Beauty and the beast: Shamar Akashi OS

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Posted: 14 years ago
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No fanfics in this forum.So i decided to write one 4 Shamar-Akashi

Beauty and the beast



Akashi;the prowd beauty was someone who believed that external beauty is very important for a person.She dreamt of getting secure in the hands of the most handsome man.She found her handsome dream man.He was Kshitij.But she became very late in understanding that Kshitij has only external beauty and he lacks internal beauty.Kshitij's unexpected misbehaviour proved that he is an animal in disguise of a handsome young man.The baby in Akashi's womb is the result of Kshitij's cruelty towards Akashi.She hates her baby as it reminds her of the bitter moments she had with Kshitij.
Akashi lands up in the hospital to remove the burden forever.
"Akashi..you are here?"
Akashi is shocked to see Shamar behind her.He is her taxi driver.
"Why are you here?"Akashi asks him.
"I came here to pick up someone.Why are you here?",he answers.
Akashi is a bold girl who is frank and does'nt hesitate to disclose the biggest truth of her life.
"I came to abort my baby".
Shamar takes a few seconds to digest what she said.
"The whole world knows what Kshitij did to me.But no one knows that i'm suffering because of that incident's after effects.The baby in my womb is the result of his cruelty.So i hate this creature.Because it is that animal's baby".
"Kshitij tortured you.So you are forced to carry his baby in your womb.But don't forget that it is your baby also.What did this innocent baby do to you?The baby in the womb will be waiting eagerly to see it's mother's beautiful face.Your baby will love you a lot.Because you are it's mother.Then how can you kill your baby?If you do that you will also be an animal like Kshitij.You thought with your brain.But think with your heart also".
His words reach Akashi's heart.Her tears flow down.
"What you said is true Shamar.Why should i punish my innocent baby?"
Shamar smiles.

Akashi's mother Shusheela comes to know that she is pregnant.Shusheela's tears flow like a river.
"My daughter's life is spoiled".
"My life is not spoiled mom.God gave me a baby as my strength.I will live for my baby".
Akashi is brave enough to face the obstacles of life.
Shusheela's eyes did'nt become dry.
"What will society say if you give birth to a baby?Will anyone marry my daughter?"
"Yes,i will".
They hear Shamar's voice from behind.They are shocked.
"Shamar!Do you know what you said?"Akashi asks.
"I know that i'm just a driver.I have no education.I look like a beast.Thinking of marrying my Madam itself is arrogance.But i have no bad intention.I'm grateful to this family.Because you all i'm having bread and butter.I want to helpm you all by saving Akashi's reputation".
Shusheela is relieved.Shamar leaves the place.
Thinking of marrying Shamar is unbearable for Akashi.
"No..i can't".
"Think of our family's reputation.How will we face the society if you give birth to a baby who has no father?"
Susheela's emotional forces Akashi to marry Shamar.

When Akashi enters the bedroom she does'nt feel that she is newly wed bride.She is frightened to sit near the beast like husband Shamar.
"Don't be scared.I'm not like your Kshitij.Though i'm uneducated i know how to behave with girls.I will not try to impose my rights on you as a husband.I'm just your baby's father.You may not be my wife.But your baby is mine.I have rights on your baby".
Akashi smiles with relief.
"You look like a real beast.But you are not a beast Shamar.You are good".
Akashi's compliment causes him to smile.

Shamar behaves like a caring husband.Akashi enjoys it unknowingly.She does'nt find it disgusting.

Akashi is washing clothes.Shamar runs to her and holds her hand.
"What are you doing?Atleast for the first three months you need rest.You should not work like this.It is not good for the baby.For you also.."
"Really?Why are you bothered about me and my baby?Don't you think that you are over reacting?"
"Overreacting?Me?Never.I'm just caring for my baby.I want my baby to be healthy.You are not giving enough care to your health Akashi.You are so careless".
"Why are you bothered about me?Why are you so caring to me?Tell me Shamar".
Silence is Shamar's answer.
"Tell me Shamar".
"I'm going now",he says.
"No,you should go only after answering my question".
"I care for you.I don't know why".
He goes away.Akashi is disappointed by his answer.
"Why i am feeling dissatisfied?Did i expect something more from his mouth?"
Akashi is confused.

Days pass.Akashi's starts enjoying Shamar's presense secretely.

Rain drops are falling down.Shamar enjoys the raindrops covering him.Akashi enjoys watching it.She goes near him.
"Why are you here Akashi?It's raining heavily?You will fall sick".
"You will also fall sick.Then why are you?"Akashi asks back.
"I love being in rain".
"I also love having fun while raining".
"But it will affect your health.What will happen to our baby?"
Shamar grabs her hand.Akashi looks at his eyes.His eyes also get hooked to her glowing eyes.In the rain when they stand close to each other they feel passionate towards each other without their own knowledge.He takes her inside.He takes a towel and dries her hair.He wipes her wet face.Akashi's eyes are on him.He becomes conscious.
"Why are you staring at me like this?As if i did something wrong".
"I'm just watching your small deeds.How much you care for me...nobody can do like this for someone who is not close.I'm not close to you.Still how can you be like this to me?"
Akashi's words make him blank.
"Do you know Shamar..when we both were in the rain i felt something strange.I don't know what..".
"Me too Akashi",He says in his mind.

Akashi eldest sister Purva who works in US.She comes back from US.Purva's visit was a big surprise for Akashi.
"Purva di..i'm so happy to see you".
Purva's eyes get welled up with tears.
"Why are you crying di?We both are seeing each other after a long time.Still you seem to be upset".
"You used to share everything with me.But you hid from me how you suffered here.You all hid what happened in your life last few months.Our mom lied to me that you are getting married to the person you love.So i thought it is Kshitij.But now only i came to know that Kshitij cheated you and you were forced to marry Shamar who is not at all like your dream man".
"I thought Kshitij is my dream man.But what did i get from him?Shamar is not my dream man.But i'm happy with him".
"You always wanted to be with a handsome man.You had told me that life with an ugly husband will be like living in a hell",Purva's recalls Akashi's thoughts about marriage.
"I used to think like that before.But not anymore.Di..only you can read my mind.Now i can't even read my own mind.Please tell me what is in my mind.I love being with Shamar.I find him hansome now.Because i see his internal beauty always.He is so caring.But i'm not satisfied.I feel that i expect something more from him".
Purva can't believe it.
"You changed a lit Akashi.You are seeing reality now.You understood that external beauty is nothing.You expect more from Shamar.That means you expect more than care from him.You want to be loved by Shamar".
Akashi is excited,"Thank you di for reading my mind and making me understand what is in my mind.You are right.I'm in love with Shamar.Now i understand my feelings for him".
Purva smiles.

Akashi goes to the taxi station looking for Shamar.Luckily she finds him inside the taxi there.Shamar is surprised to see her there.
He comes out of the taxi.
"Why are you here?I told you to be at home.That is more safe for you",Shamar says.
"I could not control myself.I felt like seeing you very badly".
He can't understand anything.
"I can't sleep unless i open my heart in front of you.I want to tell you that i love you".
Shamar is shocked.
"Are you deprived of senses?"
"Yes.I know what i'm saying.I love you Shamar".
Shamar can't believe his ears.
"How can you love me?You are so beautiful and rich.But i'm ugly and poor.."
She keeps her finger on his lips.
"Don't put yourself down.You are handsome.Your mind is that beautiful Shamar.You taught me that external beauty has nothing to do with love.I love you.But i don't know whether you love me or not".
Shamar smiles slowly,
"I love you too".
Akashi goes into his arms.She feels secure in his arms.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww that was such a sweet OS :) i love how he takes care of her and is so protective😆😆
hehe and i loved purva in this one too!

do write more :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good one, Yaar.👏 Loved the dialogues. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx a lot.y no ffs 4 Sha-Akashi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well i agree with beauty & beast these desi shows are worse for lead pair, for heaven heaven sake pair beauties with decent looking young blokes & not torture the poor souls by pairing them with uncleji's like shamal

these actresses come in show buis to fulfill there dreams, therefore the poor things agree to be paired with any uncleji & therefore i hate the makers of he shows for taking advantage of this & and pairing them with any cartoon, who some times from no angle even look like a lover boy. this shamal doesnt suit playing this role even an iota & still looks like a goon then why pair him with such a beauty, please replace him with some one who suits the role
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shamaldas is made to look uglier than he is😆
The weird hair, dressing style and that big cow ring(?) around his neck...is ugh...but that is the character the show demanded
I do feel sorry for Akaashi though...she is either a damn good actress for faking chemistry with the character or 50% blind...or both
All jokes aside...the dude plays a really convincing rule of being a Brute hard guy who has spent his life gambling and drinking...he really embodies the rule well!

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