-truly magical- Maaneet thread 1

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reea88

@reea88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

YAAR, GEET NE MAAN KI SAMNE CHANGE KIYA.. BRAVE GIRL.. AAP KYA KAREGE..DO CON'T..

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amreenshameem

@amreenshameem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

mind blowing di.........wow,nice ff..........do continue👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

-truly magical-
part 4

maan walks in anger & slams the door of his side & starts the car
she jumps in front of the car and pretends to fall down.. maan comes out in anger
she runs to the rear tyre & removes air making it flat... before
maan could reach her, maan holds her back she goes to the other tyre
maan - yeh kya kar rahee ho tum..geet stop it
geet - mujhe yanha chod ke aap kaise jaa sakthe hain
maan - stop it stop it!!! ok ok !! i will drop u
geet pats the dust away from her hand & says thats better
maan removes his coat & throws it inside...he opens his shirt buttons

geet - drop karne ko kha tha strip tease nahi
maan stared at her & stopped at the 4th button of his black shirt
geet - tum ladhkoon ko expose karne ka bhana chahia
maan - expose kane ke bare main tum kuch na hi bolo to aacha hain
geet was little taken a back thinking about her changing in the car
maan pulled his sleevs & opens the dicky to removes the spare tyre
geet picks the screw jack
maan - its ok I will manage
geet - kyun aap ko lagtha hain I can't help
I can change the car wheel in less than 10mins
maan gave up & let her help ..she placed the screw jack & turned it to
lift the car..maan unscrewed the nuts & placed the other tyer
geet - u should be thankfull to me that I did'nt flat ur front tyers
maan glared at her
geet - front wheel main u would have had to fix the brake pads too,
while replacing wheel
maan lifted his eyebrows & said - thanxs!!! how thoughtfull of u
geet - thats better..lekin has kehthe to aacha hota!!!
geet rolled the flat wheel to the dicky she found it difficult to lift it
maan helped her..she wiped her face with those dirty hand & messed up
her cheeks..maan gave his hanky to wipe her face.
geet - u actually carry hanky..that is so sweet
maan wondered wat was so sweet about carrying a hanky !!she wiped her hand & gave it back
geet - well it is not white any more...waise I could have cleaned it & given it back
but they say kisi ka hanky rakhne say fight hota hain
he pointed at her cheeks..she narrowed her eyebrows with his hand moving
close to her face. she pulled back
maan turned away - tumhare cheeks main grease laga hain
geet sat in the car & turned the rear mirror to wipe her cheeks
geet - aab challen
maan - tum car kyun change kar rahee thi?
geet - u definitly don't expect me to wear a saree to the disc
maan - u could have changed in the changing room
geet - Geet ke koi reputation hain...kisine Geet ko saree main deehk liya to
no ways!!! I have always changed in the car

..she tied up her hair with a clip & wiped her lips stick looking into the rare view
mirror..turning it again to her side maan corrected the mirror yet again
geet turned it again to pull out her earings & left over make up
geet - agar prem ne mujhe aise dehk liya to mujhe chidha chidha ke mar dalegha
maan smiles under his closed lips ...still maintaining a stirn look

maan turned the ignition of the car & suddenly cops car stops them from behind
geet - oye teri!!
maan - kya huwa?
geet - cops
maan - mera paas license hain
geet - nahi woo baath nai hain..please challoo yanha se...if they see me here...meri band baghejayeeghi yeh loog papa ko bol denghe!!! i should'nt have come with u at the first place
maan steps out & speaks to the cops, suddenly media persons pounce at him
maan calms every one down & sorts the situation
cop - licence please
maan shows the licence in attitude
cop reads his name loud - Maan Singh Khurana!! why have u stopped the car hear..
looking at his shirt open & unkeptand giving a sheepish smile
maan - we had a flat tyre
cop tried to peep into the car..maan stopped him by extending his hand
& gave a stirn look..friend hain
cop - teehk hain teehk hain..jaldhi ghadi yanha se inkaliya
maan - umm!!
walked back to the car wondering why he was here at the first place!!
geet - u paid them oh wat? unware of wat exactly happened
maan maintained a stirn look
geet - tum itne bhi seedhe nahi ho jithne dihkathe hoo
maan preffered not to answere her
geet - lekin itna shoor kyun tha?
waise thanxs for not letting the cop see me
maan still maintained a stirn look driving to the disc
geet - waise aap utne bhi Mr.bachan bachan nahi ho
maan - tum mujhe Mr.bachan kyun bulathi rahethi hoo
geet - angry young man jo laagthe hoo..naam to suna hoga haan!! she imitates amitabh!!
maan smiles
geet takes her black blackberry & clicks a pic
maan - wat are u doing
kodak momement!!! MR.bachan smiling!!!& shows him the pic
geet - agar yeh pic maine media mein doonghi to mujhe iske aache khase pasie milenghe
maan - tum saach main pagal hoo
geet - aur tum kya hoo? maha pagal!!
maan - GEET!!!
geet - itna attitude mat dikhawa mujhe..main aapke girl friend nahi hoon
maan looks into her eyes agar hoti to attitude dikha saktha hoon?
geet - fir to haaq bantha hain na..she promptly replies
maan - to banjavoo meri girl friend..that was so random
geet - so u need me to to be ur girl friend so that u can show me ur attitude
wah wah !! mr bachan sirf tum hi aise kisi ladhki ko propose kar sakthe hoo
please saach main aise kisi ko propose mat karna..joothe mardeghi
maan - hum aisi ghustaaki sirf aapke saath kar saakthe hain..
aur kisi ko kuch bolne ki hume fursat khanha

she was almost lost in those words & looks...muskan felt kois bhi ko jaya is baath pe...woo bhi if it is coming from Maan singh Khurana!!!☺️ but yeh to GEET hain...
geet - don't u think yeh sab kuch jayadha horaha hain
maan - kya sab?? making an innocent face
geet - are u really so innocent or u trying to fool me
maan - wat is the point fooling u ?
geet - wat do u mean?
maan - wats the point fooling a persong who is already a fool
geet rolls her eyes & looks away

geet calls prem - i am reaching in
she looks at maan ...maan - 30mins
geet - 30mins & cuts the call
she makes another call to armaan - yaar tu ne ridhima ko invite kiya ?
& starts laughing..closes the receiver & tells maan armaan ki love intrest hain
he is so scared to tell her...& giggles
armaan - to kise se baath kar rahe hain
geet - Mr. bachan se
she went on explainig how she met him again in the party
maan was ammused by how much she can talk!!

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that endless call!!!! still wondering😲

NEXT PART 5

thanxs for all the replies & posts...love ur support..hope u like this update too...

please please do comment really motivates me

love

muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Jennifer

@BadGirlKiss

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

Cool update.
Ty. Update soon
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Edited by jennifer111 - 14 years ago

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Nice update! Geet is so adorable.

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Noor Fatima

@NoorFatima

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

res

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read the update before your PM 😃

awsome update

looks like geet goes out without telling her dad very often that even the police tells her whereabouts to her dad 😆

loved it

update soon

love

Noor

Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

That was really good......,plz update soon

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

muski!
awesome update
lol she actually flattened d tyres....
finally they goin together
n luved it when maan removed his coat n opened d buttons...i wz lyk uhhh.h.....fab!
luv him!
n his dialogue......lyk mr.bachan wz fab
n looks like geet is gnna talk endlessly again....so typically geet!
lol
update wz real gud....maneet momnets
n btw not to foret i luved it when she clicked his piv n said kodak moments!mr.bachan smiling!
lol.........
update asap!

luv
Navpreet