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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely..... Romantic.....

Maan knows geet wil look more beautiful in red...

waiting for next....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey noor nice update dear
continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats so Sweet Dear....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.....
Loved it.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....
Loved this line soooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️
aap ko bohat he shoq hay apnay in... in... ko dikhanay ka??🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved it sooooooo much when Geet buttoned Maan's Shirt...😳.....
Eagerly waiting for the next Part
Pls Update Sooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweetcherry96 thanku jaanu. luv u
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aakritisri1111 thanx sweety update is on its way
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shreya satish thanx. laikin credit mujay jata hay. may nay red
choose
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.sireesha. awww thanx. n thanx fr such a long comment. only
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Posted: 14 years ago

he was about to leave the room to give her some privacy when he looked at her confused expression
maan: red would be nice
saying this he leaves



TOGETHER FOREVER
PART 9

geet smiled to herself then closed the door
she then went to take shower

she came out with a towel wraped around
she unfolded the red one and saw that it wasn't shalzar kameez
it was a red SAREE
she first looked at it and admired the simplicity in its embroidary
she then remembered that she had never worn a saree in her life so she didn't know how to wear it
but she tried and was successful
she admired her work
she then opened the box and saw the jewellary
it was heavy and seemed really expensive
she didn't wanted to wear such expensive jewllary

there was a knock at the door
she went and opened it


maan: (thought) uff!!!! ye larki kapray change kar rahi hay ya kapray bna rai hay
dadi maa ko bhook lag rahi ho ge aur unhay abhi medicines b lainy hay
dadi maa may dekh kar ata hu k geet itni dair kyu laga rahi hay
dadi: theek hay jaiyay laikin geet ko lay kar he aiyay ga
yehi na ho ap dono apna DINNER khud he kar lay aur mujay yaha bhool jaey
maan looked at her not understanding a word she said
dadi: aap jaey gay b ya nahi!!!
maan: haan... wo may ja raha hu

he goes upstairs to his room
seeing the door closed he knocked at it
after some time geet opened the door

maan looked at her with his mouth open
wondring how can someone look so beautiful in such a simple outfit


geet opened the door and saw maan standing there
he was looking at her with his mouth open
geet blushed to a deep shade of red matching the saree when maan kept looking at her without
even blinking
she looked down
maan examined geet from head to toe
she looked soooo beautiful
she was the reason that enhanced the beauty of this saree
maan looked at her and saw she was blushing
he then realised how long he had been gawking at her

maan: tum tyaar ho gai ho tou chalay? (back to his saroo-self)
geet: ji (still looking down)

geet started to walk ahead
something caught her wrist halfway in the corridor
she looked down at her wrist and saw a hand, then a muscular arm and then the man himself
it was maan who had held her wrist
geet looked at her with a plead to let her go
but maan ignored it
he moved towards her still holding her wrist
he placed a box on the table near them

maan: geet tum nay jewellary kyu nahi pehni?
she looked down and didn't reply to him
maan: geet may tum say kuch puch raha hu
tum nay ye kyu nahi pehna?
geet still looking down said
geet: ji... wo.... wo ye may nai pehan sakti
maan: kyu?? kyu nahi pehan sakti?
geet: wo... yeh bohat bhaari hay aur yeh bohat mehanga hoga... tou may yeh itnay mehangay zaiwar
kaisay pehan sakti hu

maan looked at her
this was the thing he loved about her
he just loved her modesty, simplicity and honesty
maan: yeh zaiwar tum say zyada mehangay nahi hay geet

he stretched out his hand and took off geet's jhumkas sending a jolt of current in her body
geet felt his touch and closed her eyes enjoying it
maan replaced the jhumkas with the earings
then took out the necklace and placed it around her neck
he moved her wet hair from her back revieling the deep neck of the saree
he then hooked the necklace
maan was loosing control again
he wanted to touch her, to feel her, to make her his

maan: ab chalo
geet nodded her head and moved along maan downstairs

dev: dadi yeh bro aur unki mangetar kaha hay
mujhay bohat bhuk lag rahi hay
dadi: wo aa rahay ho gay
maan apki honay wali bhaabhi ko lainay he gye hay
dev: bro!!! aur kisi ko yu istarha lainay gye hay!!!! warna tou bro bus baithay baithay late anay per
gussa he kartay thay
dadi smiled at what dev said

dadi looked up at the stairs and saw both maan and geet coming down
dadi: lo!!!! aa gye dono


hope you guyz liked it
a short one i know laikin kya karu papers 9th ko hay 😡
will try to update tomorrow if not then inshallah after 16th oct
pray for me guyz

leave your comments 😃
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they really motivate me and thanx for the previous comments
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Noor

link to PART 10
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yes i m the first one to comment Yippie.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ awesome update Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. loved d Maaneet Scene. haye Red Saree was Awesome😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳. oh no i hope Dev Doesnt sees her😲😲😲. is there going to be any kind of Emeotional Drama😕? Anyways Loved ur Update Do continue Soon😊😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!! awesome update.....now we will see some huge drama...maan would beat the hell out of dev ....if h knows abt what he did....anyways plzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow... that was awesome.... red sari... and maan staring at her.... he he... so cute... i just loved there scene.....
but is dev going to geet?? oh no... wt's going to happen? pls update soon..... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Maan is staring at Geet in a red sari! And geet wore the sari for the first time! OMG! Can't wait! ;)
love the jewelry scene.
Updtttttttt tomm & we need a BIG UPDT with only maaneet scenes..
OMG! I don't want dev to see geet! :(( NOOOOOO! HELLS NOOO!
thats gonna ruin the whole thing..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Best of luck for ur exams
Awesomeeeeeeeee update.
Loveeeee maneet scenes.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima

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