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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey frnds i am starting a new ff for saathiya saath nibhana😊.. hope u all will like it... I will be waiting for your comments my frnds

PART-1

Well kahani shuru hoti hai jab navratri ki pooja mey gopi ko kisi bi kaam ko karney ke liye maana kiya jaata hai..

Modi pariwar ke sabhi sabi log pooja kar rahey hai, sab ek ek karke maa durga ki pooja kartey hai.. Sirf ahem hi akela pooja karta hai, wahi dur se khadi gopi ahem ko akeley pooja kartey dekhti hai aur udaas😭 ho jaati hai aur gopi ka sad { BG} music shuru ho jaata hai.Gopi wapas apney kamrey mey chali jaathi hai. Ahem aur kokila gopi ko jaatey dekhtey hai.Ahem gopi ko thodi der ke liye dekhta hai.. Kokila raashi ko agaley din ki pooja ke liye saari tayari karney ke liye kehti hai. Rashi says" Ji kaki ji mey sab kar lungi, aap chinta mat kijye". Kokila stares 😡at rashi and went off..

Wahi Kinjal umag se phone pe kehti hai " dekho umag baat hadh sey aagey badh gayi hai meri shaadi teh ho chuki hai, ab tumhey jaldi kuch karna hoga" Umag says " kinjal tum chinta mat karo sab theek ho jayega, hum zarur kuch na kuch raasta nikaal le lengey". Tabhi kokila😡 waha aa jati hai ur kehti hai kinjal "aiya yaha aao shu chey, ph par kis sey baat kar rahi thi. kinjal 😕 says" kisi se bi toh nahi maa, woh woh maa wrong number tha" kokila says ok.

Achank kafi tej baarish shuru ho jaati hai aur anjaana anjani ka track (tujhe bhula ke) chalney lagta hai. Ahem window ke bahar khada hota hai aur anita ko yaad kar raaha 😔 hota hai wahi gopi bi apney bed par leti hoti hai aur ahem ke baarey mey soch rahi hoti aur yaad karti hai ki ahem se uski shaadi kaisey hui aur ahem uske saath khush nahi hai. Woh apney aap se kehti hai " hey kanha ji kya ahem ji mujhe isliye pasand nahi kartey kyunki mey padi likhi nahi hu..mey unke saath uthney baithney ke layak nahi hu. meri wajah se sab dukhi hai.. kanaha ji aap meri itni pariksha kyu le rahey hai..😭 Phir gopi achank khadi hoti hai apney aansu pohchti hai ur kehti hai " bas bahut ho gaya ab mey aur bardashat nahi kar sakti kanha ji, mey kisi ke pyar ke layak nahi hu, agar mey nahi rahungi toh sab khush rahegey"

SO 1ST PART END HERE.....

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Posted: 15 years ago

oh don't tell me she's going to commit suicide😲....

keep up the good work😊.......

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Posted: 15 years ago

Please Update all your FF parts in a Single thread instead of opening a new thread for every new part.
It will be easy for all the readers to keep track of complete FF at one place only. Help in keeping the forum uncultured.

All the other posts except first post regarding new ff tuney jo na kaha... will be closed.
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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey frnds i am back with next part- please this is a request that plz give your comments after reading story.. I am new to forums i need ur support frnds..

Recap: Gopi is sad and wants to leave everything bec no one is happy with her..

Subah subah modi pariwar maa durga ki pratima ke saamney apney ghar aur paariwar ki khushi ki dua maangtey hai.Ahem ko achank se phone aata hai aur woh kokila sey kehta hai" maa mujhe office jaana hai zaruri kaam aa gaya hai". Kokila kehti hai theek hai ahem dikra tum office jao mey mani se kehkar tumara tiffin office bhijwa dungi, par ha dikra shaam ko ghar jaldi aa jaana aaj ghar pe garba ka function hai". Ahem says" ji maa aa jaunga,JAI SHRI KRISHAN MAA".

Udhar gopi rasoi mey jaati hai aur hetal se kehti hai" Kaki mey kuch madat kar du". Hetal says " Gopi bahu tum janti ho na beta kokila ney kya kaha hai tumhey, yeh sab pooja aur garbey ki tayri chal rahi hai". Gopi soch😔 mey padh jaati hai. Hetal says " dekho gopi beta mey jaanti hu ki tum bahut dukhi ho, aur is pooja mey shamil hona chahti ho, hum sab yahi chahtey hai. lakin beta abhi kuch aisa mat karo jisey kokila ka gusa badh jaye aur ghar ki shanti bigad jaye. Mey kokila se baat karungi dekhana sab theek ho jayega. She hugs gopi😛..

Rashi apney kamrey ki almari mey kapdo ko dekh rahi hoti hai aur phir apney aap se kehti hai " hey bhagwan merey pas toh naye kapdey hai hi nahi, ab kya hoga.😊 ha ek kaam karti hu mumy ko ph karti hu. Phone bajta hai. Urmi ( rashi mom) picks the phone says" hello mumy kaisi hai aap", urmi says " ek dam maja mey tu kaisi hai meri dikri". Rashi says "mumy aaj shaam ko garba hai aur merey pas nahi kapdey nahi hai ab mey kya karu". Urmi says " aey chokri ab tu modi pariwar ki bahu hai, apney pati ko bol tujhe naye kapdey laakar dega". Rashi says" Par mumy aap toh jantey hai jigar ji fizul kharcha nahi kartey". Abhi mey kya karu. Tabhi Kokila calls rashi and rashi hangs the ph and run.

Next Day: kokila is very very angry on kinjal and slaps her.

Part-3

Kinjal phone par umaang ko kehti hai "aaj sahi mauka hai humarey pass yaha se bhag chalney ka" Umaang kehta hai " theek hai, mere pass ek plan hai" Suddenly sound go off.

Sham ko ahem ghar aata hai aur ghar ki sazwat dekhta hai. Kokila kehti hai "aa gaye ahem dikra".Ahem says"ji maa". Kokila says" jao beta mu hath dokhar tayar ho jao". Ahem goes in his room. He takes bath and comes out.

He puts sherwani but yeh kya sherwani ka ek button tut jaat hai. Ahem see this and calls his mother. Lakin koi nahi sunta, tabhi gopi waha se ja rahi hoti hai woh ahem ki awaaz sunti hai aur waha aa jati hai. Ahem ke haath mey button dekti hai aur kehti hai" Ji mey laga du". Ahem sees gopi.His eyes gets stuck on her She wears blue sari with silver embodiary on it. Awsome😆. Gopi sui aur dhaaga laati hai aur button lagana shuru kar deti hai. Ahem bas gopi ko hi dekh raha hai. Gopi ko thoda ajeeb sa mehsus hota hai.Gopi seer thoda sa uper uthati hai and sees ahem is so close to him, BG music starts again.. Gopi button laga deti aur jaaney lagti hai. To uska saari ka palu ahem ki gadi mey phas jaata hai. Gopi clsoes her eyes😃. Ahem see this and tries to remove palu from his watch. Aur tabhi light chali jaati hai gopi 😍 dar ke maarey aur BG music starts ahem ho hug kar leti hai Ahem gopi ko hug kar leta hai. Aur thodi der usi postion mey rehtey hai. Tabhi light aa jati hai aur ahem gopi ko chodh deta hai. Gopi runs away.

Pooja ke baad garwa shuru ho jaata hai aur san garwa khel rahey hotey hai. Sab khush hai bas ahem thoda khoya khoya rehta hai ( hmmm kya baat hai gopi ke pyar ka asar hai☺️) Tabhi achank se kinjal ka hath koi pakad leta hai aur kinjal pichey dekhti hai aur waha umaang hota hai. woh bhes badal kar aata hai..Kinjal is 😲 shocked to see him.

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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey frnds i am back

umaang kinjal se kehta hai ki " kya tum tayaar ho". Kinjal says " Yes". Tabhi woh log pichey ke darwaaze se jaaney lagtey hai aur gopi unhey waha se jaatey dekh leti hai. Aur kehti hai ki "kinjal behan aap kaha ja rahi hai yeh bag lekar aur yeh kaun hai aapke saath. Kinjal is shocked😲. Kinjal says' tumse matlab, mey jaha marzi jaau tumhey kya? Gopi says "Nahi kinjal behan mey toh woh bas". Kinjal stops her there and start brusting on her" Kya woh tum apney kaam se kaam kyu nahi rakhti ho.Kudh ki zindagi ka toh pata nahi hai aur mujhe keh rahi ho gopi bhabi. Lagta hai tum saarey pariwar ko dusro ke maamley mey dakhal deney ki aadat hai, pehaley woh tumari behan rashi aur ab tum. Gopi start crying😭.

Achank se kokila waha aa jati aur kinjal kokila ko aatey dekh leti hai aur rona shuru kar deta hai😭 (drama queen) aur kehti hai "gopi bhabi aap aisey kaisey ghar chodhkar ja sakti hai aakhir aap is ghar ki badi bahu hai".Gopi is shocked😲. Dekhiye na maa gopi bhabi ghar chodhkar ja raji hai is ladkey ke saath pata nahi kaun hai? jab mainey janey se roka, toh gopi bhabi kehney lagi "jab mera pati hi mujhe dikhaar ta hai toh mey yaha ruk kar kya karu". Kokila is shocked😲😡. Gopi says "Kinjal behan yeh aap kya keh rahi hai, mey toh janti bi nahi yeh kaun hai". She cries a lot.

Tabhi sab aa jatey hai aur ahem bi hetal says "yeh kaun hai". Jigar says " kaun ho tum aur yaha kya kar rahey ho". Kinjal says " yeh gopi bhabi ko yaha se lekar ja raha tha, mainey dekh liya toh lagi roney". Gopi says "yeh sach nahi hai, mujhe nahi pata yeh kaun hai". Kokila is silent and very much angry😡. Kokila goes to gopi and says" Gopi bahu kya yeh sach hai". Gopi says nothing. Kokila says loudly " gopi bahu ky ayeh sach hai". Gopi starts shivering says "no". Kokila goes to kinjal " Jo tum keh rahi ho kinjal woh sach hai"

Kinjal says "ji maa, mainey khudh gopi bhabi ko is admi ke sath jatey dekha hai". Achank sey kokila ki nazar bag pe padti hai and says " yeh bag mey kya hai". Kinjal sees this and shocked says "kuch bi toh nahi maa". Kokila says "kinjal dikhayo".Kokila opens the bag and sees kinjal clothes😲 and says😡 " kya yeh gopi bahu ke kapdey hai". Rashi smiles😊.Everyone is shocked.kinjal start looking here and there😕. Kokila 😡 says kinjal" bato mujhe kya yeh gopi bahu ke kapdey hai ki nahi". She gives a tight slap to kinjal. Everyone is shocked.............

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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 15 years ago

part-5

kinjal ko jaisey hi thapad padta hai waisey hi sab ek dam shock. Ahem gussey sey😡 gopi ke pass jaata hai aur kehta hao" tum kyu hum sabki zindagi ko uljaaney mey lagi hui ho, kya tum shanti se is ghar mey nahi reh sakti. aaj tumari sirf tumari wajah sey maa ne meri behan pe hath uthaya hai. Bolo tum kya chahti ho? Gopi starts crying😭 she says "mainey kuch nahi kiya bhagwan ke liye aisa ilzaam mat lagayi mujh pe". Kinjal 😡 says "band karo yeh drama gopi bhabi aakhir aapko meri aur meri maa ke bich deewar padh wakar kya mila? Gopi (BG sad music)😔. Gopi says "kinjal behan mey bhala aisa kyu karungi, mujhe kya milega aisa karkey. Ahem comes angrily😡 says " nikal jao is ghar sey hamesha ke liye, aur kabhi wapas mat aana humari zindagi mey". Kokila says" yeh tum kya keh rahey ho ahem beta, gopi tumari patni hai dikra". Ahem says" bas mom bas kijye ab isey jayada aur bardashat nahi kar sakta mey aakhir aappney aaj tak jaisa kaha mainey waisa kiya aur aagey bi karunga. lakin mey is gawar ke saath nahi reh sakta.

Gopi is crying😭. Rashi interupts and says to gopi " aisa kyu kiya tune gopi, mey teri badi behan hu agar aisi baat thi toh mujse kaha hota. hum sab milkar koi na koi raasta naikaal letey😃. Tujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Gopi says "raashi behan aap bi mujhe galat samaj rahi hai, aap toh janti hai ki mey aisa karney ka sapney mey bi nahi soch sakti". Hetal says " ahem beta, gopi tumari patni hai tum ek baar thandey dimag sey socho". Ahem says 😡 " kaki toh aap kehna chahti hai ki kinjal galat hai ha meri behan jhooth bol rahi hai. Hetal says "nahi dikra". Kokila says" Ahem bado sey baat karney ka yeh kaun sa tarika hai". Ahem says " aaj jo ho jaye gopi is ghar mey nahi rahegi bas warna mey yeh ghar chodh kar chala jaunga. Everyone is shocked 😲..

Gopi says 😒 " mey chali jaungi mey nahi chahti ki meri wajah se aap apney pariwar se alag ho jaye". Gopi turns around and start walking to door. Everyone is sad 😔, except raashi and kinjal😃. Tabhi achank gopi chakar kha kar nichey gir jati hai and hetal sees that and shouts gopi.......................

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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART-5

Hetal sees this that gopi fell down 😲. She is shocked. Woh bhaag kar aati hai gopi ke pass aur kehti hai " gopi bahu, kya hua? Kokila also come and says "mota bhabi kya hua, gopi bahu? Hetal says to mani "mani ja jaldi se doctor ko phone kar". Now doctor comes and checks gopi, gopi is unconscious now also. Sab bahar khadey hai, Ahem bi hai. Doctor comes out and says " mainey injection de diya, gabraney ki koi baat nahi hai" Kokila says "doc saheb lakin achanak sey"? Doctor says " dekhiye inke dimag ko bahut bada sadma laga hai, aisey patient aksar depression mey chaley jaatey hai aur sucide bi committ karney ki koshish kartey hai. Inhey khush rakhney ki koshish kijiye baki dawayi mainey likh di hai mangwa lijye. Kinjal says 😡 "zarur phir se koi naya drama hai". Kokila stares at her.

Ahem apney kamrey baitha hua hai achank se kinjal uske pass aati hai aur kehti hai ' bhai kya soch rahey ho". Ahem says "Kinjal tum, kuch bi toh nahi". Kinjal says" mey janti hu aap anita ke baarey mey soch rahey hai, aap us sey aaj bi pyar kartey hai". Ahem looks at her.🤔 Ahem says " dekho kinjal anita ja chuki hai meri shaadi gopi ke saath ho chuki hai aur ab beeti baato ko yaad karne ka kya matlab hai. Aur ek baat jab mainey umaang ko dekha tha toh mey samaj gaya tha ki woh gopi ke liye nahi tumarey liye aaya hai. woh toh ghar waley tumhey kuch na kahey isliye mainey gopi ko sabke saamney zalil kiya. Par iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki mere dil mey us gawar ke liye kuch hai ( how mean😡)....

Kokila says to ahems father "yeh kya ho raha hai is ghar mey, mey gopi ko ghar pe isliye layi thi taki sab usey khush ho. lakin jab se woh aayi hai tab se sab galat hi ho raha hai".. Ahem fathers says " dekho kokila mey jaanta hu ki tum dukhi ho aaj jo kuch bi hua uske baad tumar pareshan hona laazmi hai. par tumhey gopi bahu pe bi vishwas karna chahiye tha. Kinjal humari beti hai , gopi bi toh humari beti hai. Aaj ahem jo bartaw uske sath kiya, aisa nahi hona chahiye tha... Kokila looks at him and he goes saying tum samajdhar ho baki tum janti ho.....

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART-6

Gopi ko hosh aata hai, mani uske pass hi bethi hai.. Mani gopi ko dekhti hai ur kehti hai "gopi bhabi aap theek hai na". Gopi kuch nahi kehti. Woh uthney ki koshish karti hai par nahi uth paati. Mani says " sambhal kar gopi bhabi apki tabiyat theek nahi hai".Gopi says to mani " Mani behan mujhe mandir jaana hai kya aap mujhe mandir le chalegi.. Mani say " ha gopi bhabi abhi aap aaram kijye jaisey hi aapki tabiyat theek hogi mey aapko mandir le chuki hungi.

Gopi says "mani behan maaji kaha hai". Kokila says 😊 " mey yaha hu gopi bahu, dekho abhi bas aaram karo aur kuch mat socho. mey hu na tumarey sath sab theek ho jayega..( Kokila how sweet of you)..

Gopi nahakar bahar aati hai aur apney lambey ganey baal sukha rahi hoti lakin achank sey usko woh sab yaad aata hai ki ahem ne usey jaaney ke liye kaha tha😭.. Woh nichey gir jaati hai aur roney lagti hai.. Tabhi ahem waha se gujar raha hota hai aur gopi ko aisi haalat mey dekhta hai aur uske pass aata hai. Ahem kehta hai " Gopi kya hua tum theek ho, gopi ekdam dekhti hai aur kehti hai" dur rahiye mujse, mey aapke layak nahi hu". Mainey is ghar ki har khushi ko chin liya hai. Ahem is 😲. H e tries to calm her down and says "gopi". Gopi achank se knife dekhti hai aur utha leti aur kehti hai rotey huey😭 " mujhey jeeney ka koi haqh nahi hai, mujhe nahi jeena. Ahem says "gopi yeh tum kya kar rahi ho, dekho yeh chaku mujhe de do. Gopi says " nahi mey nah dungi". Ahem ek dam uske pass aata hai aur cahku le leta aur usko ek khichkar thapad maarta hai...😲

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kajal

@imkt

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part-7

Ahem gopi ko uthata hai aur jhanjhodta hai aur kehta hai " yeh kya kar rahi thi tum, apney aap ko maarna chahti ho". Gopi kuch nahi kehti bas she cries 😭.Ahem gussey mey waha se chala jaata hai. Kokila sees this and says to ahem " dekha dikra aaj gopi ki halat aisi hai ki woh apni jaan tak lena chahti hai". Ahem sees his mother aur chala jaata hai. ( Music starts tujhe bhula ke from anjaana anjaani) Gopi is standing at window and same secne ahem sitting on his office chair thinking about gopi..

Raashi is on phone telling each and everything to her mum. They both laugh. Kokila went to kinjal sit there and says " kinjal tamey shu kariyu"? Kinjal says "maa mainey kya kiya hai". Kokila says " mey nahi janti sach kya hai lakin agar yeh sach jhooth hai ya tum is mey shamil ho toh itna yaad rakhana mey tumhey kabhi maaf nahi karungi..

Rashi comes to gopi " kaisi hai gopi". Gopi ek dam chup hai. Rashi says " mey janti hu ki ahem ji ne terey sath galat kiya lakin sach kya hai mujhe toh bata sakti thi na". Gopi says nothing. Rashi says " tu kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hai, theek hai aisey hi reh bhut baney. Rashi goes fro there.. Kokila calls rashi and says" Dekho rashi gopi ki tabiyat theek nahi hai toh uskey liye soup bano aur mani ko deney ke liye kaho". Rashi says to himself "yeh kaagadi kabhi nahi manegi, mey kya gopi ki naukrani hu ", Ab baith kar gopi maharani ke liye soup banao. Rashi tension mey "abhi toh raat ka khaana bi banna hai hey kanha ji yeh kaha fas gayi mey"..

Sab raat ke khaney ke liye dinning table par beith jaatey hai. Gopi bi aati hai par she is like emotionless aur khoyi hui si. Hetal says to gopi " gopi bahu chalo beta khaana khao". Gopi ko kuch dhyan nahi hai woh toh bas apni plate mey chawal pe daal daley ja rahi hai. Ahem gopi ko dekh raha hai. Kokila see this and says aa shu chey gopi bhau khaana khao". Gopi starts eating and then says " mera ho gaya".

so how was this story..

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