When I First Saw You - Maaneet FF (Up. Part6 Pg20) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear nice start....

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it nice....
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update soon yaar and pm me...................................
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Nice start
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz update soon i m waiting...😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Guys! I'm extremely sorry for this li'l late update of mine. 😒 I blame the electricity. 😛As soon as I used to finish completing the update, the light used to run away.😡 I'm sorry guys. Here's the update, you might feel it to be short but the next one I promise will be a longer one, for sure! Enjoy! 😃
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~Part 2~

After 2 days-

At The Railway Station

A girl in her teens, wearing tight fitted jeans and a stylish kurti was shouting at a boy who was also of the same age as hers.


Girl : Aankhein hain Ya Button ! Tumhe dikhai nahi deta kya?

The boy stared at her. He had never seen such a beautiful girl. 😳

Girl : Oh Mr. main tumse baat kar rhi hun. Lagta hai ab sunai bhi nhi deta hai.

The boy came back to his senses. He said to himself, "Dude, yeh tum kya bakwaas soch rhe the!"

Boy : Oh Hello. Galti tumhari hai.

G : Acha.!! Ulta chor kotwal ko daante.. Tumhe Toh Main Abhi Batati Hoon.

B : Kya Karlogi Tum? Karlo jo karna hai. Main nahi darta aise aire gairey logon se.

G : (shocked) Tumhari Yeh Himmat. Tum jaante nahi ho main kaun hoon.

B : Jaanna bhi nahi chahta.

G : Huh! Tume Geet Handa se panga liya hai..!!

B : (imitating her) "Tume Geet Handa se panga liya hai..!!" Maan Singh Khurana kisi se nahi darta. Huh!

G : Jao Jao Mr. Monkey.

M : Oh Madame Geet, jaa raha hun. Badi aayi mujhe sabak sikhane! Huh!


Both go in opposite directions with their sulken faces! 😡

Geet had just arrived at the Delhi Railway Station. Meera was unable to pick her but Geet had Meera's address. So there was no such problem. Maan had come to pick his mom who had been to Mumbai due to some business related work.

M : Kaisi Ho Maa?

MM : Thik Hun Maan! Tu Kaisa Hai?

M : Acha hun maa. Tumhari bhot yaad aayi.

MM : Maan! Ab main aa gayi hoon na! Toh No Tension!

M : Haan Maa!

MM : Maan, zara dekh toh who ladki kahan chali gayi?

M : Konsi ladki Maa?


He thought about Geet Handa, whom he had just met. He remembered those beautiful eyes. Those "zulfein". That Voice. Wow! 😳

Suddenly he thought " Dude, not again! Yeh tumhe ho kya rha hai?!"


MM : Arrey, Main toh tujhe batana bhul gayi. Train me na meri mulaqat ek ladki se hui. Teri hi umr ki hogi. Badi hi pyaari thi woh. Dil khush ho gaya usse baat kar ke. Kaash Woh meri Bahu--

M : MAA! Tum fir shuru ho gayi!

MM : Acha acha theek hai! Nahi bolti..!!


While Maan and his Mom are talking, Maan's Mom suddenly sees the girl about whom she was talking to Maan. Though the girl and Maan's mom had become friends in the train they had forgotten to introduce themselves! 😛


MM : (to the girl) Arrey Beta! Suno Toh!

G : Arrey Aunty! Aap ekdum se kahan gayab ho gayi thi.? Maine toh aapko dhundha bhi.!

MM : Sorry Beta, woh main apne bete se baat kar rahi thi. Chalo main tumhe usse milwati hoon!

G : Ji Aunty!

Maan looks at the girl and the girl looks at Maan.

M : GEET! 😡

G : MAAN! 😡

MM : (shocked) Tum dono ek dusre ko jaante ho?? 😲

M : Haan Maa, Geet ki wajah se hi toh main jaan paya ki agar saamne wala dekh kar na chal raha ho tab galti uski nahi meri hoti hai.

G : Dekho, tum chup raho. Dhyaan Tumhara kahin aur tha, mera nahi.

M : Ji Nahin, tum dekh kar nahi chal rahi thi.

G : Tum dekh kar nahi chal rahe the.

M : Tum dekh kar nahi chal rahi thi.

G : Tum!

M : Tum!

G : Tum!

M : Tum!

MM : Bas! Bhot ho gaya! Maan, yeh sikhaya hai maine tujhe. Is tarah baat ki jaati hai ladkiyon se?!

M : Maa--

MM : Bas ! Mujhe kuch nahi sunna! Geet Beta, tum kahan rehti ho?

G : Aunty, main apni behen ke sath Vishakha Apartments me rehti hoon.

MM : Arrey Wah! Hum bhi wahi rehte hain! Ab toh milte rahenge, hai na?

N : Ji Bilkul Aunty!


Geet thought ' "Oh God! Ab is Monkey ki shakal roz roz dekhni padegi! Aargh!

Maan's thoughts were a little different. His heart said- Great! Geet hamesha mere aaspaas hi rahegi! Main jab chahun use dekh sakta hun! Where as his mind said ' Oh No! Why ? Why SHE had to live in our apartments. And why am I thinking like this, woh bhi uske baare mein?!

G : Acha aunty, main chalti hoon!

MM : Theek hai beta! Tum akeli chali toh jaogi na?

G : Ofcourse Aunty!

MM : Waise kaho toh Maan tumhare saath chalega tumhe chhodhne! 😆

Both Maan and Geet shout : NAHIN!

G : Nahi Aunty, Thank you! Main manage kar lungi.

M : Haan Maa, Woh manage karlegi aur waise bhi we're getting late.

Well, Maan surely managed to receive one angry glare from Geet. 😆

MM : Okay Beta, as you say. Byee!

G : Bye aunty.

M : Maa, chalne ka iraada hai?

One more glare from Geet. 😆

MM : Haan beta, chal!


Geet and Maan went home 'separately', not forgetting to give angry glares to each other. 😡 😆

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Here ends the part guys. Hope you liked it! Do comment/criticize. 😊

~Don't forget to hit the 'Like' tab. 😊~

Love, Yoshita 😊

['~Next Part - Part 3 - Pg 10~']

Edited by YoshiMaanManiac - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice update OMG U mentioned MAAN as MR. Monkey omg 🤣🤣🤣> PLZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8888888888 update.
Loveeeeeee it.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
lvd it..........eager ly waiting 4 da next part.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
great that was really awesome....
so loved it...it is so good
do keep writing..do keep writing

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