CID EPISODE TITLES- poem by m_kal2011

Peheli koshish achhi hein..aisa mat samjho ki kisine dekha nahi...dekhenge,,,u need to be patiant.ab jabhi tum poem karati ho..dekhana ki simple world ..simple pheases use karana...jabhi hIndi mein likhate hein to mostly hindi mein jyada worlld use kkaro...engish avoid karo...CID bahar bhi jakar dekhoo...CID ka aech and evry charector unique hein...unaki koi na kaoi speciality hein,,,ya koi aisi imaginar situation create karo jismein en mein se kaoi kaisa react karega wo dekho..ya life ki simple situation..kuch achanak ho gaya koi CID ka mil gaya...chhoti choti baate hame bahut kshi dete hein....aur aisi hi creations hame bahut achhi lagati hein

Thanks Jiya for your valuable feedback.
In this poem, I used english words intentionally.
Regarding feedback, I am ready to hear any sort of criticism.

maam,nice one.....but better you stickon to single language.then you can add some mre names,its possible if you have a collection of all episode names.any way,welldone and do more.

Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam

maam,nice one.....but better you stickon to single language.then you can add some mre names,its possible if you have a collection of all episode names.any way,welldone and do more.

Thanks chinnu.
Actually while writing I wanted to make it a lighter one, not very serious one, one that creates some fun. Perhaps I am not able to express myself properly.
It came into my mind suddenly this morning, I wrote it down and wanted to share it with you all, that's it.
Yaah, I have already some more stanzas which include some more names.
And about the poem: I myself wrote in the last line " chakkar ah raha hain".
Any way thanks again.

who said it doesn't express?its good,i suggested,thats all 😊

Thanks chinnu for your cg. It's fantastic. 👏👏👏👏

Full First attempt. congrats on that.
You have got lot of advices from seniors in this department and I agree with them.

I will say your idea was great----- poem on CID episodes titles. loved it👏.
From your poem loved second part of fourth stanza You have lot of potential keep writing.

Thank you for your encouragement. 😃

good poem one more entry in poetry writers