TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 51

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Posted: 14 years ago
Read Page 4 and Part 2: but why's Baji is behaving like this? what has he do with Dutta? why he wants the Land on any cost? so many questions!! going to read Part 3 now! 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY SHABZ
today is the first time i read ur FF and fall in luv with it
its simplyyyyyyyyyyyyy awesome
love it ,
REading FF is always hard 4 me and specially the ones jo 14 , 15 part tak phunj jate hai
but i have to say what was the point when i decided to complete ur FF
very first part when u were describing the guys and the line was like this
BUSiness tycoon Baji Rao shrivastav
i was laughing my ass off, no one dared to make Baji Rao a business tycoon , u did it and u nailed it .
Awesome backup story
love it ,
Love Baji n Rano
Nupur N Mayank are Hilarious
and Tasha what can i say about them simply awesome .
you are an amazing writer
, i am not getting over
i am going to read it agn cuz its totally awesome
Gr8 job Shabz
Plz continue
and Update fast cuz while roaming i have come to know that
u strictly follows LTL CV's while updating !
ehehheheheh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi frndzz ..
me finally bak with a update ..
sorry I cant reply to all of urs sweet comments ..but I hav read each & every comment & i really appreciate & m thankful to u all 4 liking my work ..
Hope u like this one too ...




Part 16

Nupur was not talking to Mayank …. So TaSha decides to help him …. On Naku telling he goes to Nupur ….. she is in her room reading a book …. He has a bunch of roses in his hand … he walks up to her & sit besides her …. Nupur ignores him & continues reading ..
Mayank : Nupur tum kab tak naraaz rahogi ….
Nupur turns to the other side …. Mayank also turns to the other side facing her …
Mayank : Chalo ab maan bhi jao na .. dekho main kya laya hoon tumhare liye … he forwards his hands in front of her …. She looks 4rm sideways …. But does not say anything ….

Mayank then holds his ears : Dekho main kaan pakadta hoon …. Aur promise karta hoon k aage se kabhi tumhe tang nahi karoonga …. Ab maan bhi jao …

Nupur softens towards him a little : Soch lo ….. agar phir tang kiya to kabhi baat nahi karoongi ….

Mayank imitating Nupur : By God …kabhi nahi karoonga …

Nupur glares at him & then smiles at him .. Mayank gives her the roses .. Nupur takes it 4rm him … she brings it closer to her & inhales its fragrance … but then her expression changes … She looks at Mayank angrily : ye to naqli hain …

Mayank : Haan to maine kab bola asli hain …… ab dekho ye hamesha fresh rahenge …kabhi murjhaen gein nahi …roz roz change karne ki zaroorat nahi & then mutters to himself : aur mere paise bhi bachenge …

Nupur : Kya kaha …. Tum mujhe naqli phool de rahe ho …. She throws the flowers at him & then looks around 4 something to hit him … not finding anything she picks up a cushion & throws at him … Mayank tries to stop her … but she is angry … she then picks up the Tv remote & throws at him …he catches it .. asking her to stop ..she then picks up a vase .. they r running around the house ..

Mayank : Nupur dekho lag jayegi .. aur ye tuth jayega ..

But then as she is about to hit him he kneels down in 4rnt of her & takes out a single rose 4rm inside his shirt & 4wards his hands towards her .. her hands stop at mid air … he smiles at her & sayz " I Love U"

Nupur looks at him ,,taking the flower 4rm his hand : pehle nahi de sakte thay … kitna satate ho tum mujhe Mayank ..

Mayank : To tum kaun sa kam satati ho ….

They laugh together & then hug …

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It was easy 4 Dutta to gel down with Naku & MayUr …… at first Mayank was a little reserved & irritated but then he too warmed up to Dutta & welcomed his friendship … they had become a foursome going out 2gether 4 movies or lunch almost everyday ..…they were enjoying themselves in each other company .…. Dutta was quite amused at the way Mayank & Nupur fought & enjoyed their little tiffs ..… but he knew that they loved each other very much ..they were such a lively characters ……Seeing the three of them 2gether ( Naku, Mayank & Nupur ) ....often reminded him of his childhood dayz ….. he had such beautiful memories of his friendship with Baaji , Sups & Pari .. he would often wonder where Pari was… he missed Baaji & Pari …their friendship …

Dutta was so lost in his thoughts …Naku snapped her fingers in 4rnt of him …

Naku : hello ….. kahan kho gaye ..

Dutta coming out of his thoughts : Kuch nahi …. Tum kuch keh rahi thi …

Naku : Khana ka baa gaya hai ….. khana shuru karo ,,thandha ho jaye ga …

Dutta : haan ,,woh khana aa gaya …

They all hav their lunch making small talks in between …mostly Naku & Nupur .. Dutta & Mayank were listening to them …..Nupur & Naku had plans to do sum shopping as Mayank sister wedding was near ……

Mayank shocked : Shopping …….arey aur kitni karni hai …. Tum log thakti nahi ho kya ..

Nupur : to tumhe kya aitraaz hai …. Dekho Dutta kuch bol raha hai kya ..

She asks Dutta : Tumhe koi takleef hai hamare shopping se ….

Dutta nods his head & about to say something but Mayank quips in : arey woh kyun bolega ……abhi to bechara naya hai is khel mein …. usey to baad mein pata chalega …

Dutta looking at them : main kuch samjha nahi ..

Naku looking lovingly at Dutta : Tum Mayank ki baat par dhyan mat do …ye to samajhta hi nahi ….Main tumhe samjhati hoon ….ab dekho shaadi hai … to naye kapde to chahiye na ..saath mein matching shoes , jewelry .. to is k liye shopping par jana to ho ga na ...Kya tum nahi chahte k tumhari Naku sab se khoobsurat lage ……

She looks at him innocently …& Dutta had no option but to nod his head in approval …Mayank stares at him ,,,but then agrees as he had no option ..

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All 4 of them coming out of the mall with bags in their hands … Nupur & Naku were still talking & Mayank sure looked pissed … he kept staring at them ..

Mayank to Dutta : " Kitni baatein karti hain yeh …. Thakti hi nahi …mere to kaan pak gaye" …Dutta smiles at him .. Mayank then takes out some cotton which he had stuffed in his ears … Dutta laughs at him .. Mayank stares at him … then sayz " hans lo jitna marzi hai …baad mein tum bhi yehi karoge …abhi to tumhe Naku ka bolna achcha lag raha hain na..baad mein poochunga.."

Dutta : Main ye nahi karoonga ..(pointing 2wards the cotton in his hands ..) ..mujhe aur bhi tarike aate hain inhe chup karane ke ..

M mockingly : Achcha …aise kaun se tarike hain tumhara paas …zara main bhi to sunu …

D grins : Jab mauka milega ,,,,tumhe khud hi pata chal jayega ..

M : Ye bolo ….. chod rahe ho …

They r just about to get in a argument when the girls turn their way …. They look at them inquiringly …..

Nupur asks : kya hua ..kis baat par behas ho rahi hai ..

Dutta : Kuch nahi ,,,bas aise hi ...hum to mazak kar rahe thay … Mayank : main kab mazak kar raha tha …haan tum bol rahe thay k …

B4 Mayank can say anything Dutta cuts in : Tum logon ki ho gayi shopping ..ya aur kuch baaki hai ..ab ghar chalein ..

Naku & Nupur looks at them .. Nupur pondering 4 a while then asks Mayank : kya keh raha tha yeh ..pointing 2wards Dutta ..

Mayank deciding to tell whether to tell or not …. Dutta tries to signal Mayank …winks at him to not to ..

Naku notices this & asks : ye tum kya ishaare kar rahe ho .. she then asks Mayank as to what was Dutta saying ..

Mayank a little pleased that this was a chance to get bak at Dutta … he blurts out that Dutta was telling him that he knew ways as to how to shut them up as they talked too much ..

Nupur & Naku glares at Dutta …..

Dutta : maine kab bola k ye zyada bolti hain … tum hi to keh rahe thay .. he luks at the girls & tells them that he was the one who was telling him about their too much blabbering ..& he even had cotton stuffed in his ears …

Nw it was Mayank turn to b glared at …..the girls turned 2wards him …

Mayank : haan wo aise muh se nikal gya tha …. Magar isse to pooch k isse kaun se tarike aate tumhe chup karane ke … bada itra raha tha Naku … ab bolo ..

Naku turning 2wards Dutta : So we talk too much …. ( Dutta nods yes & then no …confused ..) ….& u also knw wayz to shut me up .. zara mujhe bhi to batao na ..

Dutta clearing his throat : dekho Naku … chodo na …kitni dair ho rahi ..lets go & eat sumthing … he holds her hand …

Naku pushes his hand off … mujhe batao tum mujhe kaise chup karaoge ..

Dutta fumbling wid words …. Nupur munching popcorn & staring at them at a same time & Mayank bucking up Naku to ask him …

Naku moving closer 2wards ,,folding her hands across her chest she asks him again .. that hw would he shut her up …

Dutta glares at Mayank …then he looks bak at Naku pleadingly to let go ..

Naku starts talking non stop : kyun ….ab tumhari bolti kyun bandh ho gayi … mujhe chup karane wale thay na …to karo …dekho main kitna bol rahi hoon …. Tumhe sunna padh raha ….aur phir bhi tum kuch nahi kar rahe …. Aage bhi aise hi chup rahoge ….mere liye to achcha hai ….tum sunoge aur main bolungi …

Dutta looks at her then at MayUr … Mayank winks at him & with a huge grin on his face mouths silently .."ab lo maza"..

Naku was going on & on & then Dutta suddenly moves 2wards Naku …grabbing her hands he pulls her near him smooches her hard on the lips shutting her off completely taking her by surprise … Nupur freezes ..gaping at TaSha wide eyed ..popcorn in her hand .. Mayank stares at them mouth open …. He hadn't expected Dutta to do this …

After a while he breaks off the kiss …. Naku breathes heavily ,,composing herself a little she again opens her mouth to yell at Dutta ,,he again takes her in a kiss .. & then as suddenly he had kissed her ….he breaks it off & backs off a little …. Naku all angry …. Dutta notices that Naku looked real mad at him …. He excuses himself that he just remembered a meeting so he has to rush & would see them later …. He quickly pecks on Naku cheeks & whispers "Luv ya" in her ears …& makes a run 4rm there b4 Naku could do anything …

MayUr also come bak to their senses … they are equally surprised & shocked at wat Dutta did .. Naku gritting her teeth yells after Dutta : main tumhe chodungi nahi ..

She looks at Nupur & then they glare angrily at Mayank …. Mayank gets all nervous …he sayz : mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ,,maine kya kiya … he notices that Naku & Nupur r giving him killer looks …. & he had to get away 4rm them as they would take out all their anger on him …. He gently hands over the bags in Nupur hands & smiles at them … then shouts after Dutta… "Ruk …main bhi aa raha hoon ….. mujhe zara drop kara dena" & runs 4rm there leaving both of them fuming with anger …. But b4 going …he too quickly dares too take a peck at Nupur lips …leaving her shocked too …


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Pllzz do comment ..

Thanx a lot ..😳



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Posted: 14 years ago

Wah ji..wah...ramadan ke mauke pe.. update....shukriya...Shabnam ji....😛

n hai...my Mayur.........soo cute..me luvd their fight..n how Mayank got down on his knees n finally gave the rose...to Nups... totaly adorable..!! ❤️
me like the Glare match of Nups-Naku from Dutta boy to Mayank..😆😆 so cute....n phunny 😆 n OMGEEEEEEE yeh Dutta boy ne.. 😲 did he.. did he..just.. KISS ...Naku..?? ShockedShocked *Faints* hai mai mar jawa.....Sher in phul phorm...me likey 😈
n lolz..bechara Mayank.......bhegi billi ...🤣🤣🤣🤣!! Great update shabz...!! Me luvd it..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
are yeah Mayank nupur kaha se tapak pare tasha ke zindagi mein?
sorry dis da first tym i cme 2 ur FF dats y i didnt get anyfink.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: YPNHKFAN

are yeah Mayank nupur kaha se tapak pare tasha ke zindagi mein?

sorry dis da first tym i cme 2 ur FF dats y i didnt get anyfink.



I guess u hav to read 4rm the start to get the story ...
but thanx anywayz 4 reading & commenting ...
😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG OMG OMG
Dutta at its best
love it love it love it
i love the way he shuts up naku
very entertaining
missed my Baji n Rano
update more and fast
u are rocking this FF miss Shabzzzzzzz :PPPPPPPP
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Posted: 14 years ago

lmao...another hilarious update... as i was reading i gt a hint tht dutta wud kiss her 2 shut her up n he did...awww tht was awesome yaar...naku talks a lot in the shw too..wud like 2 c him do tht in the shw...lol...

mayank is so cute...putting cotton in his ears...lmao...

plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome part dear. MN rock
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey shabz thanx for the update and Pm yaar 🤗 loved the way all are gelling well together ..Omg omg dutta kissed naku "faints and drools " pls somebody pinch me to bring me bk from heaven ..naku was bugging dutta ..so he shut her up very well ..dutta is gettin very naughty 😆 me lovin it yaar ..
Mayank and nupur was cute and sweet too he also took a chance and kissed nupur but small one 😆
Loved every bit of it ..missed baaji and rano ...pls jaldi update karna.take care and see u around ⭐️ 👏 🤗
Edited by suhana19 - 14 years ago

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