Pls Read (Funny) Kriya so far.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Angry Angadwa came to justice Krishna to uttwa Pratigya. He agreed to do it finally and he and his army set off. But on seeing her he fell in love and lost all his senses and promised to unlock her heart with his love . He even went and tatooed his name on her hand (because she has more secrets then the pandora's box).
He started stalking her that she couldn't leave the house and left his guards outside her house . She didn't like that at all and was really sad, and the saxena's all kept (Naina, adharsh, pratigya, arushi, shyam and dadi). In the end Pratigya decided by all this crying one day her parivaar will dissappear . So she decided to take revenge. "KOOTE mein tumein apne ansoo se bhoond dalungi!" so she proposed to him
and they married . Adharsh felt left out as he was elder than Pratigya so he married KOMAL, Krishna's sister . Saxena's were very sad . Krishna took his bride to the THAKUR NIWAS and Pratigya met Amma, Shaktia, Sajan Singh, Piyasiya (who is always stirring trouble), Ganto Dhadi(she doesn't talk), Guru mai, and Kesar bechari who is a complete Zombie
. Krishna told her that he loves her and gives her a present and she rejects it he gets really Angry at seeing her waste the chocolates by feeding it too the floor and showed her his true colours . She ket being horrible to him, and hitting him with her words . Oneday he got so annoyed he left home . She realised that she loves him and regreted rejecting him . She went to find him. "Krishna Krishna where are u i . Just then came snakewa and bit her. along came Krishna and the poor lubber licked the poison out and became sich himself.
He died and Pratigya got Angry again, she demanded to know "TUM MUJE AISE CHOD KE KAISE JAA SAKHTEY HO, HUM KAISE JEEYENGE TUMHAREY BINA? BOLO! UTTO BATHAO HUMEY!" . Krishna couldn't see his Pratigya upset and bounced back to life ,
But his heart was still on fire and was upset with her.
Then she said the Dai akshar prem ke 7 times and then he got really Happy. They Both ran away to the terrace and ........ 'Do dil mil rahey hain, magar chupke chupke......' to be cont.....
please tell if u guys liked this


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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣 Hahahaha!!!
Sooo Trueee!!!
The Emoticons Are Soo Funnnyy And Cutee!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣 Great work hun👏......it must have taken ages
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

🤣 Hahahaha!!!

Sooo Trueee!!!
The Emoticons Are Soo Funnnyy And Cutee!!

thank you. i thought kriyans must be getting really bored so i decided to entertain everyone. glad u liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it............. 🤣 🤣 🤣 spl komal.............. 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SUPERB.... i love ur post....👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 omg ----wat a beauty-----👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏--kudos for that--very very well done amazing and god so apt---where did you get such lubbly pics frm---krish taking circles round the tree-- 🤣jumping bck to life🤣---sucksena floods👏👏👏👏-----fantabulous---keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aleena1

🤣 Great work hun👏......it must have taken ages

thanks love it did, if i get a good response then i'll do it regularly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow!!...That was fantastic...the emoticons were spot on 👏👏......that was kriya story in short!! ...Did u first write the story and then find the emoticons or the other way around??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Carisma,

lovely usage of emoticons.....paricularly loved Komaliya ..😛 and crying Saxena's..

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