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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 40

Shiv was in the washroom thinking'..
"Hmm Gauri '.. Tum mere itne karib aakarbi' mujse door ho'." He smiled '. And thinking ' "Have I gone intimate with Gauri without giving her sufficient time to remove the awkwardness between us'.."

"But I don't see Gauri regretting or feeling sad about anything' she looks happy to me'.. But then after beeing so intimate with each other she still is not able to talk to me freely'. May be I should slow down a little and take things slowly again'give her sufficient time to get over the awkwardness and talk to me '.. So that we both can cherish these moments more'"


Shiv walks into the room wearing a towel on the lower half of the body'..
And wriggling the water out of his hair'..
As he is coming out his eyes fall on Gauri who was making the bed'.
Shiv smiles '. slowly walks to her'.. grabbes her by her waist from behind..'. Gauri was jolted and She hold's Shiv's hands on her waist' for support'.

Shiv did not just give her anytime to rethink about it'. '.. He just bent froward burried his head on the knox of her neck and gave a really passionate kiss'.. Which brought shivers to Gauri'

She closed her eyes.... cluched shiv's hands tighter'.. His submissive
wetness in his skin ... his touch was bringing shivers to Gauri and Gauri's reaction were giving Shiv more encouragement.

He took hold of her in his arms bringing her even closer and increasing the pace of the kisses'

Gauri was having heavy breaths'.. Shiv was just stopping to catch up his breath'.

He just slowly moved her to the bed'..



Gauri heard a sound of the opening and closing of a door'. Which brought her out of her pleasant thoughts'. She jerked and turned'.. Looking at Shiv standing there shaking of the water droplets of his hair'.

Gauri looks back at herself' and the bed'.. And a sprang of anxiety crosses her heart for imagining such things'.. She touches her forehead to wipe her sweat beads off'. And looked at Shiv once more to confirm it was just a dream and looking at Shiv in a towel she just turns around with her cheeks becoming red with Shyness and Anxiety'. And a smile forming on her lips'

Then suddenly realizing that Shiv was not given his clothes she walks towards the closet'. And starts removing Shiv's clothes'.

Here, Coming to a conclusion that he will take it slow from now on'. He headed to the shower and taking a good shower'.. And smiling and thinking about his wife'. He walked back into the room with a towel wrapped around his waist'.. And wriggling water of his hair' he lifts his head to find' Gauri near the closet'.

Gauri hastly brings the clothes moving forward her hand in front of Shiv' gives him the clothes'.Which Shiv takes them and Starts to wear them'..

Gauri turns around as Shiv changes into his clothes and starts to walk towards the living room'

Shiv realizing Gauri was walking away'. Calls for her' while finishing wearing his clothes and talking a step behind her'.. "Gauri.."

Listening to the call Gauri'. Stops in her tracks'. Shiv walks'. To her in a very casual manner

"Gauri'. Tume bhuk lagi hogi' mein Hotel call kar rahahu' tumein kya chahiye'."
Gauri looked at Shiv who was looking at her standing beside her'.
"Ji koi bhi' vegitarian yah chicken item chalega'"
Shiv smiled and walked towards the bed sat down and called the Hotel '.realizing the bedside table has a drawer and opened it to find a food menu for order and kept the phone back'. Looked at Gauri'. And smiled'.

"Gauri' yeh dekho menu hai' ismese joh tume acha lagega order kardo' mere liye bhi'"

Gauri walked towards the bed'. And standing there' took the menu from Shiv and said' "Aap Kya Khayenge'"
Shiv : "Mujhe bhi koi vegitarian item yah chicken item chalega" smiling at Gauri'.
Gauri lowered her eyes and blushed'.. Making shiv smile grow wider'
Shiv seeing her blush'. Got up from the bed and keeping a hand on her shoulder said' "Acha to tum menu dekh key order karo'. Mein abhi ata hu'"

Gauri was feeling a little bit surprised that he was not taking initiative to hug her or kiss her'. She felt a little sad '.. Then clearing her head with the thing at hand'.

Gauri sat down on the bed ' looking at the menu'. She loved pasta' and found a pasta coloum and straight way ordered' "chicken fitini pasta with sauce for two"

In the mean time' Shiv went to the living room to check some things on his laptop'. He sat down looking at some of the e-mails of his work' just to make sure' things were smooth sailing in his absence'.

Gauri came back into living room'.
She saw Shiv sitting in the sofa with a laptop deeply engrossed into it'
She stood beside the sofa ' and started '
"Ji who'" she did not get any response'
She started again' "Ji who' mein ne chicken fitini pasta ka order diya hai'. Who keh rahethe' 20 mins mein ayega'"
She still got no response' she was a little surprised' but thought that' may be he is busy with something'.
She was about to walk away'. When shiv said' "Gauri .." which made her stop in her tracks and turn back'.
He looked at her smiled and signaled her with a hand gesture to come and sit beside him'.
He put his laptop on the coffee table and turned towards her when she came and sat a little further away from him on the sofa facing him'. Looking at him when Shiv smiled and casually said' he took her hand which was figetting with the other hand and placed it between his hands and comforting her said' "Mein chahta hu' ki tum mujhe Shiv keh ke bulao'" and feeling Gauris hands grow cold he continued' "Aur waise bhi'. Jabhi tum Ji kehti ho to aisa lagta hai mein 50 sal ka buda go gaya hu'" bringing a broad smile on Gauri's face'.. To which Shiv also smiled'..

"Acha yeh chodo' Mujhe Tum se kuch poochna tha..'."
"Ji'" garui looked at Shiv curiously
Seeing Shiv looking at her' with a half sad look' realized and lowered her eyes and said' "Shiv.." slowly'.
And Shiv cleared his throat to make her look at him and when she did He smiled at her'. Bringing a smile on her face too'.

Gauri felt a little more comfortable and asked slowly..

"Toh aap mujhe kuch pooch na tha..??"

"Haan Who"

"Acha Gauri tum Jeans skirts pehen thi ho' kya?"
Gauri looked at Shiv and said ' "Ji'." then bit her tongue a little and continued.. "Long skirts pehnti hu' aur kabhi kabhi jeans bhi pehen thi hu.." she answered his question still thinking' why he is asking' with a question still evident in her eyes'.

Understanding her eyes'.Shiv started
"Who bas mein is liye puch rahatha kyun ki mujhe tume ek jaga lejana hai' jaha shayad saree yaha chunidar pehen ke jana mushily hoga'isliye.."

Seeing her relieved eyes he smiled'

"Toh' tumare pass abhi jeans hai'."
Gauri nodded negative'

"Koi bat nahi hum kal mall jake kuch karid lenge' then we will be fine.."
Shiv was looking at Gauri nodding her head in positive'. Only he knew how difficult it was getting to keep his hands of her'. And keep talking to her' he just wanted to make her sit in his lap'.and'.."

As shiv kept thinking'. The door bell rang with a man holding an umbrella'. Standing there with their food'. He took the food and greeted him and said thank you

Both sat down to eat their food'.
Gauri put the plates and the fork and spoon and turned from the refrigirator'. And said'. Slowly'

"Shiv'" and Shiv was busy trying to find something to see on Tv with the remote in hand'

So' Gauri lifted her voice and said a little louder'. "Shiv'.." It was still not audible'. Realizing herself' she felt shy' calling for shiv'

Gauri told herself' Gauri he doesnot like being called Ji so call him Shiv'. She repeated herself under her breath a few times'

"Shiv'Shiv ' Shiv'" then taking a deep breath' she called out '.

"Shiv'" and hearing her voice'. Shiv turned all stunned'.. In excitement'.. Gauri blushed holding the refrigator door'.. Seeing his astonishment'..

Shiv '. Smiled at her and walked to wards her '. And leaned onto the door' and just moved his hand saying her to hug him'.. And Gauri came straight into his arms without hesitation'.

And shiv thought'. This is a very good start'..

The comforting of Shiv holding her'. Felt so nice'. She felt comfortable and she did not want to think about why she was comfortable'. She just wanted to be comfortable with him'.. "Her Shiv'"
She smiled and hugged him tighter'.

It was getting hard for Shiv to resist kissing her'.. And this night is going to be long '' he sighed'.. Gauri pulled herself when she did not get any advances from Shiv' she felt a little upset'. But slowly brought space between them and put her loose strands of hair behind her ear'. And slowly lifted her eyes'. And saw Shiv smiling at her'.

"toh' mere wife ne mujhe kyun bulaya'??"
And Gauri immediately said' "Juice or water ??" and Shiv looked at her confused' and Gauri pointing to the plates said' "Dinner.."

And Shiv said' "Orange Juice'" and smiled

And Gauri looked at him and signaled him to move a little from leaning on the refrigirator'. And Gauri brought the orange juice to put it in the glasses for them'.

Then gauri turned and asked him to come and have his food'.

After eating few bites in silence' Shiv said' "Gauri toh tume Pasta pasand hai..???" and gauri looked at him "Haan.. Mujhe bahut pasand hai'" ' "Kya aap ko pasand hai..???"

"Mujhe bhi Pasta pasand hai.." and smiled' bringing smile on Gauri's face' and Shiv was enjoying his food'. While Gauri kept glancing at Shiv from time to time'.. Thinking what happened'. Did I upset him'. He is not trying to be intimate with me'. Or kiss me'.. I am not able to read anything from his expression is he upset with me' but he did not sound upset when I talked to him'..

Shiv looked at Gauri just poking her fork into the pasta and thinking about something'. He touched her shoulder and when gauri jolted from her thoughts he asked her what was she thinking about so seriously and garui smiled and turned her head negatively'.

Then Shiv said'. "Gauri' meine Ek movie dekhi hai abhi' kuch dermein hai'.. Kya tum mere sath dekho gi'." "Tum English movies dekh ti ho na'" and Gauri smiled and nodded saying "haan"

Shiv kept thinking what is it' Gauri is so engrossed in her thoughts she is just nodding her head'

They finished eating and then Gauri finishes with washing the plates and then'. Shiv still is sitting on the table looking at Gauri' who is putting back everything'.

Shiv could see some sad expression covering Gauri's face… but he could not come to a conclusion as to what it is….

He walked over towards her….. Said .. "Gauri mein tumari madat kardoo.." smiling at her…and Gauri looked at him gave a smile and said… " Kuch bhi toh Kam nahi hai…"
To this he said…. "Toh jake movie dekhte hain…."
And Gauri nodded…. Positive…

Shiv walked to the living room and smiled from over the counter when Gauri was standing there looking at him.. He signaled her to come over…

Gauri walked over to the sofa and sat herself down a little away from Shiv… he put the movie….he looked at gauri sitting a little further away from him and sighed …

The Movie started with the titles…… and soon Shiv turned to ask Gauri ..
"Gauri tum English movies dekhti hona… mujhe pehle puchna tha shayad.."

Gauri smiled…. And said… "Ji mein English movies bhi dekhti hu.."
And curiously looked at him understanding from his experession that he wanted to say something else too..

Shiv said… while looking at Gauri trying to continue the conversation…

"Meine Jab yeh movie ki ad dekha … toh socha ki tume pasand ayega…."

And Gauri smiled…. And was about to continue….

When there was the music starting….and both their attention went back to the movie…..

Mmm…..
My Life is through but I have no doubt
Someday I'll meet that someone I've dreamed about
He may live around the globe far across the sea
But somewhere my baby waits for me
The moment that I see him, my heart will know
Then I won't wait to tell him I love him so
He'll be mine to have and hold for whole eternity
Yeah, somewhere my baby waits for me
Oh, somewhere my baby waits for me

When I see lovers passing
I don't feel blue
I know the things they're feeling I'll be feeling too
I don't know where I'll meet him, I don't know when
I only know that someday my search will end
One fine day I'll turn around and there he will be
Yeah, somewhere my baby waits for me

He may live around the globe far across the sea
But somewhere my baby waits for me
Oh, somewhere my baby waits for me

Gauri heard the song and turned to Shiv with a Big smile…
Shiv realizing that Gauri was looking at him…. Turned and looking at her smiled he smiled too…

And Gauri said… "Yeh meri favourite pictures mein se ek hain…." and gave a big beaming smile…. Seeing her smile he gave a big smile …..

Slowly Gauri got engrossed in the movie…. Within few minutes….
Shiv looked back at Gauri…. And while she was enjoying the movie so engrossed in it… Shiv kept looking at Gauri's face….. And her happy beaming face….

He slowly moved himself next to her….. And kept looking at her…..

Gauri felt shiv's shoulder near her hand and anxiety creeping into her…. She looked at Shiv…. But Shiv was sitting Casually with a hand around Gauri's shoulder and watching the movie…..

Gauri kept looking at Shiv with nervousness in her breath….. She slowly turned her face down…. And gave a nervous smile trying to keep the anxiety in tact……

When Shiv did not get any resistance from Gauri…. And also She did not move away from him… he smiled to himself and kept watching the movie….

Within few minutes…. Gauri's eyes were drooling and she just relaxed herself a little in the sofa…. Placing her head on Shiv's Hand…..

And Shiv glanced at her…. And smiled….. And kept watching the movie….

Gauri in few mintues she was a sleep….. And Shiv looked at her sleeping….. He switched off the movie smiling at her…. And was about to move his left hand on which Gauri was sleeping….. That…. Gauri moved her head towards shiv….. And Shiv seeing her face so calm …. Sleeping peace fully he kept looking at her and thinking…. "How innocent and cute she looks in sleep…." and smiled….

Looking at her like that…. The urge to take her in his arms and give her a tight hug….. Was increasing my the minute for Shiv….

He slowly…. Moved his right hand…. Brought it towards Gauri's face….. He put his thumb on Gauri's left cheek and slowly moved his thumb and as he did Gauri moved in her sleep and Shiv jerked and was about to move back …. When Gauri turned her self and snuggled upto Shiv…. Holding his hand with her hands…..

Shiv smiled…. And sat there for a while looking at her….. Admiring her for the simplicity…. For the innocence….. For the beauty and for the shyness….

He could not get himself to disturb her…..

After a while his left hand started to hurt… putting it in the same position for quite some time…. So he thought of putting Gauri on the bed…. As by now Gauri was in deep sleep…..

He slowly lifted her in his arms and slowly walked into the bed room…. He placed her on the bed….. And was about to turn to walk to switch of the lights… when he felt a tuck at his shirt… and turned his head to find… Gauri's hands holding onto his shirt and he looked at her….. She was fast a sleep…. He sighed ….. And took the hands slowly of his shirt…… and Gauri cuddled herself with her hands tucked under the pillow….. He pulled the covers over her and gave a kiss on her forehead….

He smiled and went to switch of the lights….. Then realizing that he had not checked his e-mails…. He sat down in the living room after switching of the lights in the bedroom….

After an Hour of going through e-mails and disappointed at some, angry at some, and a few checklist items, Shiv was yawning and eager to get into bed and go to sleep…..

He just shutdown his laptop and switched of the lights…. And went straight to bed….. Seeing Gauri in deep sleep made him so happy… he felt he could continue without sleep if he could just look at her every few minutes….

He walked to the other side of the bed…. And just got into bed and pulled the covers and couldn't resist giving Gauri a kiss on her cheek….

He gave a kiss on her right cheek then he wanted to give one more….. So he gave a kiss on forehead…. Then he sighed….. And went to sleep…..

It was morning in Switzerland…. And dew drops still on the leaves of the trees…. Fog in the air…. People walking around with warm coffee cups in downtown…. The sun still behind the clouds trying to peep out…. To light up for a bright day….

Hmmm…. What a warm and cozy morning….

that's how it was in Shiv and Gauri's bedroom suite too…..

Both Shiv and Gauri were in deep sleep…. And Gauri was hugging Shiv…. And her head was on his chest and her right hand holding him tightly….. And Shiv's hand was enveloping Gauri's back…..

Gauri tried to move a little and when she felt a grip on her…. She slowly opened her eyes….. Rubbing them with her fingers like a baby…. And lifted her face a little only to see that… she was sleeping on Shiv's chest….

She smiled…. She just wanted to feel that once again… So… she just put her head back on Shiv's chest….. She could hear his heart thumping in his chest….. She smiled….. She wanted to move a little but then felt that he would get up and this comfort would be gone…. For a while she slept there with her eyes wide open … smiling…. Then she wanted to move her hand a little …. To feel the touch ….. She slowly moved her hand….. It felt nice….. She hugged him tighter and in response… shiv… tighted his hand grip and pulled her even closer….. She smiled….. And hugged him tighter….

But one thing Gauri did not realise in her smiles is when Shiv hugged her tighter that's when he was out of his Sleep….. And Smiling…..

For few minutes both of them were sleeping smiling …. Then Shiv could not resist …. He just turned towards gauri…..

Gauri tried to move a little away but Shiv was fast to hug her tightly in his embrace….

Gauri smiled again…. She felt a tingle in her heart…thinking Shiv was awake…. But Shiv kept still…. So Gauri….. Thought may be he just turned in sleep….

Gauri's breath was hitting Shiv's neck and he was having tough time controlling his urge to kiss her….

Gauri was loving being in Shiv's arms….

After few minutes…. Shiv said in soft husky voice…. Holding Gauri tightly…. And moving his head near her ear…..

" Gauri … tum kuch Karo…. Yaha… mujhe kuch karne do…."

Gauri just lifted her head in shock to look at Shiv….. And seeing him smiling at her…. She…. Gulped….

When she felt shiv was looking right at her….she lowered her gaze and tried to free herself…..

But Shiv….. Caught her and pulled her even closer….. Leaving no sapce for even the air to pass through them…

To ease her a little….. Shiv smiled and said…

"Good morning Gauri.."

Now gauri was feeling nervous ….. And slowly said… "good morning.."
And continued…. "Mein Jake Chayi banathi hu…. Aap jake fresh ho jayi ye.." all the while eyes lowered as not able to face Shiv's eyes….

'Haan …. Jake bana do…." and was still holding her tightly….

Garui tried to free herself… to go… but could not….

After her efforts went invain she looked at Shiv….. With pleading eyes…

Shiv… with a naughty Grin said…. "pehle mjhe kuch chahiye…. Phir mein tume jane doonga…" and Gauri looked at him questioning…..

Shiv continued….. "pooch cho gi nahi ki kya chahiye..??"

Gauri slowly said… "ky… kya… chahiye…??"

Shiv said…. "Mujhe Ek Good Morning Kiss chahiye…. Yahan…" and indicated towards his lips….

He was expecting Gauri to feel more nervous….. And just lower her eyes…. But to both Gauri and Shiv's surprise….. Gauri… smiled and lowered her eyes…. And turned her head negative…..

This put all Shiv's supesions to rest….. And Shiv understood that Gauri is just Shy… and there is nothing else….

So, he lifted her face a little so that his eyes could meet hers….. And said….

"Agar tum kiss dogi toh ek kiss se ho jayega…. Agar…. Tum ne kiss nahi diya…. Toh mujhe deni hogi….. Aur…. Who… ek pe ruke ga nahi…."

Gauri…. Was feeling shy nervous…. But something in her was liking this intimate moment and bringing smile on her face….. The disappointment she was feeling yesterday night… was now bringing bright smiles making her cheeks grow from shades of pink to shades of crimson …..

To control her shyness… she pressed her lower lip with her teeth…..

Seeing that… shiv gave a broad smile said… "Mein sirf teen tak ginuga…. Agar tum ne kiss dediya toh mein yeh smashing ki ….. Mere paas ana tume pasand nahi hai isiliye tum mujhe sirf ek kiss say hi khatam kar dena chahitiho..….. Aur agar tumne mujhe kiss nahi diya toh… mein yeh smashing ki ….. Tume mere paas ana kiss karna pasand hai……" and moved Garui's back on to the bed and came a little over her…..

Gauri looked at him in Shock….. Not understanding what to do…..
And shiv wincked at her…. With a big smile playing on his lips…..

Continued..….. "Toh…. Mein count karna shuru karta hu…….." and smiled….. With a naughty grin… seeing Shiv's grin… Gauri…. Lowered her eyes trying to figure out a way out of this….

"EK" …..
"Doo"
Gauri's heart was racing….. By every second…. She wanted him as much as he wanted her….. She knew that….. But her anxiety was taking the best of her…. Gauri cluched the bed sheet to try and lower her anxiety….
Gauri took a deep breath….. With her heart pounding…

Shiv… grinned again….. And waited for few seconds…..

When Gauri did not hear 'teeen.." she looked at Shiv…. Who was waiting for her …. He grinned at her even more… looking at her….

Seeing him… She lowered her eyes and yet again… she was smiling…. She herself couldnot understand why she was smiling….

"Teen…" Shiv said…

Gauri cluched the sheets even tighter…..

Shiv waited a few seconds….. And he slowly moved his face forward… and with his trembling lips …. He took Gauri's trembling lips…..

After a minute Garui slowly released the grip on the sheets….. After another few minutes….. Gauri jerked her head back into the pillow to catch her breath….

Shiv was trying to catch his breath too….. He pulled Gauri back at him…. Holding her by the waist….

As if he was not finished with the kiss… he went back and caught Gauri's lips again… for another passionate kiss…..

After a minute or two… Gauri's hands moved and took hold of Shiv's back….. As Shiv's kiss grew deeper …. So were Gauri's grip on Shiv's shirt…..

Gauri jerked back again…… Shiv moved his head…. To kiss Gauri's neck…. He tried to move further down… but due to the chunidar gauri was wearing…. It was all covered…..

So Shiv slowly moved his hands… from gauri's waist….. Down… to move his hands again up…. Now from under her top…..

With the touch of shiv's hand on Gauri's waist….. Gauri's body shivered…. She closed her eyelids….. Feeling her Shiver…. Shiv caught her waist even tighther…. And Gauri cluched Shiv's shirt tighter not once willing to let him go…..

Shiv slowly… moved the fabric up towards Gauri's face and soon it was of her body….. Gauri…. Shyed and released her hold on Shiv's shirt and tried to cover herself with her hands…..

Shiv went to gauri's ear and said… "Gauri… I want you…" Gauri opened her eyes…. To see Shiv's eyes…. Showing passion and desire….. Which cannot be missed…. His eyes…. Were…. Hungry…. His lips were waiting….. Garui's eyes melted….seeing the desire…..

She did not know what happened to her on looking into those eyes…. That…. She moved her hands…… to allow Shiv…. To take over her…..


hmmmm…. Hmmm…hmm…. (if you all want the full description please let me know I shall complete the description in the next part)....

And thus they made love….. They cherished…. Each other……


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Shiv and Gauri were sleeping and in the morning gauri wakes up first but wants to enjoy the closeness with Shiv without beeing Shy so she hugs him tightly ... which makes shiv wake up.... shiv realises ... gauri is just shy and there is nothing to be worried about ..... so he asks gauri to give a good morning kiss... and tells her that.... he would count till 3 and she has to decide... but before that he says that... if she gives the kiss to him... it would mean to him that she doesnot like him coming to her so she wants to finish with one kiss.... and if she doesnot give him a kiss ...he would think that... she wants him to give more kisses to her... so she is waiting... and he starts to count.... gauri keeps quiet.... and Shiv starts to romance with gauri...and they are very intimate and .....

the rest i had asked you all to decide if you want the details and since you all said you want more details here goes the part....

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Part 42:


He bent forward and kissed her on criks of her neck….. Gauri gave a heavy intake of breath…… making her bossom lift up only to be hit by Shiv's chest…..

Shiv's eyes widened to see his wife… his Gauri ….. In skin….. So close to him in morning light….

His mind was going wild….. His heart was racing…. And he felt he could hear his heart beat in his ears….

He only thought that he can never keep his hands and eyes… of her perfect form….

She looked absolutely magnificent….. Shiv moved from her neck to her cheeks … to her lips…..

Gauri…..felt a sweet sensation… tugging at her lips…… Shiv kissed each lip… then gave small kisses all around the outline of her lips….. Until Gauri's eagerness grew to the extent that….. She moved her hands….to slid them around his neck…. To pull him closer….

She parted her lips to savour the sweet sensation even more…..
When the kiss grew breathless… they parted….. Shiv…. Showered Gauri with kisses….. Soft and sweet…..

Gauri moaned softly …. She… flinched…. She curved…. To get a hold on herself… but she couldnot….. She caught Shiv's shirt tighter….. And tighter… by every kiss….. And Shiv had finally removed his Shirt….. And hugged her tightly…..

The sensation of Shiv's skin against her body… was giving her a tickling sensation…. A sensation that was beyond comparison to words…. Or phrases….

She hugged him tightly for life……

As if the sun could not see the misery of gauri…. Had hid behind the big black and grey clouds that moved faster over the hemisphere…. And there were soon loud thunders and big and heavy drops of water wetting the ground and the leaves…. To give them life….

It was now very cloudy with dark clouds and heavy rain……

The room went from almost bright lightening to scarce lightening…. With every thuder sound Gauri… hugged Shiv tighter…..

Shiv … hugged Gauri tighter ….. And slowly moved under her hands….. To her back….. And unbuttoned….. To uncover the most precious…… she immediately …. Turned away from him and turned to sleep on her stomach….. Hugging the bed…… her breath was eratic……

Shiv brought his hands…. On both of gauri's hands which were clutching the blanket….. He pressed on them to reassure her….. He gave slow and steady kisses on her back….

He slowly slid his hand down her curves to the kurta and slowly opened the knot….. Gauri was having…. A small smile playing on her lips…. Even in all this new sesations and feelings….

Shiv slowly moved the blanket over them realizing how shy Gauri is….. As the blanket came on to Gauri's shoulders….. She opened her eyes and turned to look at Shiv…..

Gauri just turned in surprise towards him and he smiled…… Gauri hugged him tighter…… and was about to say something when shiv silenced her with a passionate kiss…… and then slowly said….

"ab mein apne apko aur nahi rok saktha…." and looked at her…. intently

Gauri's heart raced … she lowered her eyes…. With a shy smile playing on her lips…..


Shiv qickly discarded all the leftover pieces of clothing from both their bodies…..

And shiv took Gauri's left hand in his… and pinned it to the bed with his right hand…. Then he slowly moved his left hand along the length of gauri's body cherishing every curve on his way….. As he reached her Hip….. He lifted her a little and slid himself in…..

Gauri felt him inside her and she let out soft moans of pleasure….they moved to the rhythm of each others bodies…..

Gauri…. At the height of her pleasure….. Chanted Shiv's name like a verse….. She had to by hard……

Shiv…. Chanted Gauri's name ….. and at the peak of their intimacy Gauri had arched herself….with Shiv holding her tightly against him…. And Gauri holding Shiv's shoulder with her free hand… for support…..

As their bodies calmed down….. So did the rain….. The rain drops were now dripping down the edges of the leaves of trees and down the edges of the rooftops…. In their struggle to reach their destination - the raw earth and the deapths of it….

Shiv and Gauri smiled with their faces against each other….. Shiv….. Gave small kisses to Gauri on her cheeks…. And Gauri blushed and buried herself in his warm chest…..

After the tyring task…. Both had gone back to a sweet slumber relaxing beside each other….. Hugging each other….. And as the sun took its time to part from behind the clouds to bring in the lightening…..


Shiv and Gauri were sleeping spoon shape all covered in the red balnket haphazardly placed around the protectiveness of their bodies…

Shiv's hand was around gauri's waist…. And both had a sweet smile on their lips….

As the Sun beamed in the Sky the light hit the windows and was giving a glare to the eyes even closed….

Shiv stirred to the sunlight striking his eyes… he opened his eyes in irritation to see his one arm was stuck under Garui's head….

And when looked in carefully… gauri was actually holding his hand with her two hands as if never to let it go….. He smiled…. He slowly removed Gauri's hands from over his and slowly slid his hand from under her…

He looked at her… she was sleeping peacefully with some of her silk soft hair…. Fallen over her face… her soft full lips curled up in a small smile…. And her body curled up to just fit in his arms…. He slowly moved the hair to side and tucked it behind the ear… she just moved her head a little to his touch still in deep slumber

Shiv… smiled…. Slowly got of the bed….. And wore his pants…. And just went to the bathroom to freshen up….

He was out of the washroom…. He looked at the bed and Gauri was still a sleep …. Shiv thought may be it was some jet lag added to their…. Tyring task… he quipped and wore a t-shirt and some pants….. And went to the living room closing the door behind him….. He went in looked around and made a cup of coffee from the brewed coffee machine…. He came to the living room…. To find a list that he had made to talk to his employees at office…

He suddenly looked at the time it was past 10:30 am and most of them would have left and rest would be gone in an hour so he rushed to his phone…. And started calling his office…. But his secretary was already gone… so he called her cell and asked her …. In a serious tone about the proceding of the meetings and what all things materialized in the past week and he gave serious warning about some tasks that were incomplete and some that had to be completed the next day and asked her to get back to him on this number … the next day when she was in office… and asked her to connect him to some of his staff…. And when she said all had left the office…. He said that ask them to call me when they get back to the office tomorrow morning….

Shiv was furious that one week not in the office and things would not be done on time… and he was speaking with strong command in his voice…. Gauri could hear someone speaking loudly in her sleep …. She suddenly realized she had been sleeping and got up and found Shiv out of bed and then felt shiv shouting at someone in the other room….. She changed herself into her chunidar…. And went running into the bathroom to get herself freshened up and came back and dressed up in a pale pink saree with lot of work done on the border… and her hair wavy on her shoulders…. She walked into the living room to see that shiv had banged the phone into the sofa and looked really angry….

And having not seen him like that before she felt a little frightned of him…. She slowly walked towards the kitchen … when shiv turned and saw gauri was awake…..

Seeing her so timidly walking towards the kitchen…. He walked towards her and caught her off guard from behind with his hands enveloped around her waist.…. And in a husky voice…. "good morning.."

"good morning" came the reply in a sweet melody voice….
He planted a kiss on her shoulder … gauri felt tickled and bent her head onto Shiv's…. with a smile… and then slowly looked into his eyes…. And repeated… "good morning.." in a very soft wishper…. She looked at him one more time…. And it surprised her that one minute she was seeing a angry Shiv and now a romantic one…..

Her surprise did not go unnoticed by the eyes that were looking at her intently and said… "aise kya dekh rahi ho.." and gauri came back at the revire of thoughts and said…. "who and she started to move…but Shiv caught her back not allowing her to move and said.. "who.." …. and gauri said… "chodiyena…" ….
"aise kaise chod dunn…" in husky voice…
"phehle ek good morning kiss chahiye.." and gauri looked at him surprised…
Thinking "abhi kuch der phele yahi toh pucha tha … aur phir…" and shyed…
And not wanting to go any further on that topic as she sure well knew she would loose in the end…. She went on to ask something else…
"Aap kisi se phone pe baat kar rahein the…. Aur aap bahut guse mein the.."
"who bas office ki kuch kam tha…" and tucked on her and tighted his grip… and contined… "par tum samne ho ti hoto… kuch aur yaad nahi rehta…" gauri shied again…trying to put her hair behind her ear….
Shiv grinned and kissed her on the cheek….
Trying desperately to find something that would not lead to the same thing as before… when she got one..

"aaj hum kahin bahar jaa rahe hain…"
And Shiv looked at her …. And smiled knowing she was diverting…

"Tume Bahar jana hai???" he asked in a questioning manner
" who… kal aap keh rahe the ki aaj kahi jana hai…. Isliye.."
"Who…."
Still holding her tightly from behind and placing his chin on her shoulder…. Gauri trying to get out of Shiv's grip

Shiv slowly moved his lips along the length of Gauri's neck and shoulder….. Making her quiver …..

Gauri with trembling lips… "who ….." and she turned towards Shiv now facing Shiv…. And slowly looked at Shiv and Shiv was now holding her by the waist not to let her go…. And pulling her towards him….
As Shiv tried to bring his face closer to Gauri's neck… Gauri brought her hands in between her and Shiv and placed them on Shiv's chest…. To stop him from any further advances….

And asked in a sweet voice… "Toh apne kaha nahi …. Ki hum kaha jarahe hain…"

And Shiv looked straight into her eyes…. And gave his charming smile… leaving Gauri skipping a beat….

"Gauri tum aise …. Itni sunder tayar hoke mere samne rahogi ….." Gauri lowered her eyes at his comment…
And Shiv slowly moved Gauri's hands off his chest and went closer to her ear and whispered….

"Toh hum kaha japayenge…" and Gauri looked at Shiv sideways…. And Shiv continued…. now looking at her ….

"Or waise bhi…. Hum Switzerland mein 10 din rehne valehain… aur… har 3 din mein ek nayi jaga jayege …. Lekin nayi jaga dekhene keliye nahi…. Bas aise hi…. Room mein ek dusre ke saat rahenge…"

Gauri made a innocent face unable to understand what Shiv is trying to say…..
Then Shiv gave a grinning smile which made Gauri realise what he ment… she lowered her eyes again…. And made a little sad face….
Seeing that…. Shiv said…

"waise mujhe yeh bhi pata hai… ki ladkiyonke aur unke shopping ke beech mein koi nahi aasaktha…aur phir mein kya cheez hu… isliye… ek achi pati ki tara mein bhi tume mall lejana chahtahu…." to this Gauri lift her eyes and smiled litely along with Shiv and hit him litely on his chest….

"Mujhe bas do minute do mein tayar ho ke atahu… phir chelenge.." and started walking… and after few steps turned back and said…

"Gauri kuch mat banana… hum…. Restaurant mein breakfast karenge…. Waise bhi…. Agar mein ne tumse Honeymoon pebhi khana banaya toh…. Tum zindagi bhar mujhe tane marogi…." and winked at her….

To this Gauri looked surprised and spontaneously said… "Shiv aap bhi na…" and tried to go behind him…

Shiv smiled and ran saying… " Do mininute mein ata hu…"

After Shiv got ready …. Gauri and Shiv…. Went out…… had breakfast…..

Switzerland is hub for fashion ….. So they went around all the highend names in fashion…. Gucci, louis vuton, prada……

Shiv kept making small comments and teasing gauri…. And gauri was having many smiles shopping with her husband….

Shiv was taking the time to know more of what gauri likes and what interests her…. And Gauri was enjoying the patience Shiv was showing while she was immersed in trying to buy things….

Around afternoon Shiv and Gauri were tired of shopping…. And were feeling hungry and Switzerland was famous for their internationally acclaimed cuisines….
Gauri did not understand most of the names of the cusines…. So She suggested Shiv to place an order for her too…. For the ones that he thought were good….

Shiv and Gauri enjoyed their food…. And seeing Gauri slowly breaking out of her shyness and conversing with him… Shiv felt really happy….

Shiv and Gauri were using a car with a driver …. As a preference so that Shiv could sit and peacefully enjoy time with his new wife….

They went around lake zurich… and walked for a while in the evening ….around the walkways….. All the while… Shiv making funny and teasing comments and winking at her and Gauri was having her hands wrapped around Shiv's hand and her head bent onto Shiv's shoulder…. And to every comment from Shiv… Gauri would give beaming smiles…. Small hits on his shoulder…. And sometimes Gauri to stop herself from blushing or laughing out loud would bring her hand around her lips…. And some times Shiv would tuck gauri's few tendrils back around her ear…and get lost in her eyes…. And when they would realise… they would smile shyly at each other ….

After a day they went to another place….. As Shiv had said he was not really interested in going around the place…. But was more interested in the activites that they would indulge in their room….

In the paper of India times page 3 column there came a picture of Shiv and Gauri with shiv serious look and gauri giving a small smile.. And with Shiv's hand protectively wrapped around gauri's shoulder..….. Mahen showed the picture from the paper to nikhila and they were happy to see them in a picture together….
And Mahen said "dekha paper padna buri baat nahi hoti hai…" and Nikhila hit him on the shoulder playfully…. "Are mein such hi to keh raha hu….. Dekho agar mein paper nahi padta toh yeh photo tum kaise dekthi…"
"pichle 27 years se pad raheho… toh aaj 27 years ke bad…. Uska ek faida huva mujhe…."
And knowing that mahen was about to get some scolding again…. For his habit…

He looked at the picture and then smiled and said… "kitne ache kush lagrahe hain dono…. Bas aisehi dono hamesha kush rahein…" and nikhila smiled and said…. " haan… baas…. Abhi is ghar mein nana sa mehman aajaye aur kya chahiye.." and mahen said… " aare abhi toh bahu ghar ayi hai…. Use thoda adjust hone do…. Phir who log sochenge iske baremein… tum bhina…. abhi toh 5 din pehle shadi huyi hai… aur tum already naye khab dekhne lagi ho…. Toda toh us upar wale ko rest do…. Who tumari demands sunkena thak jayega…" to this mahen got a smack on his hand from nikhila…

Nikhila got up to call shiv and gauri…. But Mahen said that bache enjoy kar rahe hain… bad mein bata deinge unhe disturb mat karo….
And nikhila agreed….

That picture was taken….
One such evening when they were walking around city it was getting cold in the evening….. They were walking by a coffee shop and Shiv suggested they take a coffee….. And they bought coffee and then started walking again…. They came across a swiss chocolate store….. Gauri's eyes beamed with excitement…. And like a little girl…. She asked shiv weather they could go in there for few minutes…. At the shop… Gauri bought many chocolates…. And Shiv was surprised that Gauri likes chocolate so much….. At the end Shiv teased her…. Saying… "is that enough or you want more…. I am thinking that it should be enough for tonight… we can get more tomorrow morning…." To his comment…. Gauri started to hit him….. And Shiv paid and then ran with Gauri behind him trying to hit him….

And Shiv saying… " Gauri … Gauri…. Please ….. mein toh mazak kar rahatha…"

They sat on a bench on the road side park….. Looking at the beautiful rose garden before them…. And Shiv sipping on his coffee and Gauri on her chocolate……

A India times photo grapher who had come for a fashion week conducted there had been roming around….. That evening…. And had seen Shiv and Gauri sitting on that bench…

No one would go wrong in recognizing the "Shiv kapoor" who had stepped from software business to real estate and now hotel business….

He was first hesitant to interfere but then thought of testing his luck…. Although he knew about shiv kapoor temper at reporters….

He went and said hello…. Shiv who was smiling… his expression changed from smile to that of serious recognizing the camera and the ID of inda times hanging in the guys collar…. That he was a reporter…. Gauri smiled at him….

He congratulated them on their marriage to which Gauri was very happy and said thank you smiling…. Where as shiv just nodded his head angrily and was on the verge to loose his patience any minute…. But seeing Gauri was smiling he did not want to get angry now…

He quickly questioned the reporter about why he was disturbing them… to this Gauri looked quiet stunned to see Shiv who was laughing and smiling with her … a minute ago… is so serious now…. Talking to this stranger…. She was a little taken a back at how serious Shiv is….

Shiv talked to the reporter who said he would just take one snap of him with his wife for the paper… shiv was furious at first but the reporter said…sir it would be only one snap and no interview just a picture….
Seeing this Gauri understood he was repoter…. And looking at how shiv was so angry…. She was getting intimidated by his anger now…

Finally, shiv agreed after telling the reporter that there would be only one picture with a simple comment and if he finds later that there was some rubbish written then he would make sure he was out of his job…

And finally Shiv and Gauri gave a picture to that reporter…. And the reporter did not have the guts to ask them to smile… and gauri was too terrified at this new tempered shiv to give a proper smile…


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Part 43 :

Shiv and gauri are back from their honeymoon.....
Gauri was very happy.... as she enjoyed these days a lot....
spending time with Shiv and shopping..... and having pleasant time...
Shiv was a little sad.... because.... he knew once....he was back in Mumbai...he
had to takecare of many things and he wouldn't be able to spend time with
gauri.... At first he thought he should explain this to gauri.... but seeing gauri....
he knew she was a innocent shy girl..... and he didnot want her to get worried...
and thought.... that he will have to make his schedule different... so that gauri
doesnot feel leftout......

They reached the airport and Nikhila had sent a car for them to come home...
As they were in the car to going home..... Gauri got into the car...and
she moved to the other end for shiv to get in....and once the car started
he saw that gauri was sitting a little away from him..... looking out of
the window... He moved a little.... and pulled Gauri's hand near to him....
and Gauri came and fell on Shiv's hand.... due to the strong pull....
and she blushed..... at the expense of Shiv smiling....at her... and Shiv
put his hand around gauri's shoulder.... and Gauri blushed more...remembering
the day they had gone in the car to the airport.... for their honeymoon...
How shy she was.... to even look at him and give a smile....

Shiv and Gauri arrived....at the door of Kapoor house.... and Nikhila
asked them to stop at the door.... She removed the naazar.... and then asked
them to come in.... with Shiv saying... "Kya maa... aap yeh sab kab bandh
karengi.... aap ko malum haina mein insab mein vishwaas nahi karta..." and
Nikhila said... "Shiv! chup chap khade raho..." "Aur mein ne kitni baar kaha
hai...ki aisa nahi bolte....." and Shiv looked at Mahen... who assured with
a smile and walked to them.... and said... "Beta... yeh maa ka pyaar hai..
ismein mein kuch nahi bolsaktha... warna... meri toh khair nahi..." and
both Shiv and Mahen giggled... and Gauri stood there listening to all this
amused....and Nikhila gave a stern look to shiv and mahen.....
and when she looked at Gauri.... she smiled..... looking at the happiness
in gauri's eyes....

Then she asked them to come in.... and they entered... and gauri bent to take
ashirwad of mahen and then nikhila... and Shiv bent along with her to take
ashirwad.... and they said... "Saada Kuch raho..." "Saada suhagan raho..."
and then Mahen hugged Shiv and Nikhila hugged Gauri....

and then nikhila asked them to freshen up.... and Gauri nodded...and walked
up the stairs.... Shiv was following her.... when mahen asked.... that after
you freshen up.... we need to sit and talk about business.... and Shiv's smile
faded into a stern look.... and he walked to mahen and said.... "Mein teek hu dad"
"kya baat hai batayiye.... Koi major issues hai kya..." and Mahen said....
"Beta.... aisa kuch nahi hai...bas kuch cheeze dekhni hai..."
"Toh abhi.... study room mein chalte hain...." and Mahen agreed....
But nikhila heard their conversation.... and with an irritated look walked towards
Mahen and said....

"Abhi abhi toh aya hai... usse kam se kam freshen up toh hojane dijiye....
Aaap dono ki business ki baatein toh hoti rahengi....aur ek baar shuru hojaye
toh khatam hi nahi hone wali...."

Mahen understood her and said Shiv to go freshen up and come.... I will wait in the study...
for you....

During this conversation.... servants brought shiv-gauri luggage to their room....
and Gauri had asked them to leave it there..... and go....
and had taken her towel and the clothes... and walked into the bathroom.... and closed the door..

Shiv walked into the room... closing the door behind him.... and sat on the bed..... realising Gauri
was not in the room..... and he heard the shower running and smiled.....

He just fell back on the bed.....putting his hands under his head....
relaxing.... thinking.... you might live in the finest
of hotels... but nothing like your home and your bed.... he smiled....

As he opened his eyes.... he looked around the room.... and gave a satisfied smile....
His eyes fell on the side table.... having a photograph of gauri framed.... he lifted it...
and looked at it.... with a satisfied smile.....and moving his fingers over the picture...
looking at a shy gauri....in her engagement dress.... looking ever so beautiful.....
He kept looking at it.... and remensing all the sweet things between them.... from engagement
to now..... he smiled..... with satisfaction....

As he was in his thoughts.... the door to the bathroom... opened.... and Gauri walked in....
wiping her wet hair..... with her towel..... and wearing a light green light-weight saree....
Shiv placed the picture back on the side table....when the door clicked and he was brought out of
his dreamland.... and he looked for gauri to come out.... as she walked into the room....
Shiv had a smile playing on his lips.....

Gauri looked at him and seeing him smile.... she gave a bright smile..... walked towards....the wardrobe....
and started.... "Shiv, Aaap ke liye kapade nikal detihu.... Aaap fresh ho jayiye...." and took out his clothes
from the hanger and turned.... and walked a step to hit into shiv....

Who immediately caught her waist....and gently pressed it to bring her closer to him..... Gauri lifted her head..
and looked at Shiv.... Who had those intense eyes.... Gauri couldnot look longer and lowered her eyes..... with a
shy smile on her lips.....

Shiv looked at her.... and smiled knowing that Gauri was shy.... and looked at the clothes in her hands.... and...
pulled it from her hands.... and threw it towards the bed..... and when the landed on the bed....looked back at gauri..
and putting his hands back on her waist jerked her closer..... and looked at gauri...still not looking at him....
and as his fingers moved under her saree on to her back..... shiv could feel the goosebumps in her body..... and a slight
shiver..... Shiv's lips curved into a broad smile..... Gauri now had closed her eyes.....with a shy smile on her lips...

Shiv.... slowly bent his head.. to gauri's right side.... and slowly placed a kiss on her neck.... gauri let out a deep sigh...
and gave more access..... wanting to feel that touch once more.....

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Part 44:

Shiv took a deep breath.... taking in Gauri's fresh bath fragnace.... and the submuged wetness of body..... seeing Gauri sigh
..... Shiv looked at Gauri....her face devoid of any makeup.... fresh from the bath..... and wet hair..... and then at her lips...
which were trembling...... he slowly moved his hands to her face.... and taking hold of her face... he lift her face to look at it
more clearly..... and then moved his thumb on her cheeks... and lips..... Gauri trembled more...... seeing this.... Shiv's anxiety grew more...

Just then there was a knock on the door....

Gauri jerked from her dillusion state..... and getting back to her senses realised their closeness and due to shyness...
turned her face.... making the wet hair fall on her face.... Shiv slowly moved her hair away from her face..... and slowly gave a kiss on
her cheek..... Gauri blushed even more... making her cheeks go crimson....

the knock on the door grew louder....

Gauri tried to free herself..... but shiv pulled her from her waist.....trying to kiss her again.....
"Jane dijiyena Shiv.... mujhe tayar hoke neche...." and she was about to continue....
when shiv just put his right hand on gauri's cheek and moved it slowly into her hair.... telling her to feel his intensity.... and
gauri.... was becoming anxious as Goosebumps started to form in her body again.... she closed her eyes... at his mesmerizing touch....
and Shiv pulled her head a little towards him... and gave a kiss on her lips..... and Gauri reciprocated the kiss....with equal fevor...

There was a knock again.... this time both Shiv and gauri jerked.... and Gauri took deepbreaths..... and Shiv combed his hair to get control
of him self....

and then... "Bhaya!!! Bhaabhi....!!!! jaldi se darwaja kholo...!!!!"

and Shiv then looked at Gauri.... with anxiety mixed with irritation..... when gauri caught her breath and looked at Shiv.... and seeing his
expression she let out a giggle and pushed him a little to getout of his hold.... and turned to get ready.....

But Shiv caught her hand from behind as gauri tried to wriggle her hand ..... shiv came closer from behind.....
"Shiv vivan hai..... mujhe ready hona hai.... please chodiyena..."
He started kissing her neck moving her hair to oneside..... and Gauri giving deep sighs..... trying to control her anxiousness....
and then briskly turned her towards him.....

as the knock grew louder.... "Shiv bhaya dawaja kholo..." and Shiv gasped with irritation.... and looked at gauri..... and said...

"yeh nahi chodne wala...." to this gauri lowered her eyes.... and bitting her lips trying to control her giggles....

and Shiv walked towards the door.... shouting.... "Aaaraha hu..... "

and opened the door.... halfway and said.... "kya hai..." with irritated look....
and vivan said... "kya hai matlab.... ek toh... babhi ko humse teekse baat bhi nahi kiya... aur legaye honeymoon par...
aur waapas aaye aur phir se room mein bandh kardiya...." and continued... with hand justure... saying "now move..." to which
shiv lifted his eyebrows asking "what....??" and Vivan said... "Tum hato... mujhe tumse nahi... babhi se baat karni hai.."
and Shiv moved out of the door.... and said... "Babhi se kya baat karni hai..." with more irritation...
and Vivan tried to just go past shiv towards the door... and Shiv moved infront of him blocking his way...

and then vivan gave a "whats up with you...???" look....
and Nikhila called... "Shiv...." and Shiv moved forward to answer Nikhila from the corridor...

"SHiv... tum abhi tak fresh nahi huye....???"
"Jaldi se fresh hoke aajao... aur gauri ko bhi bejdo.... shyla chahi... aur dadi aye hai..." and
Shiv nodded....

and during this time Vivan just pushed open the door and entered shouting...

"Bhabhi...."

and Gauri had finished getting ready and was setting her bindi and she turned..... in surprise....
and vivan gave a beaming smile and gauri reciprocated the smile....

Shiv came from behind.... and sighed.... looking at beautiful gauri....and not being able to hold her..
and then took his towel and entered the washroom to get ready...

Vivan jumped on the bed.... and said.... "Hi babhi..."
and Gauri said .... "Hi..." smiling....

"Babhi... meine apko phone pe... bola thana.... mujhe kya kya chahiye..."
"chaliye... sabse pehle mere gift...."
and gauri smiled... and walked towards the bags.... to take all the gifts out......

she took out a laptop, ipod... and gauri smiled.... and gave them to him... and Vivan moved from
the bed and came and hugged gauri sideways and said.... "Thankyou babhi..."

Shiv walked in wearing a towel around his waist.... and wiping his hair.... and looked at vivan and gauri
and said.... "Milgaya tumara gift... ab chalo...." and Vivan said.... "haan chalte hain... hame bhi koi shauk
nahi hai.... aapke kamremein rehneki..." and said.... "chalo babhi... chalte hain...."
and took gauri's hands and started to walk with her... and Shiv said....
"Tum jao neeche.... mujhe tayar hona hai.... gauri badh mein aayegi..."
and vivan said... "tume tayar hona hai...toh tayar ho jao.... babhi ki kya zaroorat hai...mein unhein apne saat
lejavunga..." with a wicked smile....

Shiv took hold of Vivan's ear as gauri looked on feeling amused with all the boy fight....

and then shiv walked with vivan.... to the door and pushed him out.... "bhaya... mera kaan toh chod dijiye....."
and shiv left the ear....

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Part 45

Precap :
and then shiv walked with vivan.... to the door and pushed him out.... "bhaya... mera kaan toh chod dijiye....." and shiv left the ear....

and justured vivan with his hand to go.... and vivan gave a wink and head movement.... "Jaldi ana bhaya...." and smiled broadly....making Shiv come forward to hit him with his hand..... but vivan ran from there..... Shiv moved his head left and right thinking..... "Is ka kuch nahi ho saktha....." Shiv walked back in from the door closing the door..... and turned to see..... Gauri....Who had just finished sorting the gifts and was standing up..... She was looking adorable in her simple green saree.... the way she put her right forefinger tip caught between teeth and with the other hand on her waist… thinking… brought a smile …. he shook his head thinking.... he should just go from here before he gets carried away again.....As he started walking he saw gauri come out of her pose and look at him... and the moment their eyes met…. he smiled….and gauri smiled…. Then he walked towards the bed where he threw his clothes previously...and took his clothes…and turned to get ready…. while going towards the bathroom he turned towards gauri.... to catch her still looking at him.... but as soon as their eyes met... gauri averted her gaze....and lowered her eyes..... Shiv smiled at her shyness..... and said.... "Gauri..." Gauri looked at him.... but seeing the smirk on his face.... she felt uncomfortable as being caught.... and rolled her eyes... adjusting her hair behind her ear to get control.... and lowered her eyes again..... and said.... " Ji..." and then Shiv took a little *sigh* ..... "Woh maa bularahi hain.... Dadi, chachi, bua wait kar rahe hain....toh tum jao mein tayar hoke baadmein ata hu...." Gauri nodded her head with lowered eyes... and as shiv turned she looked at his back..... admiring his physique.... but shiv just turned again at the door..... and caught her in a eye contact... and raised his eyebrows...as if saying... "what are you looking at..." and Gauri instantly lowered her eyes.... and blushed... making her cheeks crimson..... she turned instantly otherway...... to not show her blushed face....... Shiv smiled... at her antiques and kept thinking.... "She is his blushing bride..." and closed the door to get ready......

As the door closed.... gauri took a deep breath.... and then shyed to herself..... for getting caught admiring her husband..... to control her shyness she was twisting her hands hard..... and blushing...... and then her eyes fell on the gifts and realised what shiv said.... and then she walked out of the room..... adjusting her saree once again and checking herself in the mirror..... as she was nervous of her official meeting with the family...... she walked slowly in the corridor and down the steps.....

All the family were seated in the living room sofa's...... she didnot lift her eyes...until she reached the last step..... she was feeling nervous...as she felt all eyes on her...... Nikhila walked to her.... smiled at her....saying.... "yaha aajao beta..." and walked to her and took hold of her hand ...... and walked gauri along with her....seing nikhila....gauri gave small smile..... but was still walking timidly.... with nervousness...

"Gauri yeh Shiv ki dadi..." "ashirwad lelo beta..." and Gauri bent to take ashirwad..... but dadi got up giving her ashirwad and said... "sada suhagan raho... kush raho beta..." and took hold of gauri cheeks in her hand..... and said..."Kitni pyari hai bahu..." to nikhila....
Nikhila smiled.... Gauri smiled nervously...... feeling very conscious of them looking at her..... Nikhila said..... "beta sab ki ashirwad lelo..." to gauri....and gauri nodded and was turning to take ashirwad..... but dadi said.... "Shiv ko bhi anede....dono ko eksaat lena chahiye..." and smiled and nikhila smiled..... and said...to gauri.... "Aaao beta hamare saat beyito..." and dadi made gauri sit beside her.... gauri nodded and sat beside them

Others were smiling seeing the nervous new bride..... and trying to make her comfortable.... and then shiv walked down the stairs wearing a casual checks half hands shirt with blue jeans.... getting down the steps faster..... smiling at everyone on his way down....

He walked towards everyone.... and he first looked at Gauri.....she was sitting there with

Lowered eyes… Shiv cleared his throat… "ahem" and then gauri lift her eyes to look at him… a small smile formed on her lips looking at shiv…. in all her nervousness… She was trying her best to look normal but Shiv saw her hands which were twisting in each other..... he gave a knowing smile... and then met her eyes…. And as she looked at him… he winked at her…. and gauri for a moment flapped her eyelids and then shuffling in her seat she was trying to see if anyone saw that…. From the corner of her eyes….which were lowered… But shiv just gave a smile and then looked at dadi..... and tried to take her ashirwad.... but dadi said.... "Abse tum dono eksaat ashirwad loge..." to this gauri got up and stood beside shiv...and dadi called dadaji ... "Aap yaha ayiye...." and they gave ashirwad as shiv and gauri.. bent to take ashirwad of dadi-dadaji .... after taking the ashirwad.... Shiv said.... "Kaise ho darling...." smiling at dadi....and winked at dadaji.... and dadaji patted Shivs shoulder knowingly.... smiling....

and dadi hit him on his hand near his shoulder and said.... "Chup kar.... tere darling toh agayi hai...ab toh yeh bolna chod de mujhe…." and Shiv instantly put his hand around gauri which made already nervous gauri a little more uncomfortable in front of everyone… But Shiv's hand on her shoulder patted her shoulder as if saying… "I am there…. Everything is ok…" and then gauri took a little sigh….and Shiv just pulled her towards his shoulder…. and said.... "yeh toh meri sweet heart hai.... lekin darling mein apko hi bulaunga.... akhir aap toh meri sabse sundar darling hona..." Shiv kept saying this...and Gauri who was standing there with lowered eyes started blushing at shiv being so forward at putting his hand around her infront of the family and saying her as his sweet heart.... seeing her blush dadi said.... "dekho.... tumne kya kiya..." "kuch bhi bolta rehta hai...." "sharmagayi… dekho…" and Shiv gave a big smile ….and everyone smiled along with shiv….. at how gauri is so shy…… then nikhila said…. Them to take all the others ashirwad too…. "Jao ab sab ki ashirwad lelo..." and Nikhla introduced each one to gauri and everyone in pairs gave their ashirwad….. all the while Shiv was holding gauri by the shoulder and leading her…. after taking everyones ashirwad…. There in line next and last was….. vivaan… with his hand lifted up to give them ashirwad and waiting for them to take his ashirwad….and telling shiv to take ashirwad from him… and Shiv made a face like "what.." and Vivaan said… with a goofy smile plastered….on his face…. "Ashirwaad…" and Shiv made a justure to hit him… and Vivaan ran behind the sofa…. For protection…. and Shiv leaving gauri now….that all the ashirwad was done…

He turned to where shyla was sitting and said…. "Chachi… yeh bahut badmaash hogaya hai…." And Vivaan said…. "Bhaya aap chahe kitni bhi complaint karle…lekin mein yeh moka gavane wala nahi hu…." …. And Shiv said…. Going behind him….. walking nearer to vivaan and vivaan walking away from shiv…. and shiv saying…. "Tu mere paas toh aa… mein dikhata hu… ki mein kya kya karsakta hu…" but seeing gauri all surprised at their silly fights….. Nikhila said…. "ab bas bhi karo shiv… vivaan tu bhi bait jaa…." And called ramu kaka to arrange for some snacks…. And coffee for everyone….

And Nikhila asked gauri to sit with her near dadi….. and Shiv went and sat with dadaji….Dadi and shyla praised gauri and maya just rolled eyes thinking.... "This girl doesnot have anything special... I don't know what shiv saw in her.... I had brought
so many rishta's much more modern than her… and he rejected.... She looks like she doesn't even wear western clothes...... but whatever its his choice…"

Dadi said... "Hum toh muh dikhayi tak bhi intezar nahi karpaye beti.... Tume dekhne keliye... kabse intezar kar rahe hain..." Gauri gave smile....
and dadi continued.... "yeh nalayak ko rasmon ke baare mein kuch bhi pata nahi hai...." pointing at Shiv.... shiv kept a face like what did I do? and then dadi turned to look at Nikhila and said.. Nikhila abhi toh saare rasme baki hain.... mein kal pandit ji se milne gayi thi... ganeshji ki puja ke baremein baat karne keliye.... aur woh bol rahe the...
kalse ek hafta acha din hi hain.... toh mein soch rahi hu....kal gauri ko paff phere keliye bhej dete hain.... phir parson hum shopping wagera kar leinge...
aur guruvaar ko iski muh dikahye rakhenge.... phir uske baad durga maa ki puja karenge...."

Nikhila said... "ji maa jaisa aap thik samjhe.... par maa... aap saare rasam hone tak aap yahi rahi yega.... aur shyla aur maya tum bhi... mere akele se nahi hoga...." and they all tried to interrupt... but said... "maa, mein kuch nahi sunungi...." and everyone agreed.... but shyla said... "babhi mein jake sab ke kapde sabkuch leke kal subha aaja vungi..." but nikhila said... "kal, subha chalijana.... waise shadi ke waqt aap sab yaha pe the naa... woh saare kapde hain.... meinne saare ramu kaka se.... wash karwake.... sab rakh diye hain.... Tume koi chinta karne ki zarurat nahi... baki ham kal jake le aayenge...."

As the ladies started their discussion.... boys started about business.... and slowly walked into library room.... where they sat down to discuss some business issues and other things.... Shiv was engrossed in the discussion and left with mahen, daksh and others....

Here dadi and others were sitting in sofas and discussing about next coming events and how to do what, whom to call... gauri was just trying to understand things..... and when ever needed dadi nikhila were asking for gauris concent..... after a while gauri felt better.... with only the ladies around her... although she didnot talk much..... she just gave small answers to the things asked to her....and kept listening to the conversation......

After a while, Nikhila called ramu kaka and said him to prepare the dinner and check all the rooms and set up as everyone is going to stay....

Now, vivan after sitting with the men for sometime felt bored with the discussions.... he walked out towards the ladies..... and while walking saw that...
the ladies were also engrossed in conversations and his babhi was sitting quitely..... He smiled.....

He started "Dekha... apne phir se shur kardi na...." everyone looked at him... questioningly....

"Aplog yaha... puri fuctions ki tayari kar raheho... aur bhabhi ko bore..." to this gauri who was looking at him felt surprised..... and nodded negatively...saying .."aisi koi baat nahi hain.... sach mein..." and vivan said.... "Aap ka toh pata nahi...babhi ...mein toh insab badon ke beech bore hogaya hu..."

"Jabi time milta hai sab log shuru hojate hain...." he then came forward took gauri's hand ... where gauri was hesitating.... not understanding whats coming next...... vivan said... "aap mere saat chaliye babhi... mein apko apki marriage album aur video dikhata hu..." ... But gauri hesitated... and said... "hum baad mein dekhenge... abhi bahut saare cheezein finalize kar ni hai...." but nikhila said... "beta... saari tayari toh hum mein karni hai.."
but gauri interrupted... "maa... mein bhi tayari yon mein help kardungi..." nikhila smiled and said... "beta... abhi toh shadi hu yi hai...aur yeh tumari shaadi ki rasmein hain....ab toh tum enjoy karo..." and gauri lowered her eyes a little sad...at the comment.... So, nikhila holding vivaan ear...said.."Jab iski shaadi hogina.... ham sab enjoy karenge... aur iski saari zimedari tumiko lena hai...haina shyla..." and shyla nodded in affirmation
.... and vivaan shouted.... "aouch..... aouch..... mera kaan.... mera kaan chodiye...." and when nikhila removed her hand.... he went behind gauri's chair and said.... "aaj mere kaan ki chuti... pehle... shiv bhaya aur ab badi maa... har kisi ko mere hi kaan milthe hain... marodne keliye..." and huffed....in irritation.... and everyone giggled at his irritation....
then he said... "babhi... ab jaldi chaliye.... varna koi aur mera kaan pakad lenge... dekhiye kitna lala hogaya hu....jaldi chaliye..." and he took gauri with him and gauri looked at nikhila for conformation and nikhila nodded as to go a head.... and smiled.... gauri smiled and walked with vivan... Dadi saw how gauri was asking conformation from Nikhila felt happy….. like being satisfied….

then after few steps.... Vivaan turned and said.... "badi maa... album kaha hai..... aur video bhi...." and nikhila answered.... "Shiv ke room mein.... jo..study table hain na... uske paas bookshelf ke drawers mein hain...." and vivaan said ok and they climbed up the stairs....

while going to the room... vivaan said.... "apko pata hain babhi... shiv bhaya aur mein bahut masti karthe the...aur palak bhi..." and gauri looked surprised at the mention of palak.... and vivaan said... "palak... ab... US mein hai.... apni graduation kar rahi hain..." and then vivaan continued.... "hum itna masti karthe the.... lekin jab se shiv bhaya ne office join kardi hain... har din woh kaam hi kaam kar the hain..." and gauri looked surprised as she had only seen him work for few hours that too when she was a sleep.... she knew he was working as when she would be out of her sleep or she would listen
to him screaming on the phone.... when she would get ready and come out.... but there would a completely different person when she actually was near him.... He would not even speak of any other thing except them..... and vivaan continued... "aur palak bhi US chali gayi... mein akela bacha hu..." and gauri smiled..... "App please in sab mein maat padiye babhi…. Phir se mein akela pad javunga…" "Hum sab ki friends ki gang bhi thi… us din aap yahan thi naa…. Humara pura gang ka match tha….. lekin last minute mein Shiv ne hand de diya….." "Agli baar mein sab friends ko le aavunga…. Aapse milane…" Vivaan kept talking and Gauri kept smiling and nodding her head and some few words…. She felt surprised how vivaan was so comfortable with her…. he had no hesitation…. He even called on their honeymoon from home to tell them what he wants from Singapore…..

Vivaan searched for the album and they took out 2 big albums and and a set of DVD's and then they sat themselves down....on the bed…. Comfortably…. And then Viavan started to show all the pictures….. and Gauri had been curious to see their wedding album and video too….. Vivaan told her about all the family members…. All other relatives….. and kids and other friends….. and they watched the video…..

Downstairs….. Nikhila and others planned all the other things…..

After may be 1hr…. Nikhila saw the time and it was getting to dinner time…. So, they all went to prepare the table for dinner…..

Here, in the library room…. Shiv, Mahen and Daksh were discussing about new avenues… that they could go into for business…. And issues related to it…..

Finally when food was ready….. Nikhila went to call gauri….. and she was standing at the door….. and… looking at how…. Vivaan and Gauri were sitting and seeing the video…and in between vivaan was saying names of relatives and others…. And asking about her relatives…. And gauri was saying their relatives….. She smiled…..

And then walked in….. "Beta tum dono bhi niche ajao… dinner ka time hai…baad mein ake phir se dekh lena…." To this gauri got up and said…. "Maa aap mujhe bulaya hota mein bhi madat kardeti…" to this nikhila smiled and said…. "Abhi nahi beta…. Abhi toh tumari pehli rasoi ka rasam baki hai….. kuch din ke baad hai…. Phir uske baad tum jitna help chahe utna karsakti ho…" and smiled to this gauri smiled too…. but felt a little uncomfortable as she wanted to get involved….. but Nikhila assured her that its ok….

And said…. "vivaan ne tume zada parishan toh nahi kiya na…." to this gauri said… "nahi maa…. Vivaan bahut acha hai…. Mujhe toda bhi bore nahi laga…. Balki…. Ab mein saare rishte daron ko pehchanti ti bhi hu…" and Vivaan got up and said…. "Thankgod babhi…. Ap pehli insaan hai…. Jinko… mere bolnese shikayat nahi…." And

Nikhila hit him on his head….. and Vivaan ducked behind gauri…. To not get hit…..

And Nikhila smiled and…. Said…. "chelo beta….. kahana khate hain… isko aur 2 gante milena tabhi iske paas bolne keliye kuch na kuch hoga…." and smiled and told them to come downstairs…..

Then nikhila went to call mahen and shiv and others…. And said…. "Papa apko toh rokna chahiye na in sab ko…. Abhi abhi toh aya hai shiv… aur yeh sab business ki baatein shuru kardi… use aaj toh chod dete….." in a complaining way…. A little irritated…. And angry….. and everyone came to nikhila and said…. "Maa, Babhi… Nikhila…." And Shiv came forward taking hold of nikhila's shoulder said… "Maa… I know apko meri chinta hai… lekin…. I am Ok….aur 10 din se office mein nahi hu…toh bahut sare chizon ko dekhna hai…. Kal keliye prepare toh rehna padegana…. Apko toh pata hain na…." and tried to continue…. But nikhila lift her hand and said… "haan pata hai…. Ki tum shiv kapoor ho…. Jisko apna kaam time pe ready rakhne ki aadat hai…" and shiv sighed….

But Nikhila said…. "Beta…. Lekin…. Abhi abhi tumari shadi huyi hai….Gauri ke saat acha time bitao…. Phir yeh waqt nahi ayega… zindagi toh hain naa…. Pura business karne keliye…. Aur phir daksh chacha aur papa bhi toh hain…. Toh de din who samalenge…. Pure 2 gante se upar ho chukka hain…. Agar vivaan nahi hota toh voh bahut akeli padjati…." And Nikhila sighed and then said… "Mahen tume toh samajna chahiye…." And everyone new nikhila was right….. and said…. "Ok babhi, Ok Nikhila, Tum tik kehrahi ho bahu…" and then mahen said…. "Acha mein saari business ki zimedari hum samalenge… shiv tum kuch dino keliye chuti lelo…" but shiv said… "papa meri shadi huyi hai… iska matlab mein business ko apke upar chod du… aur aap kitna kam karenge…. Mein manta hu ki… maa sahi keh rahi hain…. Mein tohda kam kam karunga kuch dino keliye…lekin chuti nahi…" he said it in a final tone… as to saying…. No more arguments on this….. and everyone sighed…. Knowing SHiv….. then to lighten the mood….. Shiv said…. "Maa, bahut bhook lagi hai….." with a puppy face and nikhila laughed and everyone laughed…. And nikhila said…. "tu naa sab baat manvana janta hai…." And patted his cheek lightly… and Shiv gave nikhila a hug….. smiling broadly….

And all of them walked out of the room…. Smiling….. All of them had dinner together…. And Shiv sat with Gauri….. and everyone pampered gauri saying her to eat this and that and saying that she eats very less…. And in between vivaan said…. "Bhaya… lagta hai… babhi apke haat se hi khayengi…." To this gauri who was eating little by little lifted her eyes and nodded negatively feeling embarrassed… but Vivaan insisted on feeding gauri…. and Shiv had taken a bite of roti from his plate with curry and brought it infront of her lips…. While gauri did not even lift her eyes to look at anyone… she was feeling shy and akward as everyone were looking at them….. and Gauri slowly tried to take it from shiv's hand but Vivaan said…. "nahi babhi…. Apna hi lengi…. Bhaya ko hi khilana hoga…" and everyone…. Smiled…. And giggled …. And said shiv to feed gauri…. and Shiv moved his hand a little further towards her lips saying her to take the bite….. and as Shiv moved his hand forward…. Gauri slowly took the bite from his fingers…. Rubbing her lips on shiv's finger tips….. Sending a slight shiver down shiv's hand….. gauri quickly then moved back ….. and everyone clapped and started praising the couple ….. Shiv smiled…. And vivaan said…. "mein aaj palak ko bahut miss kar raha hu…. Agar who hoti toh aur mazaa aata…" and to this nikhila said…. Maya … "Kuch dino keliye…. Use ana chahiye tha…. Acha lagta use bhi…" and maya said…. "nahi babhi usse exams hain varna usse kaun rokh saktha tha…. Aur who ane ko bhi tayar thi… usne shiv ko phone kiya tha…aur isne kaha ki…. Exams priority hain…." And everyone looked at shiv…. accusingly …. And shiv said…. "Mein ne thik hi toh kaha tha…. Exams priority hain…."…..

Just then phone rang…. And nikhila who was serving along with shyla….. heard the phone and went to pick it up….. nikhila said "hello" and on the other end…. "Hello badi Mom.." came the voice…with excitement…. And Nikhila said…. "Palak…" and said… "100 baras tumare…. Abhi tumare baremein hi baat kar rahe the…" and everyone listening to this smiled….. and Nikhila walked to the table with the phone while palak talked on the other end…. "Aaj mere bare mein nahi…. Shiv bhaya aur Gauri bhabhi ke barein mein hai…. Mujhe maa ne bataya ki aaj woh honeymoon se wapas aagaye hain…. Mujhe unhein wish karna hai…." And Nikhila said…. "han han wish karle…" and gave the phone to shiv…. Shiv said…. "Hello palak…" and palak said… "Bhaya… Congratulations!!!!...."

Shiv : "Thankyou…"

Palak : "Aur batayiye…. Honeymoon kaisa raha… in a naughty voice…."

Shiv : cleared his throat…and said…. "Tumare exams ache likhe ki nahi…"

Palak : "Mein hamesha acha likhti hu…. Lekin aap baat badal rahein hain…"

Palak : "Aap… hich kasha rahe hain… matlab achi huyi…."

Shiv : "Palak…" in a stern voice….

Palak : "Details to mein vaha aake zaroor lungi bhabhi se… after all hak hai mera…"

Palak : "Ok ab aap phone babhi ko dijiye…"

Shiv gave the phone to Gauri…saying palak wants to talk to her….

Gauri took the phone and said… "Hello"

Palak : "Hi babhi….. Mein Palak… hum dono ki introduction nahi huyi hai…."

Gauri smiled

Palak : "First thing first Congratulations Babhi…!!!"

Gauri : "Thankyou!!"

Palak : "Awww Babhi… apki voice itni sweet hai… ki mein samaj sakti hu… bhaya ki kya halat hoti hogi… apki baatein su ke…"

Gauri blushed…. Smiling…

Shiv curious to know what Palak said….

And Seeing her blush nikhila took the phone from gauri and said….

Nikhila : "Asa kya keh diya tune…. Teri babhi sharma rahi hai..."

Palak : "Badi mom…. Yeh meri aur babhi ki secret hai…. Apko no permission …"

Nikhila : "Acha baba… lekin yeh bata….. Tu kab aarahi hain….Tumare exams hogaye hain kya…."

Palak : "Haan badi mom…. Khatam ho jayenge…. 4 din ke baad… phir mein flight book karke aajayungi…. I missed Shiv bhaya's wedding…. Mujhe bhi babhi se milna hai…"

Nikhila : "Acha…. Jaldi se exams likhe aaja…. Hum sab bhi tujhe miss kar rahe hain…"

Palak : "Ok Badi Mom… mujhe tayar hona hai…mein phir call karungi…"

Nikhila : "Ok beta… jaldi ana…Bye…"

After that Vivaan made Gauri to feed Shiv…. by holding her hand with food to Shiv's mouth…. As shiv took the food…. His lips touched gauri's finger tips and Gauri's hand shivered a little bringing a small wicked smile on Shiv's face….


Ok, here goes the next part, Sorry everyone.... for the delay.... But I was working on this part from when i had given my consent.... it was always there behind my mind.... I had written 2 other ways.... but around half-way through the part and i was getting stuck... and the next time it was too erotic..... So, then I thought I had to write it over again....


So, here is the next part..... I hope I have lived upto your expectations.... I hope you all like it.... I will try to PM all of them who are ardent readers of this FF....


Since, KAA forum has been archived .... I am going to be updating this FF here in FanFiction Forum...... So, Please All of you Come here and Read this FF.....


Thankyou, and I appreaciate all your patience in keeping up with me.....I will not disappoint you this time.... I will surely give a logical end to this FF.... Bare with me for some more time.....


Bunny.

Edited by bunny_fun - 14 years ago
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hey it is a cool one . love the way family member were interacting with gauri and vivan was too good and shiv wicked playing with gauri on the dinning table.
lov he update dear do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gulupada

hey it is a cool one . love the way family member were interacting with gauri and vivan was too good and shiv wicked playing with gauri on the dinning table.
lov he update dear do continue soon




Thankyou for the quick reply..... and ThankGod you like it.... Like i said.... i had written 2 other versions of the same thing..... which are completely different from eachother and this..... So I was very skeptical about posting this part..... It took me some time to post this part as I wanted it to be subtle and sensitive..... but not too emotional or too much romance as there are many people in the house.....

Yeh... vivaan ... I wanted atleast one person who is lively.... as everyone is so studious.....

Hmm.... if you say this is wicked.....there is more coming.... your way..... I will try...... and I really hope I update soon....this time....

and Once again Thankyou for liking it...

Bunny.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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supereb update....it was great.....do continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely!!!...=)))
i really like vivan....soooo naughty!....
wat a cute brothers fight!...
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Originally posted by: karna91

supereb update....it was great.....do continue soon....





Thankyou, I am glad you like the update...... 😳😳

I will try to continue soon..... But thankyou for liking it once again....

and I appreciate your patience to read and then write a comment.....

Let me know what you would want to see in next parts..... I am going out of ideas and want to know what would you like.... So, that I can get new ideas......

Bunny.


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Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

lovely!!!...=)))

i really like vivan....soooo naughty!....
wat a cute brothers fight!...
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!





Yeh..... I love vivaan too..... Since all the characters in my FF are studios..... obedient or very pleasing..... I wanted a character who is a chaterbox and always wants to express his feelings then and there itself.... without hesitation...... and I am glad you like him that way......

Yes, he is very naughty..... He wants to tease Shiv as much as possible..... 😆......

Yeh..... I don't know if i will be able to keep it going in next parts too..... as I have never seen a brother -brother fight in a silly way...... So, it was all my imagination...... and I had to think hard to write that part....... and You like it..... it makes my day....to hear that.....

I will try to continue soon...... But i don't have any banked parts..... I start from scratch for every part and then post it..... so, I have to first think about how to go forward.... and then bring out the dialogues and then write it in a flow..... So, It is taking time.... But I will try to post a part soon......

Thankyou, I appreciate your comment...... and for following my FF......

Do give me inputs..... on what you want to see more in this FF..... which way would you like the Story flow..... I am going out of ideas and want inputs...... so that I can incorporate them in this FF and make it more interesting to read......

Bunny.



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