Vivah - ArSh Open FF

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niki4life

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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyyy guys i opened this FF on another post without a poll..so here it goes...

Hey ArShians!!!

This is nikita here n i just the got idea in mind to start an open FF on ArSh...

I wondering if it can be based on the movie "Vivah"..an Awesome movie!!

We can change the story as we want but i think the main story line should be like Vivah..journey from engagement to marriage...

Anyone could start the FF and write..we could even continue after they r married!

So, What do you think??😳😃😉😳

plzz comment, criticize, press like.. n vote =D

I'll start with the first part this time guyss..so u would know what i was thinking...hope no one mind that...😃

Sorry Abner i know u wrote a part but thats not what i was aiming for..but it was an Excellent part...i'm very sorry😳😭😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1

Delhi~~~~Malik Mansion

Sun rays shine through the window and fall on an handsome face

The alarm rings'...

Girl(caressing the guy's head )- Armaan utho

we hear groan

A- sone do na bhabhi..kal raat neend bhi nahi nikli

Girl- Armaan adi bhi uth gaya hai aur tum ho ki abhi tak soooo rahe ho

A- (gets up) good morning bhabhi

Guy- (comes through the door)good morning ke bacche.'dad bula rahe hai

A- kyun

Guy- kyunki teri pitai(hit) kar ni hai

Girl- abhi why are you scaring him this early in the morning

A- Why am I wake this early in the morning?

Ab- kyunki humhe kahi jana hai

A- kaha

Ab- niki if he says he doesn't remember I'll kill him

A- bhaiyya 'main kaise bhul sakta hu'(without thinking he blurt out) jab uski tasvir dekhi hai'meri neend ud gayi hai

Niki and Abhi both stare at him and then burst into laughter

Armaan gets embarrassed and goes to washroom

N- Abhi mujhe lagta, she's the one

Abhi walks over to armaan's bed and pulls the picture from under the pillow:

http://img.india-forums.com/images/600x0/32955-shilpa-anand.jpg

Ab- muje to lagta nahi..mujhe to pata hai that she's the one..(giving the picture to niki and they both go down stairs)

After half n' hour..Armaan comes down for breakfast in jeans:

http://www.ourbollywood.com/uploads/vivaah.jpg

Armaan's dad: Jai Malik..his mother died

J- ohhh to tumhe yaad hai

Adi- wow chachu looking handsome..

Armaan blushes on hearing that.

They all leave to meet the girl that armaan's family has chosen for him...Shilpa.

Shilpa is modern yet traditional'lives with her dad and het step mom. Her stepmom love her but her stepsister.. Riddhima hate her'and Riddhima is married to Siddhant Modi. They all live in Mumbai..Riddhima is very modern and loves her hubby.

Note: Armaan and Shilpa don't know each other...they are gonna meet for the first time..and armaan doesn't know anyone from Shilpa's family...Armaan, Shilpa, Sid, Riddhima all are doctors in different branches of Sanjivani...Sid and Shilpa live in Panchgani but are here for shilpa in Mumbai as someone is coming to see her.

someone now please continue, comment, like and criticize

Sorry for the mistakes😳

Edited by niki4life - 14 years ago

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niki4life

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Posted: 14 years ago

Guys...oly three comment..is it that bad??

and i can't continue ..it's open FF...any of you can continue =)

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Nruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey
this is a great.............i absolutely loved the concept.............i truly believe in arranged marriage.............that's how all the ppl in my family got married........................

but on the contrary i think that you should write this FF and not keep it a open FF.............as it will get changed by other writers........................

cont soon
nruti

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Dear,
awesome part wht can i say i love it really
Vivah one of th best movie i am looking forward to read more parts please KaShians and ArShians whoeva is writer do write please
don't frgt to pm whneva smeone updates okay

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Heaven

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Posted: 14 years ago

heyya niki's nice part loved it am loving and glad it open ..u know and i love it man i am going crazy ....awwwwwwwwwwwwwhaye love the way Armaan blushes ......mar jawa ...glad OMG i am gone ..this is redilous ..i am going nuts ... Love Heaven

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unnatia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey, I also agree with Nruti, u should write the ff. Luv the starting:)

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Dhruvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

heyy nikki
loved the part
awesome

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applepie

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it continue the next part soon

add me to ur pm list

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so Armaan is going to meet herbut why Sid-Shilpa r together why not SR but sweet to see he help her in forgetting her fear plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nidha

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