chor k aaya hun.

Gunjan: o.k please mayank mujhay yun chup chup k milna aacha nahi lagta please tum di ko samjaho k mei uski khushyun ki dushman nahi hun.

Mayank: Janta hun mei usay samjhaun ga Don't worry sab thek ho jaey ga. Acha ab mei chalta hun warna tumhari di……Chalo veer beta

Gunjan: ok bye mayank bye beta.

VEER: Bye choti maa.

Veer kiss on Gumjan cheeks and say love you choti maa.

Gunjan : Love you too beta.

After few hours

Gunjan in her home:

Gunjan : Aa gay tum khana table rakha hai kha layna.

This is the part one of my FF . I hope you like this please leave your comments if you like. The next part open the suspence so please read the next part. I update the next part as soon as possible

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice ff
but m really confused
plese contine soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey nice update..Can you please give a character sketch or a concept so we can understand the story better...Its just a suggestion..Don't take it wrong..Please continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yup can u pls givea character sketch coz its qutie confusing

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nice ff yaa..plz do update soon...
and send me a pm..😊
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nice ff........little confusing...
do continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start but very confusing
it seems interesting
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for liking it but it is a suspence as i told you

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjiJ

Thanks for liking it but it is a suspence as i told you

is veer gunjan's son..........i think nupur can't become a mother hence gunjan gives her kid to nupur.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART:2

Gunjan was sitting in a dark room she heared someone is there.

She said that person.

Gunjan: Aa gay tum Khana table par rakha hai kha layna.

Stranger: Naraz ho mujh say.

Gunjan: ha.

Stranger: Sorry, mei nay tum say promise kiya tha par kiya karun dyar ho gai I am very sorry.

Gunjan: mujhay har baar tumhari safai nahi chaheay, yeh sirf aaj ki baat nahi hai tum hamesha aaisa hi kartay ho, aur ghalti kar k sorry kehna tumhari purani aadat hai.

Stranger: Ek baar meri baat toh suno

Gunjan: nahi sunni mujhay tumhari koi baat.

He sits beside her and take her hand on his hand.

Stranger: sunni toh paray gi ap ko meri baat. Mei jata hun ap nay mujhay jaldi kyun ghar aanay ko kaha tha. Veer aaya tha na aur mei us say mil chukka hun mayank say meri mulaqat hoi the infact mei usi k sath tha

Gunjan: oh really Mr. Samrat shergill

Samrat: Really Mrs Samrat Shergill yaqeen nahi hai mujh par toh tum khud hi mayank ko phone kar k poch lo.

Gunjan: o.k jao khana thanda ho rha hai kha lo.

Samrat: Tum nay khana kha liya

Gunjan: nahi.

Samrat: I know that k meri wife meray bina khana nahi kha sakti.

Gunjan: wrong mei nay khana kha liya hai.

Samrat: ab jhoot bolnay say koi faida nahi, tum jab bhi jhoot bolti ho pakri jati ho.

Gunjan: batein bad mei ab chalo bhi samrat.

They are at the dinning table.

Samrat stares gunjan.

Gunjan: Bethay kyun ho khana khao.

Samrat: nahi.

Gunjan: kyun nahi

Samrat: itni smart mat bano tum janti ho phir bhi.

Gunjan: janti hun khao khana

Samrat: janti ho toh phir mujhay khana khilao na apnay hatho say. Tumhain pata hai k mei daily tumharay hatho say hi khana khata hun.

Gunjan: khud khao.

Samrat: o.k but meri ek shart hai

Gunjan: kaisi shart.

Samrat: k aaj say mei apnay hatho say tumhain khilaun ga.

Gunjan: no

Samrat: yes

Gunjan: o.k

He puts a little piece of bread on her mouth.

Gunjan: samrat tum kiya sari zindagi aaisay hi mujhay khilao gay.

Samrat: Ha aakhri saans tak.

Gunjan: humaray bachay kiya sochein gay humaray baray mei.

Samrat: yahi k un k mom dad abhi bhi ek dosray say itna pyar kartay hain. Gunjan cupped his faced and going to kiss him but they heared the voice a child crying.

Samrat: yeh bhi na isay bhi abhi tang karma tha. Gunjan I seriously told you k yeh ab humain romance bhi nahi karnay day ga. Humesha yeh hum dono k beech aa jata hai. Tum isay bardast kaisay karti ho sara din I mean ghar k kam k sath isay kaisay sambhalti ho.

Gunjan: sab manage ho jati hai. Wait mei aati hun

Samrat: mat jao pehlay khana khao

Gunjan: nahi samrat he was crying wait bus do mint mei aati hun.

Samrat caught her hand.

Gunjan: samrat mera hath choro.

Samrat: Gunjan choro usay wo khud hi roo k chup ho jaey ga. Tum yahen betho meray pass.

Gunjan: magar samrat wo

He placed his hand on his lips.

Samrat : nahi gunjan tum nahi ja sakti.

Gunjan: kyun.

Samrat: ye time tum meray sath expand karo ge, tum sara din toh us k sath rehti ho na.

Gunjan: Samrat please.

Samrat: o.k jao.

Gunjan went to her bedroom.

Samrat talk to himself.

Yeh larka bhi jab say aaya hai meri chashmish nay meray sath time expand karma kam kar diya hai.

At night,

Gunjan was holding her one month child.

And Lori with her sweet and lovely voice while samrat is sleeping uncomfortably. He place a pillow on his ear.

Gunjan told her child: please beta soo jao

Samrat: yes my little sam soo jao mama ko tang mat karo.

Gunjan: tum aur tumharay papa bilkul ek jaisay ho na hi who mujhay sakoon say sonay dayta hai aur na tum. Aur apnay papa ko dekho kitnay bayfikar ho k soo rhay hai, yeh nahi k mama k help karen

Samrat: ohh really chashmish tumhain meri company chaheay. I am always ready

He got out from his bed and hold gunjan tightly from back and kissed gunjan on her cheeks.

Gunjan: samrat tumhara beta kafi nahi tha jot um bhi aa gay mujhay tang karnay.

Samrat: nahi chashmish mei tumhari help karnay aaya hun seriously.

Gunjan: help karnay aaey ho

He nodded his head yes.

Gunjan: well tum sameer ko sambhalo mei chali sonay

Samrat: magar chashmish

Gunjan: good night samrat.

Samrat hold the child.

Soo ja beta soo ja. The child cried loudly

Samrat: yeh lo chashmish tum hi isay sambhalo mei tumhain dekhun ga.

Gunjan: Lao isay mujhay do aur tum ja k soo jao.

Samrat: nahi mei nahi sooun ga. Wow chashmish ye tumhari goad mei aatay hi chup ho gaya well done chashmish.

Gunjan: aakhir beta kis ka hai

Samrat : mera

Gunjan: yeh soo gaya chalo ab hum bhi soo jatay hai.

She placed the child on the swing.

Gunjan: good night samrat.

Samrat kissed her on her forhead and say her good night.

Samrat and gunjan on their bed , gunjan placed her head on samrat chest and samrat hold her tightly and they both slept

This all is part two I hope you like it I try to update soon

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