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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Amazing! They fought again.....lolz.....but Geet was trying to be nice to him.....but it's gonna take a while before they can open up to each other......and Maan stopped Geet in the end......me wonders why......lolz.....do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Damn abhi dosti hui thi aur abhi toot bhi gayi
Sho sad😆😆😆
But loved the way Geet was trying to help Maan
Their fght convo n Maan's only one word Geet was fab😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
poor geet
wonder what maan is going to do to make up with her
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
love the ff.. pls update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Iqbal Neha1, @lody, @sharmake11, @smiliey, @anufa, @vinithaa, @swetha10, @shona2010, @Arshi_sahni, @shreya satish, @ansah, @.sireesha., @kirti_fiji, @ -afsha, @kashndsel4eva, @sonnal_17 THANKYOUUUUU!!!!!!!
@ Nanthini9 lol hope you liked it!!
@ kooliio lol yep 😃 but it wont take long
@Dhara_s haha yess and geet is the only one who can do it!! 😆
@sweet coco glad you like it!! i know yaar, i've been thinking the same thing, to make the updates longer, but for some reason each chapter never goes past 2 1/2 pages!! lol! hope you like this update too 😊
@charmed ones thanks!! hmm i think if you read the 2nd prologue you'll get it 😉
@shivangi783 lol thanks!! i locked my door and pretended not to be here when i wrote this updates lolz!! hope you like it!!!!!
@Lakshmi86 thanks!! yeah i guess they both need each other huh? 😊
@Chotii im sooo glad you like it!!!!
@shalini_s haha hmmm well they only met two days ago!! can't fall for each other just yet!!!! 😉
@Starry_night glad you like it!!!! can't have maaneet without fights!! lol


Shreya

Edited by shrezzj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyy guys!! new update!! i think im getting better at updating daily now hahahaha

okk so i used some hindi in this update.....so please please forgive any mistakes.. since im not fluent in hindi i kinda had to guess and hope i spelled everything right lol (im tamil which is soooo different from hindi haha)

sooo lemme know how you guys like this part!!!!

ooh and please continue to leave comments, because thats how i can tell if im being confusing or not lol!! im trying to clear up confusion as i go 😃


Shreya

Chapter 6

"Wait!" Maan ran after Geet.

"What?" Geet turned to look at Maan. She crossed her hands and looked away from him. Her face was red with anger.

"Sorry, I was kind of in a bad mood." Maan looked at Geet.

"What did you say?" Geet said with her arms still crossed.

"I said I'm sorry."

"Wait, come again? I don't think I heard that properly," Geet said, cupping her left ear so she could hear better.

"I'm not saying it again. I already said it twice," Maan said sternly.

Geet examined Maan closely, looking him up and down before she finally put her hands down and nodded, "It's okay."

Maan rolled his eyes, "You're such a drama queen! You know that?"

Geet laughed, "I'm sorry too. I guess I shouldn't have bothered you, huh? I mean, you seemed like you were kind of depressed..."

"Yeah...I was just thinking about something..." Maan trailed off. "So...umm, we're still friends?" he asked Geet and held out his hand just like she had before.

"Yeh sab hone ke baadh? Sochna padega," she smiled and walked away.

"What?" Maan turned around.

"Kyun! Ho Gaya Na..." Geet replied.

"Why? What happened?" Maan was extremely confused.

Geet turned to Maan, "It's a movie, Maan." Seeing his confused face she added, "You know, that movie with Vivek Oberoi and Aishwarya Rai..."

Maan shook his head.

"Don't tell me...you don't watch movies?"

"Umm, no. Why?"

"You don't watch movies?" Geet was horrified.

"No."

Geet tried to smile, "Well, then, you listen to music right?" She prompted Maan.

"No..." Maan started. "Well, I mean, I used to listen to a few..."

Geet stepped back in horror and covered her mouth. "What?" she tried to say, but her voice got caught in her throat. She cleared it and tried again, "What! You don't even listen to music? Like, you don't have an ipod or anything?"

Maan shook his head again. He didn't understand why this was such a huge issue to Geet. Geet leaned back against the wall for support. She looked like she wanted to say something, but she would open her mouth, and then close it again without saying anything.

"Are you okay, Geet?" Maan asked, stepping closer to Geet.

"Wow...I mean, how can one person be sooo boring?" Geet finally said.

"Geet!"

"No, really, you are. I'm totally serious." Geet said. "No movies and no music. All you do is work, work, and more work. You need more excitement in your life!

"Geet!"

"I know my name is Geet, so you don't have to keep on repeating it, okay." Geet stopped Maan. "You know what, I have an idea. Come with me," she grabbed Maan's hand and pulled him across the house to her room and made him sit on her bed. "Wait here," she commanded and walked over to her closet. Maan stretched his neck, trying to see what Geet was doing, but he couldn't see. "Here it is!" Geet exclaimed and walked back to Maan. She held out a pair of earphones and prompted Maan to put them on.

Just as she turned on her iPod, Nakul knocked on the door and said, "Geet Ma'am, Dadimaa asked you to come downstairs really quick."

Geet looked at Nakul and then at her iPod and then back at Nakul, "Umm, okay tell her I'll be there right away," she told Nakul. "And you! You stay right here!" Geet told Maan as she walked out of her room.

Maan looked down at the iPod Geet had left in his hands. He scrolled through the songs and saw several titles he had never heard of before like, "Tere Bin," "Chaha Hai Tujhko," Tujhe Bhula Diya," "Do Pal," and "Sach Keh Raha." He scrolled through the entire list, looking for any titles he recognized, but didn't find any, and Geet wasn't back yet either, so he though he'd try listening to some of these songs. He pressed the play button and the song she had been listening to resumed:

Tujh Se Mein Khone Laga,

Juda Jaise Hone Laga,

Mujh Se Kuch Mera

Tu Hi Mera Liye Ab Kar Dua,

Tu Hi Is Dard Se Kar de Juda,

Tera Hoke Tera Jo Main Na Raha,

Main Ye Khud Se Kehta Hoon


Tujhe Bhula Hai Diya Oh,

Tujhe Bhula Hai Diya Oh,

Tujhe Bhula Hai Diya Oh,

Phir Kyun Teri Yaadon Ne

Mujhe Rula Diya Oh,

Mujhe Rula Diya


The song ended, and the next one played:

Tere Bin, Main Yun Kaise Jiya

Kaise Jiya Tere Bin

Lekar Yaad Teri Raaten Meri Kati,

Mujh Se Baatein Teri

Karti Hai Chandani

He pressed next and went through a few more songs. He noticed all the songs on the playlist had one thing in common: being away from your loved one. He wondered why she was listening to such depressing music. Just then, Geet walked back into the room.

"So, did you listen to anything, or have you just been sitting there?" she asked.

"Yeah, I listened to a couple of your songs," he said.

"Let me see," Geet took the iPod from him. "These? You've been listening to these?" She asked. Shaking her head, she pressed a few buttons and scrolled around until she found what she had been looking for. "Here, listen to this," she told him and pressed the "play" button.

Pee Loon Tere Neele Neele Naino Se Shabnam,

Pee Loon Tere Geele Geele Honto ki Sargam,

Pee Loon Hai Peene Ka Musam,

Tere Sang Ishq Kaari hai,

Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai,

Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko,

Tere Sang Bekarari hai...

He noticed it was a much lighter, and happier song than what he had been listening to before.

"Its so romantic, " Geet smiled and sat down next him. She pulled out one of the earbuds in Maan's ear and placed it in her own.

Hosh Main Rahon Kiyun Aaj Main,

Tu Meri Bahon Main Simti Hai,

Mujh Main Samayi Hai Youn,

Jis Tarah Tu thodi Ho Nadi,

Tu Mere Seene Main Chubti Hai,

Sagar Tumara Main Hon.

Pee Loon Teri Dheemi Dheemi Lahron Ki Chamcham.

Pee Loon Teri Saundi Saundi Sanson Ko Har Dam,

Pee Loon Hai Peene Ka Mausam,

He watched Geet as she sat next to him swaying to the beat of the music and occasionally dancing with her shoulders. She was so different. Sometimes she would fight, sometimes she would cry, sometimes she would laugh, sometimes she would smile. She was always doing something different. He liked that she had never tried to hit on him like so many other women he had been around did. She treated him like a normal person. She had wanted to be friends with him. He liked that.

Kurbaan Marhban Ke Main To Kurbaan,

Sun Le Sadaaa....

"Did you like it?" Geet turned to him

SIZE=3]"Mmm," he smiled, still watching Geet as she looked through her iPod for more songs. [/SIZE]

"You know what, I'm going to try to color your gray life a little," Geet said.

"What?"

"Yep, I'm coloring your life," Geet smiled. "I'm giving you homework."

"Homework?" Maan repeated.

"Yeah, you heard me right. Homework. I'm going to assign a song to you everyday, and you have to listen to it," she said.

"Homework?" Maan said again.

"Yeah, and I'm going to start you off with something happy, to lift your spirits. Hmm...okay, so you're homework for the day is to listen to "Jaane Kyun" from Dostana."

"Homework?"

"I'm going out with Dadi right now. We're going shopping. So you can listen to it on my iPod while we're going if you want. That way you don't have to look for it on the internet," she handed the iPod back over to Maan and got up. She walked to her desk, grabbed her bag, and walked out the door yelling, "Enjoy!" behind her back.

"Homework?" Maan sat there motionless on her bed. Did she really just give him homework? Homework?



Edited by shrezzj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HAHAAH!! omgg! thats hilarious! Maan got homeeworkk!!! anddd homework is to listen a song everyday...heheh!
HAHAHAH! OMGG! this is soo funnyyyy..
I love the songss...Pee Loon, Tujhe Bhula Diyaa..Tere Bin & Do Pal..All my favs songs! <333333
haha! Goodjobb Geet..Maan! NOW DO YOUR HW! hahah!
Amazing Updt! ;) updt soon & pm me when you updt!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hahahaha...lolz...he's so shocked that the MSK got HOMEWORK!!!

Thanks a lot for this..the more I read,the more I fall in love with ur story..

Thanks a lot yaar

Love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME & FUNNY UPDATE PLS CONT SOONNNNNNNNN
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing....fab
love it.. plzzzzzzzzzzzz
continue soon...thanks for the pm..

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