CID EPISODE TITLES- poem by m_kal2011

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Peheli koshish achhi hein..aisa mat samjho ki kisine dekha nahi...dekhenge,,,u need to be patiant.ab jabhi tum poem karati ho..dekhana ki simple world ..simple pheases use karana...jabhi hIndi mein likhate hein to mostly hindi mein jyada worlld use kkaro...engish avoid karo...CID bahar bhi jakar dekhoo...CID ka aech and evry charector unique hein...unaki koi na kaoi speciality hein,,,ya koi aisi imaginar situation create karo jismein en mein se kaoi kaisa react karega wo dekho..ya life ki simple situation..kuch achanak ho gaya koi CID ka mil gaya...chhoti choti baate hame bahut kshi dete hein....aur aisi hi creations hame bahut achhi lagati hein
imagination aur poem ar writing ke liye even CID ke sapane dekhane ke liye koi bhi limitation nahi tum umhe jaise dekhana chahate hein vaise rang mein dhalo lekin aise ki darsha ko ko bhi usi ranag mein dhalana sikhana chahiye
mein e sab tumhare liye nahi to yaha baithe jo abhi abhi peoms likhana shuru kiya hein en sabako ye bata rahi hun...
kaoi first hi attept mein peot nahi ban jata,...lekin aapa karate raho karate raho...aapaka skill develop ho jayega...apako yaha ke log tips denge wo follow karo..aur eak baat wo tips tips batane wala agar chhota bhi ho wo manana
ha es bar nahi achhi huvi aise dsareko lage ar aapako lage ye mere sabse achhi poem hein to darshakake saath janae..agr aap apne us peom ke saath satisfied rahe to aap mein kabhi improvement ya skill mein sharpness nahi aayegi
apana mind open au sporting rakhie...mein khd abhi bhi etani achhi kavita likh nahi pati lekin bhaut sudhar aaya hein ye jo upar ki baate bati hein ese...aisa attitude rakhenge...fture mein eak achhe kavi keheloge...esake lie dediction and heard work ki jarrat hein...sirf rymings judanese kavita nehi banati..rymings ke bina bhi achhi kavita ye hoti hein...u have no limit for all these thing..just u need to open your hear,mind and eyes..that's it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Jiya for your valuable feedback.
In this poem, I used english words intentionally.
Regarding feedback, I am ready to hear any sort of criticism.
Edited by m_kal2011 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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maam,nice one.....but better you stickon to single language.then you can add some mre names,its possible if you have a collection of all episode names.any way,welldone and do more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam

maam,nice one.....but better you stickon to single language.then you can add some mre names,its possible if you have a collection of all episode names.any way,welldone and do more.


Thanks chinnu.
Actually while writing I wanted to make it a lighter one, not very serious one, one that creates some fun. Perhaps I am not able to express myself properly.
It came into my mind suddenly this morning, I wrote it down and wanted to share it with you all, that's it.
Yaah, I have already some more stanzas which include some more names.
And about the poem: I myself wrote in the last line " chakkar ah raha hain".
Any way thanks again.
Edited by m_kal2011 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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who said it doesn't express?its good,i suggested,thats all 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks chinnu for your cg. It's fantastic. 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Full First attempt. congrats on that.
You have got lot of advices from seniors in this department and I agree with them.

I will say your idea was great----- poem on CID episodes titles. loved it👏.
From your poem loved second part of fourth stanza You have lot of potential keep writing.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you for your encouragement. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good poem one more entry in poetry writers

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