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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Soni-Sanraj

@dewdropred, love this part dear, so beautifully written 😍

Thank U ...soni ......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kooliio

Awesome update!!! Yay!! Can't wait for the marriage..aww poor geet.. Miss her mom and dad!!! Can't wait for the next part. Pls cont.soon

Thank U ...S she does yaar all kids who R away from parents miss them a lot..sure will continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Loved the way Dadi was playing wit them
She was sweet loved Maanrrt's love for each other

Thank U .....dadima is a sweet lady ..hopefully she remains sweet 2 geet later on in the show...
their love is really out of this world... pure unconditional love .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank U ...Ritu ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehhe maan get to be married in 7 days wow
love it totally do continue
bye sumi
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Part 19:-

Dadima is coming down the stairs with some things in her hands …

Dadima 2 geet – geet tum hamari ghar main bahu ki taur par pehli baar aayi ho …aur tumhae kya lagtha hain ki main tumhe aisae hi jaanae dungi …. Nahin geet …ab tumhari haath aagae badaao …

Geet – jee …

Dadima – kya geet jabse ayi ho ji kae alava tho kuch kahan hi nahin ….waise tho bahut bolthi ho …ab kya hua … sharma rahi ho kya … janthi ho geet tumhari baatein mujhe bahut achi lagthi hain …ab tumhara haath do ….

Geet hands her hand to dadima ….

Dadima – janthi ho Geet yeh sab jewelry maine maan ki bahu kae liyae sambhal kae rakhae thae…(these are the same bangles what dadima made geet wear that day…)haan geet yeh wohi kadae hain …jo maine tumhae uss din pehnayae thae janthi ho kyun …. Kyun ki main janthi thi ki tumhi ho meri aur maan ki pasand ….par aaj main yeh sab tumhe … tumharae haq kae tour par pehnana chahti hun ….

Dadima to maan – maan aap yeh haar geet ko pehnayiyae ….

Maan – main ….

Dadima – haan maan aap … aap ka bhi ab pura haq bantha hain geet par … hain naa geet …

Geet's blushing & then bends her head …. Then maan comes & takes the necklace & puts it around geet's neck … maan is standing beside geet now…..

Dadima – janthi ho geet main kab sae iss din ka intezaar kar rahin thi … kab maan apni dulhan ko ghar lekae aayae gaa aur kab main yeh sab usse pehna vu aur janthi ho geet yeh duppatta toh main khaas karkae maan ki dulhan kae liyae khareeda tha … (saying this daadima opens the duppatta & puts the duppatta on geet's head )….. Geet aap hamari hone wala bahu ho par main tho aaj sae hi aap ko hamari ghar ki badi bahu manthee hun aur aaj sae aap hamari ghar ki izzat bhi ho …. Aur ek baat geet …. Aap mujhsae ek waada kariyae geet ….ki aap hamesha maan ki saath dengae …aur unko kabhi bhi …. Kabhi bhi akela nahin chodengae …. Wada kariyae geet ….

Geet while watching maan is talking to dadima – main wada karthi hun … dadima … aap phikar math kariyae ….main inka saath kabhie nahin chodungi …aur inko kabhie bhi apnae sae alag nahin hone dungi har haalat main inka saath dungi dadima … aur iskae liyae mujhe jo kuch bhi karna pade main wo sab kuch karungi dadima …. (maan's eyes are filled with love for geet on hearing all these words from geet's mouth …. Thinking to himself –"Geet muhsae kitna pyar karthi hain … mere liyae kuch bhi karnae kae liyae tayyar hain ... geet kae liyae to mera pyaar har roj badtha hi jaa raha hain ….")

Geet continues to dadima - main inka saath marnae kae baad bhi nahin chodungi …dadima ….

Maan – waise bhi hamein Mouth bhi judaa nahin kar payegaa dadima …

Dadima is happy to see the love between them – acha lag rahan hain ….mujhe tum dono ko aisae dekhtae huae … mujhe jaisi ladki maan kae liyae chahiyae thi waisi hi mili aaj main bahut kush hun ….. sach main tum dono ek dusrae kae liyae hi banaya gayae ho …mujhe yeh bhi lagtha hain ki tum dono ek dusrae kae bina adurae ho … U both complete & complement each other so well … saying this dadima hugs both geet & maan …. then later on ….

Dadima 2 Geet (taking maan's hand & putting it in geet's hand) – Geet aaj sae maan purae ka purae aap ki zimmae daari hain … aap inka khayal rakhengae naa …

Geet & maan together – jee dadima ….

Dadima smiling – wah kya pyar hain … ek sae pooncho do duja bhi jawab dethae hain ….mujhe tho aapko punchane ki bhi jaroorat nahin padi maan …bina punchae hi jawab dae di ….

Dadima calling Nakul – nakul dinner lag wa do …bachon ko shayad bhukh lagi hogi …

Nakul – ji dadima … abhi lagwa detha hun …

Dadima 2 maan & geet – chalo pehlae khana khalaetha hain ….phir baaki kae baathein bhi baath kar lengae ….

They are at the dining table ….

Maan to geet – (this time he walks ahead of geet pulls a chair out for her ) geet idhar baito ….

Geet watching maan & (maan flashing his sweet smile 2 geet) - Ji ….

After every one takes their respective seats ….

Dadima 2 maan - tho maan kal kae baaren main kya socha hain aapnae…(In the mean while dinner is served & they started having their dinner)

Maan – dadima aap pehlae subah panditji ko bulwa kae shadi ki tareeq pakka karwa lijiyae …. phir baad main jewelers aur dress designers ko main ghar bhej dungaa aap aur geet milkae sab choose kar lijiyae … aur shaam ki party tho already planned hain…

They finish their dinner ….

Dadima – maan aap geet ko out house main chod kar jaldi wapas aa jayiyae … udhar hi nahin rehna …. teek hain ….

Maan – dadimaa…

Dadima – teek hain geet …abhi aap jaa kar aaram kariyae …phir kal aap bahut thak jaayengae …kal sae bahut busy ho jaayengae hum sab … akhir ghar main shaadi hain …waqt bhi tho nahin hain ….

Maan – dadima ab aap bhi jaa kae aaram kariyae … main abhi geet ko chod kar aata hun … aanae kae baad aap kae paas aaungaa … aap bhi apna medicines lee jiyae … main abhi aata hun …

maan drops geet in the out house & gives her medicines & asks her to take rest ….. goes back to the mansion & checks on dadima to see if she has taken her medicines & has gone to bed or not ….

In the outhouse Geet is about to go to bed her phone rings ….

Geet – hello ….

Pinky – hello … geet …. Thank god … tu idhar hi hain … main kab sae tumhae phone kar rahi thi … kahan chali gayi thi tum…

Geet – wo … main dadima kae paas thi …

Pinky – oh … par geet aisa kya hua tha … ki subah subah maan sir nae tumhare liyae phone kiya … wo bhi mere ghar pae …. Tu ithni subah subah kahan chali gayi thi …aur maan sir tumhae ithni subah subha kyun doond rahen thae …

Geet – wo … wo …. Wo baat …chodo …. Mujhe tumhae ek jaroori baat batani hain …

Pinky – kya hua geet … kuch problem hain kya …

Geet – nahin pinky … problem nahin …hain …wo baat yeh hain ki …. Kal … kal meri aur maan sir ki engagement hain …

Pinky is shocked – "kya"…maan sir ki aur tumhari engagement ….

Geet – ha …pinky …aur ek hafthae kae andhar andhar shaadi bhi …

Pinky is even more shocked now – "Shaadi tum dono ki ek hafthae kae andhar "….

Pinky now 2 herself yeh main kya sun rahin hun … mere kaan tho teek hain naa … maine kuch galat nahin suna hain … yeh sapna hain ki haqeeqat … she pinches herself … sapna tho nahin hain …..

Pinky – geet tu kya bol rahin hain …

Geet – haan pinky …main sach bol rahin hun … aur isi liyae main khud tumhae abhi phone kar nae wali thi … par ithnae main tumnae hi phone kar diya … aur main yeh chahthi hun ki tum aur uncle ji kal shaam ko sagai main aayae … tum aao gi naa sagai main ....

Pinky - haan avungi tumhari sagai aur main nahin aavungi ...aisae kaise ho saktha hain ...
Geet - kya uncle ji hain kya udhar abhi … main unsae baat karna chahthi hun …
Pinky 2 geet – main dekhthi hun … (she is looking for her dad … then finds him in his room…)

Pinky 2 her dad – papaji …geet aap sae baat karna chahthi hain …

Papaji 2 pinky– geet puttar mujhsae baat karna chahthi hain ithni raat ko kya hua sab teek tho hain na …(pinky hands the phone 2 her dad…)

Papaji 2 geet - kya hua geet puttar sab teek hain naa….

Geet – haa … uncle ji …sab teek hain … main aap ko ek baat batani chahthi hun …

Papaji – kya baat hain puttar ji …

Geet – uncle ji … kal meri aur maan sir ki sagai hain …. Aur bas ek hafthae kae andhar shaadi …

Papaji / Uncle ji – tum yeh kya bol rahin ho puttar ji … par tum to …

Geet – haan uncle ji … main janthi hun …. aur mainae unko bhi sab sach sach bata diya hain unsae maine kuch bhi chupaya nahin hain …. Wo mere baaren main sab janthae hain … sab jannae kae baad hi mujhsae shaadi karna chahthae hain … shaadi bhi is liyae jaldi jaldi kar rahen hain … aur main yeh chahthi hun ki aap aur pinky kal meri sagai main aaye … waise toh aap kae alava mera yahan par koi nahin hain … ab tho aap hi mere parivaar ho … (geet is becoming senti & sad …now)

Papaji / Uncle ji – teek hain geet puttar ji … hum dono aa jayengae … abhi bahut raat ho gayi hain tum aaram karo ...baki ki baatein baad main karengae … teek hain …

Geet – teek hain …uncle ji ….

Geet goes to bed ….

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please let me know if you want me to go in detail about all the customs like sangeet ,mehendi,haldi …. Or directly jump to marriage part after sagai giving a briefing about all the customs mentioned above …waiting for ur feedback & replies…

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Posted: 14 years ago
looking forward to the wedding!!! awesome update!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JULIEL

looking forward to the wedding!!! awesome update!!

Thank U ...julie ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update waiting for the engagement to happen...plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
These Lines are soooooooooooooo touching and Lovely

Geet continues to dadima - main inka saath marnae kae baad bhi nahin chodungi …dadima ….

Maan – waise bhi hamein Mouth bhi judaa nahin kar payegaa dadima …

Pinky really got a Big Shock.......😲........
Loved it soooooooooooooooo much
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soon

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