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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

awsum update....luved premheer romance in bathroom...

thx for da pm..update asap..!!



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Originally posted by: soapsick

hehe, *blushes* guilty as charged 😳 that was a first for me and I have to admit I didn't mean for it to be really steamy but one thing led to another and I ended up with what you've read already 😳 but hey, this was amazing!! It's these little moments that make a couple perfect and it was so real and such fun to read!! 😊 


Ooooh I love the PJ in this fic!! I'm reading it and going MINE MINE MINE πŸ˜† 

I hope you continue reeeeeeaaalllll soon 😳 good luck with studying 😊



Haha...I think everyone is in line with you!  Too bad there isn't a PJ store πŸ˜†



Originally posted by: Aymee

Grace, I have to say that was a very romantic chapter.

 
I loved how Prem and Heer are spending time with each other, not wanting to leave each other for a second.  Very cute and romantic.
 
Loved the shaving scene.  It is always romantic when a girl shaves her guys face.  But it was gross when they had shaving cream in their mouths. 
 
Great update Grace.  Thank you for the PM.  I can't wait to see what will happen next.
 
Oh and as for my previous comment about Chapter 9.  I am sorry.  Somehow, it slipped out of my mind that Veera was engaged to Nihaal  😳.  Thank you for clearing that up for me.    



Thanks Lisa!  Glad you liked Part 10.  Just wanted to show the cute little everyday kind things between them. 😳



Originally posted by: suryavni

uh!!!

you drop such hints that make all of us spent our week upon needles....!!!
loved the PH scenes....its the sweet nothings in our life that build up the love and trust ...
aha! shaving scene was cute....i wish i had that chance with my hubby....i hate his goatee!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜†
so grace better update your steamer fast....and i am sure you will be at your best ....!!



Thanks Surya!  Haha...I like being evil and dropping hints like these πŸ˜†  Anyhoo, steamer will be posted this week.  I know most of you want the other fic but so complex of a storyline I find it takes a lot of concentration to write that one right now.  I find this one easier to handle...very straight forward.  But you guys will get a update on AWMARW along with the Spicy Part 12 😳 its the least I can do for making you guys wait so long.
 


Originally posted by: -Jyo-

Awsome part

Loved premeer scenes
thanx for pm
update soon...................



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Originally posted by: premdesh

awesome update.

waiting for nexttttttttt
plz continue asappp



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Originally posted by: anuu2010

awesome update

loved premeer scene in bathroom
nice part
thanks for pm
waiting for next part
update soon



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Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved it sooooooooooooooooooo much...........

heer and prem had been away.......... heer came back.......... premwith grown hair and beard......... heer shaving his face and chest............ loved the bathroom scenes
shaving cream kiss...........lolz ........... it definately doesnt tastes good.........and poor heer chewing her pens.......... ink in mouth lolz.......
had great time reading them................. thank u soooooooooooo much



I really enjoyed writing this Part and yea the shaving scene was my favorite.  Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by iheartChai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Motibah

Aw Grace that was such a romantic and adorable update! 😍 Love it so freaking muchπŸ€— Premeer shaving scene was soo cute and just like Heer I hate hate HATEEEEEE chest hair with a PASSION! I swear if there's one thing that I actually hate then its chest hair! 🀒 It makes me sick! I hate it when guys have their top buttons open and there's loads of chest hair popping out🀣 LOL me and my sisters have this little thing of noticing chest hair and puking quietly🀣 I am going to make sure my guy shaves his chest every day otherwise I swear I am NOT going near himπŸ˜† hahaha Im glad Heer shaved Prems chest😍

and OMG the shower scene I was going to write a scene like that in my ff as well πŸ˜† LOL after watching the one in 'Remember Me' with Rob and Emily I couldnt help imagining it on Premeer😍 D'aw your one was soooo adorable though! I lovee Premeer!

Great great greaaat update Gracey! Loved it and update ASAP :) xx



I dislike chest hair too 🀒  I never watched 'Remember Me' so I don't know the shower scene there.  The shaving scene was inspired by a Korean serial I watched...it was such a good one...really sad πŸ˜­and I hate sad serials but it was just so good I couldn't stop watching it πŸ˜†



Originally posted by: sadhz

whole update was realy awesomeeeeeeeeee.......so many prem heer scenes...............loved it ❀️..............loved the PH bathroom scene........................update asap.........thnx for the pm.................waitingggggggggggggggg



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Originally posted by: moon_mine

awww it ws awesome!!!!!!

full of premeer scenes!!!!!!
wat more cn be askd for!!!!!!!



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Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

part 9 was wonderful....glad heer broke up with raj!

he seems a nice guy...hope he finds someone too!


Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

lovvvvvved this update!

and don't worry about the no. of parts.....the more the better!πŸ˜†



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Originally posted by: sonia7

awesome update

loved prem heer scenes especially the shaving lol
thanks for the pm
continue soon



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Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggg



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Edited by iheartChai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

r u updatingggggg now



In a little bit...after I do some reading πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi everyone!

Sorry for changing the title of my thread.  I wanted to shorten it so I can have enough room to write the title of the next Shot I will be doing πŸ˜‰.


Thanks again for those that Commented and/or Hit the Like Button!


Yes, I've been updating this one a lot 😳 don't worry I haven't forgotten about the other fic.  Just this one is so much straight forward to write.  Been taken breaks in between my readings to write a little here and there.



Part 11: Cutting All Ties

 

Heer was standing in the Singh's kitchen staring at the oven intensely trying to make out what was happening inside using the lone oven light as her only guide.  "The more you stare the longer it's going to take," Meher said laughing at her cute behavior.  "Relax Heer the cakes will rise."

 

She gave a soft grin.  "I can't help it I always get so anxious.  For whatever reason they never turn out right at home.  I can make cookies blind folded if I have to.  I've gotten really good at those.  Prem loves my cookies but I want to be able to make something more than that for him." 

 

"How did the crumbles turned out last week?" Meher inquired.

 

"He devoured them.  I made six peach mini crumbles and I had to fight him for the last one," Heer smiled. 

 

"That's great!  See you're getting there.  You've got cookies and crumbles down," Meher encouraged.

 

"I guess I do.  Thanks so much for teaching me all these recipes Meher," Heer replied.

 

"Stop thanking me that's what friends do," she smiled.  She checked the clock on the wall and sighed, "Where are the boys?  They said they were going to bring home some lunch for us and look at that it's already 1:30.  I'm starving."

 

"Maybe the basketball game ran over?" Heer suggested.

 

"I suppose so.  So how are things going with the girls?  Are they still giving Prem a tough time?" Meher asked.

 

Heer frowned slightly, "Sort of.  Veera's still slightly apprehensive about it.  Ashlesha and Sanjana are fine but I think it has more to do with the fact their starting to date Prem's friends."

 

"Ah, so it worked, huh?  This little match making thing you and Preet set up.  Haha...I think Prem's right you guys should go into business together," Meher laughed.

 

"Well, they've only been dating a little while so we will have to wait in see," Heer replied.

 

"In that case Veera will have to come around.  And didn't her fiance Nihaal hit it off with Prem?  I thought I saw them talking a whole lot at the party," Meher asked.

 

"Yeah they did.  They've met up for lunch a couple of times too," Heer said.

 

"You know Heer I have to say I really admire you," Meher said. 

 

"Admire me?" she repeated looking at her confused.  "Why?"


"If I was in your situation I don't think I would have the strength to forgive.  I mean I know Prem and he's a nice guy who committed a stupid mistake but still...I can only imagine how hard it must have been for you," Meher said and then quickly apologized, "I'm sorry I didn't mean to go off on this topic.  Didn't mean to pick at old wounds."

 

"I know.  Tell you the truth I struggled a lot with it.  I'm surprised too that I was able to forgive him.  But he proved to me that he really wanted to start over and make things right...and well a part of me never stopped loving him.  So I guess that's the part I ended up listening too.  And I'm happy I did," Heer replied.  "I'm really happy with him."

 

Meher smiled, "I really am glad for you both.  Now if he does anything stupid again don't hesitant to call on me.  I'll straighten him out...he considers me like his sister."

 

Heer laughed, "Okay."

 

Meher moved to the pantry and pulled out a package of puris and said, "I don't know where those two ran off to but I'm so hungry.  Let's make some panipuri?"

 

"An excellent idea and when they finally come back we won't let them have any off it!" Heer replied.

 

Meher laughed, "Exactly!"

 

Several minutes later the girls were busy gorging themselves on their homemade blend of panipuri and dahi puris.  "This was the best idea.  I really don't care what the boys bring home I just want to eat this," Heer said.

 

"I know.  I'm almost full too," Meher giggled.  The girls turned their heads to the sound of the front door opening announcing the arrival of their partners.  "Well, look who finally decided to show up." Meher reprimanded as her husband entered the kitchen carrying a basketball.

 

"Sorry," Preet apologized giving her a kiss on the cheek.  "We ran into some traffic."

 

"It was pretty bad," Prem said as he limped his way into the room.  His knee was bandaged but there were stains of red seeping through.

 

Heer immediately got up and went to inspect him.  "What happened to you?" she asked with worry.

 

"Nothing really...just scraped my knee," he simply stated.  Preet slightly snickered at the comment causing Prem to give him a hard stare telling him to keep quiet.

 

Meher looked at her husband suspiciously, "Care to share?"

 

Preet shrugged his shoulders feigning ignorance.  "Hey panipuri and dahi puri...awesome!"

 

"Sorry we didn't get a chance to pick up anything to eat," Prem apologized.

 

"It's all right," Meher replied.  "Sit down Prem."

 

"We need to ice that knee," Heer said.  Prem sat down and started eating the puris along with Preet.  He was still sweating a little from the basketball game he had played and he was wiping it away with his forearms.  Preet gave him a cautious look telling to knock it off.  Heer came back with an ice pack handling it to him and gasped, "Prem what's wrong with your eye?  I see a faint line of purple."

 

"Is that a black eye?" Meher questioned and then eyed her husband, "Gigs up Mr. Singh tell the truth now and you won't be sleeping downstairs on the couch tonight."

 

"I told you this wouldn't work," Prem muttered to Preet.  He used his shirt to wipe the sweat off his face taking along with it the makeup that had been covering up his black eye.

 

"Oh my God, your eye...Prem?!" Heer cried.

 

"Well, maybe if you didn't sweat like a baboon it wouldn't be noticeable," Preet retorted.  "You kept wiping it off with your hands."

 

Meher grabbed a tissue and handed it to Preet, "Remove," she sternly ordered.  He frowned but obediently wiped his face revealing an emerging black eye.  "Preet!  What were two doing?  Why did you guys feel the need to hide this from us?" she shouted.

 

"She's right.  You didn't think we'd notice you guys wearing makeup?"  Heer asked. 

 

"Because this is what we didn't want to hear.  You guys going crazy over what happened at the basketball court," Preet replied.

 

"Crazy?  You both have black eyes and Prem's knee still bleeding!" Meher yelled.  "How are we supposed to be acting?  I swear I can't understand what exactly your knuckle head of a brain is thinking sometimes."

 

"We just got into a little discussion with the opposite team," Prem replied while Heer fussed over his eye.  "Ahhh, Sweatheart it hurts when you do that."  He pulled her hands away and took the ice pack intended for his knee and placed it on his eye.

 

"A discussion?" Heer and Meher both repeated with disbelief.

 

"It just ended with some fists," Preet chuckled.  "But you girls should be happy to know we took real good care of them.  If you think we look bad you should see what those two look like...ahaha," giving Prem a high five.  The girls rolled their eyes at their immature behavior.

 

"Don't get angry at us they are the ones that started it," Prem explained.   

 

"Where exactly did you get the makeup from?" Meher asked handing her husband an ice pack.

 

"CVS," Preet simply replied and popped another panipuri in his mouth.  "Didn't know there were so many brands and skin types...lucky for us the sales clerk was nice to help us out."

 

"What she apply make up for you?" Meher laughed.

 

"No, we did that ourselves," Preet replied smiling proudly showing his pearly white teeth.

 

"Hey should we fry up some samosas?  Let's just have these snacks for lunch," Prem said.

 

"I could go for some pakoras too," Preet said and gave a sideways glance to his wife.

 

Meher crossed her arms, "So you come home late...making us starve and you didn't bring anything for us to eat...lied that you got into a fight and you want me to make you pakoras?"

 

"Please?" Preet asked looking at her with pleading eyes.

 

"Go wash your hands so you can help me make the batter," Meher ordered.

 

"I'm injured," Preet pouted. 

 

"Not your hands," Meher said. 

 

"Why don't you ask Mr. Chef over there?" Preet continued to whine.

 

"Because he hurt his knee.  If Prem can cook you can at least learn a few things," Meher said giving him the if you don't do what I say you are in trouble look.

 

"Yes dear," Preet obediently answered and went to the sink.

 

"Prem, where are you going?" Heer asked as she pulled a package of frozen samosas from the freezer.

 

"To the bathroom.  Just want to clean up a bit," he replied.  "Wash my face and get the rest of this make up off."

 

"I think we need to rebandage your knee," Heer suggested.

 

"After lunch.  I'll be okay.  You help Meher.  She's going to need help with Preet in the kitchen," the minute he finished his sentence a sound of crashing steel and plastic mixing bowls falling onto the floor echoed through the room along with an exasperated yell from Meher.  "See." He grinned while Heer chuckled.  "I'll be back," he said giving her kiss on the cheek.


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Heer gently swirled the lemon drop martini in her hand looked on with delight as the waiter brought the appetizers to their table; an order of bruschetta, crispy zucchini frittes, and stuffed mushrooms.  "I absolutely love this place," she smiled as she unwrapped her silverware from the crisp white linen it was tucked inside of.  "Why don't we come here that often?"

 

"You know I don't know why?" Veera replied.  "Why don't we?  We always have really good food here."

 

"It's because we go for happy hours and drink specials," Sanjana answered and then took a sip of her martini.

 

"So, Miss Veera...have you guys decided on a date?" Ashlesha asked.

 

"I want a spring wedding so we are thinking March or early April before the weather gets unbearably hot," Veera replied. "So mark your calendars for those months of 2012."

 

"It's going be here right in town or you guys going to do one of those destination weddings?" Sanjana asked before popping a mushroom cap into her mouth.

 

"Las Vegas?" Heer inquired with a laugh.   "You can get married in one of the chapels...they have hundreds of those wedding chapels there."

 

Veera shook her head, "Oh God no Heer.  I would never do that in.  It just seems so tacky."

 

"I'm sure they have some really beautiful venues there.  If you exclude all those strange 24 hour chapels the city of Vegas probably knows how to handle weddings the best.  Plus with all those hotels on the strip you don't have to worry about the family.  Guests can entertain themselves with all the casinos, the shopping, and other entertainment Vegas has to offer," Ashlesha said.  "I also heard they have special wedding packages and things.  Could prove light in the pocket book, you know what I mean?"

 

"I never thought of it that way," Veera mused.  "But no I think if I can I want an outdoor wedding by the beach."

 

"That sounds so romantic," Sanjana replied.

 

"Well, it is on my wish list.  Nihaal and I are checking out some more venues next week so I'll keep you guys in formed.  I just hope I don't turn into a bridezilla...getting all crazy and being a complete perfectionist about my wedding," Veera replied and then munched on some zucchini frittes.

 

"Yea, it's horrible to see it happen.  I was once a bridesmaid for this college friend.  She completely flipped out on one of her dress fittings.  Me and rest of the bridesmaids had to calm her down," Heer said.  She took a bite of bruschetta and then eyed Ashlesha and Sanjana who both gave her a suspicious look.  "So..." she simply stated.

 

Veera smiled, "Yes, details."

 

"Nothing to report.  Rishabh's been a complete gentleman," Ashlesha replied.  "It's been really nice getting to know him.  And that's all I'm going to say on the subject."

 

"Oh come on," Sanjana pressed.  "Any sparks?"

 

"Look who's talking...what about you and Prashant?" Ashlesha inquired.

 

Sanjana's face blushed, "It's going well."

 

The girls all giggled at her reaction.  "I should say so by the way you are turning red!" Ashlesha laughed.

 

"Look I'm just taking one day at a time.  I don't want to get ahead of myself you know what I mean?" Sanjana said.

 

"I understand," Veera nodded.  "If everything works out I guess you will have Heer and Preet to thank."

 

"Thanks Heer," Ashlesha and Sanjana both said.

 

"I just introduced you guys.  The rest is up to you...like I said if no sparks happen at least you got yourself a new friend," Heer replied with a smile.  "And you're welcome.  They are both really great guys."

 

"Rishabh is," Ashlesha said with a grin.

 

"Oh, I think we finally got a confession out of her," Veera teased.   

 

They girls continued chatting, drinking, and eating their appetizers when Heer noticed a familiar person walking their way.  She swallowed uncomfortably.  Veera noticed the change in complexion on her friend's face.  "Heer?  You okay?" she asked.

 

"It's Roshni," Heer uttered.

 

Ashlesha's eyes widen, "Roshni...the Roshni?" she whispered.

 

"What other Roshni do we know?" Sanjana replied.

 

The girls all looked up as Roshni made her presence known at the table.  "Well, hello Heer.  Nice to see you again," she greeted giving a fake smile.

 

Heer gave a cautious half grin, "You too Roshni."

 

"You girls look like you are celebrating something.  A party for fiance stealing?" she replied snidely.  "What do they say birds of a feather flock together?  They teach you or are you teaching them?"All of Heer's friends gave her a glaring look which she completely ignored. 

 

"I'd appreciate it if you leave my friends alone.  If you have something to say to me then just say it," Heer simply stated.  She had felt pity for her the last time she had seen her because she was hopelessly drunk but this time it was different, she was purposely trying to make a scene with her.

 

Roshni gave a sneering chuckle.  "Fine.  Don't think this will be the end of me.  Sooner or later Prem's going to go back to his mother and I'll be there.  You'll see.  And he'll leave you again just like he did before and you'll be left with nothing.  I have family on my side and you have nothing.  Nothing seems to be all you'll ever have."

 

"I think you should just leave," Veera replied sternly jumping into the conversation unable to take the insults Heer was receiving.  "I don't know what kind of delusional world you are living in...he's no longer your man or fiance...having trouble letting go?  Can't get over the fact that he finally realized what he had taken for granted and went back to Heer...that's probably one of the smartest things he's done for himself.  Stop trying to create all this drama and making these empty threats...it's really quite pathetic."

 

Heer glanced over at Veera with appreciative surprised by her sudden outburst.  She then looked at Roshni, "Prem's closest aunt...Madhuri Auntie knows along with his cousins...they came and visited last week and they were all happy to see me again and disapprove of the way his mother's been handling things.  So I don't know what family you're referring too."  The girls at the table gave smirking smiles as Roshni's face reflected a stunned expression.  "I'm only going to say this nicely once.  Please leave us alone or I'll request the restaurant to ask you to leave because you're bothering us."  Roshni scoffed slightly and then without another word left the table.  The rest of the girls all looked at Heer with concern.  "You going to be okay?" Sanjana asked.

 

"Yeah, I'll be fine.  I can't believe I actually felt sorry for her once," Heer replied.

 

 "The nerve of that woman!" Ashlesha complained.

 

"She doesn't deserve your sympathy.  She obviously has trouble letting go," Veera said.  "Didn't Prem leave his firm because of her?"

 

"She's not going to purposely cause trouble now is she?" Sanjana asked with great concern.

 

"You mean restraining order crazy?" Ashlesha replied.  "I hope that doesn't happen to you two.  That would be horrible."

 

"That's it you're not allowed to walk to your car alone after work.  One of us has to accompany you," Veera commanded.

 

"And you can't go and get coffee by yourself either," Sanjana added.  "One of us will go with you on your coffee break."

 

"Yes, one of us has to be with you at all times," Ashlesha nodded.

 

"Guys, don't you think you are taking this a little out of hand?" Heer replied.  "I'm not some child that needs to be walked across the street.  I can handle it on my own."

 

"Prem won't be too happy if something happens to you," Sanjana said.

 

"You're going to tell him about this right?" Ashlesha asked.  "I think you should."

 

"I don't want to worry him," Heer said.  "Besides nothing happened.  It's not like she threatened to do bodily harm to me."

 

"I think you should tell him," Veera said.  "She was his problem and he's tired handling her but now she's starting to bother you.  Hiding things like this is only going cause more problems in your relationship.  You guys need to work together to get rid of her."

 

Heer sighed, "I really don't want to be talking about this anymore.  Can we please move onto a different topic?"  The girls shot each other glances and then complied with her request.


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Prem looked down at his side and smiled at how their hands intertwined as they walked hand in hand down the street.  "So how was your day at work?" he asked.

 

"It was okay," Heer replied.  "Just a little tired.  Are you going to stay over tonight?"

 

"You want me to?" Prem chuckled.

 

"On days like theses...I just want to be able to curl up on my favorite pillow," Heer replied.

 

"I've become a pillow now?" Prem replied arching his eyebrow.

 

"I have trouble sleeping when I don't have my pillow," Heer teased.  "My pillow's super comfy."

 

"Well, in that case I guess I have to...can't deprive you of your sleep," Prem smiled warmly.  He understood what Heer meant.  It was strange how they had gotten use to sleeping beside each other.  It was a comforting feeling knowing the person you loved was right next to you.  Prem often found when she wasn't there that his bed felt empty and cold; resulting in a restless night's sleep.

 

"How are things at work?" Heer asked.

 

"Going really well.  Mr. Tonaka's a pretty cool guy," Prem grinned.  "So should we be adventurous and just go into one of these restaurants for dinner?"

 

"Sure why not.  I've never eaten at any of these places," Heer answered.

 

"Let's try this one...Paladar...Latin cuisine," Prem suggested.

 

"Sounds good and looks like a really fun place," Heer replied as she heard the playful music coming from the open area patio seating.

 

A few minutes later they were drinking margaritas and eating their dinner enjoying the lively Latin music that was buzzing in the restaurant.  "Try the chicken it's really good," Prem said cutting her a piece and placing it on her plate.

 

"Here have a fish taco," Heer replied serving him a shell.  As she went to go and take another sip from her margarita her eyes widen and she muttered, "Not again."

 

Prem stared at her wondering what she was talking about.  "What...not again?" he asked.

Heer saw Roshni on her way out with some clients and then turned back into the restaurant like she had left something.  She lowered her head not wanting to attract any attention towards their table and picked at her food.  Prem continued looking at her.  "Heer?  Something wrong?"

 

"No nothing," she replied.

 

"Then why won't you look at me when you're talking?" he asked.  He frowned and began looking around the restaurant when he saw what was causing her to act this way.  "Roshni?" he uttered.  "Did she do something to you?"  His voice was low and serious.  "She did...didn't she?" he continued when Heer remained silent.  Prem didn't get to inquire any further when he felt the presence of someone at their table.  He glanced up and gave a really annoyed look.  "What do you want?"

 

"I was just minding my manners and saying hello to two people I know," Roshni simply replied.

 

"Hello," Prem said.  "Now you can go."

 

"You know that's not really nice.  I haven't seen you in a while and this is how you treat me?" Roshni asked.

 

"If you think I'm going to invite you to sit down with us you are sadly mistaken," Prem replied through gritted teeth.

 

Heer gently stared at her margarita; her two fingers on the base of the glass rocking it softly the liquid swirling inside.  She had this strong desire to dump the contents onto Roshni for ruining their dinner.

 

"I don't see why you are being so hostile I haven't even said anything to you," Roshni said.

 

"Well, I don't know maybe...hmmm let's see...you threatened to ruin my reputation, pretended to call me up for a business meeting only to be drunk, kept making passes at me even after I clearly explained to you I wasn't interested, and you can't seem to understand I'm no longer your fiance.  I think those are some pretty good reasons for my attitude," Prem replied.

 

"You know Prem as much as you may hate your mother you will eventually miss her.  Just like she I will simply be waiting...you'll come back around...you left once what guarantee you have that you won't leave again?" Roshni remarked.

 

Heer dramatically stood up from the table drink in hand, "I've tolerated enough of your crap.  You really are desperate.  He's not interested in you.  I don't know what he else he has to do make you understand it's over.  We've exchanged apartment keys...his family knows we're dating again and beside his mother they approve...we've been talking about going away for a romantic weekend...is that enough for you to hear?"  A sneering chuckle escaped Roshni's throat at her comments.  "Not enough?  Fine.  He calls me every day to asks how I'm doing...there isn't a day that goes by where he doesn't tell me he loves me.  And we've been sleeping together too and I know he's never touched you once.  So just leave us alone!"  Prem looked at Heer in alarm knowing what was going to happen next.  He scrunched his face and grimaced as Roshni let out a scream and quickly stood up dragging Heer out of the restaurant.  He muttered to a passing waiter, "We'll be back," thrusting his credit card into his hand.  Once outside Heer vented, "I just want to slap her."

 

"You dumped your margarita on her," Prem said. 

 

"Sorry for over reacting," Heer apologized.

 

Prem chuckled as he pulled her into a hug, "Nah, she deserved it."  He gave her a kiss on the forehead, "You've taken to dumping drinks on people.  I wonder if this is something our kids are going to inherit."  Heer looked at him amazed that this was first time he mentioned having children together.  "So, are you going to tell me about the other time you bumped into Roshni?" he asked rather sternly.

 

Heer gave an apologetic look, "Sorry, I didn't want to worry you.  Nothing like that happened.  It was girls' night out and she just happened to show up at the restaurant we were eating at.  We exchanged some words...Veera kind of stood up for you..."

 

"She did?" Prem replied with surprise.

 

"She said the smartest thing you did was to come back to me," Heer explained.

 

"Well, she's right about that," Prem smiled.

 

"Anyways I told her to stop bothering us and if she didn't I would tell the restaurant to tell her to leave," Heer said.

 

Prem nodded and felt guilty that his problem had suddenly become her problem too.  "Okay next time this happens...if it happens again which I highly doubt now that you've basically told her off and dump the margarita on her...you have to tell me.  She's my problem and I wish I was able to handle her better so she didn't start bothering you."

 

"You're right and I will.  And she's no longer just your problem Prem...she's ours.  We will deal with her," Heer said.  "We're together now so your problems are mine and my problems are yours.  We have to work together."

 

He smiled at her comment, "Right."

 

They both turned their heads as they heard the front door of the restaurant open and a wet Roshni emerged onto the sidewalk.  She looked at them still holding each other in an intimate embrace and sighed before walking away.  "You think it's safe to return to the restaurant after what I did?" Heer asked.

 

"Well, I gave the waiter my credit card to pay for dinner.  I need to get it back.  I think it's okay," Prem replied.

 

"You think they'll let us come back here and eat again?  The food is really good," Heer said.

 

Prem chuckled, "If not we can always order out.  Then they don't have to worry about you dumping drinks on people."  Heer playfully slapped his chest for the last comment.  "Come on," he said and held her hand as they went back into the restaurant.


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So Part 11 was my ode to my Korean dramas that I watch.  There is always this crazy ex-girlfriend that can't seem to understand the idea of a breakup when the lead guy finds his soul mate and decides to break it off with the girlfriend.  They follow the lead guy around and cause all sorts of trouble and are vindictive and what not.  And it takes the idiot lead pairs forever to get rid of her because they are just too darn nice...plus the ex-girlfriend is pretty good at manipulating πŸ˜†  Yes not really modern/reality well maybe for some people.  Anyways, I thought if Raj was "Mr. Nice Guy" than Roshni had to be "Miss Can't Let Go".  Part 12 is on its way…and yes it's a steamer?  Haha…well, I'll leave that verdict for you guys to decide on how Spicy it is.


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---Grace πŸ˜ƒ

Edited by iheartChai - 13 years ago
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reserved!
sorry for never unreservig!
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sorry forgot to comment

the update was awesomeeee too cute waitingggggg for next asap.
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reserved nice update but will give brief reply so reserved
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It was hilarious
Lol u remainded me abt panipuri,My mouth is watering
where shall i go & buy in mid night.😭
Veer give right back to so called roshni
Loved the way she stood up for premπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Y cant she be like this in show?????????????/
Premeer senes were awesomeπŸ˜ƒ
Heer poured her drink on roshni, she deserves it
At end i was laughing, laughing........laughing
It was too good, loved every bit of it.
Continue soon................................
Edited by -Jyo- - 13 years ago
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OMG Grace LOOOOOL Heer pouring her Margarita on Roshni was just hilarious🀣 Possessive Heer huh?πŸ˜† Yeh If Prem was mine I would just as possessive!😍 GAH... If ONLY he was mine☺️

Loved the chapter Grace and really looking forward to the next part😍

Thanks for the pm and update asapπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 13 years ago
it ws nice part!!!!!
bt i lovd the first part the most!!!!!
it ws so hillarious!!!!!