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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the encouragement guys. Just need quite a lot of it

Chapter-3

Maan was shell shocked. What was Geet saying. Maan's grip loosened. Geet was still very disturbed, She did not realize Maan's reactions. The room has brought back all the feeling she had kept hidden deep inside. She started shouting, " isse kamre mein us admi nein muche jeevan bar ka saath deine ka vaada kiya tha. Har ek ladki ki tharah meine be sapne sajayi thi. Jab saath thene ka irada nahin tha , thab muche chune ka haq kisne diya tha…. Usko dosh dekar kya faida. Mere parivaar walon ko jaldi dhi mere shaadi karvane mein. 18 saal ki ladki ki shaadi karna sabse eham kaam thi unko. Bas kisi ne apne aap ko Canada wala bol dhiya in logon ne maan bhi liya. Bas chahte thei ki ladki ka bidai jalsi kar de. Ek bar jaanne ki koshih nahin ki ki who sach bol rahan hein ya joot. Unko kya dosh doon. Galti merei dhi. Meine chupkese unke bath mani. Apne aap ko samja liya ki geet yahin tumhari zindagi hein. Ek baar bhi nahin pucha ki uska passport kahan hein, papers kahan hein. Itni budhu thi ki jab uski babhi ne muche kora kagaz mein sign karne ko bola meina kushi kushi kar bhi liya, yeh sochke ki yeah mere Canada ke papers banana wale they. Ruko bahi kahan se thi who. Who mere hone wala paati ki patni thi. Pati aur patni ne mere poore parivar ko Canada NRI bolkar dokha dekhar muchse rishta banaya. Jaldi vapas lotna hein bolkar apne pati ka shadi muchse karvayi. Who bhi koi papers keh bina, koi baharvalon ke bina. Aur hum bhi paagal they, soch liya ki sindoor aur mangalsutr sey shaadi ban jaata hein. Who yahin lekar aaya tha. Bol raha dha ki rath keliye ruk jathe hein, subah airport jayenge. Mere gahene uttarvaya tha. Sambhal ke rakne vala tha. Gahne le liya, zamein hadap liye… par usko kafi nahin tha, Usko apni nayi patni ki sharer ki zaroorat dhi. Tho who bi usne le liya. Aur mein sochte rahi ki mere pati hein yeh. Sab kuch hone ke baad subah airport mein mere coffee mein neendh ki goli dal kar, pati aur patni muche wahin chodkar bag gaye. Kitna doonda meine usko, Airport waloon ne bola ki who Canada flight mein nahin tha, phir bhi meine nahin mana, Unhone muche shak karke jail mein dala, tha be muche ehsaas nahin hooa ki unhone muche doka diya tha. Mere parivaar wale muche vapas lekar aiye aur unhona puch thach karke bola tha ke meri shaadi ek dong thi. Thab bi meine nahin mana. Socha yeh sab kuch ek galat faimi thi. Jab mene aap ke hath mein mere zameen ke kagezad dekha tha thab ehsaas hui ki mere sath kitna bada dokha hua hein. Mere parivaar walon ne muche kuwari jaise kapde pahne ko bol diya….. par who raat is kamre mein jo hua uske anjam tho bahar aa hin gaya. Bina shaadi mein ma ban gayi. Aur mere parivaar walon kisi bath ki parvah nahin thi. Unko sirf apni parivaar ki man mariyadha ka phikr tha. Bas bol thiya ki bacha gira tho. Unhone bola shaadi karo meine kiya, bola suhaag ke nishani mitao, meine kiya par apne bache ko kaise girao, joota shaadi hein sahi, bacha tho merah bhi hein naa. Kuch nahin kar paye tho unhone phaisla kar diya ki who muche maar dein. Bus mere 18 saal ka unke saath zidagi ka koi maina nahin tha."

Maan did not know what to say. It was too much to understand. Geet was duped to marriage and robbed and thrown off like apiece of garbage by someone. Geet whom he loved to every bit, Geet who made his day was treated by some hypocrite badly. And to top it all she was pregnant……what was to be done??

Next Chapter: Maan's reaction
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Wow thats soooooooooooooooooooooooooo touching
Loved the way u made Geet narrate her story to Maan
Waiting for Maan's reaction
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb update!! Can't wait to see maan's reaction!! Pls cont.soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
wow incredible what 's gona happen next? update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lol new chapter

Chapter-4

Maan called Geet. Geet looked at him. The man she loved so much. His eyes were shocked and confused. She felt bad to have put him in this state. He did not deserve it. Maan called her again. Geet looked at him with tears in her eyes and said," sorry Maan sir. Mein aapko apni kadvi athith kabhi bhi nahin bathane chahti thi. Par mahol aisa ho gay ki batana hi pada. Isi liya meina aapko mana kiya tha paas aane se. aapko mein gham ke siva auy kuch bhi nahin de sakthi hoon".

Maan looked at Geet with tears in his eyes. Even now she felt for his pain than her. She stood there with a horrifying history and uncertain future and even then she could worry about him. What was this girl made of. How can she love him so much. All confusions cleared in his mind. He was with Geet till now. He will be always there for her in future. He said to Geet," Geet job hi hua usme tumhari galti kuch bhi nahin tha. Un logon ne tumhare bolepan ka faida utaya hein". Geet replied with tears in her eyes," nafrat hein muche merae bola pan se sir. Agar itni boli nahin hoti tho yeh din dekhna nahin padta. Sabhi ko apni zindagi ki faisla leneki adikaar dekhar apna zindagi kud barbadh kar dhi."

Maan said geet, " nahin geet aise mat bholo. Aaj tum apni pai mein kadi ho. Tumhare sare faisle kudh le rahi ho".

Geet said," kash meinne thabi yeh kiya hota. Jo kadam meine apne bache keliye liya who apne litye lethi. Meine bache ko is duniya mein lane ki faisla tho kar liya. Par abh bhi muche andaaz nahin khi kaise sambaloonge mein use. Jab log mere pet dekhenge tho kya bolungi main? Agar mere bache ke baap ke bare mein pooche tho kya javab doongi.? Koun vishvas karega yeh sab. Aur mein apne aap ko kuwari bolungi tho log kya bolenge. Mera chodiya…. Mere bolapan ki vajay se mere bache ko in sare sawalon samna apni poora zindagi karma padege. Woh yeh sab kaise sahega. Nahin Maan sir, muche apna bolepan ka koi garv nahin hein. Kash mein aapke bbat pehle hein maan lete. Apne peiro mein mein pehlese kadi hoti. Par agar mere nasib mein babaji ne yahi lika thaa tho kaun kya kar saktha". Geet was lost in thought uncertain about her future. She knew that she had to face the truth one day. Answer all questions. She did not know how she will do it.

Time always came to a standstill for Maan when he was Geet. It did come today too. Geet's horrifying past stood before him. He knew geet was lost worrying about her future. He went near Geet and said," Geet meine hamesha tumse pyaar kiya da, aur hamesha karunga. Geet aaj se tumhara aathith, tumhara bavishya aur tumhara bacha mera hein". Geet was shocked. She opened her mouth but Maan closed her mouth with his hand and said, " chup. Bilkul chup. Mein janta hoon thum kya kehna chathe ho. Geet yeh sab mein tumhare liye nahin kar raha hoon. Tum mere jaan ho. Aur tumhara kayal rakna mere liye apne kayal karne ka saman hein. Kuch mat bholo Geet apne aap ko much se door mat karo. Tum meri ho, yeh bacha mera hein. Ek baar mera bath maan lo Geet. Meine tumhare ankon mein mere liye pyaar dekha hein. Muche apna lo geet". Maan was pleading geet. Geet looked at him with tears. She always knew that he will say this. She knew that he will not desert her. She ran from him because she did not want himto carry her cross. But his unwavering commitment shook her. Geet Hugged him and cried. They stood like that for along time. Geet cried her heart out. Maan comforted her. He said Geet, " itna math ro geet. Humare bache keliye acha nahin hein yeh". Geet looked at him and asked," Hum dadima kho kya bolenge?". Maan smiled and said though thum Mrs,. Maan Singh Khuranna banne keliye thayar ho. Geet looked at him and said Please Maan sir, mera matlab woh nahin tha. Aapko iske bare mere mein sochke faisla leina padega. Maan looked at her intensly and said,"Mere faisla tho ban gaya get aur mein tumhare faisla ka indazaar karunga. Geet raat bahut ho gayi. Chalo chal kar soothe hein". Geet hesitated to go back to that room. Maan said " apne athith ko apni zindagi control karne ki shakthi math do. Mein hoon na tumhare saath". Geet looked at Maan's eyes. She agreed to go with him. The room did not scare her anymore. Maan was there with her now.

Next Chapter: trouble continues

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey thats mindblowing

U expressed their love so beautifully
Loved every single line
Ur amazing
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
just read the 3 and 4 th chapter...
it's really wonderful....
i just love it...
pls update soon... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update!! Loved it!!
Can't wait for next part!!
Pls cont.soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
wow..im speechless!!
their love is sooo strong!!
i have no words to descibe how beautifuly u have written this('',)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Marking this as discontinued in the Geet Media Centre ... if you decide to re-start then please drop me a PM.😊

Geet Dev. Team.


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