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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

wooooooooo....LOL....nice promo Naina!!!!

Maan is smirking and Geet discovered a love bite I presume!!!

I wait for weekly updates gal!!!



hi honeyy! hehe so glad you liked the promoo! hahahaha and hmm well, let's see if it's actually a love bite😆😆

hehe and i'll count that 1 for weekly!

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: vinithaa

nice promo..............plzzzz i am fin with anything but plzzzzzzzzz cant wait to read more plzzzzzz update soon



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! ahaha i'll definitely update sooner :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: roopareddy

at least you gave us promo
it's been so long
waiting for u r update so eagerly
any update if you update every week i don't mind either of them. as long as update soon. sorry i am being so impatient with your ff. can not wait longer than week.



hii! haha im so sorry about the epic delay in my updates...haha and thanks for letting me know :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: simzzzzcool

nice promo Naina!!!!👏can not wait



hhee! hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: kinno

nice promo i guess 2 udates that comes once a week is better but anything is better then nothing😊.. update soon



hii! thanks a lot for commenting and letting me know :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: kooliio

nice promo😆😆

i would prefer weekly updates but it doesnt really matter as long as we get regular updates😉
now cant wait for the update!! pls cont.soon!!!



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha yeah the regular updates would bbe the short weekly ones, because it takes me forever to think of a ginormous update😆😆

~Naina

Originally posted by: malluangel

omg tell me he did something!
please!!!
im begging you!!!

Edit:
I
WASNT
DONE!!!!


anyway <<< its a turtle!!! OMFG!!!!

your not allowed to like until im done!!!!!

now that i remember wat happened...
HE DID KISS HER!
SCORE!!!!!

anway, maan shud give her a flower to keep her happy,
ck this out >>> ninja turtles!!!




yo! LMFAO i love these emoticonssss they make my life...and hmm did he really do something...check out the next part😉

~Naina

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

naina darling

Here I thought you had deserted us 😆 😆 😆

I loved the promo Geet's reaction 🤣 🤣 🤣

Maan is going to have hell to pay 🤣 🤣 🤣

I would prefer regular updates even if they are shorter but please do what works out best for ya.

Cheers
Jhan



hii! haha thanks a lot for reading...lmfaolmfao i dont desert anyone....i just delay until the end of time 😆😆 and thanks for letting me know what you prefer :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: yasu09

loved the promo and love bite Naina...

naughty Maan... LOL....
and plz update once a week even if it's 2 pages.... =D



hii! haha thanks a lot for reading and commenting! lmfaolmfao the things that maan does😆😆
hehe and thanks a lot for letting me know what you prefer :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: lody

Very nice promo lovet alot will shorter updates or long it's ok if u will update dear soo no broblem for me



hii! haha thanks a lot for liking the promo :) and aww thanks for letting me know which you prefer :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hey,

I read your FF and I really really like it. Can you please add me to your PM list? The promo looks fun and I hope you get to update the full part soon.
Thanks,
Pushpi



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha so glad you liked the promo and the entire story :) and i'll def. add you to my pm list :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: Sofna

Naina welcm Bak........nice promo.....wud prefer short updte.....



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! and thanks a ton for letting me know which you prefer :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: smartnsmexxi

mindblowing promo cont soon n thnx



hii! thanks a lot for liking the promo :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

OMG!!!!!
U finally updated
But it was a PROMO
Stop torturing us!!
I love this FF sooo much!
Plzzzz just update regularly!
-Jassi



haha hi Jassi! i'm finally updating girl.....hehe so sorry about the delay😆😆 but pheww. i was too lazy to get around to writing the entire part, so that was just the promo...but i truly do hope you like this part😆😆

~Naina



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! glad you liked it :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: anufa

naina!!!


awsuumm promO!!!

eagerly waiting for update....

continue ASAP!!!!

n i prefer weekly updates!!!



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting anufa! hehe and thanks for letting me know what you prefer :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: revav

a weekly update dear...that would be good

promo was interesting...........
waiting for ur updates
reva



hii! thanks a lot for letting me know which one you prefer :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: abi2010

Pls update soonn............... Long / short whatever....................



hii! haha thanks a lot...and well the update is coming within th enext twenty minutes :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: rituka7

nyc promo

update next part asap



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! glad you liked this

~Naina



hii! thanks a lot :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

hey Naina di

great
plz post the next part soon
and i prefer longer updates
thanks for the pm
plz continue soon

love
Nidhi



hi Nidhi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! and aww thanks for telling me your preference :)

~Naina


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

hi it was my first to read i love it pls cont soonnnn i don't mind us long yu update thanks pls put in your pm list see soonnnnnnnnnnnn super promo



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! sososo glad you're enjoying this FF :) and I will definitely add you to the pm list!

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: chubzy

Wow that was gud!! Plz update daily if u dnt hv prob i would love to read more n more of ur ff



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! soso glad you're enjoying this FF :) and haha updating daily? uuf, don't think I can do that, but I'll definitely try and update weekly :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: Tishuu

Naina! Welcum bk! Woohoo haha luv da promo so much to imagine omg u hav to update fast! Erm personally i wudnt mind hw u update so long as u do! Erm maybe every week will keep us lot from dyin wiv curiousity! Hope to c an update soon x



hi tishu! hehe i hope you don't mind me calling you that :) haha so glad you enjoyed the promo :) and haha yeah i feel horrible for my readers, im such a bad udpater😆😆 hehe but i'm trying to get better! Thanks for being so patient with me :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

i would prefer weekly but its seriously upto..missed ur FF.

update fast.



hii! aww i'm so sorry for my epic delays in updating, but I'll defintiely try and update weekly :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: swetha10

lovely promo... well prefer weekly updates.. do continue soon



hii! thanks a ton for liking the promo :) and i'll def. try and update weekly :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: uzmam1

great promo!!

beggars can't be choosers ..
so i will be happy with whcih ever format of update you decide with!!
if i had a choice i would say daily!! ha ha ha !!



hii! aww so glad you like the promoo! haha but you guys have every right to throw your chappals at me...i'll welcome them wholeheartedly😆😆😆 daily...phew, it's going to kill me to update weekly, but I'm definitely going to try and do that :)

Thanks for you patience!
~Naina

Originally posted by: ashi

great promo bt plz plz plz update soon 😊



hi! thanks a lot for liking the promo!

~Naina

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice promo. loved it.
maan smirking.
pls pls update soon.
If u update regularly then no matter how long the update. pls pls update soon.



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you liked the promo....and haha i'll definitely be trying to update once a week :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: taanni

ya i would prefer the same, shorter regular updates.

can u plz add me to ur pm list

thank you, great work



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! and i'll definitely add you to the pm list!

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: i rok

heyyy there nice promo canttt wait.



hii! thanks a lot for liking the promo!

~Naina

Originally posted by: ashi

well as 4 ur question i simply love ur updates so i wud like 2 have them once a week. Waiting 2-3 weeks wud be difficult.😊



haha i'm so glad you responded to this part too! I'll def. try to make the updates once a week :)

Cheers!
~Naina


Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: desigurl953

OMG....sirf promo dekha hai toh itna excited hoon,jab real update padhungi tab kya haal hoga mera...hayye!!!




About the updates,I think 2 page long update per week is better...at least har hafte kuch to milega padhne ko...Really missed you,yaar!!


Hope to be reading the update soon



hiii! haha i'm looking forward to reading your reactions to the real update too😆😆 haha awww i feel horrible for not being able to update often, but now, I promise, I'll definitely try and update once a week =D

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Watevr suits u can n u find it easy do it

I jus want update
Liked the promo
Looks lik Geet will paka kill Maan
Ridz n Kripa's teasing was fab😆😆😆
Awesum promo
Update soon



hii! so glad you liked the promoo! hehe and i'll be trying to update once a week =D

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: maansi007

at last i m so happy to atleast see ur promo plzzz also update soon n continue ur updates



hii! awwyou are awesome :) hehe so glad you liked the promo!

~Naina

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Finally, you're back!!!😊

Welcome back😛 😊

Promo is too good.
Ab update ka intezaar karna mushkil ho raha hai😭
please jaldi update karna😊

As for you question, weekly updates are better since we'l get to read it every week😊But pls make the weekly updates of 3 pages than 2😛 😛



hii shivangi! haha thanks for the welcome back😆😆 haha and i finally updated...and that too within a week! lmfao and i'll try and make my weekly updates a bit longer😃😃

Cheers!
~Naina



hi! thanks a lot for commenting!

~Naina

Originally posted by: princez_94

Awesome ff.. Thsi is first ff there comedy and romance is a combo.. I love it too good.. To continue soon... And it dosen't really matter but i would want weekly updates.... But if it's a long on it will also go... can't wait for next update.... Do add me to ur PM list...



hii! haha thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you like this FF....and i'll definitely add you to the pm list! welcome here 😉

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: bshah856

nice promo can't wait for d update



hi! thanks a lot for liking the promo!

~Naina

Originally posted by: shalini_s

wow.. interesting promo.. waiting for the badi picture..



hii! thanks a lot for liking the promo! hehe hope you like the update!

~Naina

Originally posted by: gauri92

longer updates for me!!!



hi! haha i'll def. keep that in mind :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: pickachu

Nice promo.

Can't wait for the next update.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima


hi fatima! thanks a lot for liking the promo! i hope you like the update too :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

superb promo!...

continue soon!


hi! thanks a lot for liking the promo! hope you like the update too!
~Naina



hi! thanks a lot for liking the promo! hope you like the update too!
~Naina

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

A love bite never sounded more interesting! 😉

Thanks for the eventual promo...
Maybe my pestering came to use after all! 😛😛😛

I'm a glutton for your updates..I love long updates, but the more ,the better! 😃

Thank you for the PM and continue asap ⭐️




hi ayesha! haha 😉😉😉 and of course...without your pms, which by the way, were not very pestering hehe 😆😆😆, i probably would not have gotten around to writing even this😆

and ill def. keep that in mind :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: Sigma

promo has left me wanting more, i'd prefer weekly regular updates


hii! aw thanks for liking the promo! i'll definitely try to stick with the weekly updates :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: zubi123

hi! i liked ur update soo,plz can u add me to ur PM list plzzz



hii! thanks a lot :) and i'll def. add you :)

~Naina

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

hey just read all the parts of ur ff

the story part is going amazing
add me to ur pm list
curiosly waiting for next update



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you like the story :) and i'll def. add you to my pm list!

~Naina

Originally posted by: -Urvi-

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL.

I read that promo and I literally said out loud OH.EM.GEE
Love it! Update asap!
As for your question, I'd prefer a long update every few weeks. 😊



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! sooo glad you liked the promoo! hahaha and thanks for telling me what you prefer...i'll try to make my weekly updates longer😉

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: solicitude

Your promo is funny but has all the other elements too!


Keep up with the updates! Please add me to your pm list! thanks



hii! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! haha so glad you like my promo and my story :)

i'll def. add you to my pm list!

Cheers!
~Naina

Originally posted by: chubzy

Plz plz plz 2 update in a week.waitin eagerly



haha hii! thanks a lot for liking the promo!

cheers!
~Naina
Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Everyone!

I'm back with the next part :)
Based on everyone's responses, I'll be trying to post short updates about once a week :) So thanks a lot!

And I'm so happy all of you liked the promo and are enjoying the story so far.

A BIGG welcome to all the new readers! Thanks a lot everyone :)

And, this part I want to dedicate it to Ayesha_MSK and xxJasslxx...why? Because they're just the two awesome people who have been PM'ing me constantly reminding me to update. Thanks a lot guys :)

And, hmm oh yes! Thanks to everyone who LIKED the last update/promo:

angel_sub, wifey90, piguu19, Smiley1279, bhakbhartifan, chetchou, psruthi, kcool87, Ballumau, kanch84, -shamima-, gaber, payal956, ramyayuppy, bshah856, LoveManeet, princess_xaini, maansi007, kinno, Tishuu, ameena_sneha, 353115, NiksAngel, raju73, sonupat, teri_susan, sweet_charmed, ferns82, cute-aly, tanya_vi, sharmake11, princez_94, vinithaa, MrsMaanKhurana, lody, simzzzzcool, xxJaSsIxx, -shabnoor-, moonlight2630, uzmam1, luvmaneet, shivangi783, crazy4lyf, revav, rinky70, Ayesha_MSK, smiliey, Anhdara13, shockalot, kyphfanz, iqbals4ever, neha2005, Maneetforever, bismazaman2000, Hot_Indo_Chilly, *angel94*, smartnsmexxi, sweet cherry, Innocent02, sweet scorpio, bd670816, Sweet_Ashum, shalini_s, pickachu, SweetRozie123, -sann-, starasdf, -Urvi-, maanmeet_Reet, AbhiNikiLuver, Miketa, pooja83, swetha10, sweet-and-cute, Iqbal Neha1, lil_desi_goddes, charmed ones, Prinnia, Ivy_Erutan, PrithviSanyo1, kooliio, -afsha-, Starry_night, Sofna, 1kaarzoo, yasu09,

angel_sub, bhakbhartifan, chetchou, -shamima-, LoveManeet, maansi007, Tishuu, moonlight2630, Mariam...x, revav, rinky70, Ayesha_MSK, lallulal2010, uzmam1, shivangi783, abi2010, sapnaajay, simzzzzcool, vinithaa, princez_94, Anhdara13, malluangel, sweet scorpio, bd670816, -Urvi-, smartnsmexxi, pickachu, desigurl953, AbhiNikiLuver, Sigma, sweet-and-cute, swetha10, -Nitya-, kooliio, lil_desi_goddes, PrithviSanyo1, -afsha-, Ivy_Erutan, hapinezz13, yasu09, Sofna, sana_sajan, Starry_night.


Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 8:


Hearing the alarm clock go off, Geet groaned as she opened her eyes lazily, and reached over to shut it off. Still in a daze, she merely glanced around the room once before falling back into bed, and pulling the covers over her head.

The Bed?! What was she doing there?

Becoming alert all of a sudden, she sprang up and looked around wide-eyed. She had slept on the couch the night before! How could she have possibly gotten on the bed?

*Flashback to the Previous Night*

Furious at his actions, she went and pounded on the bathroom door, "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, that was completely unnecessary and you know it! I'm going to get you back for this. Don't think you're going to get away so easily. GRR" she screamed in exasperation, as she quickly began to plot her revenge.

Maan just leaned back on the door at the other side, What had he just done?!

Meanwhile, Geet stood outside the room gaping at what had taken place. She would kill him! Just wait until he gets outside.

Inside, Maan knew he couldn't escape her forever, he had to step out of the bathroom at one point in his life. And praying that she wouldn't stab him to death, he slowly pushed the door open, and strode out, quite unnerved by the woman standing in front of him, her eyes red with fury and her hands on her hips. Why was she affecting him so much? Of all people, a woman?! And that too, Geet?!

She marched right up to him, stabbing her little finger on his chest as she through a whole slew of curses at him. But he wasn't able to concentrate too much. Her eyes captured his attention, their expressiveness affecting him, as he became completely drowned in her. But he had to get her to shut up, but how?

Her lips moving caught his attention, those luscious lips, and before he knew it, he grabbed her by the waist, pulling her towards himself, as he pressed his lips on hers. She had lost her sense of mind completely, as she wrapped her arms around his neck, and pulled him closer to herself, pressing her body against his.

His hands were doing wonders to her back, as they softly ran along it, pulling away at one of the two tiny doris that was holding her blouse in place. She buried her hands in his hair, a slight moan escaping from her lips as she lost herself in her husband's touch.

Maan had slowly pulled his mouth away from hers, choosing to trail down a series of kisses down her neck, as he slowly pushed the blouse off of one shoulder, giving him access to her to the crook of her neck. As his hands began to pull on the second dori, he softly bit her shoulder.

And that had brought her back to reality. Immediately, she had pushed him away, a faint red appearing on her cheeks as she realized what had just happened between them. Maan was shocked too, and he stood there, frozen in place, while Geet quickly hurried into the bathroom, trying to catch her breath and come back to a normal state after what had just happened.

Phew! If she hadn't stopped that then, they both would have probably never stopped.

Composing herself, she slowly made her way out of the bathroom to find Maan asleep on the bed, and she stood there, staring at him, in his black sleeveless tanktop, his muscles literally bulging, and on his face a small smile. He sure was a handsome man, and he was her husband. Oh wait! What are you thinking Geet? He's the idiot that forced you to marry him.

And with those thoughts, she had made her way to the couch, using her dupatta as a blanket and had nodded off to sleep.

End of Flashback:

Wait, so how did I get in the bed last night? She thought to herself, but right then, she felt herself being pulled over, someone's arms around her waist, MAAN!

"You...How did I get here?" she questioned angrily, trying to get out of his grasp, but his eyes remained closed while his grip on her waist tightened.

Before she could continue though, she heard screaming.

"Although we would love to leave you alone to spend all the time in the world in your husband's arms, GEET GET UP!" screamed Kripa and Riddhima, as they banged on the door. Geet froze inside, How did they know she was in his arms?

OH WAIT.

Last night was supposed to be our wedding night. As Geet saw a smirk playing on his lips, realization dawned on her and she jumped out of his arms, pushing him away with all her might. Grabbing her dupatta and adjusting it on herself properly, she made her way to the door, and opened it only slightly, peering through the tiny space to see the refreshed, grinning faces of her two friends, but their eyes weren't on her face, rather on her neck.

She snapped her fingers in their faces. "Guys! I'm up here! What are you looking at?" she asked, one eyebrow up.

Riddhima snickered as she pointed to the crook between Geet's neck and her shoulder, "Make sure you cover that up before coming downstairs. But if you need help, Kripa Ma'am can help you out with that. She has experience"

Kripa slapped Riddhima in the shoulder, before turning back towards Geet and telling her to call her upstairs if she needs any help.

Need help? Need help with what? Geet nodded, confused, before she closed the door and made her way back into the bedroom, and stood in front of the mirror.

There in that little nook between her neck and shoulder was a slightly red bruise, that looked like nothing less than a love bite. Her eyes widened and she let out one loud scream. AHHH!

Swirling around she saw Maan, sitting up on the bed, and before she could lash out at him, he merely smirked, "Geet, I would ask Kripa for herself to cover that up. You shouldn't be embarrassed about this, I mean, we are husband and wife, and well it is expected. But because you look like you're ready to cry, I would do something about that. It's ginormous"

Geet shut her mouth, No point in arguing with this idiot. "Stupid, duffer, idiot, jerk, Why did I marry him" she muttered to herself, as she went inside the bathroom, slamming the door behind her.

:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:


Soon after, Geet had gone downstairs and the women spent their time in the kitchen, making breakfast, while the men were being the usual lazy bums, hanging around in front of the TV.

"Suniye ji"

Maan turned around, his mouth dropping at the sight in front of him. There stood Geet, clad in a dark red sari, her hands filled with red and white bangles, a pinch of sindoor in her parting, and her mangalsutr dangling proudly from her neck. She looked every bit her part of a married woman. Well duh, they were married, how else would she look?

"Suniye JI?" he questioned, a look of surprise on his face.

"Kya, should...should I call you something else?" Geet questioned sweetly, biting her lip to control her laughter.

"Well...you usually call me Kha-...Oh wait, nope, Suniye JI is just fine" Maan answered. Ha! He was not going to announce to his friends that his wife called him Mr. Khadoos. How utterly embarrassing!

"Kya..um..What did you need Geet?" Maan questioned, bringing himself back to the present.

"Woh...Woh breakfast is ready. I wanted to let you know" she replied shyly, a blush appearing on her cheeks as she looked downwards.

Maan's eyes literally popped out. What in the name of heaven was going on? Geet and a SHY Bride? WOAH! Something was wrong with this picture. Somethig was very very very wrong.

Armaan and Angad got up almost instantaneously and made their way out of the living room, leaving Geet, who was just about to turn and leave, when Maan grabbed her by the elbow, and pulled her back. "What's going on? Why are you being so nice? This is definitely not you" Maan whispered furiously into her ear.

Geet looked up at him, her eyes filled with mirth, as she fluttered her eyelashes, and answered, "I'm being the achi bahu of the Khurana parivaar. Anything wrong Patidev JI?"

And with that, she turned around, strutting away towards the dining room, leaving Maan trying to figure out what was happening to his one day old wife.

:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:-:


Maan was seated at the head of the dining table, Angad, Kripa, Riddhima, Armaan, and Dadi seated elsewhere around it, as Geet came outside of the kitchen, holding a tray filled with small bowls.

"Hmm..more food" exclaimed Angad.

"Yeah, I know...And to think that all of this was made by Geet alone" added Armaan, referring to the billion and one serving bowls on the dining table, where Geet had made alu parathas, omelettes, pancakes, and more for the entire family.

"Sigh, I know. Kripa, why can't you cook like Geet? Then I would actually not have to starve at the office" smirked Angad. A scowl came over Kripa's face, "If I could kill you Angad Khanna and get away scot-free, I would do so in a heartbeat."

"Well, I have some wonderful friends who would track youu down too" laughed Angad.

But by then, Geet had started passing around the little bowls filled with halwa. Placing one in front of each person, she finally took a bowl for herself, and Maan and made her way to the empty seat next to her husband.

"Suniye JI, I hope you like this" she smiled shyly, placing the bowl of halwa in front of him.

He looked at her suspiciously, AHA! He knew what she was doingg!

Just as she was about to dig in to her halwa, he stopped her, "Geet! We have to feed each other right? Dadi, isn't there some tradition that the husband and wife have to feed each other?" asked Maan. Yes! He wasn't going to let her get the better of him! He would beat her at her own game!

Dadi hit herself on the forehead, "Uffo! I'm getting old Maan puttar. Of course. i don't know how I forgot. And these two buddhus, Kripa and Riddhima, didn't remind me either. Yes yes, you both should feed each other the sweet."

"But Dadi..I..um.." Geet began, only to be met by a shaking head and a disapproving look from Dadi.

Sighing, she looked up at Maan, who was ready with his spoonful to feed Geet, a wide grin on his face. "Come on Geet, open your mouth" he prompted and she reluctantly obeyed.

However, Maan was definitely shocked to see her swallowing the sweet completely! As if nothing had happened at all! He was sure she was up to some trick, but she didn't even flinch after eating the halwa. Instead, she munched away happily, demanding for more.

"Geet, you have to feed him too you know" smiled Armaan. And Geet smiled widely, as she held out her spoonful of halwa for her husband, who suspiciously took that bite.

Steam seemed to erupt from his ears, as his eyes nearly popped out! It was SO SPICY! Darting a glare at Geet, he grabbed the glass of water in front of him, and gulped it all down. She must have dumped an entire two spoons of red chili powder into ONLY that bowl of the halwa!

Geet meanwhile, sat happily in her seat, grinning like a chesire cat.

Maan v Geet: 0 - 1.


So....how was it? hehe Do comment and Let me know, and if you don't like to comment, please do hit the like button!

PM's will be coming out a little later :) I have to first finish responding to all these comments😆😆


Lots of Love,

~Naina

Edited by Naina2127 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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EDIT
OMG!!!!!!
I can't believe you finally updated!!!!!
LOL
Yay!!!
I'm first to comment!!
Next time don't post a Promo, because i makes me demand more
I've been waiting for this update ever since teh promo
and sorry for pestering u so much
but couldn't help it!
Awww!!! I feel so honoured that you dedicated
this wonderful update for me!!!
Thanks soo mcuh for finally updating!
It was sooo worth the wait!
OmG! I juss love Maan and Geet in ur FF
both are soooooo naughty!
Soo cute!!
I love the way you write!
it's fantastic!!
and Maan kissed Geet again!??😳😳😆😉
I just love that part
haha Geet being an Adarsh Bahu was too funny
and then the red chillies
OMG!! Poor Maan!
I just loved it sooo much!
It was
AwesomeFantasticWonderfulExcellentMaanEetliscious!!
Please do update soooooon next time!!
Thanks again for the Dedication!
Love You!
-Jassi
Edited by xxJaSsIxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Add me to ur pmlistt!!
Suniyee jii was awesomeeeee ;))
omgg! You should try to updt evrrydayy..I lovee your FF..
just read all todayyyyyy...
Amazingg..I need sum intense scenes between maaan...
Scoree is 0-1...hahaha fabb...
Can't wait to see maan's next movee..
And tht was super short..
Updt soon..lols..
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh gos my stomach is still aching..
i laughed a lot...
maan angd geets chemistry just awsome..
pls update soon....
and ur sense of humour is just amazing...
i loved to read the whole ff again and again...
and pls continue soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!
😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
i like the way you express the feelings between maaneet.!!!..!awesome janemaan.....!!....

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