Hey hey.....no eating my di's hands....off limits.....of limits....i repeat off limits.
Only allowed to kiss thy magical hands.......$5.00 charge.....for every kiss 😆😉
Scene 1I loved the role of the duppata in ur scene di.......it played its role very well......i loved how u incorporated my best friend in ur scene......as u can tell my best friend is the universe......the universe has done an excellent job by bringing geet's dupatta alive at the right time!! loved how he knew what would help him find her.....he at the right moment saw the dupatta....and he had already sense geet.....but just needed that duppata to pin point where his geet was.
ahhhh if only it let me press the post button on time....i had to just write two more words and i was done with my reply to ur post....but i guess i am going to think that i was supposed to write a better post....and so here i go again.
Anywayz.....in the beginning i loved how u described the setting of the train station......crowded people moving about.....and our Maan.....not caring of anything anyone......but only lookin for this lady love! The guilt he was feeling......the regret he had of what he had said....that triggered geet to leave him.....for a while when i was reading ur scene to me maan wasn't alive at the moment......to me he was just a soul whose heart was snatched out from his chest.....and he was just lookin for that heart.....he was a walking soul......who needed his heart back to be a live again.....😭
u know what makes me laugh di....is how Maaneet tried to stay away from each other....the one thing i have learned from the universe is that it doesn't recognize that DON'TS...NOTS....it does the complete opposite.......Maaneet wanted tried to stay away from one another.....but deep down as much as they wanted to stay away....that is as much as they wanted to be together.....and so the Universe cancelled out the negative.....and listened to what they really wanted....this is one thing i have learned from this book called The Secret.......in which they talked about the universe and the "law of attraction"
Di u knew i was coming back today didn't u.....smart di....smart and so u wrote two scenes.....and all together u posted them!!!
I loved how u described Maan as a panther......looking for his love.......that was used very beautifully in ur scene.....👏
Tonight while reading this part....i thought u were going to make me fall off my chair by having Maan miss that train......😆 i was already sitting at the edge of my chair....i felt as though Maan was right in front of me and I knew where geet was.....i wanted to shout at the screen and tell him where she was.....wow di amazing.......so realistic......and it made me eager every second to see whether he finds her......and thank god he does!!!!
I am happy as to how they have showed Maan's character so far.......i loved the cv's maintained everything realistic......if maan had hugged Geet after her whole truth it would been unreal......and i would have been disappointed..... the way maan reacted was justified......he is not "god" he is a normal human being.....and what he had said may have been harsh.....wrong......but i felt that it was real......i felt that he had confessed by saying that!!!! 😭 I knew that it had hurt geet......but i also knew that maan didn't mean it to come out that way!! Both are right in their own way.....and i love how the cv's are running the story!!!
The dialogs that u have written for Maan are phenomenal di 👏......they way u described how he maan started to talk......how he just had to get everything off of his chest.....
this part reminded me of the time when he had accused geet trapping him for her money....and he had spoken very fast and said whatvever he felt just like that.....even if he didn't mean it!!! I imagined maan do the same here.....sayin everything very fast......the emotions the pain........he meant every word this time.....how truly he was sorry!!!
geet....what can i say about this poor girl....she left her home telling pinky not to make her weak....and now here maan was melting her!!!! She wanted/wished she can be with him....but she felt that if she stays away from him....it would be good for him......even now she was only thinkin of him!!! So she stayed strong....fought herself.....not to fall weak!!!! The emotions....the turmoil geet was going through....now that part di was outstanding....the way u have written that scene......wow!!! I can imagine this happening! 😳
I loved how Maan asked geet if she was his!!! that pain....that need to hear that she was his......i was tortured!!! it is scary how these two fictional characters run our lives......when geet told maan everything.....i felt as though i took a whole heavy weight of burden off of my chest.....Geet went through the hell....and yet we lived it....we felt it....just like she.....
As for geet.....this girl got on the wrong train??? 😆 geet still can't function when her state of mind is boggled.....this reminded me of the time in amritsar.....where she was lost in her own thoughts thinkin about what life had done to her......she didn't even notice that the car almost trampled her......but maan of course was there.....he at the nick of time saved her........😳
hmm that ticket collector dude......interrupted!!! 😡😆
Scene 2I love the universe.....it plays such a good game.......it conspired getting maaneet to the dargah.....and so geet had sat on the wrong train⭐️
good work universe high five 🤣
Ahhhh beautiful di......the divine place where geet felt her feelings for maan as love began at the dargah.....it was this very place where she had felt love for maan for the first time......and this very place now has got them there to become one!!! That very place is joining them together for eternity!!!
Ah i wish that the cv's take this idea....both Maaneet get on the train....and they end up in a beautiful divine place.....i would love it to be the dargah because that is where their story begun.😳
Hopefully we see something similar to this fingers crossed.....👍🏼
Well we already knew how protective maan was over geet.....now it will be up a notch or two 😆 he will be takin care of geet every minute and second......di u give out some ideas for us to dream of!!! If it weren't for u.....we would not even survive the weekend....at least because of u we can think of possible tracks......😛
Di that kiss was just ufffff.....killer......the best kiss ever......i can imagine it.....this time that kiss was special......it was special and the best because there was no barriers holding them back...stopping them......that kiss stood for trust for each other......honesty and love!!! Geet no longer had anything hidden.......they sealed their relationship with that kiss....which would start a new beginning!! 😳
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh if only that cell phone did not ring!! 😆
Sorry di for the delay.....my first one was A LOT longer......i tried to remember what i wrote....i was angry as i started it again....but gradually i was happy again!! thank u for two beautiful/phenomenal/magical/killer scenes!!!! Also thanks for the pm!!
Love u di!!!
Ur Shivani!
Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 14 years ago
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