SS on maaneet TOGETHER FOREVER part 15 page 51 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update but pls cont soon i love it i hope DEV doesn't see GEET now maybe after the wedding thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow it cutie between maaneet how they care for eachother dont worry will wait for your update soonnnnnnn thanks take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbb!!!!

u leave us on a cliffhanger yyyyyyyy????


eagerly waiting for next update!!!


continue sooN!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. it was an awesome update...
i just loved maneet's scenes....
i hope u come back soon... cz i cnt wait to read the next update... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved it sooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank God Dev did'nt see Geet.....😊....
Daadi must be jumping in Joy after seeing Maaneet together...😆😆😆.....
Loved the way Geet Dressed Maan's wound....😳😳😳......
Eagerly waiting for the next part...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
great story! plz add me to ur pm list! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg that was amazing hun… pls cm bc soon…. i want more
xxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
asah thanx ansah
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Premeena- thanx hun
dsigurl953 torture'll be over soon now m back and
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ramyayuppy thanx and dun cry now m bk
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anufa hehehe was feeling 😈 n thnx
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.sireesha. thanx hun n yeah dadi is jumping around😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

geet got busy in dressing while maan was going crazy
he was going crazy because of her closeness
her angelic face having a worry over it, her seducing smell, her touch on his waist were sooo inviting
he was losing control over him and.................


TOGETHER FOREVER

PART 8


he closed his eyes again
not because of the pain but because he could not control himself anymore
if he had kept his eyes open then he knew that he would do something really stupid

geet was done with the bandage
she looked at maan and saw his eys closed

geet: (worried) aap ko dard ho raha hay?
maan: hmmm?
geet: ji may nay pucha k aap ko dard tou nahi ho raha?

maan opened his eyes and looked at geet who had concern written all over her face
he was again lost in her beauty
he stood up

maan: hmm nahi..... nahi ho raha dard
dard tou mujhay us waqt hua tha jab tum mujhay chor kar gai thi
dard tou mujhay us waqt hua tha jab tum mujh say duur ho gai thi
geet..... dard tou mujhay tumharay mujh say juda honay per hua tha
he held her by her shoulders
he had a tight grip causing geet pain
geet could see the fear in his eyes but could not understand what caused it
maan saw her eyes watering because of his tight grip
he left her
looked the other way and said

maan: geet tum jao ja kar change kar lo
geet: per.... meray kapray bag may... wo gari may hay
maan: acha phir may tumhara bag lay kar ata hu
tum tb tk yaha bed per beth jao

he made her sit on the bed
maan turned around and was about to walk out out of the room
geet: aik minute rukiyay....
maan stopped and turned around to face geet
geet: aap ko bohat he shoq hay apnay in... in... ko dikhanay ka??
she said it with a hint of anger in her voice
geet said it while poking his six packs with her finger
maan: ye SIX PACKS hotay hay
aur waisay b geet ye mera ghar hay may jistrah chahu yaha phiru tumhay is say kya?
geet: mana k ye aap hi ka ghar hay laikin is ka ye matlab tou nahi na k ap adhay nangay ho k phiray
sharam naam ki b koi cheez hoti hay
maan smiled at wht she said and started to button up his shirt
his eyes still on geet
he was done buttoning his shirt
he was about to leave but geet held his arm to stop him from going
maan stopped and geet came infront of him
she started to unbuton his shirt
maan was shocked as in why was she doing this

geet: ajkal ap say koi kaam sahi say nahi hota
is shirt k buton he dekh lay
aap nay button galat lagaey huay thay
ab aap ko har kaam k leay serectary ki zrurat hay kya? (buttoning up his shirt sahi tareeqay say)
jab aap ki shaadi ho gi tou aap ka aisay kon khayal rakhay ga? huh?
she was done now and looked at maan
maan started to come close to geet
he took one step towards her she took one step backwards
she hit the wall behind her
(the door of maan's room was still open
they were on the other side of the door
any one if passed outside the room wouldn't know whwt was happening)
maan closed the distance between them
geet tried to escape from his closeness but maan stopped her by placing his hands on either side of her
trapping her between his muscular arms

maan: han mujay har kaam k leay koi chaheay geet
mujhay meri choti choti galtio ko sudharnay wala chaheay
beshak wo meri secertary ho ya biwi

maan lowered his face to her level
geet was breathing hard
her breath tickeled him
he took his lips to her collarbone and brushed lightly along it
geet closed her eyes
enjoying this moment
maan now held her by her waist and geet held his arms
maan moved his lips along her collar bone and then to her neck
she tilted her head unvolountarily giving him space
unlike his exterior his lips were extremely soft
maan then moved to her ear and nibbled at her earlobe
geet moaned
he then pushed geet more towards the wall and rested his body on her
he lifted his face and took it in front of hers
her eyes which were closed now opened and saw that their lips were just an inch apart
maan tilted his head abit and was closing in the distance between their lips
he was about to take those pink, soft lucious lips in his.....
but they parted from each other when they heard a knock on the door
maan and geet looked at each other
geet abit scared but blushing
maan remained calm but ws irritated because of the interruption
he went to see who dared knock on maan singh khurana's door
to increase his irritation he saw that it was dev

maan: kuch kaam tha tumhay?
dev: nai bro
bus aap say kehna tha k aap jo b kar rahay hay wo darwaza bund kar k karay
agar meri jagah dadi hoti tou wo seedha undr aa jati
maan: ye tum kya bol rahay ho dev? (angry but shocked that how did he know what was happening)
dev: (smiled like a devil) wohi jo aap smajh rahay hay
maan: vaisay tumhay kuch kaam tha?
dev: han..... wo dadi aap dono ko nichay bula rahi hay dinnner k leay
laikin agar aap dono busy hay tou koi baat nai may dadi ko bta du ga k aap....
maan: nai nai hum bus adhay ghantay tk aa rahay hay
dev: jaisa aap kahay

dev goes downstairs
maan comes back to geet and saw that her cheeks were still pink
she was looking down..... embarassed...... angry at herself that why didn't she stop him.... but still blushing
maan: may tumharay kapray lay kar ata hu aur bag tumharay room may rakhwa daita hu
geet: ji

maan goes downstairs and is about to step out when dadi calls maan

dadi: maan beta aap kaha ja rahay hay?
maan: wo geet ko change karna tha tou us k bag say kapray nikalnay ja raha hu aur phir bag b us k

kamray may rakhwana hay
dadi: hmmm tou geet ko change karna hay
acha maan aap meray sath aiyey meray room may

maan walks in with dadi to her room
dadi opens her cupboard and takes out some folded clothes and a box
she hands it to maan
dadi: geet say kaheyay k in may say koi aik pehan lay aur is box may jewellary hay wo in dono k sath

match ho jati hay tou ye b pehan lay

maan takes the clothes and box to his room and saw that geet was sitting on his bed looking at her hands

maan: geet ye dadi maa nay bhejwai hay. in may say koi pehan lo aur ye jewellary b dadi maa kehrahi

thi pehan laina
maan hands her both the things
geet looks at the clothes
she is confused as to which color she should wear
one was red and other green
maan went to take out his shirt and pants from his cupboard
he was about to leave the room to give her some privacy when he looked at her confused expression

maan: red would be nice
saying this he leaves


m back my lovelies 🤗
hope you liked the update 😃

aur uuper wala part **ahem ahem** first experiance hay 😳
tou kaisa tha??? 😳😳

mujhay kuch nai kehna i'm only 15 😉😆
waiting for the feedback
plzzzzz do comment aur critisize karnay ki b option khuli hay
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button (thats a compulsion from now)


love
Noor

link to part 9
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

ahhh............. after a long tym read ur update and its gr88 as usual...............😊

and about that 😳*ahem ahem* 😳scene........ mai kiya keh skti hun......... im 14.5 too.😆😆😆
thanks for updating.............😊
wid luv,,
Adeena.😛
Edited by sweetcherry96 - 14 years ago

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