D fist of destiny / rajeev-priyanka

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D FIST OF DESTINY
friends....i m starting a rp fic.... will be a suspense thriller....cocktail of suspense...thrill...n love...and relationships....

i m eagerly waiting for ur responses.....and honest comments.....

i m giving d character sketch now.......

rajeev khandelwal
priyanka bassi
ghazal rai
harshad chopra
arjun bijlani


Prologue

dis is a story of mainly four young stars....dey also hav other friends....who were students of oxford university of London...

they all are Indians....some of dem r from india...came in london for study....some r residents of London....some came from...different parts of world....they met co-incidentally...and became gud frens....really best buddies.......dey came to oxford for derr graduation...and.....dey became. ..like a family there..

everything was going fine...until.............................
Destiny made a play wad them.......d common student's life forever changed....dies is all betas of one person .........(d character playing by Rajeev khandelwal)
he changed derr life...derr aim forever... actively or passively...he was responsible of d change of d students life.....

a mysterious character -rajeev khandelwal....wat he is...who he is...wats his real name...what is his occupation....nobody knows surely.........
d students met him accidentally...

now d students life is at stake...they r now a part of a dangerous life....part of a precarious mission...dat life has chosen for them......
they dnt know what their future lie ahead.....

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chap 1

Doctor how did u find her…???is she all right….???a magnetic handsome hunk tried to conceal da panic his voice……!!!

Don't worry…Mr. khan….she will be all right by evening…..!!i can completely understand ur nervousness…. But relax……..she will okay….trust me……

I trust u fully sir……!!!A anxious husband sighed a breath of relief…….

Dis is Mr. Saket ahmed khan a charismatic Youngman of around 28 years….above medium hight….barrel chest exclusively handsome ….extremely charming….looking astoundingly royal in a glow white costly suit…..in a simple word…he is hot………

But his face was pale…n worried……..!!
D unconscious lady lying on d bed in front of dem is his wife ……Razia…….Mrs. Razia ahmed khan ……………………

She has a platonic beauty in her pale face……she is very young…23 years old……she is lying unconscious in d bed……

Saket bent down to smoothen d loose curls of hair falling on her face……he placed dem behind her earlobe wid a great adore….

Doctor radland fledger noticed him minutely………got up from his sit and patted his shoulder ……..dnt worry my son…!!!....every thing will be fine….y r u so upset son….???u have seen her in worser condition dan dis……she is much better now……she faces d attacks very often son……..isnt it….???

Saket slowly nodded his head…..stiil eyeing his beautiful wife……

"Yes doctor u r right….i have seen her in worsen conditions…..and dats y….don't want repetition of d old days it makes me so panicked……..its been a long time she is suffering….she had had enough doctor….!!!I can't afford to loose her……I can't…..I love her dr……… love her more dan anything…"

"I know son….." dr. fledger patted his head sympathetically…….she loves u too….!!!
"God bless u my son…god bless ur love….."

D old doctor crossed "..i will pray for u…..!!!"

Thanks dr thank u so much……its u….for whom I hav her alive till now…inspite of so odds……!!!

U r most welcome son…but dats my holy duty……!!!i will take ur leave now….take care son….urself and take care of her….!!!


I will surely do dat….saket passed him a thankfull smile….and said lets go…I will see u off….

Dats okay son….!!!....i will manage….u stay wid her…….!!! Doctor fledger assured him…….

Saket's eye reflected gratefulness ……

Bubye doctor fledger …..take care…….!!!

Saket spread out his well gripped hand for a shake ….!!!

A surprising reaction quickly passed thru fledgers face……as he shook sakets hand
Every time fledger held dis young man's hand a unknown sensation passed thru his nerves doesn't kno y……???....!!!!..........

Doctor radland fledger climbed down frm sakets small cottage…..

Dis is a small village in Poland aviltang near d city Warsaw…….it has a very thin population…

doctor started his old fiat …..and soon disappeared in d horizon……

doctor radland fledger is a doctor of general medicine and neurologist …..he is attached wid da church of next village tanelrim….

He knows dis sweet Indian couple from last one n half years….
Dey r really sweet ….cute n loving…….but derr fate has played a dreadfull game wid dem ……razia is suffering from dementia……..a loss of memory….she has no idea abut her past life before an accident in which she has lost her memory……..completely dark……and just living in her present……

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Dey met in an accident about 2 years ago wen dey were coming back from derr first honeymoon in Switzerland to lion at france'..derr hometown'''..on d way back dey met wid an accident dat snatched away her memory ''.

Saket left no stones unturned to'.make her fine as before'.but his and his appointed all doctors all efforts gone in vain ''he had spent all his money after razia's medication '.. but nothing cud make her well'..

Razia started loosing control on herself wenever she faced attacks'.she became wild'..and after it'everything is normal'except a mild headache'.even she cant remember wat she has done during da attacks'''

Finally all relatives started giving derr opinions loudly'.in stead of whispering between demselves '..some suggested saket to to send her mental asylum 'some suggested of remarriage'as dis young eligible bachelors appropriate candidates were ready in derr relnships''everybody wanted to rag his or her name wid saket ahmed khan''.so every ones eagerness started increasing''finaly it turned to open taunting razia'dat worsen razia's condition'both physical'n mental''.

Frustrated saket decided to shift seeing decreasing state of razia's''he decided to wind off his business and sell other properties''he thot to leave france'..and dey shifted to aviltang''a remote village near Warsaw'in Poland'''far away frm his relatives'''and known persons''

Widin a couple of weeks of shifting'one night razia faced again da attack'.advised by da neighbours saket went to da church in search of doctor fledger 'and dat was da beginning of derr frenship'

Fledger started liking dis fateless young couple'..derr childishness derr happiness da bondage of cute love between dem made fledger a feeling of sympathy n love wid da couple''.going beyond his profession'..


Fledger noticed dis Youngman who loved his wife most '.everytime wen razia suffered da attack saket went crazy'.used to do his utmost to give her a little relief'but cudnt'.to his utter despair''fledger started liking dis young Indian devoted husband'..deyy reminded him of his own wife who has passed away 12 years ago'.

But sometimes fledgers intuition sensed something abnormal abut saket''.very often'but he sensed''such as wenever he shook hand wid saket it seemed he is not a common civilian person'.fledgers 35 years of experience in his profession'gave him d idea'd grip reminds of a hawk''a warrior's hand'.

Doesn't kno y'sometimes fledger feels uncanny abut his identity''

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Doctor….!!!..ohhh so u r here……!!!welcome doctor…….we have been waiting for u so long….!!!!

A husky masculine villager voice broke fledgers thot………

Everything is fine fledger….stop being ridiculous……u r sounding silly……he muttered under his breath and got involved in his circumstances…..


After seeing off doctor fledger saket dint came back to d room…he seemed somehow lost in his thoughts…..he stood there still crossing his arms on his broad muscled torso..

This doctor fledger ..regarded as d most kind person of d area ….doesnt seem to be fooled easily….isn't it..? why I m feeling dat I have seen a sparkle in his eyes….a question…..?
He crossed himself….its all because razia 's illness….she needs to recover fast…..its been a long time..she is going thru dis..

Razia …how's she…?ohh…I forgot in all dis….may be she has got her senses back in this time…saket hurriedly walks back inside..

Razia sleeping serenely in her bed….cuddling like a baby…as if nothing had happened in d last night…

Saket smiles…takes d next sit beside her…..taking her one hand in his palms…

He is living wid her for last two years under a same roof…
d experience of dis relation is like heaven to saket…… for d first time in his solitary life he shared a relationship with somebody.. so deep n so close…joy… pain…love …happiness …everything ..

saket wished to stop his life here … he was unknown wid social relation ships for his entire life..

he recapitulated his old days….. No experience he could remember dat seemed to him as a good one…. He concealed a deep breath…

but d day when he met dis gal…never thought life will turn up like dis……he also can be expected to some one…a person who is desired by his wife .

he remembered d first day of London when d story started….

Nobody could ever imagine….destiny will play this game wid dem….
Saket will be having relationship… he chuckled at his own thought…..no one can find any resemblance in his past and his present …..its like he has got a new life to live

SONIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII…………………………………..!!!!

A panicked voice breaks his trance….. Horrified saket turns back at his wife…
who has got up on d bed erected .....sweating profusely.

She has waked up again wid d same awful dream…



Wat happened razia…..look at me....shhh…..there is nobody else nothing….calm down……..….shhhhhhh….. I m here with u…don't worry….razia…plz relax…



Razia clings to him…. stuck with him in a unknown horror…don't leave me alone plz…don't …u wont na……??say dat u wont….a insecure voice trembled in unknown fear …..



Relax razia…..shhh…I m not going anywhere without u…u know it na…den y r u thinking like dat….???.saket rocks her back n forth…and rubs her back to console her to forget d dream



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This is nothing new to saket….



It happens regularly with razia since last two years………



But will she always ask d same question…??dis eagerly…. "…..don't leave me saket….."



He shuts his eyes tight..….dis very words make his knees weak…evrytime..
Saket's heart weak… he…who has never cared for anybody in his bloody damn life..



He has loved her……though always tried not to…but he had fallen for her …deeply madly in dis last two years….he cant think for a moment dat he is nt wid razia..


In one way saket sometimes frightens at d thought if her memory comes back one day…will he loose his only one relation ship he had got in his entire life…


Saket scares his own destiny…..he doesn't want to loose razia…..but its not possible in anyway after d sec she will get back her senses….


if life wud hav a bit normal…more easier to live…more easy to dream of…..if dey wud hav really shared dis relation ship…..sakets wishlist has only one thing to pray...RAZIA…


But he knows dis cant be…..caz dis is life..!!he has taken dis to be true..



He wished in his weakest moments of life to stop d time here….But d very next moments make him think in wat condition razia is living right now…and wat she was wen he met her around 7 years ago…… severe difference from dose days and in dis days….




Not only she has changed … but she made saket life also changed totally…now today she is d aim of his life…..his love life..


Saket often gets gloomy thinking of d next days


But nothing is in his hand…he will try his level best to recover her from d shock she is existing now a days…no matter wat happens after dat….. he can bear her hatred also after dat… yes he can ….!!



"Saket… I m hungry ..plz get me something to eat na…" she looks at him innocently holding his chin in her soft beautiful fingers...she seems almost normal right now..


"Sure darling "…saket touches her cheek lightly wid great affection " ….u just seat here..i will be back… don't get up…u r not okay… do u understand me…?" a bit seriously dis time…


"Yup……I got it…..!! " razia makes a puppy like face …


Saket shakes his head and cups her face in his palms
Pulls her to him and nudges her nose wid his…..

I love u sweetu....!!


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I love u 2222222222222
I love u 333333333333333333333333
I love u 44444444444444444444444444
I love u 55555555555555555555555555555

She starts counting numbers in her finger shaking her head hard…


Ok..ok..i have got it…u love me very much....

and now be a good gal and seat here….or u wont get extra Choc in your shake….is dat clear….??

Saket makes sure for another time…as she is too naughty to control…

In reply Razia just winks at him and smiles sheepishly…..okkk…!!!but one can surely read d mischief playing in her eyes…..



YES………!!!!


Not only she had lost her memory but she thinks herself a kid of 12 years….

this is d relation she shares with saket….a mixed relationship…husband …friend ..father and d confidant ….

and this is d relationship saket wishes most in his life… d most important thing to him....his razia...saket is in his best part of life…




D person walked in to d premises of d university….he walked straight to d library…his eyes were fixed on d book he is holding….

he shut d book as he entered d campus…..that he was reading d whole way to here…

It's a as usual cold day of London…..raining slightly….he shuddered a little….but not in cold….as he was excited at d article he was looking for days here n there…

His appearance was common….very ordinary….face is covered wid shabby beards….
D collar of his belted trench coat turned up as ever…and the big black canvas bag was held onto his shoulder dat hardly ever left him whenever he has been seen in dis university premises….


His dresses are ragged n worn-out … D boot is covered totally with mud….as well d calves r untidy….

His face has a glow that was absent from last few days….seemed he has got all d things he wanted…. His eyes have a sparkle in them…..but if someone notices him particularly… he would guess this person is not tat all common…a determination and a depth…..that will make d person next to him absorbed in his eyes….

but if he goes for a shave his untidy beards n mustache that has grown haphazardly he will look very handsome with his sparkling brown eyes…….!!to estimate his age…is not that easy thing from his well maintained body…though he is 30 he will definitely look 23 or 24 years teen in a costly tuxedo..

"Yes…..finally…I have got…!!..." he murmured clutching d book tight …

He has been seen in this area quite a few number of times but he has no friends here….he rarely speaks up…rather so little….someone will suspect he is a dumb…

…no interaction with anyone except d librarian ….
always one can see him absorbed in himself…or in books..!


He has finished his degrees on chemistry n metallurgy….from here recently…but he used to come here to access d library…..


d old librarian has noticed …. he has a great interests in quite a strange subjects that has almost no connection between each other…..like botany … criminology ….geology… political science…. Arms n ammunitions other than medicine and physiology…..

It depends on time what type of book he wants to read…..



He comes strangely and then disappears ……never disturbs anyone around him….as if he is invisible….he is obviously in d good book of librarian for this…

His movements changed a bit as he heard a gal to shriek …. "leave me …….i said leave …!!!"

He looked sideways to guess d source…..

there was a mob … a gal in center of d circle….. Terrified looking here n dere grabbing her ladies bag tight…. Breathing very fast…..seems she is new in d college ..

D gal seemed to be Asian…… and d crowd is all Caucasian … he rounded his eye on d mob gathered… sailys paxman ….d well known eve-teaser of d college.. fumbling with d scarf dat he has snatched away from d gal…..


He is basically a pass out student of d university…he is a damn busy person…literally….he works in some caf at morning .. and d rest of day after d poor introvert students who enters d college…. specially Asians…..and if she is a gal then
Its almost she cant fake d jackal's eyes…..he always wait for a Asian gal to harass her …
He has some other important jobs such as…… Partying without any reason in college caf… emptying beer bottles.. and get into unnecessary fights n reach hospital or jail very often…..…or can be seen in shabby n cheap pubs of London…with some persons whose very look will give a unknown uncomforting experience …


paxman gets immense pleasure in doing this… He has noticed thru out…he shook his head and abut to walk away…..giving no importance to this…he never gets himself into any kind of thing happening around…until it affects himself…but sometimes…...!!!!!

but another shriek stopped him midway….. HELPPPPPPP……!!!

DIIIIIII……….HELPPP…!!!!

paxman has grasped her t shirt ….. and drew her almost on his lap….. she is yelling at d fear of being raped….throwing her hands n legs randomly….with all her force…
she is looking so frightened dat she has forgot to cry ……


paxman drew her more closer tucking her hairs ……kiss her….. tackling her chaotic movements of hands n legs

she spitted on his face…

he slapped her hard at this…still holding in one hand….blood oozed out from d end of her lips….she let a muffled sound let out….

d person watching all this from a distance clenched his fist tight…..he jumped down at d ground to head them…



but suddenly a sight brought him to a halt…

another gal appeared there clad in a loose baggy tee and a casual trouser ..
Hair tied in a simple ponytail….


She somehow managed her self get in d center ….
She looked at paxman ….
Softly said…

Leave her ....

Paxamn raised his eyebrows….spitted sideway …and chewed d words ..

U wanna be my dinner baby…???

All d guys present there burst in laughter….

And in next second all silent as….there were no sound ever..

After a fraction of second paxman can be seen sitting on d ground holding his forehead… with a dark eye

d person in trench coat looked surprised…..utter surprised as d another asian gal lifted her legs on d air as a feather and touching paxman 's head came down at d ground lightly….as if nothing has happened …
her skills of classic martial arts made him impressed….

d next moment a professor neared there and d crowd broke up…

he took d charge of driving d rest away still present there …and asked paxman to follow him … dialing 900 (police)..

d elder gal summed up d things scattered everywhere and came away putting one arm around d pervious gal's shoulder …who was still shaking in shock….
She rubbed her arm…to sooth her ..!!

She seems d elder sister of d gal…. she was calling her by di….. dat means elder sister in hindi ..

Rex …..d person in trench coat thought….and started walking.. !!

Heyy….gentle man can u plz show me d way to integrated physics department….

Rex turned back hearing a soft polite voice behind him…

It was she ..!!

Rex lift his hand and directed a way…

Thanks …d gal trailed off holding her sister in one hand…..casually …as if dey were coming from a evening walk….!!


Rex stood still looking at trailing way of d strange gal..

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"Ohhhhhhh……..shit…….. "


His daze broke at d sudden irritation of burning in his finger

Saket licked his finger which has almost caught a blister by d time….

He held d toaster maker unmindfully…


He hurriedly managed d shake n d toasts in a tray and …walked out of kitchen….

"Roshni……!!! "

"Ahhhh….shit…..". he cursed himself under his breath…for uttering d name...

"Razia……..where r u……??"


Razia…… he called up once again..he pepped inside d bedroom….

But dat was empty..

"Off…razia…..naughty gal…come out…we will play later darling….."

"come out…sweetie..!!"

no response…

he sighed…. put d tray on d dinning table
and headed outside ..calling her out …

he stopped as he came to d glass door of d balcony…..

she is sitting quietly in d ground….stretching her legs out…..chewing d end of a grass….

He smiled ….

Taking d tray he neared her in d ground…

Sat by her and offered her d glass of shake…

She took dat and holding d glass in both of her hands emptied it in one gulp..

Saket : "Wat happened…. ?? Why my princess is so silent…??"
"Is her All her wicked plans r on a leave..??"

"Or some bigger is about to come…?? wats it"

Saket looked suspicious….
"Wats cooking in ur mind .?..hmmm….? "

"Who is soni saket…???" razia asked lifting her innocent face up…

Saket taken aback totally at da sudden question…

He found no answer…..….!!

he tried to control his fast breathing ..and gulping saliva…. he mumbled….

"Which soni….? ...Whom r u talking abut…?"

"I used to shout by taking dis name na…???" she looked at him….question fully..

"Well…we can discuss it later…..finish d food and go for a bath….its already late…"

"Common hurry up…!!!"

"Okay.." …..she took her plate in her lap.. Obediently and started eating her food.. ..


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"Soni….soni…..cum up soni..u r getting late for ur class..!!"

a voice called for a gal in white tee n black Bermuda dat has messed up wid mud ….who was dribbling d ball in d basket ball court ….the place is like a middleclass colony type..


Yes di…..coming….!!...she last time threw d ball to d basket…..and she did it….
She showed d thumb to d solitary basket and.. picking up d ball ran away inside d hostel…

Heyy di ..catch…she threw d ball to another gal…who was getting ready hurriedly…
She caught d ball….at right moment before it cud spoil d dress!!

"offho…soni ...be careful na.,..!! It would hav stained my dress ..if I wont hav catch it in time ..!!" she said..

But I was sure dat u will catch ….she winked while picking up a apple from d table …!!

"Haha…verrryy funny…!!"
"but what's that soni…!! Go n freshen up na…and again u r having d apples without washing them…!!"

Ohh my my my.. ...!!!she made a face… threw up d apple in d air….and again caught it..

"di u should have been opt for being a doctor instead of doing ur masters in Linux programming !!
Doctor Roshni Ahuja !!"
..she contemptuously said spreading her hands in shape of a nameplate ..!!

"Huh……!!" SHE rolled her eyes….!!

"U know dear …wat I m doing I m fine in it…thanks for ur advice….but if u don't listen to my words na.. den I can prove my other skills on u….dis time seriously….!!"
She remarked…while looking straight at her wid rolling eyes…

"Ok ok….dont get angry …stick with ur computer only…I will be ready in 2 mins…!!"
She dint dare to stretch d conversation any more …

Dats better ….she said in mock serious tone….looking at her trailing way to washroom ….as she disappeared on d other side of d door…. D fury on her face sponged away with a smile….

She lookes adoringly at her ....she loves her naughty sister very much…!!



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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

This is Reet's fiction ryt?? And this is already posted once.....so I wonder why is this being posted again??? That too by you??

hey sumi .....m reposting it at it got locked and i have more updates with me....so posting it the rest i hav with me....
good to see u again ...m happy u still remember me.....butr u don recognise me honey
not a problem ...
love you ..
hows life ??????
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this is roshni ahuja 'a person of eminence'she has a great enigmatic personality'generally quiet n calm'..but d soft-spoken gal could be dangerous when needed'
As evident from soni's words she is doing her masters on software in oxford university of London '

But d other side of her skills is expertise in martial-arts(tai -condo) n championship in all India shooting competition ..

Soni aka sonam ahuja is cousin sis of Roshni Ahuja

D only child of colonel Pratap ahuja .roshni has lost her both parents in a car accident in her childhood..
She has been reared up by her uncle n aunt Vinod n nirja at old Delhi '.




When pratap and his wife sumedha died vinod had lost all happiness in their funeral ' it was a awful death . dey were on derr way to a army celebration party wen a bomb burst wiped away derr car brutally!!

police declared it as a terrorist attack '

Some investigation committee was founded and'after some months regular investigation dey closed file ' denoting him as a martyr'.

D dreadful incident changed derr life '. Vinod brought roshni to delhi after d funeral '. D merry little gal suddenly became silent after all dis'.

Nirja tried her best to console d over matured by time mute gal' to make her talk make her laugh '.but d accident kept a strong stamp on her memory 'she had lost all her cheer..

Den nirja took her to a new person...

at her new home 8 years old roshni met a living Barbie " soni "

She used to spoke only with soni'.. d sugary juvenile call "di " used to make her beam'..and from dat age she has never left her Barbie for a single moment'


Same was wid little soni'.wen she learnt to talk' only one word in her illegible diction could be prominently understood''.. " DI "'from den she had never stopped saying dis word till now'
To study she needs her di'
To have food she needs her di..
To play she needs her di..
To roam around in chandni chawk she needs her di'
To argue she needs her..
And very importantly to take dicisions of her life she needs her'..

Dey both brought up entwining derr fingers with each other'
Parentless roshni loved her new home as well her uncle n aunty '.but she loved most her Barbie soni'

though being jus 5 years older dan her ..she acted like her mother and as time grew up she turned as her best friend confidant philosopher guide n guardian '

Though dey were totally opposite in nature' i.e. soni naughty 'bubbly ..extrovert ..always happy go lucky.. a talking parrot type tomboy.

where as roshni was quiet soothing absorbed in herself wid a ambient personality.
but that dint ever made any problem between themselves'

dey became each others life '.with growing time.

Dey loved each other so much dat dey never felt need of any other friend in derr life'

Vinod n nirja first felt tensed as derr only child became so dependent on roshni'.

but as d time grew dey saw d reliance is in both side'.dey became relived with time'as roshni had took up all d responsibilities of soni on herself'.

Vinod relished d relationship remembering his n pratap's brotherly relations'..

Dey were proud parents of roshni n sonam ahuja '.d two angels of d old persons life

But problem aroused as roshni got d scholarships of doing her masters in orford university of London
Soni became violent at d talk of leaving her di '.

She couldn't imagine it'd

Roshni felt d same'she couldn't able to leave her alone'she couldn't do wid d thought .

Vinod n nirja tried to make her understand '.but every thing gone in vain '

Lastly roshni proposed dat she will take soni along with her '
Dat was impossible for vinod n nirja to afford derr daughter to send abroad for study'being a middle class parents '

But roshni solved d problem herself'saying she will manage derr expenditure in London'.if once dey could get derr themselves at London'

Vinod had no choice except supporting it '.when roshni took so much responsibility on herself '

He arranged their passport n visa'

After shedding some tears they finally see them off in international wings of Indira Gandhi airport of Delhi.

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Her daze broke as she hugged her from behind shaking her wet hairs on her shoulder ….

She smiled fondly at her childish behavior…..she ruffled her dripping hair with great affection….now get ready yourself soni…or we will be late for our classes….

"Yes di…."
she planted a kiss on her cheek and….went away hopping from one sofa to another

Soni be careful !!….her concerned voice shouted in reflex….

Her little sister is master of problems …!!!

half n hour later dey could be seen on d Oxford university grounds …

okay di ….hav a nice time….dey separated in two direction ..for derr classes..

soni to doing her B.S in integrated physics here …"heyy sonam ….!!" Some one called out from her back while walking through d corridor

"wat …!!" Sonam raised brows…

"ahh….. well sia …wassap gal….!!" a guy covered d distance fast between dem…

"huh….watever …sia is always kewl….!! Goccha dumbo… !! "

she stopped before entering d classroom…

dere was a notice board about some football match

her brows kinked while reading it a smile played on her lips….and wiped of within a fraction of sec…

"heyy sia…. Guess wat ….!!" A gal summoned her excitedly…

"wat is it suji …!!" Sia asked reluctantly..

Heyy our team of Northampton has won d semifinal against Winchester bulls..!!

"Haaah…!! Wats d big deal in dat..!!"

she paid no attention to dat and slouched on her own seat ..!!

d gals went on gossiping behind her….She absorbed herself in some notes….

wat r u saying sia… u know it was really a tough match ….isnt it guys …dj u tell na…u were derr na…

"…I never expected d match to turn up like dis ….i was sure Winchester is going to win…. its him who saved d match… huh…." Dj let out a sigh of relief ..

Yaa .. maven broke in …..still having goose bumps dude …wat a match…!!" She battled her eyelashes….. maven hegdem

I hardly imagined one red card to peter will do dis…. Huh I thought all d rents for aylesbury is going to vain…. I was repenting y did I bought d ticket"

"Aahhh….now stop it u lesly d biggest miser..!!" maven sardonically commented …

Heyy I m not miser okay….!!! bob Lesly made a face.!!

U both stop it bob n maven !!! suji irritatedly announced

U really missed it sia …it was a awesome match….for d first time Now we are in d final….and if ron is dere in d match no damn stuff can stop us from winning d cup…

Yaa…u r right dj …and sia y are u so reluctant …..ron sia….!! it was ron who made us win d game…!! Maven stressed on harsh

Sia who seemed to be engrossed in her studies… chuckling hearing derr convo…suddenly got alarmed hearing her name…Sia : ya ya …I hav got it and it was a wonderful match now tell me did u do d preparations of mathematics test ?

Y r u changing d topic yaar….. !! u know sia….and mavens words left unsaid…as a huge howl neared d class room..

Everyone looked at d door..

Some crazy group of guys n gals came into d class.. having one guy on derr shoulders ….yelling in joy.

D handsome guy wearing a cargo and a pale yellow tee….he has a black hair band on his forehand to manage d ruffled hairs..

Soni looked up … piping from d shed of her book..
And again buried her head in d book

Heyy three cheers for Ron……. hip hip hurray….!!!

Followed by
hip hip hurray….!!!

hip hip hurray….!!!

And Ron d hero….amazed by their expression of joy…

his friends are overjoyed with d victory in d football match… and d credit goes to him ...he himself given 4 goals ..and dat was enough to boost d his team…they took d spirit and won d match unbelievably by 3 goals against d tough most team of d tournament Winchester bulls ..

Ron was extremely happy not only with d joy of victory ..but he had noticed a pair of beautiful eyes hiding themselves behind d large book..

He got down from their shoulders.

Hiii…!! Ron warmly grinned..!

Hello..!! sia nodded with a sheepish smile. "Congrats..!!"

Thanks… !!
So ….ahh …ron fumbled…getting no words to start d conversation…

Uhumm… wat..? sia… quickly replied..

Well … so ..wat r u doing dis weekend…? ron finally gathered d courage to ask her


Umm… its jus Thursday.. I will think about d weekend on weekend itself…

A alarm rang outside…. Time for next class. Sia got up from d sit..

Ohh okk..but if u r free den plz join me in 'cloud 9' at 6 o clock… he buzzed from behind

Sia turned around n asked in a serious voice "r u asking for a date…. ?"

Ron … stopped breathing for some minutes….
Ahh … yes…no…ahh probably.. I mean well not really…I mean .its my friend's birthday so …we r celebrating there…actually a gathering …u know..

Sia patiently waited for d sentence to complete …

"I will try…" saying sia started walking outside

Thanks…ahh sia….. he called up again…

Now sia reached d door of d classroom

Wat is it ron…?

Ron paused for a moment and after mumbling something to himself…finally looked in her eyes and said…..

"If it was a date ..?.....then wat will be ur answer?"

Sia chuckled...

Bubyee ron .. sia never answers ifs n buts … winking she left him baffled ..

"Ohh man…. I love her…."ron let d sigh out resting his elbow on a friend ..

Dj : Dude ….u shoud hav tell dis to her instead of me..!!

Sam : temme something buddy …u rock everywhere …but y u start stammering always in front of her …

Maven : common ron ..be a sport …go n pick d gal ..!!

Ron : she is sia ahuja …none else ..!!

"So wat !! u r miron sachdev .. d star of oxford…." Dey said in chorus

Dj : Look ron…I know she has a long list of admirers..but u r nt one of dem…!!

Ron : Ok ok ….now stop it….!! He slipped out

"Heyy ron …whr r u going…..???"dey buzzed together as dey had a plan to manage a treat from him in college caf …


"To ask her for a date….!!" he shouted from a distance leaving everyone bemused ..

After d day when every one was coming back from dere classes at evening ..some exhausted. some still hav d energy left in dem… gals chirping within themselves …

a guy was waiting patiently in a corner at d play ground infront of the college.. …fumbling nervously with d cap in his hand…

Heyy sia…!!!

Hii ron …u r still here…ur class is over na..?

Yeaah….ohh actually I had to issue some books from library ..!!

Ohh..So wat r u doing here den?

aa….sia…I wanna ask u.. i mean say u something

sia paused for a sec n said "shoot"

Not here… lets hav a coffee..

"Umm sorry ron…i have to wait for di "

Ohhk…den some other time…ron disappointedly placed d cap on his head..

He was about to go when sia stooped him saying…

U can tell me here also ron…wat is it…? Anything serious..?

"It is…" his cart answer..

"Den say …" sia looked at him skeptically.

Ron hesitated for a moment …and said…

Sia…I wanted to tell u dis thing from a long time…but ..Couldn't say it before…

Sia : den say now..

Ron took a long breath... I ….i …

Soni …..soni …..hurry up soni …..roshni called out for sia

Sorry ron….i gotta go…..di has come…. Sia shrugged wid a mystified smile

Ron nodded…silently

roshni : Who was it soni..?

soni : Ron… how was ur day di …r u going to zing now?


"Yaa..i will… "

roshni teaches tai-condo n nun-chaku in a marcial art training center called zing…

"But why r u looking so serious soni ..was wrong… is it something about dat he was telling u..?"

He couldn't tell anything but I think I know wat is it….

Roshni guessed it right wat she is thinking ….

"And u ..?"

"Wat di..?"

"Yaa …I m asking d same thing …what about u ?"

"ohh common di ….its sia ahuja….!!" She shrugged ..

"But d gal I know is soni ahuja …." roshni winked…!!

"No di…nothing like dat ….falling in love is not sia's cuppa tea.."

I did not say its about love …roshni chuckled…

Ohh noo…di…don't pull my leg..u know it ..that u meant that only..

"okay okay…fine…ahh but soni …she loves tea.. isn't it ?" she wistfully smiled…


"di….plz….i said na …nothing like dat …."

"Ok ok..i m convinced ..…bt as far I know….miron is a very honest n desirable guy …isn't it…he is good friend of urs..!!…"

"He is…..but dat only …a friend…. Jus like u n arjun….!!" She said with a mischievous smile..

Huh…. !! u r talking too much soni …..she pulled her cheeks….


"diii…we r still in d premises….any body can see it…ahh…." she cried in mock anger ….

"Ohh really…!! den wat will be about d prestige of d great sia ahuja… I see…!!"

Dey both giggled….

Miron was sia's secret lover….though it was no longer secret …but miron never dared to say it to sia himself….sia is a perfect tomboy…she used to mix very fluently with boys…but if any of them dared to propose her …she used to end up by beating the boy poorly…..miron had fallen in love with his classmate a long ago….it is not like that he never tried to say it to sia….but he never managed to say it finally…he had a fear ….if sia stops talking with him……he cant imagine more…

Every time he got a chance to say her …or even ask her for a date…he thought …no …next time…the time hasnot come either….

So story was like this….ron remained a well-known secret lover of sia…



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He drew d curtain aside .. opened d large glass window….

D composed splendid morning ….renewed by d dew drops of late winter …..and d convivial sunrays … seemed d nature made d birds crazy ….dey are chirping continuously…

He turned to d angel sleeping lavishly in d extravagant red heart shaped bed ….

A smile playing on her supple red lips…playing divinely …

A hue of unknown blush raised on saket's cheeks… he took a deep breath …d room is filled with d aroma of her skin ….

he filled his lungs with d fragrance of her….every time like a last time….

it always seems to saket …dat its d only condition of his life … d day she wont be here …will be d last day of his….

He neared d bed concealing a sigh…

"Razia …. Wake up baby …" he slapped her face lightly to wake her up….

Ummm……she took a big yawn ….battling her sleepy eyelashes…

Get up darling ….i will go to Warsaw today …u get up ..n hav ur meals .

She gazed him constantly ….

What r u thinking razia ..?

she thoughtfully said… "Dat means u will bring a gift for me..!" she raised a little on her bed …

"wat ….!!" He couldn't get wat she said…..and den got wats cooking in her head

"ohh okay mam sure …" saket giggled at her comment ..!!

"ummm…." she enveloped his neck within a sec and quickly planted a peak on his cheek…

"I love uuuuuuuuuu….!!!!!!!!!!"

His heart collided wid d ribs…..thumped so hard …. He felt his breath is loosing its way under her soft brown stresses…..

I love u too…he whispered in a hypnotized voice.

"Uhh….get up razia … here is ur coffee … common hurry up…." he forcefully diverted himself …

"Uhhum…." She again slumped in d bed covering herself with d blanket..

"Huh….den no one will get d surprise gift…!!" Saket glanced from d corner of his eyes turning his face away in mock anger…!

"I m up….!! She jumped on d bed …!! And ran towards d kitchen .."


"Dats like a good gal…..!! heyy razia.. wait…razia….dont rush …."

"BE CAREFUL !!....."

Razia stopped as d words touched her ears….and turned around …

"Wat did u say …? ?"

D tone of her voice puzzled him….

She looked lost …. Her hairs left open on her back like brown water falls

"Wats wrong razia…." Saket neared her …

Razia lifted her face… breathing fast …… a total vacant look in her eyes…

She shuddered a lil…. And whispered "it seemed dat …"

"dat….??"rajeev looked at her incredulously….? His heart beating fast, very fast..

Does she remember something???...!!!...saket wished to stop his heart for a sec…..

I love u roshni …….why past is not leaving me…plz god….!! I want to be with her ….dont snatch her away ……………………..he shut his eyes tight…..tried to gulp down the pain ….the fear ….of losing her ….he is living a life ……that can be destroyed in ne moment …his happiness…..he cant even dare to dream….

Y cant my destiny change a bit…..i want her to be okay …but not with the memory of past ….no god no……please god..……….



"Aahhh…I forgot it…."she shook her head holding her hairs tight behind her head..! "..its aching..!!"

"Ohh…." saket let out a sigh … " razia…go n hav a bath… u will feel better..!!"

Razia nodded silently…and went inside…she unusually calm….

Saket kept his eyes fixed on her……

His brown eyes are shining…..in pain?...in disgust with his own life..? in love..? or in fear ..? …fear of losing life…? …the life his…….? Losing roshni ahuja …….the only girl ever touched his heart….

Saket was thinking something ….sitting on the windowpane…

And suddenly…two hands snaked his neck from side……

Whispered…..i love u …..

Saket turned to her ….

U r crying…?who rebuked u saket ..what happened….y ru crying….

She got worried….this is the first time ……she had seen tears in those eyes….which were always filled with affection and care……the eyes themselves may be not quite adjusted with tears and all….

He drew her closer….

Her soft supple pink lips …were so close to him……she was silent ……may be biologically her body was responding silently to the eyes….. filling herself with love …

He drew her face closer….more closer …..so close that it was one or two centimeters away from himself….

He was feeling an urge to take those in his mouth ….feel her …..

He wanted to be assured……that she will always be with him…..

He was forgetting past present future……….in love….

DO U DESERVE ?????????????????????

HIS SELF ..WAS ENEMY OF HIS…..!!

He trembled….took a deep breath ….

HE KISSED HER FOREHEAD …….and replied I love you razia…….promise me…u will always be there …

She hugged him tight…………………………….

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