' Lets Say it - Kehdona' Short story (fullupdated) - Page 3

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyyy bhoomi
Really lovely story
I loved the poetic lines especially that let's say it kehdona
Both wanting to say but waiting waiting for other one
Their confession really amazing
Thanx for pm

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Awwww.....this one is on Rajeev....yay!! Thanks to Jyothi first....hehe.

And abt the story....its just soooo lovely Bhoomi. To be true....when its Raj....I seem to feel a lot more....and I cud exactly feel the serenity in this story....I personally love soft romance.....so it was a pleasure to read this one. I loved the lines....when Shweta was mentally yelling at Raj for not telling her how he felt....and the way u portrayed the fact that they both knw each other soooo well.....and then keeping the scarf and shirt buttons wid them.....it was sooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!! I loved every bit of this story Bhoomi....thank you soooo much for writing this one....

And yeah.....u hav a lovely thought that every person is a star....and I will keep that in mind always!!!