'Qayenaat' a MaYur FF - Completed - Page 76

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Neela , You dont know how much proud I am feeling now about myself😉 I am sure I am your only reader who knew the end exactly from day 1. It stricked me when I read your concept itself ,though I confirmed it when Nupur 2 entered the story.😊

But let me tell you - you are just amazing.... Irrespective of having known the basic track - if I could enjoy each and every update of this FF... Its only because of your writing skill.. You have an amazing story skill for which I can even lend my ears even to the stories which I have heard 100 times from childhood. You are superb.. This one in particular is dear to me as it was the only triangular lovestory concept I liked long back and now with your story ,Im going to love it more.. And moreover this one compelled me to be member of IF ,where I got amazing friends, you being my first ever friend here.. 🤗
And a note for those who were fighting with me to know the end of the story (Fari dear - Its especially for you). Please re-read the concept in the first note of Neela. Didn't she mention the whole story there itself?
what about having a friend to live your love? What about putting your friendship to test by saving the love of the friend and what about the lover living the love of his life through the soul of friendship?
I am proud of you ,Neela for attempting such a wonderful concept👍🏼 and I hope I never spoiled your suspense.
Neela - one last note(Sorry if I sound a bit harsh,its just deliberate😆).. I understand your obsession of separating true lovers so that reader will never ever able to forget your story ,even if they forget 1000 stories which had they-happily-lived-ever-after kind of ends😉.(You are not the first one ,our Malayalam film directors are masters of these kind of climax😕) . But will you please write atleast one story where you can give us happy end?If Not for me - For the sake of all those girls here ,who are waiting to fall in true love? Hope I didnt ask you too much..🤔
Story or no story - please keep in touch ,though I will wait for another beautiful story form a truly gifted writer who happens to be my first buddy here.😊
While bidding the final bye to this amazing journey - I can just sigh and say "Ye ishq nahin aasaan" . Bhagwan, hamesha sache pyaar karnewalon ko mila dijiye.. I can't see the pain of seperated lovers.. 😕
Edited by Nirvrithi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
neela part 29 was totally shocker but aamazing 1 n sorry i comment late 😔 thnx 4 d pm sis 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
ur ending so sad neela 😭
superp ending this ff was verry different other ff's i read
but u really rocked hun
n ur amzing writer
loved it the whole parts of the ff
but plzzzzzzz write mayur ff which have HAPPY ENDING plzzz
thank u so much 4 all the pms 🤗🤗
as Nirvrithi said
But will you please write atleast one story where you can give us happy end?If Not for me - For the sake of all those girls here ,who are waiting to fall in true love? Hope I didnt ask you too much..🤔
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Posted: 15 years ago

hello neela

i know i am too late comment karne me
par dil se sorry please maaf kar dona please
now cut to update and concept
I am a tubelight and trust me maine concpet ke pahle update read kar li thi to i didn't bother to go and read concept
wo to nivi ke picture me aane ke bad i went and read it all over again 😆😆😆😆
but still i was getting the concept blurred
28th update ke bad mujhe sab yad aaya and then i remembered ki maine kiddo me ye movie dekhi thi
but i didnt like the movie it had all heavy Urdu alfaz which was tough for me at that moment yaar
but now i love those words as Urdu Adab ki Juban hai na
Coming to the end - i am actually not sad though mayank and nupur didn't meet [i actually crib for this] but your story made me to think it in positive manner,not necessary you get what you love always only thing u want them to be happy and here i felt nupur was too much in pain which she didnt show she was boud with promise where as mayank to pura majnoo ban gaya tha
I loved the way nupur 2 i mean Mahek came [here i understood ki nupur2 ka nupur 1 se kuch to connection hai ,still confuse creature]
Nupur was not alive still she gave a hint to mahek and mahek knew what she has to do ,she was failed to keep herself untouched from the feeling "Love" but she never crossed the limits too
neither mayank.
Nupur and mahek had the best in friends ,mayank and nupur were best in Love
and Mayank and Mahek became best friend and life partner
so ultimately Nupur ki jaan mahek me basi thi aur mayank me bhi ,wo chali gayi par Mayank ko mahek ke sahare kar gayi ,so this was justified end
Though the end was sad [as from MAYURIAN poit of view] mujhe dukh nahi hua
mujhe wo movie bilkul achhi nahi lagi thi par ye update utni hi achhi lagi thi
actually u made me to love this
you have unique writting ishtyle re
par iska matlab ye nahi hai ki hamesha ending aise sad ho yaar kuch happy shappy ending bhi likho na please
Nivi - Over to you now [logic lagai to By god Bharta bana dungi ,aur jyada udana mat concept pata tha isliye kyonki i saw it when i was kiddo tumne to teenage me dekhi hai 😉😉😉]
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOW....

Awesome ending..... Something I did not even think about.....
You know when I started reading this part about how best friends Nupur and Mahek were, everything seemed crystal clear... No confusion at all..... And then when I went back to read the concept of this story.... I understood each and every thing..... from Mayank Nupur and Mahek's perspective....
In the second last update, I did not quite understood why Mahek told Nupur ki 'maine tumhe harne nahi diya'.... But now, when I look back into the whole story.... all just seem perfect.....

Also, I have to confess this.... Whenever I get a pm for the update, I used to think that I will get an answer for my questions.... Yes, but in that process... at the end of each update, I had many other questions which led me to thinking about the story and the possible consequences... Indeed, its just your writing style that has got this inquisitive mind out ... I can say this cos i have even got an award for this!!.... (Shakki reader, remember??? 😉 )

Well... now... the last part.... am completely happy with the ending... No complaints....
I just loved the way you put forward all the situations..... Just perfect.....

As a reader, I loved reading Qayenaat and thinking about the various possibilities that can happen..... Really glad to read this FF....

Pls continue writing...

Looking forward to read another of your great "suspense-filled!!" works,

Pooja

Edited by mjhtnupurmayank - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowo amazing ending neela and plz do write more ffs

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
neela....what should i say about this???? am simply out of words.... this was one of the best ff i have ever read and i mean it.. u r such a talented person...i am proud to be a reader of this ff......i dont wanna talk about the ending of this ff..bcoz there is no words in the dictionary to praise ur piece of work.... love u so much..pls do write more fan fictions.......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY YAAR TOTALLY GREAT FF
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Posted: 15 years ago

Neela, u write very well, u portray emotions and complex relations very well too..i had a foreboding of this, but somehow was telling myself to believe otherwise 😆..however i really liked this story, i was really fond of this nupur..no, mahek, so i was even ok with her being there for mayank., to live the love left behind by nupur.. its been a pleasure reading all ur shayari as well..loved it :)

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Posted: 15 years ago
how could you??
u ended this ff so fast
i was shocked to see last part attached to your pm
u didn't even tell me
that's not fair neela
i am so sad this ff ended
it was so touching
and such a sad end
but all confusion got cleared
i loved being a part of this ff
now i demand another mayur ff from you
i love ur writings
take it as a punishment of ending this ff
loads of luv
mahima

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