NAKASH FF- Part 4. Akshara's Pregnancy.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okaay guys, here is part 4. I am going to combine all the parts into one thread, because its difficult for people to find each and every parts. And this one is also in Akshara's point of view. This Part isn't that good I know.. But i wanna hear your feedback and comments on it. Should I change it.. or is it okaay?

Here it is:

I couldn't believe I was pregnant. I was so happy! "Maybe this baby will clear up mine and Naitik's misunderstandings.." I whispered to myself touching my stomach . "Akshara!" Naitik yelled out from the shower. "Yes, Naitik?" I asked as i got up from our bed. "Can you give me my towel, please!" he asked. "Yes Naitik, i'm coming!" I told him. I went to the cupboard and grabbed a towel from the drawer. But as I was shutting the cupboard. I noticed that Naitik's phone had 5 missed calls, and 1 text message from Sneha. I picked up his phone, and looked at it. I didn't want to look through his phone and see who called.. But I wanted to see who called him so many times, and who had given him that text message. "Akshara! Hurry up please!" Naitik shouted out from the bathroom. "I'm coming." I replied. I couldn't resist it. I had to look through his phone.. but i didn't. I had to trust him at least that much. I heard Naitik calling for his towel again. I ran to the bathroom and gave him his towel. "Sorry Naitik!" I said. Akshara! I think i'm the one who should be saying sorry. I was being rude to you.. when you were in this state. I'm really sorry, he said as he hugged me. "Its okay. But I'm telling you. I swear.. I swear on this baby that it wasn't me who put Bhola Bhaia, after you. I would never do that to you. I trust you Naitik. You know that.. right?" I said to Naitik. "I know. But if you didn't.. then who did?" he asked me. "I can't tell you that..But all I can say is that it wasn't me.." I responded. "I believe you..and i promise you will be my first priority from now on, and then work is second." Promise?" I asked him. "Promise." Naitik said with a smile, and hugged me tight. "Now, stop Naitik. My sari is getting all wet." Naitik laughed. "Okay, meri jaan. Now go and rest." He told me. I was about to leave when Naitik stopped me. He held me by my hand and waist and lead me out of the wet bathroom floor. "Thank you, Naitik." I said as I blushed. "Now lets go and sleep, Akshara. Its getting late. Naitik said. I smiled. Natik picked me up and gently laid me on the bed. He then went and got my medicine, and gave it to me. "Here Akshara, take your medicine." Naitik told me. I took the medicine. "Happy now?" I asked. "Yes, i am." He said with laugh. "Naitik, I want a baby girl. Don't you?" I asked. "I want a boy. I would play football with him all the time." Naitik laughed. I want a girl, i would dress her up in pretty dresses, and do hairstyles on her hair." I said. "I want a boy." He argued. "No. I want a girl." i told him. Before Naitik could argue back, We saw Maa standing at our door. "We'll see about that in a few more months." Naitik began to blush. 😳
"Now both of you, go to sleep. Good Night!" She laughed.


Also if you didn't read parts 1, 2 or 3 then the links are below:



http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1479618

Here's the link to Part 1. ^



http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1479625


Here's the link to Part 2. ^

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1479641

Here's the link to Part 3. ^
Edited by cookie_dough - 14 years ago

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