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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

Important Note hi guys, thanks a lot for ur lovely comments. now i am a bit confused about my future updates so need ur advice. we all know that in the show duttas father will make a comeback but how that remains a mystery . so i was wondering whether to include this track in the ff or not. if i do then i will handle it in my own way without bothering about what the cvs do about it or i can ignore it completely. so plz tell me whether i should include this track or not because sweet tasha moments will always be according to ur likes / dislikes. my next update is almost ready but will edit it according to ur feedback. so plz give me ur advice asap. WAITING EAGERLY ROSE

hey Rose hii..
in my opinion u must leave d man for now..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Note - thanks a lot guys for sharing ur views regarding duttas fathers entry. as most of u dont want me to introduce him so keeping ur wish in mind i have decided to include this track after some time. so for now u will have some cute and naughty tasha scenes...HAPPY😊?????? duttas father will make an entry slowly and gradually. so till then sit back and enjoy sweet TASHA moments. Sweet sixteenth TASHA Moment

Nakku is now fully recovered from her injuries and is getting ready for AS birthday party. She is wearing the red saree that dutta had selected for her when they went shopping. She feels relieved that from now on she doesn't need to wear her black make up and dutta has finally accepted her with her real face. She is examining herself for the last time in the mirror when dutta comes back from work…he is mesmerized with her innocent beauty …nakku turns around and smiles shyly but is surprised to see dutta examining her so closely from head to toe…she asks nervously "kya hua sahab kuch teekh nahin lag raha kya ?"

"nahin sab kuch theekh hai lekin ek kami (something is lacking) hai"

"kya kami sahab?" dutta walks upto her …takes a pinch of sindoor from the sindoor box , fills her maang (parting) and then kisses her forehead…"hmm ab koi kami nahin hai " says dutta leaving nakku all blushed.

"sahab jaldi se tyaar ho jaiye …party shuru hone wali hai…main aapke liye kaunse kapde nikaaloon?"

"wohi kala suit nikaal de …waise bhi kisi ne kaha hai main kale kapdon mein bahut achcha lagta hoon"

Nakku all happy moves towards duttas cupboard to take out the black suit when kala enters tashas bedroom. Dutta gives a questioning look to kala expecting her to give a suitable reason for coming to his room.

"bhau main jaanti hoon tu mujhse abhi tak naraaz hai…lekin main kya karti ? pehle bhi kayi baar tujhe dhokha khate hue dekh chuki hoon…isliye mujhe teri chinta (tension) rehti hai…main apni aankhon ke saamne kisiko tere bholepan (innocence) ka faida uthate hue nahin dekh sakti…yehi wajah (reason) hai ki kabhi kabhi main kadva (bitter) bol jaati hoon " dutta continues to look at her and puts his hands in his pockets.

"lekin aaj tujhe nakku ke saath khush dekhkar main sach mein bahut khush hoon…akhir (finally) tujhe ek sacha jeevan saathi (life partner) mil he gaya…ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardena…main aaj bhi tujhse utna he pyaar karti hoon jitna pehle karti thi" with crocodile tears in her eyes she takes out a packet and says "yeh pathani suit (kurta pyjama) main tere liye layi thi…agar aaj tune yeh pehna toh main samajh jaaongi ki tune mujhe maaf kar diya" and leaves from there.

Dutta takes a deep breath and looks at nakku who smilingly says "sahab aapko kala tai ke laye hue kapde he pehanne (wear) chaiye…unko bahut achcha lagega"

"par tu bhi toh kitne pyaar se mere liye yeh suit laayi thi"
"koi baat nahin …woh phir kabhi pehen lena …ab aur der (late) mat karo…jaldi se tayaar ho jao…main neeche jaati hoon"

"nakku ek bar AS se mil lena …woh tujhe yaad kar rahin thi" nakku nods and leaves for AS room.

AS s room is open and nakku is about to knock on the door when she finds AS talking to some one worriedly "aaj ke baad humein phone karke pareshan karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai…samjhe" saying so AS keeps the receiver down and sees nakku standing at the door " arey nakku wahan kyun khadi ho…aao yahan hamare pass" nakku walks upto her . AS takes out a jewellery set for nakku "yeh humne apni bahu ke liye banvaya tha…zara humein pehenke dikha " nakku hesitates a bit…"arey nakku tera is ghar par aur is ghar ki har cheez par pura huq banta hai….aaj hamare janamdin par kya tu hamari itni si baat nahin manegi ?" nakku unable to refuse her wears the set.

Soon the party starts and dutta walks down wearing the kurta pyjama gifted by kala…on seeing this kala feels happy that her brother has again fallen for the trap. Everyone gathers around the table for the cake cutting ceremony except for nakku and babi who stand a little far away from the Patil family. Dutta noticing this gestures her to stand next to him but she indicates that she is fine here.

The party continues after the cake cutting ceremomy…dutta meets some of his close relatives then sits in a corner. Sethji with his plate full of cake is walking in duttas direction…his eyes not leaving the delicious cake sethji keeps walking blindly when dutta purposely moves his right leg forward as a result sethji trips …dutta prevents him from falling but his plate full of cake lands on duttas kurta.

"bhau sorry …pata nahin mera dhyaan kidhar tha…aapke saare kapde kharab hogaye"

"koi baat nahin sethji…main badal loonga…tu aur cake kha le jakar" says dutta smilingly and leaves to change.

The evil sisters see nakku all decked up and get jealous…kala calls out to nakku " arey nakku tu wahan kadi kadi (standing) kya kar rahi hai?..ja logon ko cake serve kar…naukrani nahin rahi toh kya hua…ab tu is ghar ki bahu hai…mehmano (guests) ka khyaal rakhna tera farz banta hai " nakku walks away silently to serve cake to the guests.

After some time dutta walks down in the black suit looking awesome. Kalas face drops down while baajis face lightens up and he whistles at dutta "kya bhau aaj toh aap ek dum woh kya kehte hain?"

"hot aur sexy"says dutta completing his sentence and looks at nakku who is standing behind baaji with the last plate of cake.

"sahi keh rahe ho bhau…main sochta hai main bhi yeh phool patton (flowery) wale kurte pehanane chod doon….in phoolon (flowers) ko paani de de kar maine inhe jhaad (bush) bana diya hai..isse pehle yeh ped (tree) bane …main sochta hoon main bhi aapki tarah suit pehanana shuru kar doon" saying so he leaves tasha alone to attend a call.

Nakku looks at dutta fondly and offers him the cake.

"tune khaya?"

"nahin ..aap kha lo main baad mein le legi" dutta picks up the last piece and holds it in front of her mouth…nakku opens her mouth and eats it.

"sahab ab aap kya khaoge?" some cream of the cake is left on her lower lip which dutta takes it on his finger and licks it naughtily. The 3 sisters see this from away and start fuming in anger..kala thinks something needs to be done as soon as possible.

AS calls nakku and asks her to go to the store room and get the boxes of sweets to be distributed to the guests on their departure. Nakku walks through the dark corridor for the store room when she feels that someone is following her. She turns around but is pushed against the wall and is unable to scream as soon her mouth also gets covered.

❤️ Rose
so guys tell me how sweet was the sixteenth moment.
and silent readers u know something...duttas silence speaks volumes but sadly urs doesnt so plz plz share ur views
coming up - baaji worried about tashas safety
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sweet sixteenth TASHA Moment Very well written .... loved it... waiting for the KISSSSSSSSSSSS
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Posted: 14 years ago
Rose...wowwwwwwwwwww osam one....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Dutta ne kya trick lagayi Kala ke gift diye hue kapde chang karne k liye...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Baji ka resolution of changing phool aur patiyon k kurte was Hillarious.........😉😉😉😉😉
In all wonderfully written & perfect scenario...👏👏👏😛😛😛😛
Ur talent is God gifted Yaar.............superbbbbbbbb..May God Bless u evrytime...😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey rose awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳................wow dear...sorry for late reply!...............U rock janemann...............😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi SIU...
OMG wow a luvly moment between dutta n naku..wondering which one?😕
Arrey yaar d one where he takes d cream off her lower lip n licks it...wah kya tha yaar...😛😆...
I felt he shud hav taken her 2 a cornern then had d cake wid his lips ..u understood na wat I meant..😆😳..
n wats dis yaar..D scene was building up so well @ d end..n u put down ur pen..kya yaar..I know its dutta n theres gonna b some chemistry in d store room 4 sure..plz dont keep us waiting...If possible upload d next part 2 day itself...😆😉

Hey dis one's truly superb
"main sochta hai main bhi yeh phool patton (flowery) wale kurte pehanane chod doon….in phoolon (flowers) ko paani de de kar maine inhe jhaad (bush) bana diya hai..isse pehle yeh ped (tree) bane …main sochta hoon main bhi aapki tarah suit pehanana shuru kar doon"
lolzzz.baaji kabhi nahi sudrega😆👏⭐️..as I hav said earlier 2 dat Baaji is d Star of ur ff'S BUT 2day I felt it was Dutta ...😳
I luvd d scene where Dutta purposely makes Sethji trip n fall..just bcoz he wants 2 wear d suit which Naku had gifted him..
Awesum work...gud writing..keep it up.. cheers😃




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Posted: 14 years ago
Rose that was brilliant. Baji's conversation of flowers n leaves was hilarious. Dutta was gr8. Purposely spoiled the kurta n wore what Naku bought for him.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very well written 👏. such sweet tasha moment yar. i really like it alot. i want datta to teach nice lesson to kala for raising voice at nakku. plz do that. today i really love ur cake. espically setji cake😉 and nakku cake😍

i really really don't want any thing happen to nakku.


Edited by SASHA_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rama_2010

Sweet sixteenth TASHA Moment Very well written .... loved it... waiting for the KISSSSSSSSSSSS

glad u liked it...thanks😊
well dutta did kiss nakku...but as far as ur KISSSSSSSSSS is concerned u will have to wait for a while😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkyk

Rose...wowwwwwwwwwww osam one....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

thanks so muchhhhhhh
Dutta ne kya trick lagayi Kala ke gift diye hue kapde chang karne k liye...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆of course dutta is not dumb atleast not in this ff
Baji ka resolution of changing phool aur patiyon k kurte was Hillarious.........😉😉😉😉😉
In all wonderfully written & perfect scenario...👏👏👏😛😛😛😛...glad u liked it so much
Ur talent is God gifted Yaar.....ab tum mujhe chane ke jhad pad chada rahi ho........superbbbbbbbb..May God Bless u evrytime...😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

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