Ghosts in love MaYur OS

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ghosts in love



Mayank Sharma,the great business man moves to a bangalow.The beauty of the area where he stays attracts him.Mayank whose passion is music is a good musician too.He takes his guitar and tries to compose music.He realizes that he is failing in composing music.He hears a girl humming.Her sweet voice lulls him to sleep.
The next morning Mayank feels that the girl's music was just his illusion.But that night also he hears her voice.He gets a glance of a girl who is dressed in white.He is startled by her sight.
"Who are you?How did you get inside my house?Yesterday you only sang here.Right?",he asks.
"Yes,i only sang.I just helped you to compose music",she replies.
"Who are you?"
"I'm Nupur".
"How did you come inside?Why are you here?"
"I can go anywhere.I'm here,because it was my house before".
"Your house?I heard that no one has stayed here for the last 20 years".
"Yes,you are right.I stayed here 20 years back".
"What nonsense!Were you a kid then?"
"No,i was a teenager".
"Shut up.You are so young.iF you were a teenager 20 years ago you should be atleast 40 now".
"You are right.I'm supposed to be 40 years now.But i'm not.Because i died when i was very young.So i did'nt grow old".
Mayank got scared,but he hides his fear.
"What are you saying?"
"I'm a ghost".
Her revelation gives him shock and fear.
"But don't be scared.I'm a harmless ghost.I'm here only because i'm attached to this bangalow.I will not harm you anyway".
Mayank is relieved.
"How did you die?"
He is curious to know about her past.
"I and my family are killed by our own relatives for wealth.But i did'nt come here as a ghost to suck their blood.Because my parents taught me to love instead of taking revenge".
Mayank smiles.

A cute friendship gets formed between Mayank and Nupur.Nupur and Mayank spend nights together by composing music.
Mayank realizes that he is falling in love with Nupur though she is a ghost.
He extends his finger to touch her face,but he can't as she lacks a body.
He is sad.
"Nobody can touch the ghost without it's permission.Now i'm ready.If you want you can touch me now".
Mayank is excited.He touches her face slowly and is very happy.
Nupur's eyes touch his face.
She speaks in a soft voice,
"If i was alive i would have fallen in love with you.Because you are my dream man".
His heart is filled with the joy of love.
"Why don't you love me now?I don't care if you are a ghost.I'm already in love with you",
Mayank confesses his love for her.
It leaves Nupur in shock.
"Do you know what you are saying?How can you fall in love with a ghost?My time is limited.I have to go back to heaven soon.We can't unite".
Mayank's eyes welled up with tears.
He sees her flying away from him with tears.He is helpless and weak.

Mayank walks along the road like a mad man thinking of his huge loss..losing his beloved forever.So he does'nt even know that a lorry hit him.
Mayank's soul is free from his body.
"I got salvation.I'm free from this world.I can be with my Nupur now.She will be waiting for me now".He jumps with joy.
Mayank flies to the heaven.As he expected Nupur is waiting for him with her shining eyes and beautiful heart.
Nupur who is dressed in a glittering white saree looks pure and cute like an Angel.She extends her arm with a smile.Mayank holds her arm with a smile and pulls her towards him.
"Now there is no obstacle.Nothing can separate us",Mayank says confidently.
She smiles.
They are lost in each other's eyes.
A meaningful strong love song is heard in the background.
"Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai…"{Kaminey}.
Mayank carries Nupur in his arms.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg jasmine it was heavenly beautiful yr amazing and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do write more

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different and so cute
i loved it
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heyyy jasmine
that was fabulous yaar
loved it
do write more
n thanx for pm
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Hey jasmine

tht was a cute os

loved it
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a very different n beautiful concept of soulates
loved it
do write more
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beautiful OS dear!
thnx for the pm 😊
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that was so cute............
n different

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Different, Cute, Scary... Write more!
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Wow! A completely different OS!
Magical! keep writing!

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