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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Wow..that was nice...Now Maan can so easily relate to Geet....wonder when will Geet be able to do that...???😉

Ayushka....hope Maan se related naaaaaa ho.......!!!!😕

Update soooooon


haha you'll have to wait and see who ayushka is!!!!! glad you like the update 😃


thanks!!!!!!

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

This is an amazing FF. I love the idea and find it very intriguing. Could you please add me to your PM list?

Jhan


suree!!! thanks! glad you like it 😃

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Amazing update!!! Loved Geet-Vicky convo...waiting to see how the story unfolds..All the best!!


thanks!!!!! glad you liked vicky-geet relationship!!!!!

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Amazing FF
Just read it!!
I loved it
Please update sooooon
-Jassi


awww thanks so much!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet coco

OMFG! the way maan said ayushka and vicky's secret...this is getting so good!!! I love twists and cliffhangers!!! Shreya...by far it's the most intriguing and freakin' amazing thing i'll ever read!!! Can't wait for the next part!!! thanks a bunch for the quick update!!!!!!


oh wow!!!! thanks soooo much!!!!!!! im soo glad you like it! 😃


thankyouuuu!! 😃

Originally posted by: swetha10

lovely update.. liked the way maan reacted to vicky n ayushka's secret.. do continue soon


thanks!! will update as soon as i can!!!!!

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hi,

Fantastoc Job!👏👏👏
The update was fabulous,
so enjoyable.,,,,

Look at Geet, she eats ice cream when nervous........😲
Hmm Vicky is such a true friendd na............

I loved the way Geet breifed of Vick - Ayushka's relation........

I also loved the way, you connected Maan's thought with Jaane Kyun song,
hmmm, Maan is good at homework........

Love
lakshmi


awww thanks so much!!! im glad you like it!!

Originally posted by: shivangi783

That was such a lovely update!

Ice cream part was too good!!!
Vicky cheering up Geet was really nice.

Hope you update soon....

thanks!! yep, will try to update when i can!! but calc and labs..ugh 😔 lol

Originally posted by: abi2010

Hmm nice update................pls continue soon.................😃


thankss!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ansah

hey...that was amazing...

really loved it....waiting
for next one...keep wriitng


aww thanks so much!!

thankyouuu!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Awesome Update Dear........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....................

Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Im reading it again and again....😊..............
Loved the way U described Maan's Happiest Moments......😃😃😃😃...........
Loved Geet-Vicky phone Conversation.......❤️❤️❤️..........
Hey is this Ayushka Maan's Past....😲...........
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooooon


awww wow thankyouuu soooo much!!!!!!!! hmmm you're gonna have to wait and see who ayushka is!! lol!

Originally posted by: shalini_s

OMG.. everybody has a past.. waiting for it to unwrap..


haha yep!! hope you're enjoying it!

Originally posted by: solicitude

great ff! plz add me to ur pm list! thanks!

😊


suree!! thanks so much!

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

wow


amazing part yaaar

loved it a lot

thankyouuuu!!! 😃

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Loved Vick n Geet's relation
Vicks knew who was driving the car
If Geet cums to knw abt it she will hate him for hiding truth
Ayushka looks lik Maan knws this gal
Maan n Geet's realtion was getting good
Loved that Geet bought old Maan back
It was nice update


thanks!! im glad you like vicky-geet and maaneet relationships!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Lovely update! Loved Geet and Vicky's convo......their teasing session and Vicky trying to make Geet happy.....great! Maan was also teasing Geet coz of her nervousness and was thinking of Geet while listening to that song......nice!! Lolz. Oh, Vicky was there when that accident happened and Maan seems to be knowing Ayushka......twist hun.....me likes it! Do continue soon.


aww thanks so much!!!! im so glad you like vicky-geet relationship! and glad you like the twist lol!!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shreya,
Sorry for not commeting earlier..kinda busy with work & stuf!
Ch. 4 was good. Glad to read they are talking...communicating is good! Leaves all the confusion behind.
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shreya,
Back to square one in ch. 5. Now Maan, jaldi jaldi manna do Geet ko!
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Shreya,
Ch. 6 was hillarious! Poor guy get a Homework! hehehe...Geet is a nice person, trying to bring color into Maan's life & in the process, giving herself something else to do.
-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sparikh

Hey Shreya,

Ch. 6 was hillarious! Poor guy get a Homework! hehehe...Geet is a nice person, trying to bring color into Maan's life & in the process, giving herself something else to do.
-Sona


thanks sona!!!!!
Edited by shrezzj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyy! i just wrote this chapter kind of fast....so its short. hope you guys dont mind!! i've been sooo busy with uni 😔 i need a break haha

soooo hope you guys like this part as well!!!! and please leave comments too 😃


Shreya

Chapter 8

"Geet?" Maan knocked on her door, but there was no answer, so he opened the door and walked in. Geet was standing in front of her mirror. He couldn't help but notice how gorgeous she looked at that moment. She had tied her hair into a loose half ponytail and had left a few strands that framed her face beautifully. She wasn't wearing the usual salwar suit today. Instead, she had wrapped herself into a light pink faux georgette sari that had been embellished with sequins. Her pallu was not pinned up at her shoulder. Instead, Geet had let it flow loosely over her left arm. Her blouse was deep in the back, and tied into a bow at the top. He slowly walked towards her.

"Maan?" Geet turned around.

"Oh, umm, yeah. I just wanted to see how you were doing. Since it's your first day and all." Maans stuttered. Seeing Geet's worried face he asked, "Still nervous?" Geet nodded. He smiled and held up the bowl of ice cream and a spoon he had brought with him. "I brought you ice cream." He handed the bowl to Geet.

Geet chuckled, "Thanks!" and started eating the ice cream. "You know, you're actually not that bad," she said in between her nervous gulps of ice cream.

"And I have something else," Maan said. He pulled Geet's iPod out of his pocket. "Here, its that song you made me listen to yesterday...Jaane Kyun...if you feel really nervous, just listen to it and think about Vicky," he told her. "... and me" he added quickly.

Geet's smile widened. "Thanks a lot." She set her ice cream bowl, which she finished in no time, down and turned back to the mirror to fix her hair. "Jaane Kyun, Dil Jaanta Hai, Tu Hai To I'll Be Alright," she began to sing, perfectly on tune.

"You can sing too, huh," Maan asked, surprised.

"Sort of," Geet answered.

"Its good," he assured Geet. "Jaane Kyun, Dil Jaanta Hai..." Maan began, completely off tune. Geet turned to him with a big smile, and before they knew it, both of them were standing there laughing and giggling with each other. "I'm not much of a singer, am I?" Maan laughed.

"Not really," Geet laughed with him. "But its okay, I'll teach some other time."

"Okay, well hurry up." Maan looked down at his watch. "You don't want to be late on your first day. I'll wait in the car for you." Maan started walking out of the room.

"Wait!" Geet called. "You're dropping me off?"

"Yeah. Vicky asked me too. He wants someone to be there with you in case you have a nervous break down or something," Maan laughed.

"He said I might have a nervous breakdown?" Geet asked, while Maan just laughed.

"He also said you might try to run away, so someone needs to be there to catch you."

"That jerk!" Geet muttered under her breath.

"Hurry up!" Maan called as he left.

"Vicky, that moron," Geet continued to blast her best friend. She usually did get nervous before her first day at almost anything...the first day of classes, at the hospital, first operation...but she had never run away! "I'm going to kill that bonehead!" she said again. "Vick," she smiled.

Geet quickly fixed her hair, grabbed her files and her coat, and ran down the stairs and straight to the kitchen to grab her lunch box, which thankfully, Nakul had packed for her, and out to the car, where Maan was waiting very patiently for a change. He turned to smile at her just as she stepped out. He was amazed at how gracefully she carried herself in that elegant sari and he couldn't help but notice how stunning she looked. She smiled and got in next to him.

For the first five minutes of the car ride, neither of them spoke. They just sat there in an awkward silence. Maan was driving, and Geet just sat there, looking out the window, and occasionally humming to her nervous self. Maan glanced over at her and noticed how badly her hands were shaking. Without even thinking about it for a second, Maan covered Geet's trembling hands with his, but continued to watch the road. Feeling his warm touch, Geet looked down and was surprised to see Maan holding her hands. Her hands began to steady as he held them tightly. Geet looked up at Maan and watched his relaxed face. No one except Arjun had ever been able to calm her down when she was nervous like this. And for the first time, some one else finally did it. But they were different. Arjun used to joke around, make her laugh, and talk nonstop, trying to get Geet's mind off of whatever was making her nervous, but as soon as he left, taking his cheerful mood with him, Geet would become nervous again. Maan, on the other hand, said barely anything. All he did for those fifteen minutes was hold her hand tightly like that, and her nervousness flew away, just like that. Geet's hands were now completely steady, but Maan didn't let go, and Geet didn't ask him too.

"Thanks," she whispered to him.

Maan smiled at her and began to let go of Geet's hand, but she quickly tightened her fingers around his and pulled their intertwined hands closer to her. "Not yet," she said. "Hold my hand until we get there?" she innocently asked.

Maan smiled, "You can hold on as long as you need to."

She was defiantly extremely different from any other woman had met, and without doubt, completely different from her. Geet was changing every moment. When he met her she had fought with him, the next time, she had asked to be friends, and then she had tried to cheer him up, and now, he could see the child that was in her through her nervousness. He could see the honesty and loyalty in her eyes. He could swear he could also see pain in her eyes, hidden somewhere behind all that outward cheerfulness, but he still didn't know why. She had never showed any sign of pain...except maybe when he had found that she had been listening to extremely sad music...but whenever she was face to face with someone else, she would always be smiling. Shev didn't turn away from everyone like he did. She was definitely different.

"We're here," Maan told her softly as he brought the car to a slow stop.

Geet squeezed Maan's hand one last time before letting go. "Thanks," she smiled as she got out of the car.

"Good luck," Maan said.

Geet smiled and closed the door. Maan watched her as walked up to the front doors, close her eyes, and then open the door and step in with her right foot. Before closing the door behind her, Geet turned back to smile at Maan, who smiled back at her and drove off. He shook his hands and laughed as he felt the blood finally begin to circulate in his fingers again. "Geet," he smiled.

Edited by shrezzj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awwww!!!! Such a cute sweet update!! Fantastic!! It was sooooo cute that Maan held Geet's hands! You know while reading your update I stopped and put on Jaane Kyun! lol Update soon! -Jassi
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Edited by xxJaSsIxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice it really proves a friend in need is a friend indeed, beautiful update hopefully u'll update nxt prt soon

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