' Lets Say it - Kehdona' Short story (fullupdated)

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Heyyyy bhoomi
Really lovely story
I loved the poetic lines especially that let's say it kehdona
Both wanting to say but waiting waiting for other one
Their confession really amazing
Thanx for pm

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
Heyyyy bhoomi
Really lovely story
I loved the poetic lines especially that let's say it kehdona
Both wanting to say but waiting waiting for other one
Their confession really amazing
Thanx for pm

Hi Seema,

Glad dear that u liked this one.. a one shot and those lines.. yup they came up and i enjoyed writign this one.. feels so good to get ur comments on each of my work.. thanks a bunch for that dear.. and i am writing a new ff on MayUr hope u read that and comment on it too when i post..will take a couple of days to finsih writign that ... dont thank me for sendign PM its helping me to have comments from such wonderful readers like u.. luvu tc

Bhoomi

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Awwww.....this one is on Rajeev....yay!! Thanks to Jyothi first....hehe.

And abt the story....its just soooo lovely Bhoomi. To be true....when its Raj....I seem to feel a lot more....and I cud exactly feel the serenity in this story....I personally love soft romance.....so it was a pleasure to read this one. I loved the lines....when Shweta was mentally yelling at Raj for not telling her how he felt....and the way u portrayed the fact that they both knw each other soooo well.....and then keeping the scarf and shirt buttons wid them.....it was sooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!! I loved every bit of this story Bhoomi....thank you soooo much for writing this one....

And yeah.....u hav a lovely thought that every person is a star....and I will keep that in mind always!!!

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Awwww.....this one is on Rajeev....yay!! Thanks to Jyothi first....hehe.

And abt the story....its just soooo lovely Bhoomi. To be true....when its Raj....I seem to feel a lot more....and I cud exactly feel the serenity in this story....I personally love soft romance.....so it was a pleasure to read this one. I loved the lines....when Shweta was mentally yelling at Raj for not telling her how he felt....and the way u portrayed the fact that they both knw each other soooo well.....and then keeping the scarf and shirt buttons wid them.....it was sooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!! I loved every bit of this story Bhoomi....thank you soooo much for writing this one....

And yeah.....u hav a lovely thought that every person is a star....and I will keep that in mind always!!!

Hi Sumaiya,

ya yaa thanks to Jyothi.. there r two ff which i never thought i could write..this one and the other one Woh Suhaney pal.. Jyothi's request made me to... and glad u liked this one...

hahha when its Raj u feel a lot more... aaha phir to hogaya,... dooob gayii hogi.. ehhe U could feel it so much makes me feel awesome and i am smiling knowing romance and feeligns and in this story wantign to say feel..ahh u enjoyed na dear.. so nice to know... aww glad u liked that bit of showign thei emotiosn and how they felt and how it all came about..

aahh U liked eveyr bit of it.. u r very sweet Sumaiya.. i am glad somewher this story is so much loved by u.. i tried whatver i couldn in that very little time..but ur comments made me feel sooo happy..with this little effort of mine..

yes every person is a star ..and U too R><>. keep on Shining.. and i know day can not take away ur shine just hide it..:D night purity will show all how much u shine and how well brightest among u r...

Bhoomi

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